Let's get straight to it: There are a number of problems with Waiting to Die that prevented me from enjoying it. On a technical level, this novel badly needed a closer edit as the typos, missing words, and incongruous word placements - that suggested a spell check had been performed without a follow-up read through - were legion, especially in the early parts of the novel. Aside from this, the writing was solid for the most part, but changes between character's perspectives often took place between paragraphs and with no fanfare, making for moments of reader confusion.
In terms of plot, I liked the idea of a set of random characters eventually crossing paths during a zombie apocalypse, but the execution sometimes left me scratching my head. For example, the introduction to Greg and Scarlet seems to occur in the middle of their story - yet takes place in Chapter 2. I was forced to scour the internet to learn if the writer had a series of short stories or another work that was constructed as a prologue to this novel. Not able to find anything concrete I read on, only for Greg and Scarlet to disappear from the narrative for almost half the book, where, upon their return, their back story was (quickly) sketched in. I also struggled to accept how the zombies operated as they hunted down the living. At times, they seemed to sense the characters very quickly and easily, while at others, a couple of people could creep amongst them shooting with a silenced rifle without attracting undue attention. Then there were the occasions when the zoms moved quickly, while in other scenes they would be staggering as per Romero's classic take on them. Most confusingly of all was the way hundreds would gather together and simply stay around the building they had seen living quarry enter, but then in another storyline would disperse after a few days. Perhaps I missed something integral at some point? If so, the story would have benefited from further discussions among the characters about how the zombies seemed to operate ...
From what I can gather, Richard M Cochran is a relatively new writer who is still learning his craft. This makes sense as for all my issues, there are some quality scenes as characters make desperate attempts to escape their fate, and moments of surprise to be found here with some less than expected deaths. I suspect his output will only improve as his career progresses, but for now Waiting to Die scores itself 2 Fated Deaths.