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Araneae Nation #1
A Hint of Frost
Hope dangles by a silken thread.
Araneae Nation, Book 1
When the head of the Araneidae clan is found poisoned in her nest, her eldest daughter, Lourdes, becomes their clan s new maven. If her clan is to survive, she has but one choice: she must marry before her nest is seized. All she needs is a warrior fierce enough to protect her city and safeguard her clansmen. Such a male is Rhys the Cold.
Born the youngest son of an impoverished maven, the only things Rhys has to his name are his sword and his mercenary reputation. His clan is starving, but their fondness for the flesh of fellow Araneaeans makes them unwelcome dinner guests. Torn between loyalty to his clan and fascination with his future bride, Rhys s first taste of Lourdes threatens to melt the cold encasing his heart.
Amid the chaos of battle, Lourdes s sister disappears and is feared captured. Lourdes and Rhys pursue their enemies into the southlands, where they discover an odd plague ravaging southern clans as it travels north, to Erania. Determined to survive, Lourdes will discover whether she s worth her silk or if she s spun the thread by which her clan will hang.
Warning: This book contains one mercenary hero with a biting fetish, one determined heroine who gets nibbled, and an answer to the age-old question, What does dragon taste like? Matricide and sibling rivalry are available upon request. The house special is revenge, best served cold.
Araneae Nation, Book 1
When the head of the Araneidae clan is found poisoned in her nest, her eldest daughter, Lourdes, becomes their clan s new maven. If her clan is to survive, she has but one choice: she must marry before her nest is seized. All she needs is a warrior fierce enough to protect her city and safeguard her clansmen. Such a male is Rhys the Cold.
Born the youngest son of an impoverished maven, the only things Rhys has to his name are his sword and his mercenary reputation. His clan is starving, but their fondness for the flesh of fellow Araneaeans makes them unwelcome dinner guests. Torn between loyalty to his clan and fascination with his future bride, Rhys s first taste of Lourdes threatens to melt the cold encasing his heart.
Amid the chaos of battle, Lourdes s sister disappears and is feared captured. Lourdes and Rhys pursue their enemies into the southlands, where they discover an odd plague ravaging southern clans as it travels north, to Erania. Determined to survive, Lourdes will discover whether she s worth her silk or if she s spun the thread by which her clan will hang.
Warning: This book contains one mercenary hero with a biting fetish, one determined heroine who gets nibbled, and an answer to the age-old question, What does dragon taste like? Matricide and sibling rivalry are available upon request. The house special is revenge, best served cold.
240 pages, Kindle Edition
First published April 17, 2012
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March 25, 2021
Someone recommended this book to me and when I went to find it on Amazon it was free. I hate to say it but free sometimes scares me, there are a lot of free books out there. However there were good things going for this book though (1) the reader that recommended it knows my reading style (2) it's book one of a 5 book series, plus novellas, so someone is reading this series. And....
I really liked this book! I enjoyed the characters, I found the world unique and well developed, and found the writing pace well done. It was a great PNR read and I can't wait to continue this series!
I really liked this book! I enjoyed the characters, I found the world unique and well developed, and found the writing pace well done. It was a great PNR read and I can't wait to continue this series!
November 30, 2015
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1 December 2014: $0.00 on Kindle
4.5 stars. Originally reviewed for Risque Reviews
I’m always on the lookout for a new fantasy romance. Surprisingly, they’re somewhat hard to find. So, good ones are even harder to find. In my quest, I stumbled onto a gem in Hailey Edwards's A Hint of Frost. The strong adventure plot pulled the story forward and kept me rapt with attention. Lourdes and Rhys are trying to find her missing sister and learn why her parents were murdered. This leads them on a journey that is always interesting where they can learn more about each other. And it’s so utterly refreshing with the fresh world and deeply-captivating characters right from the opening that immediately thrust the reader into the action with murder.
The heroine, Lourdes, is threatened when her mother is poisoned. The clan Lourdes' family trusted so long for protection is now trying to eradicate them. Desperate for help, Lourdes turns in a direction she might never have taken. And this forced decision reveals a heroine worth reading. Lourdes is a fantastic strong heroine. A truly strong female character that knows her limits is a rare thing these days. She quickly won me over in the beginning because Rhys hid her for her protection and told her to stay put. And she cooperates, recognizing that she’s not as strong. But don't let that point fool you. When threatened, she efficiently takes care of herself, proving to the reader that she has inner strength. Even better, when Rhys comes back admonishing that he told her not to move, she replies, "I heard you, but as I have a fondness for the way my head rests upon my neck, I decided some movement might be warranted." Her strength is in how she heeds advice and makes the best decisions. I also liked how once she made a decision she didn’t bemoan her choice or the fact that she had to make it. And then there's Rhys…
Rhys intrigued me right from the beginning as strong and deadly but honorable at the same time. He obviously has secrets. Learning those secrets kept me flipping pages late into the night. When you add in the way that he respects Lourdes and her decisions, understands her need to be herself as well as the reasons she makes some of her decisions, he definitely had me rooting for him to win Lourdes’s affections.
The one thing that kept this from being a five star read, and it was a hard call to make, is some of the lingering confusion about the story world and the specifics of the race of Araneae at the story's end. Lourdes' clan actually spins powerful threads, like spiders, from their hands where the spinnerets are located. But I had a hard time picturing this and how it coalesced into the everyday use of their hands. I’m sure this confusion just stems from my frustration in being unable to picture the character's hands, but the desire to figure that out plagued me throughout the book as one minor thing in the whole of the world building, which over all was fantastic. The different clans and their interactions, along with the journey within the world allowed me to learn this information organically. Plus there are dragons. I can’t resist dragons.
The story is really well-paced that even managed to surprise me a few times. Upon finishing A Hint of Frost, I quickly went and looked up all of Ms. Edwards' backlist, eager to read more. She has a deft hand developing the characters and world that I devoured. If you’re looking for something that’s different, fresh, and wonderfully crafted, read A Hint of Frost.
1 December 2014: $0.00 on Kindle
4.5 stars. Originally reviewed for Risque Reviews
I’m always on the lookout for a new fantasy romance. Surprisingly, they’re somewhat hard to find. So, good ones are even harder to find. In my quest, I stumbled onto a gem in Hailey Edwards's A Hint of Frost. The strong adventure plot pulled the story forward and kept me rapt with attention. Lourdes and Rhys are trying to find her missing sister and learn why her parents were murdered. This leads them on a journey that is always interesting where they can learn more about each other. And it’s so utterly refreshing with the fresh world and deeply-captivating characters right from the opening that immediately thrust the reader into the action with murder.
The heroine, Lourdes, is threatened when her mother is poisoned. The clan Lourdes' family trusted so long for protection is now trying to eradicate them. Desperate for help, Lourdes turns in a direction she might never have taken. And this forced decision reveals a heroine worth reading. Lourdes is a fantastic strong heroine. A truly strong female character that knows her limits is a rare thing these days. She quickly won me over in the beginning because Rhys hid her for her protection and told her to stay put. And she cooperates, recognizing that she’s not as strong. But don't let that point fool you. When threatened, she efficiently takes care of herself, proving to the reader that she has inner strength. Even better, when Rhys comes back admonishing that he told her not to move, she replies, "I heard you, but as I have a fondness for the way my head rests upon my neck, I decided some movement might be warranted." Her strength is in how she heeds advice and makes the best decisions. I also liked how once she made a decision she didn’t bemoan her choice or the fact that she had to make it. And then there's Rhys…
Rhys intrigued me right from the beginning as strong and deadly but honorable at the same time. He obviously has secrets. Learning those secrets kept me flipping pages late into the night. When you add in the way that he respects Lourdes and her decisions, understands her need to be herself as well as the reasons she makes some of her decisions, he definitely had me rooting for him to win Lourdes’s affections.
