Much like FALLEN HEARTS, this is one of the better ghostwriter-mimicking-VC books so far as tone & style...but, also like FALLEN HEARTS, there's a lot of missed opportunity.
First, let me say Neiderman had a much better grasp of Fanny in this one. Watching her shift from trampy cougar to Casteel matriarch was great -- I'm so glad she was ultimately redeemed, because even with her faults she was one of my fave characters in this saga (Tom, Grandpa Toby, & Leigh being the others).
Second, Annie takes a lot of guff...but I liked her. Granted, she's obsessed with Luke Jr -- but she was temporarily crippled, lonely, scared, & grieving. Cut the kid some slack, huh? She's definitely Troy's offspring, given her artistic side & bipolar/SAD (whichever it is -- they never really make that clear), & her ignorance over Tony's issues is excusable, given that Heaven made a point to keep her totally ignorant** of his ped0bear creepitude. And she really does try to convey her peril to other characters, all of whom either can't (Rye) or won't (Drake, Mrs Broadfield) help her escape -- so how is that her fault?
That said...there's a whooole lot of wheel-spinning & aborted tension in this book. The repetition is really tedious -- not only secrets we already know from previous installments, but stuff that happened a few chapters back. >____< We also don't get much forward momentum until maybe 70% in, because Annie can't hardly move (again, not her fault)...but Neiderman jumped the shark in this aspect, turning what could've been a 400-pg atmospheric gothic nightmare (think MISERY) into a puttering, sputtering talkfest.
There are occasional scenes that are worth the slog, so it's not a *bad* book, per se. But it should've been either half the length *or* infused with twice as much peril. Instead, it just kinda meanders along without any oomph. You can easily skim through the first 60% & not miss anything significant.
One other note, re: Drake. What a wasted character. He starts out great, then disappears into the ranks of Tony's penis-choir, singing his praises & doing nothing of value for the plot. Booooo! Hissss!
2.5, rounded up...because Fanny rocks. :D
**This is a highly questionable choice on Heaven's part. I'd understand if Annie was little, but she's 18 now. You need to arm her against any potential interaction with this withered limb on the family tree.