Flashy Fiction and Other Insane Tales 2
This collection of short fiction is actually co-written by Jen Wylie and Sean Hayden.
The basic premise of the work is that both authors take a common theme and write around it, so the readers gets two versions of each theme.
It is an interesting and challenging way to write, I'm sure. I wonder if the writing was done "blind," that is, not looking at the other work until both are finished?
This work highlights the differences in writing styles that I consistently find between male and female authors.
Jen's work tends to be more stylistically crafted, more flashy, and a bit more creative.
Sean's work is rougher around the edges, and at times feels as if it were bludgeoned into existence, rather than carved or crafted.
An example of this would be Sean's story Mr McClunkin. It has too many themes for a short, as if he started the work, then re-visited it several times over a longer period of time than one would normally spend on a short. Each time, the "emotional direction" he takes the reader in changes ever so slightly, which is fine in a longer work like a novella, but I find confusing and unfulfilling in a short.
Jen Wylie's version of the same theme, Just a Bear is more emotionally consistent throughout, in contrast. The path that you believe you will be following takes you to the destination you would expect.
Both versions leave you wanting just a few more paragraphs.
The stories that you want to immerse yourself in are over far too quickly, and leave you with many unanswered questions. I suppose that is the point of "flash fiction."
With that said, writing short fiction is difficult for any author. Writing it well is very difficult, and both Sean and Jen have pushed past the half-way point towards the better-quality writing you will find.
Disclosure:
As an editor, I have an extremely critical eye. I seldom if ever encounter a work that I feel is technically flawless, and that would not benefit from another round of edits.
I would have given this work 3.5 stars if it were an option, perhaps even 4, if it were just slightly tighter. It's that one awkward word or sentence construction that can take away so much from a good story, especially a short story.
With that said, Flashy Fiction and Other Insane Tales 2 is well-written and creative enough to stand out from the pack, and makes a great break or lunch-time read, because you can read a story or two in just a few minutes.
The works are funny and dark, heartwarming and depressing, and just plain fun to read. Definitely a good "curl up on the couch by the fire" Sunday morning read.