The one thing that kept this from being a five star read, and it was a hard call to make, is some of the lingering confusion about the story world and the specifics of the race of Araneae at the story's end. Lourdes' clan actually spins powerful threads, like spiders, from their hands where the spinnerets are located. But I had a hard time picturing this and how it coalesced into the everyday use of their hands. I’m sure this confusion just stems from my frustration in being unable to picture the character's hands, but the desire to figure that out plagued me throughout the book as one minor thing in the whole of the world building, which over all was fantastic. The different clans and their interactions, along with the journey within the world allowed me to learn this information organically. Plus there are dragons. I can’t resist dragons.
The story is really well-paced that even managed to surprise me a few times. Upon finishing A Hint of Frost, I quickly went and looked up all of Ms. Edwards' backlist, eager to read more. She has a deft hand developing the characters and world that I devoured. If you’re looking for something that’s different, fresh, and wonderfully crafted, read A Hint of Frost.
January 8, 2013
I'm torn about this book. To be perfectly honest, if someone whose opinion I trust had not told me that it got better, I would have given up within the first few chapters, maybe sooner.
Before you read my issues with it, I do want you to know that it was a compelling story, and most of the characters were very well fleshed out. The fantasy elements were well thought out, the plot was cleverly executed, and the romance between Lourdes and Rhys was sweet. The ending was satisfying, and the journey to get there was worthwhile.
In the beginning, my knee-jerk reaction when I realized that the story was about a people who can produce some kind of thread from their hands or fingers and with venomous fangs--spider-like traits--was to "NOPE" right on out to the next book. It wasn't clear to me from the back cover blurb, and spiders are high on my meter of "Things That Squick Me Out".
I did stick it out, and I'll admit that in the beginning my arachnophobia contributed to my desire to find a reason--any reason--not to read to the end. The name soup with the people and their clans made it very confusing and difficult to follow at times, and was another issue I had a hard time overlooking. Araneidae, Mimetidae, Theridiidae, Salticidae... Those are just some of the clan names. Some of the character names are tongue-twisters, too. I won't go into that here, but suffice to say it was enough to make me wish for a guide chart of some kind to refer to now and then.
Aside from those issues, the story itself was intriguing. Lourdes made an excellent, strong-willed heroine who used every tool at her disposal, including herself, to solve the murder of her parents and discover whether her sister had turned traitor. The originality and effort that went into the world-building can't be denied. The ending was warm and fuzzy, just right for a sweet romance, and the buildup of sexual tension between Lourdes and Rhys made the ending satisfying.
The road to get to that ending was rocky, with a few stumbles along the way, but once it got going, it was a decent read. I can't in all honesty say that I recommend A Hint of Frost highly, but if you're in the mood for a romance with strong fantasy elements, you might enjoy it.
3/5
Before you read my issues with it, I do want you to know that it was a compelling story, and most of the characters were very well fleshed out. The fantasy elements were well thought out, the plot was cleverly executed, and the romance between Lourdes and Rhys was sweet. The ending was satisfying, and the journey to get there was worthwhile.
In the beginning, my knee-jerk reaction when I realized that the story was about a people who can produce some kind of thread from their hands or fingers and with venomous fangs--spider-like traits--was to "NOPE" right on out to the next book. It wasn't clear to me from the back cover blurb, and spiders are high on my meter of "Things That Squick Me Out".
I did stick it out, and I'll admit that in the beginning my arachnophobia contributed to my desire to find a reason--any reason--not to read to the end. The name soup with the people and their clans made it very confusing and difficult to follow at times, and was another issue I had a hard time overlooking. Araneidae, Mimetidae, Theridiidae, Salticidae... Those are just some of the clan names. Some of the character names are tongue-twisters, too. I won't go into that here, but suffice to say it was enough to make me wish for a guide chart of some kind to refer to now and then.
Aside from those issues, the story itself was intriguing. Lourdes made an excellent, strong-willed heroine who used every tool at her disposal, including herself, to solve the murder of her parents and discover whether her sister had turned traitor. The originality and effort that went into the world-building can't be denied. The ending was warm and fuzzy, just right for a sweet romance, and the buildup of sexual tension between Lourdes and Rhys made the ending satisfying.
The road to get to that ending was rocky, with a few stumbles along the way, but once it got going, it was a decent read. I can't in all honesty say that I recommend A Hint of Frost highly, but if you're in the mood for a romance with strong fantasy elements, you might enjoy it.
3/5
April 16, 2012
4.5 Stars
Every once in a while, I stumble across a book that actually treads new ground; one that is fresh without being weird; one I find myself excited to tell everybody about. This is one of those books.
Someone has murdered Lourdes' parents, making her the new maven of her clan. With the deaths of their rulers, the clan's protectors have turned on them and Lourdes must move quickly to find help. She agrees to marry Rhys, the prince of a feared warrior race. In exchange for the union, Rhys will provide his people to protect hers. And just when it seems Lourdes is pulling everything together, her sister disappears.
Lourdes and her new husband must travel out of her familiar territory to find the missing girl. On the way, she slowly begins to unravel his secrets. Rhys is much more than the cold killer everyone thinks him to be. In fact, he is quite stalwart and vulnerable. Their love story is very satisfying. One of the things I liked so much about it, is that it unfolds in a way that made me believe it. We see them peeling back the layers of armor between them, reveling in the real people beneath. It's really very sweet, without ever being saccharine.
While the love story is a big draw, there is also a solid plot moving the story forward. Lourdes and Rhys are working not only to find her sister, but to figure out who killed her parents and why. The pacing is good; I never found it predictable; and the world building is fascinating. The clan Lourdes leads spins powerful threads from their hands, sort of like spiders. They make virtually unbreakable armor, which grants them great wealth. They are a peaceful people, with unique traditions. And as we learn about them, we pick up bits and pieces about the neighboring clans, each with own ways of life. Trying to condense and summarize it here, doesn't do it justice. But I found myself really wrapped up in it all and I didn't want it to end.
I did get a little confused once or twice, trying to keep the different clans all straight in my head... especially since the words Arandeidae and Araneae are so similar. But don't let the unusual names and terminology intimidate you. The world-building is done really well. The whole thing is done really well, honestly.
I enjoyed it very much. 4 1/2 stars.
*ARC provided by author for review.
Every once in a while, I stumble across a book that actually treads new ground; one that is fresh without being weird; one I find myself excited to tell everybody about. This is one of those books.
Someone has murdered Lourdes' parents, making her the new maven of her clan. With the deaths of their rulers, the clan's protectors have turned on them and Lourdes must move quickly to find help. She agrees to marry Rhys, the prince of a feared warrior race. In exchange for the union, Rhys will provide his people to protect hers. And just when it seems Lourdes is pulling everything together, her sister disappears.
Lourdes and her new husband must travel out of her familiar territory to find the missing girl. On the way, she slowly begins to unravel his secrets. Rhys is much more than the cold killer everyone thinks him to be. In fact, he is quite stalwart and vulnerable. Their love story is very satisfying. One of the things I liked so much about it, is that it unfolds in a way that made me believe it. We see them peeling back the layers of armor between them, reveling in the real people beneath. It's really very sweet, without ever being saccharine.
While the love story is a big draw, there is also a solid plot moving the story forward. Lourdes and Rhys are working not only to find her sister, but to figure out who killed her parents and why. The pacing is good; I never found it predictable; and the world building is fascinating. The clan Lourdes leads spins powerful threads from their hands, sort of like spiders. They make virtually unbreakable armor, which grants them great wealth. They are a peaceful people, with unique traditions. And as we learn about them, we pick up bits and pieces about the neighboring clans, each with own ways of life. Trying to condense and summarize it here, doesn't do it justice. But I found myself really wrapped up in it all and I didn't want it to end.
I did get a little confused once or twice, trying to keep the different clans all straight in my head... especially since the words Arandeidae and Araneae are so similar. But don't let the unusual names and terminology intimidate you. The world-building is done really well. The whole thing is done really well, honestly.
I enjoyed it very much. 4 1/2 stars.
*ARC provided by author for review.
February 5, 2016
Great fantasy novel. If you like Grace Draven's Master of Crows or Radiance, you might enjoy this book. Unique and complex world-building. Good characters with a sensuous vibe, but not too quick to rush to bed. I love when an author lets the attraction and romance simmer awhile.
December 1, 2019
I liked it, but not for me. It also felt forever and ever long.
September 26, 2024
2 1\2
I don't know why I expected this book to be a UF, but it may be one of the reasons I liked A Hint of Frost, but never went above board with it.
This is a fantasy romance starring spider people. So, if you are aracno- and latin-phobic this is your chance to let this series go (spider people with Latin names, remember?).
I don't mind spider people (real spider I do), and I did study Latin a few centuries back, so "here I come" was my answer.
Unfortunately, expectations are really a bitch. So I kept wondering why the hell in the middle of the crisis the stupid heroine kept thinking about the guy's... physique. Err, what can I say. I'm not the brightest kitten in the litter, it seems... :)
The good:
--World-building. Fresh, detailed, really good.
The bad:
-- Heroine is boring in her naivité. You'd expect that a woman groomed to rule in the future would be more prepared. She thinks herself as a warrior, but she's barely a girl outside the nursery.
--The YA feel. This book is about the heroine finding her love and her life. Teens themes, sorry.
The maybe
--Lust isn't love. And this book never convinced me the couple fell in love. How? This is a teen crush, sorry.
Overall this is a interesting read, above all for romance fan. Personally I think it's wasted as a romance. :)
I don't know why I expected this book to be a UF, but it may be one of the reasons I liked A Hint of Frost, but never went above board with it.
This is a fantasy romance starring spider people. So, if you are aracno- and latin-phobic this is your chance to let this series go (spider people with Latin names, remember?).
I don't mind spider people (real spider I do), and I did study Latin a few centuries back, so "here I come" was my answer.
Unfortunately, expectations are really a bitch. So I kept wondering why the hell in the middle of the crisis the stupid heroine kept thinking about the guy's... physique. Err, what can I say. I'm not the brightest kitten in the litter, it seems... :)
The good:
--World-building. Fresh, detailed, really good.
The bad:
-- Heroine is boring in her naivité. You'd expect that a woman groomed to rule in the future would be more prepared. She thinks herself as a warrior, but she's barely a girl outside the nursery.
--The YA feel. This book is about the heroine finding her love and her life. Teens themes, sorry.
The maybe
--Lust isn't love. And this book never convinced me the couple fell in love. How? This is a teen crush, sorry.
Overall this is a interesting read, above all for romance fan. Personally I think it's wasted as a romance. :)
May 16, 2019
1.5 stars from me- the book wasn't badly written and there was lots of world-building detail that was carefully thought through, but it just wasn't interesting enough and didn't capture my imagination at all. And the traitor in the family- that was never really clearly explained or justified, so that I can't see this person coming back from having .
Perhaps there was too much minutiae and not enough movement forward of the relationship and the action. When you start to speed-read or skip through paragraphs, you know you have a problem!
It was a case of
I don't think I will be reading any more in this series.
Perhaps there was too much minutiae and not enough movement forward of the relationship and the action. When you start to speed-read or skip through paragraphs, you know you have a problem!
It was a case of
I don't think I will be reading any more in this series.
April 18, 2016
Full version of review for RT Magazine: March 2012 edition
4 ½ Stars!
The author spins an action-packed story of intrigue and betrayal, with an endearing romance at it's heart. I adore a good marriage of convenience tale that ultimately turns into much more – and this one is exceptional. The dialogue is strong, the storyline compelling, and the prose artful. I nearly devoured this book in a single sitting, I was so hesitant to put it down once I'd been caught in it's web.
The fantasy world setting is vaguely familiar in a brutal, medieval sort of way, but still satisfyingly foreign. I found the idea of humans with spider-like characteristics to be both original and fascinating. And the concept, along with the culture, was handled with elegance. Though I craved a bit more physical description initially to help immerse myself and distinguish between characters, the detraction was minimal. (It's also possible I was just being greedy.)
Lourdes is competent and relatable heroine, in spite of circumstances, counterbalanced by a keen hero I was happy to root for. I was also pleased to see the author juggle a number of children/adolescent side-characters, and volatile sibling relationships,with a deft authenticity. If this book heralds a series, I will happily be keeping an eye out for the next one.
4 ½ Stars!
The author spins an action-packed story of intrigue and betrayal, with an endearing romance at it's heart. I adore a good marriage of convenience tale that ultimately turns into much more – and this one is exceptional. The dialogue is strong, the storyline compelling, and the prose artful. I nearly devoured this book in a single sitting, I was so hesitant to put it down once I'd been caught in it's web.
The fantasy world setting is vaguely familiar in a brutal, medieval sort of way, but still satisfyingly foreign. I found the idea of humans with spider-like characteristics to be both original and fascinating. And the concept, along with the culture, was handled with elegance. Though I craved a bit more physical description initially to help immerse myself and distinguish between characters, the detraction was minimal. (It's also possible I was just being greedy.)
Lourdes is competent and relatable heroine, in spite of circumstances, counterbalanced by a keen hero I was happy to root for. I was also pleased to see the author juggle a number of children/adolescent side-characters, and volatile sibling relationships,with a deft authenticity. If this book heralds a series, I will happily be keeping an eye out for the next one.
August 23, 2018
I started and gave up on this 2 times over the last 3 years before I finally finished it.
It has some intersting elements to set it up: A royal family without parents, an arranged marriage, unique magical creatures. I love a lot of Hailey Edward's other books too so I know she can write.
But the world building was so light, the plot was predictable, and the romance was shallow. Main character did all the right things, but she had no real personality. It reminded me of the ya fantasy books I used to read years ago, where you're impressed easily just because you've never read a fanatsy romance before.
It has some intersting elements to set it up: A royal family without parents, an arranged marriage, unique magical creatures. I love a lot of Hailey Edward's other books too so I know she can write.
But the world building was so light, the plot was predictable, and the romance was shallow. Main character did all the right things, but she had no real personality. It reminded me of the ya fantasy books I used to read years ago, where you're impressed easily just because you've never read a fanatsy romance before.
October 16, 2013
4.5 stars
I love this fantasy romance and the awesome world building. The last time I read the same genre that make me love it as much was Master of Crows by Grace Draven. I did find the name of the clans and some make-up noun intimidating and I have a hard time pronouncing (not that I read out loud) and keep track of the words. It would be handy if there is a glossary page for me. But all these is part of the charm of the book.
Our heroine Lourdes, is the eldest daughter of the Araneidae clan heads and with the sudden passing of both her parents, she found herself becoming the youngest maven ever appointed. She had her plate full dealing with finding out the culprit behind her parents death, bring peace among her clan and lastly sought alliance with the Mimetidae clan. Even if it means agreeing to a political marriage, this is what she needs to do.
Rhys is the youngest son of the Mimetidae clan heads and a warrior at heart. His clan had a reputation of being cannibal and fearsome mercenary, so Lourdes was expecting an ogre. But Rhys turn out to be such a humble and noble hero that I can't help but love him. He seems stoic and vague most of the time. I want to know what is going on in his head. What I do know is Rhys is determine to fulfill his promises and claim her in the end. I love their interaction during their alone time, there is much to discover and enjoy in their dialogues.
"Should I assume your vagueness means you'd rather not answer?"
"I'd rather not frighten you without cause."
"Because hearing you're concerned isn't frightening in its own right."
Initially Lourdes promise to wed Rhys if he help her to avenge her parents death, but when her sister goes missing, she decided that finding her sister is of utmost priority. Together with Rhys's brother, Vaughn, the trio set out to track down her sister and in the mean time they encounter some adventure along the way. There are spirit walkers, mysterious death among the animals and path crossing with the Theridiidae clan. If Rhys is the model of good guys, Vaughn is the direct opposite. He makes me wanted to hit him most of the time, but I find him to be such an interesting character too. Rhys and Vaughn had some siblings rivalry going on, but when shit hits the fan, we know both the brothers care for each other. I love their little weird dysfunctional relationship.
Told entirely from Lourdes' POV, Rhys seems to be such a enigmatic and mysterious character. I just can't wait to learn more about his background. Then the more I learn about him, the more I fell for him. Enough of reading about rakes out there, for once I enjoy reading about a man with honor and values. Well, I'm not giving away his past here. Just gonna say he melt my heart and make me swoon most of the time.
"I want more from you than your honor. I want to be more to you than your duty."
I admire both Lourdes and Rhys for their commitment to their vows and promises and the sacrifices they willing to make for their clans. They respected each other and willing to make things work for them. Although they were together due to a political allegiance, they grow to care and love one another. I like the fact that they take times to get to know each other well and truly fell in love before they seal the deal.
"Beneath the cool water, his mouth found its way to mine and his lips moved across them. I'm yours. I understood him as clear as if he'd spoken in my ear."
Due to this being Book 1, the world building and introduction to some of the setting might be a tad overwhelming, but truly this book is romance at its heart. Despite me not able to visualize what exactly did Brun and Mamoan looks like (I assume they looks like miniature dinosaurs), I fell in love with romance part of the story. Its subtle and undertone without flaunting lust and sexuality around, yet it is wholly satisfying. Is a nice break for me from romance that is full of drama and angst. I would have prefer there is a dramatic fighting scene towards the end and with that, it will definitely be a 5 stars for me.
"If we knew nothing else in our ever-changing world, we'd know love, when we made it, expressed the threads that bound our lives. Not so weak a thing as venom and not so brief a thing as desire."
I love this fantasy romance and the awesome world building. The last time I read the same genre that make me love it as much was Master of Crows by Grace Draven. I did find the name of the clans and some make-up noun intimidating and I have a hard time pronouncing (not that I read out loud) and keep track of the words. It would be handy if there is a glossary page for me. But all these is part of the charm of the book.
Our heroine Lourdes, is the eldest daughter of the Araneidae clan heads and with the sudden passing of both her parents, she found herself becoming the youngest maven ever appointed. She had her plate full dealing with finding out the culprit behind her parents death, bring peace among her clan and lastly sought alliance with the Mimetidae clan. Even if it means agreeing to a political marriage, this is what she needs to do.
Rhys is the youngest son of the Mimetidae clan heads and a warrior at heart. His clan had a reputation of being cannibal and fearsome mercenary, so Lourdes was expecting an ogre. But Rhys turn out to be such a humble and noble hero that I can't help but love him. He seems stoic and vague most of the time. I want to know what is going on in his head. What I do know is Rhys is determine to fulfill his promises and claim her in the end. I love their interaction during their alone time, there is much to discover and enjoy in their dialogues.
"Should I assume your vagueness means you'd rather not answer?"
"I'd rather not frighten you without cause."
"Because hearing you're concerned isn't frightening in its own right."
Initially Lourdes promise to wed Rhys if he help her to avenge her parents death, but when her sister goes missing, she decided that finding her sister is of utmost priority. Together with Rhys's brother, Vaughn, the trio set out to track down her sister and in the mean time they encounter some adventure along the way. There are spirit walkers, mysterious death among the animals and path crossing with the Theridiidae clan. If Rhys is the model of good guys, Vaughn is the direct opposite. He makes me wanted to hit him most of the time, but I find him to be such an interesting character too. Rhys and Vaughn had some siblings rivalry going on, but when shit hits the fan, we know both the brothers care for each other. I love their little weird dysfunctional relationship.
Told entirely from Lourdes' POV, Rhys seems to be such a enigmatic and mysterious character. I just can't wait to learn more about his background. Then the more I learn about him, the more I fell for him. Enough of reading about rakes out there, for once I enjoy reading about a man with honor and values. Well, I'm not giving away his past here. Just gonna say he melt my heart and make me swoon most of the time.
"I want more from you than your honor. I want to be more to you than your duty."
I admire both Lourdes and Rhys for their commitment to their vows and promises and the sacrifices they willing to make for their clans. They respected each other and willing to make things work for them. Although they were together due to a political allegiance, they grow to care and love one another. I like the fact that they take times to get to know each other well and truly fell in love before they seal the deal.
"Beneath the cool water, his mouth found its way to mine and his lips moved across them. I'm yours. I understood him as clear as if he'd spoken in my ear."
Due to this being Book 1, the world building and introduction to some of the setting might be a tad overwhelming, but truly this book is romance at its heart. Despite me not able to visualize what exactly did Brun and Mamoan looks like (I assume they looks like miniature dinosaurs), I fell in love with romance part of the story. Its subtle and undertone without flaunting lust and sexuality around, yet it is wholly satisfying. Is a nice break for me from romance that is full of drama and angst. I would have prefer there is a dramatic fighting scene towards the end and with that, it will definitely be a 5 stars for me.
"If we knew nothing else in our ever-changing world, we'd know love, when we made it, expressed the threads that bound our lives. Not so weak a thing as venom and not so brief a thing as desire."
September 30, 2019
Spider people!
In A Hint of Frost, Lourdes, the protagonist and the rest of the cast are a species of human who possess arachnid-like characteristics including poisonous fangs and spinnerets. Lourdes is a member of a clan who is renowned for spinning the finest and strongest silk. They are allied and protected by another clan, who, at the novel's onset, has betrayed them, killing many (?) in her clan and assassinating her parents.
Because her people are spinners not fighters, Lourdes enters into an agreement with another clan, whereby she will marry (or be engaged to?) the clan maven's son, Rhys. If, within a month, Rhys and his people determine who betrayed her people, she will have to marry Rhys.
Or something like that.
This is my second attempt to read A Hint of Frost, and it's obvious why I bailed by chapter three the first time.
I'm going to be a flat-out asshole, and note that reviewers who claim the book has amazing world building are wrong. Wrong, wrong, wrong! The premise is original--Spider people, how cool is that?--but the execution is terrible.
A population of humans (presumably) who have somehow evolved toxic fangs and the ability to secrete spider webs is a great idea. But great ideas aren't stories; and good world building is more than an "idea." World building means just that; a complex structure supporting the politics, culture, economics, geography, ecosystems, etc. that make up the characters' surroundings. None of this is present in A Hint of Frost. The world building and for that matter, setting, is no more than a brief sketch: spider people with warring clans, some live in tunnels, some are more barbaric than others. The previous sentence describes the extent of world building in this novel. Today's YA fantasy novels, with their over-reliance on some stupid gimmick, have deeper world building.
And what's up with the names? Lourdes? Rhys? French and Welsh names? Why? The novel's approach to developing believable culture is "culture schmulture."
The novel's appeal, I guess is the romance. Much younger me would have thought Rhys and his whole, chest-pounding, "Ima manly, manly man who will control mah female" bullshit appealing. Current me thinks he's a controlling ass-twaddle with less personality than a toaster. And less useful. Our heroine, Lourdes, sways between "I'm a bad ass archer (except she conveniently never has a bow)" and fainting in the hero's arms. Each swoon, of course, accompanied by Rhys making trite, "I will protect you 4-evah" noises and showing his nurturing side (which is really his controlling asshat side).
To its credit, the writing style is sometimes rather nice. Unfortunately, this reads like a first novel that should have been left in a drawer. Or at least, a book that needed a fuck-ton of developmental editing. The descriptions are a hot mess: in one instant someone puts something in their pocket; then suddenly it's back in their hand. Action scenes are sloppy, often dropping into passive voice, with illogical character movement and blocking.
I hope this thing was free; else, I want my money back.
In A Hint of Frost, Lourdes, the protagonist and the rest of the cast are a species of human who possess arachnid-like characteristics including poisonous fangs and spinnerets. Lourdes is a member of a clan who is renowned for spinning the finest and strongest silk. They are allied and protected by another clan, who, at the novel's onset, has betrayed them, killing many (?) in her clan and assassinating her parents.
Because her people are spinners not fighters, Lourdes enters into an agreement with another clan, whereby she will marry (or be engaged to?) the clan maven's son, Rhys. If, within a month, Rhys and his people determine who betrayed her people, she will have to marry Rhys.
Or something like that.
This is my second attempt to read A Hint of Frost, and it's obvious why I bailed by chapter three the first time.
I'm going to be a flat-out asshole, and note that reviewers who claim the book has amazing world building are wrong. Wrong, wrong, wrong! The premise is original--Spider people, how cool is that?--but the execution is terrible.
A population of humans (presumably) who have somehow evolved toxic fangs and the ability to secrete spider webs is a great idea. But great ideas aren't stories; and good world building is more than an "idea." World building means just that; a complex structure supporting the politics, culture, economics, geography, ecosystems, etc. that make up the characters' surroundings. None of this is present in A Hint of Frost. The world building and for that matter, setting, is no more than a brief sketch: spider people with warring clans, some live in tunnels, some are more barbaric than others. The previous sentence describes the extent of world building in this novel. Today's YA fantasy novels, with their over-reliance on some stupid gimmick, have deeper world building.
And what's up with the names? Lourdes? Rhys? French and Welsh names? Why? The novel's approach to developing believable culture is "culture schmulture."
The novel's appeal, I guess is the romance. Much younger me would have thought Rhys and his whole, chest-pounding, "Ima manly, manly man who will control mah female" bullshit appealing. Current me thinks he's a controlling ass-twaddle with less personality than a toaster. And less useful. Our heroine, Lourdes, sways between "I'm a bad ass archer (except she conveniently never has a bow)" and fainting in the hero's arms. Each swoon, of course, accompanied by Rhys making trite, "I will protect you 4-evah" noises and showing his nurturing side (which is really his controlling asshat side).
To its credit, the writing style is sometimes rather nice. Unfortunately, this reads like a first novel that should have been left in a drawer. Or at least, a book that needed a fuck-ton of developmental editing. The descriptions are a hot mess: in one instant someone puts something in their pocket; then suddenly it's back in their hand. Action scenes are sloppy, often dropping into passive voice, with illogical character movement and blocking.
I hope this thing was free; else, I want my money back.
May 25, 2016
A really enjoyable read!
I truly am at a loss for words on how to adequately review this book. First, I would say it is pretty heavy on the romance which I like in my fantasy reads. There is not much angst, which I also prefer.
The writing is very good, but I wish there was a little more description of the characters and creatures appearances. Especially the Urus (? spelling). The world building was pretty good but again more detail would have made it more 3 dimensional, not to say it was flat but more or less left up to the readers imagination. And lastly, I would have liked to have known Rhy's thoughts. We never get inside his head. This too was not very important to me since the author did well to show his actions and expressions enough to not need his thoughts.
What I truly loved about this book, is that although Rhys had secrets, they were not used to frustrate the reader, weren't stupidly held back causing grief to his relationship with Lourdes, but instead were revealed properly at the right time, and were of no consequence. The "secrets" were not the sole purpose of the conflict in the story to which I was glad. I truly hate when I read a book that makes me scream in my mind "for christs sake just tell him!" This one did not.
The pace was steady and I did not skim. It held my interest from beginning to end. No lulls.
The characters were all lovable and 3 dimensional. The hero was perfect, strong, loyal, honorable and considerate. The heroine was realistic. My only complaint with her is that she was supposed to be a "warrior" I didn't really feel it. My first problem was right in the beginning when she left all her weapons behind during the attack. What skilled warrior does this? Uggh. Well to me, it was forgivable. I reasoned that she may be skilled but she clearly wasn't practiced. She didn't fight in wars or anything, just highly trained. So I let it slide. But seriously, that's the only thing that didn't sit 100% right with me about her. Aside from that, I really liked her.
The romance was not quite insta love, but definately insta attraction. Some may not like this, but it doesn't bother me, in fact I prefer it. Rhys and Lourdes definately had chemistry and they were so good together.
I plan to read the rest in the series and would recommend this book to any who like fantasy romance.
Safety issues:
There is blood gore and violence (not much IMHO and nothing shocking)
Hero is a virgin. No OW, no cheating or straying
No Cursing
Loving scenes - 1.5 times. The real one is at the end, worth the wait. Nothing hardcore but certainly not mild. (Cringe worthy words used in loving-sex (as anatomy -used only once, and bundle of nerves... ick but forgivable)
No rape
July 9, 2017
THIS IS WHAT I MEAN WHEN I SAY FANTASY ROMANCE, YA’LL. Romance novel in a fantasy setting. Why is that so hard to understand?
I can’t believe it’s taken me this long to review this series. Bad, bad little blogger me. Regardless, I truly enjoyed this book. I don’t remember why I picked it up, I don’t remember what gave me the final push to hit “download.” I just remember this was a fun series and I read the first two books plus the prequel, then 30% or something on the third book…then what the hell happened? No idea. I’m going to go pick that third book up again, because I remember I loved this one.
The plot:
I was a little confused for the first few chapters—are Lourdes and Rhys temporarily married or what? Looking back, it was explained by Mab, so word of advice, pay attention to Mab. Just in general. She's hardcore.
The story follows the romance novel arc very well while at the same tossing in monsters, venomous warriors, soulmates, and some truly original world building. I think the world building was one of the most remarkable aspects. I’ve never encountered spider-based paranormal creatures before and it was an exciting twist.
The characters:
Lourdes has that "duty" thing going on. Actually, both main characters do. And I love it. Despite that, she and Rhys have an attraction that teeters on insta-love, but I thought her reluctance compensated for it. The revelation about Rhys saving himself for his soulmate was what finally sold me on the book and launched it into the 5-star realm. I JUST LOVE THAT, OKAY.
Yes, there were other characters, but who cares about them? Several have their own books. Yes, they’re great, but go read it yourself if you want to know. Geez.
I thought this book was amazing and I really need to get back to reading the series. If you're like me, a sucker for unique worlds and “wait for marriage” heroes, you should, too.
I can’t believe it’s taken me this long to review this series. Bad, bad little blogger me. Regardless, I truly enjoyed this book. I don’t remember why I picked it up, I don’t remember what gave me the final push to hit “download.” I just remember this was a fun series and I read the first two books plus the prequel, then 30% or something on the third book…then what the hell happened? No idea. I’m going to go pick that third book up again, because I remember I loved this one.
The plot:
I was a little confused for the first few chapters—are Lourdes and Rhys temporarily married or what? Looking back, it was explained by Mab, so word of advice, pay attention to Mab. Just in general. She's hardcore.
The story follows the romance novel arc very well while at the same tossing in monsters, venomous warriors, soulmates, and some truly original world building. I think the world building was one of the most remarkable aspects. I’ve never encountered spider-based paranormal creatures before and it was an exciting twist.
The characters:
Lourdes has that "duty" thing going on. Actually, both main characters do. And I love it. Despite that, she and Rhys have an attraction that teeters on insta-love, but I thought her reluctance compensated for it. The revelation about Rhys saving himself for his soulmate was what finally sold me on the book and launched it into the 5-star realm. I JUST LOVE THAT, OKAY.
Yes, there were other characters, but who cares about them? Several have their own books. Yes, they’re great, but go read it yourself if you want to know. Geez.
I thought this book was amazing and I really need to get back to reading the series. If you're like me, a sucker for unique worlds and “wait for marriage” heroes, you should, too.
June 5, 2013
I gave up. The main character made absolutely no sense to me, she was supposed to an aggressive warrior and yet she was so wishy-washy with her brand new husband. The spider thing had me ick-ed out and I couldn't really figure out what these people were. Ugh. No thanks.
April 30, 2012
More like 3.5. A Promising new series!
The new Araneae Nation series by Hailey Edwards kicks off with Lourdes, daughter of Araneidae clan leaders, running for her life from treacherous enemies that have poisoned her mother and father with plans to usurp power. Lourdes refuses to give up easily and she wants revenge, so she decides to ally with the venomous and cannibalistic Mimetidae clan through marrying their maven's mercenary warrior son. Rhys the Cold is this warrior, and he is committed to his duty with hopes for his clan to flourish. But through working together with the Araneaens, these people become a little too tempting for kind.
Rhys is devoted is to his clan first, but as he spends more and more time with his future wife priorities may be shifting and he becomes more conflicted about his true loyalties. This is further tested once Lourdes' younger sister turns up missing, possibly abducted, and with his betrothed they travel to the southlands to find her. They are in for a bit of a surprise once they discover a deadly plague that risks spreading throughout their whole world. Lourdes must test herself as a true maven, juggling her decisions to save her fellow clansmen from this disease as well as save her sister and exact revenge on those responsible for her parents' deaths.
For the most part, I enjoyed the read by Ms. Edwards. It's definitely firmly in the fantasy category. It takes us to a completely new world and we're introduced to characters with abilities more unique than we're used to seeing. There's a good deal of character development for the two leads, Lourdes and Rhys, both separately and together which I think is really important for ongoing novels like this. Their adventure was engaging and I looked forward to how Lourdes would solve these issues. She's forced to grow up really quickly so you admire her and sympathize with her quite a bit. She has a lot of chemistry with Rhys, so I think romance lovers will enjoy this angle of the novel.
That said, I did have a couple of quirks with the story. I enjoyed being introduced to a new world, but I think the series could really benefit from a glossary or at least some kind of reference so that the reader can fully understand the different clans as well as the geography of the land. I got confused a few times trying to remember who was who and who did what to whom, and more importantly which clans had what kind of supernatural ability. There were some points where I got confused and then the answer would be revealed later on, but I sort of felt like these answers should have been revealed immediately. The ending also felt somewhat rushed to me. Overall, the book is a relatively short read, so it's worth reading twice to grasp everything even better.
I think the cover is nice and well done. It captures the atmosphere of this world pretty well. However, the title could be a little more distinctive. Even though I don't read the series, I immediately thought about Laurel K. Hamilton's Merry Gentry series (I believe she has a book titled Lick of Frost), so I'm unsure weather or not providing a similar title was intentional. It's not a big deal, but it was just my observation.
I think this series has a lot of potential and I wonder where Edwards can take things next. Will it still center on Lourdes and Rhys? Maybe we'll see focus shift to another character and couple? The latter is my bet because there are others who could have interesting stories of their own.
*ARC Provided by the Author.
*Review also posted to Amazon.
The new Araneae Nation series by Hailey Edwards kicks off with Lourdes, daughter of Araneidae clan leaders, running for her life from treacherous enemies that have poisoned her mother and father with plans to usurp power. Lourdes refuses to give up easily and she wants revenge, so she decides to ally with the venomous and cannibalistic Mimetidae clan through marrying their maven's mercenary warrior son. Rhys the Cold is this warrior, and he is committed to his duty with hopes for his clan to flourish. But through working together with the Araneaens, these people become a little too tempting for kind.
Rhys is devoted is to his clan first, but as he spends more and more time with his future wife priorities may be shifting and he becomes more conflicted about his true loyalties. This is further tested once Lourdes' younger sister turns up missing, possibly abducted, and with his betrothed they travel to the southlands to find her. They are in for a bit of a surprise once they discover a deadly plague that risks spreading throughout their whole world. Lourdes must test herself as a true maven, juggling her decisions to save her fellow clansmen from this disease as well as save her sister and exact revenge on those responsible for her parents' deaths.
For the most part, I enjoyed the read by Ms. Edwards. It's definitely firmly in the fantasy category. It takes us to a completely new world and we're introduced to characters with abilities more unique than we're used to seeing. There's a good deal of character development for the two leads, Lourdes and Rhys, both separately and together which I think is really important for ongoing novels like this. Their adventure was engaging and I looked forward to how Lourdes would solve these issues. She's forced to grow up really quickly so you admire her and sympathize with her quite a bit. She has a lot of chemistry with Rhys, so I think romance lovers will enjoy this angle of the novel.
That said, I did have a couple of quirks with the story. I enjoyed being introduced to a new world, but I think the series could really benefit from a glossary or at least some kind of reference so that the reader can fully understand the different clans as well as the geography of the land. I got confused a few times trying to remember who was who and who did what to whom, and more importantly which clans had what kind of supernatural ability. There were some points where I got confused and then the answer would be revealed later on, but I sort of felt like these answers should have been revealed immediately. The ending also felt somewhat rushed to me. Overall, the book is a relatively short read, so it's worth reading twice to grasp everything even better.
I think the cover is nice and well done. It captures the atmosphere of this world pretty well. However, the title could be a little more distinctive. Even though I don't read the series, I immediately thought about Laurel K. Hamilton's Merry Gentry series (I believe she has a book titled Lick of Frost), so I'm unsure weather or not providing a similar title was intentional. It's not a big deal, but it was just my observation.
I think this series has a lot of potential and I wonder where Edwards can take things next. Will it still center on Lourdes and Rhys? Maybe we'll see focus shift to another character and couple? The latter is my bet because there are others who could have interesting stories of their own.
*ARC Provided by the Author.
*Review also posted to Amazon.
February 21, 2013
4.5 stars. This book was a tremendously pleasant surprise, having some of the most original world building I have read in years. This is more fantasy romance, no humans in sight, with a large cast of characters that inhabit Araneae Nation. They look human but have fangs (of varying degrees), venom (of varying degrees), spinnerets in their finger tips for weaving thread, a matriarchal society that live in underground caves or "nests", and, yes, there are those among them who battle their "flesh hunger". You get the picture. But, no worries, no Shelob here. It was fun and different and the story and setting swept me away.
It starts off with young Lourdes having become Maven of her wealthy Araneidae clan after the murder of her parents. They have been betrayed by their allies, her own father's clan, the Theridiidae, and Lourdes is forced into a new alliance with a brutal and impoverished clan of mercenaries, the Mimetidae. The Mimetidae Maven, Isolde, offers up her 2nd son, Rhys, as husband to Lourdes to seal their new alliance and, without any choice, Lourdes accepts. They are of course attracted to one another from the beginning, but Lourdes worries over their clan's reputed blood thirstiness. Rhys and his mother both have secrets which are a large part of the plot, along with solving the mystery of who within the Araneidae clan betrayed Lourdes' parents and why.
I liked almost everything about this book. Both Lourdes and Rhys are intelligent, attractive and brave. They don't quite have insta-love but admire one another from the beginning. There is a large supporting cast and I particularly enjoyed Lourdes younger brothers (Henri and Armand) and Rhys' older brother, Vaughn, who worked very hard at being an obnoxious jerk. Yes, some of the names of the clans and characters are a mouthful but are based on actual spider species. (For example, Mimetidae are "pirate spiders" who typically feed on other spiders. I looked it up.) Yes, in Typical Heroine Behavior, Lourdes does something Rhys specifically asks her not to do as soon as he turns his back. I didn't care. I still enjoyed it.
My only complaint is that the book is written in 1st person which I generally dislike (though not as much with this book) and, at 240 pages, it is too short. I wanted more, more, more! At least another 50 pages or so and more Lourdes, Rhys, Vaughn, Henri, Armand, Bram, etc. Yes, I am definitely hooked on Araneae Nation and am definitely reading book 2 A Feast of Souls, and the novella that just came out, A Cast of Shadows.
It starts off with young Lourdes having become Maven of her wealthy Araneidae clan after the murder of her parents. They have been betrayed by their allies, her own father's clan, the Theridiidae, and Lourdes is forced into a new alliance with a brutal and impoverished clan of mercenaries, the Mimetidae. The Mimetidae Maven, Isolde, offers up her 2nd son, Rhys, as husband to Lourdes to seal their new alliance and, without any choice, Lourdes accepts. They are of course attracted to one another from the beginning, but Lourdes worries over their clan's reputed blood thirstiness. Rhys and his mother both have secrets which are a large part of the plot, along with solving the mystery of who within the Araneidae clan betrayed Lourdes' parents and why.
I liked almost everything about this book. Both Lourdes and Rhys are intelligent, attractive and brave. They don't quite have insta-love but admire one another from the beginning. There is a large supporting cast and I particularly enjoyed Lourdes younger brothers (Henri and Armand) and Rhys' older brother, Vaughn, who worked very hard at being an obnoxious jerk. Yes, some of the names of the clans and characters are a mouthful but are based on actual spider species. (For example, Mimetidae are "pirate spiders" who typically feed on other spiders. I looked it up.) Yes, in Typical Heroine Behavior, Lourdes does something Rhys specifically asks her not to do as soon as he turns his back. I didn't care. I still enjoyed it.
My only complaint is that the book is written in 1st person which I generally dislike (though not as much with this book) and, at 240 pages, it is too short. I wanted more, more, more! At least another 50 pages or so and more Lourdes, Rhys, Vaughn, Henri, Armand, Bram, etc. Yes, I am definitely hooked on Araneae Nation and am definitely reading book 2 A Feast of Souls, and the novella that just came out, A Cast of Shadows.
May 26, 2012
It is a rare and marvelous day when I find a book that actually tread new grounds. Especially now when hundreds of Vampire, Angels, Witches, Demons, and Shifters variation are scatter all around the world of UF publishing. Once in a while you hit a fresh story but too weird to understand. But when I find a book so fresh and the writing beautifully executed I couldn't stop myself from overachieving and try to write a decent review to gush about it's awesomeness.
The only real problem I find here which is the reason I cannot give it the whole 5stars may be blamed at the publisher's feet but more on that later.
I have been taught at school that a review should have a summary so let me give this a shot...
Ahmn.. sorry, if you want one read the book description above. It covers the most basic plot.
Now on with the gushing..
The two Gods and split worlds mythology. Wow. From what I gathered to this very short novel the Araneae Nation's whole faith system comes from this. There are some stories that hints at a more elaborate faith a little like M.W.T's Queens thief with little stories alongside the main story but it didn't really go that far. More like snippets to tease. It left me hanging, hungry for more words but not to the point I got annoyed by the scarcity of details.
The fresh new universe Ms. Edwards created. The Araneae nation. I admit that I get confused with a few things sometimes even 2 pages in I am grasping at the terms used but the smooth compelling writing of H.Edwards suck me in. Instead of frustration I get more determine to devour the book to get to know these people being describe, the different clans that made up the Nation.
As I've said the book lacks in elaboration. A glossary page and even a map would make a LOT> of improvement. An over editing seem more likely that accidental omission to me. Regardless it didn't really sour the experience for me as the book is all about telling rather than showing. I can't imagine ever wishing for more details less action. More eye soring unnecessary adjectives. More telling forget the showing. I grumble about this but it's mostly because I just want more of a good stuff rather than feeling left hanging dry.
The series title Araneae Nation is enough of a clue to what kind of characters plays the pages but it is not nearly enough to guess at the world portrait here. ....
The only real problem I find here which is the reason I cannot give it the whole 5stars may be blamed at the publisher's feet but more on that later.
I have been taught at school that a review should have a summary so let me give this a shot...
Ahmn.. sorry, if you want one read the book description above. It covers the most basic plot.
Now on with the gushing..
The two Gods and split worlds mythology. Wow. From what I gathered to this very short novel the Araneae Nation's whole faith system comes from this. There are some stories that hints at a more elaborate faith a little like M.W.T's Queens thief with little stories alongside the main story but it didn't really go that far. More like snippets to tease. It left me hanging, hungry for more words but not to the point I got annoyed by the scarcity of details.
The fresh new universe Ms. Edwards created. The Araneae nation. I admit that I get confused with a few things sometimes even 2 pages in I am grasping at the terms used but the smooth compelling writing of H.Edwards suck me in. Instead of frustration I get more determine to devour the book to get to know these people being describe, the different clans that made up the Nation.
As I've said the book lacks in elaboration. A glossary page and even a map would make a LOT> of improvement. An over editing seem more likely that accidental omission to me. Regardless it didn't really sour the experience for me as the book is all about telling rather than showing. I can't imagine ever wishing for more details less action. More eye soring unnecessary adjectives. More telling forget the showing. I grumble about this but it's mostly because I just want more of a good stuff rather than feeling left hanging dry.
The series title Araneae Nation is enough of a clue to what kind of characters plays the pages but it is not nearly enough to guess at the world portrait here. ....
September 17, 2023
A Write to Review
Note: I received this book from the author in exchange for an honest review.
In a world where clans of Araneidae are in turmoil, Lourdes, the eldest daughter of the clan's poisoned leader, becomes the new maven. To ensure her clan's survival, she must marry a warrior capable of defending her city and people. Her choice is Rhys the Cold, a skilled and fierce warrior born into poverty.
Rhys possesses only his sword and a mercenary reputation. His clan is starving and shunned due to their taste for the flesh of fellow Araneaeans. As Rhys is drawn to his future bride, Lourdes, their attraction threatens to thaw his icy demeanor.
Amidst the chaos of battle, Lourdes's sister goes missing, feared captured by enemies. Lourdes and Rhys embark on a journey into the dangerous southlands, where they encounter a mysterious plague spreading from southern clans to Erania. Lourdes must prove her worth and decide whether she can lead her clan from the brink of destruction.
Lourdes, the central character in this story, is a beacon of duty and loyalty. Her commitment to her clansmen is unwavering, and she is determined to do whatever it takes to protect and save them. These qualities not only guide her decision-making but also play a significant role in her relationship with Rhys. Conversely, Rhys may initially appear as a rugged and strong man's man, but beneath that exterior lies a caring and sensitive side that he readily reveals to Lourdes. He places his trust and faith in her, allowing her to take the lead. The palpable sexual tension between Lourdes and Rhys adds depth to their relationship and enhances the narrative.
One challenge I faced while reading this book was keeping track of the numerous names and different character types. The story thrusts readers into a unique world with its own terminology and customs, which can be a bit overwhelming at first. However, the author skillfully navigates this complexity by gradually explaining the various elements of the different clans, making it easier for readers to immerse themselves in the story.
Note: I received this book from the author in exchange for an honest review.
In a world where clans of Araneidae are in turmoil, Lourdes, the eldest daughter of the clan's poisoned leader, becomes the new maven. To ensure her clan's survival, she must marry a warrior capable of defending her city and people. Her choice is Rhys the Cold, a skilled and fierce warrior born into poverty.
Rhys possesses only his sword and a mercenary reputation. His clan is starving and shunned due to their taste for the flesh of fellow Araneaeans. As Rhys is drawn to his future bride, Lourdes, their attraction threatens to thaw his icy demeanor.
Amidst the chaos of battle, Lourdes's sister goes missing, feared captured by enemies. Lourdes and Rhys embark on a journey into the dangerous southlands, where they encounter a mysterious plague spreading from southern clans to Erania. Lourdes must prove her worth and decide whether she can lead her clan from the brink of destruction.
Lourdes, the central character in this story, is a beacon of duty and loyalty. Her commitment to her clansmen is unwavering, and she is determined to do whatever it takes to protect and save them. These qualities not only guide her decision-making but also play a significant role in her relationship with Rhys. Conversely, Rhys may initially appear as a rugged and strong man's man, but beneath that exterior lies a caring and sensitive side that he readily reveals to Lourdes. He places his trust and faith in her, allowing her to take the lead. The palpable sexual tension between Lourdes and Rhys adds depth to their relationship and enhances the narrative.
One challenge I faced while reading this book was keeping track of the numerous names and different character types. The story thrusts readers into a unique world with its own terminology and customs, which can be a bit overwhelming at first. However, the author skillfully navigates this complexity by gradually explaining the various elements of the different clans, making it easier for readers to immerse themselves in the story.
January 14, 2014
I don't feel the love... It has a nice story flow, but I have some problems with it.
Some of the plot construction seems clumsy and predictable to me (e.g. the sister/treason stuff/Rhys' big secret/the relationship development between Rhys and her etc.). I didn't like the "virgin till real marriage" line - that is a very typical m/f romance thing - over-used and expandable. Also the groom not being allowed to see her wedding dress before the ceremony.
Of the characters I liked Rhys best, but he also stayed card-board heroic - alpha in the sense of dangerous fighter, but vulnerable and caring as a true modern guy.
I found the world building more than confusing - starting with the names in this strange world: male lead is called Rhys, which is basically a British name; his brother's name is Vaughn. And then the female lead's siblings are called Pasacale (a girl!), Armand and Henri - so we go French here. And then there are side characters like Wishövi (WTF?) and Masikookyang (double WTF??). The first one is a Hopi word for spider web according to google. And the best one: The female lead is called Lourdes (a "holy" place in France, Madonna's daughter is also named after it).
There is mentioning of Anis and Licorice. But there are also fantasy animals and the "Araneae" are some kind of spider-people.
This kind of stuff really bugs me - it is the same when characters in historicals say "Okay" all the time.
It was overall an ok read, but I won't continue with the series - there are better ones out there I am sure and so I'd rather search on.
Some of the plot construction seems clumsy and predictable to me (e.g. the sister/treason stuff/Rhys' big secret/the relationship development between Rhys and her etc.). I didn't like the "virgin till real marriage" line - that is a very typical m/f romance thing - over-used and expandable. Also the groom not being allowed to see her wedding dress before the ceremony.
Of the characters I liked Rhys best, but he also stayed card-board heroic - alpha in the sense of dangerous fighter, but vulnerable and caring as a true modern guy.
I found the world building more than confusing - starting with the names in this strange world: male lead is called Rhys, which is basically a British name; his brother's name is Vaughn. And then the female lead's siblings are called Pasacale (a girl!), Armand and Henri - so we go French here. And then there are side characters like Wishövi (WTF?) and Masikookyang (double WTF??). The first one is a Hopi word for spider web according to google. And the best one: The female lead is called Lourdes (a "holy" place in France, Madonna's daughter is also named after it).
There is mentioning of Anis and Licorice. But there are also fantasy animals and the "Araneae" are some kind of spider-people.
This kind of stuff really bugs me - it is the same when characters in historicals say "Okay" all the time.
It was overall an ok read, but I won't continue with the series - there are better ones out there I am sure and so I'd rather search on.
April 17, 2012
This is a Quickie Review. For the full review, please visit The Romanceaholic
Expected Release Date: April 17, 2012
Publisher: Samhain
Imprint: N/A
Author’s Website: http://haileyedwards.net/
My Source for This Book: Gift from the Author
Part of a Series: Yes, Book 1, Araneae Nation
Series Best Read In Order: N/A
Steam Level: Steamy
While I admit that I probably would’ve fared better had I had a map of the clans or perhaps a glossary with my copy, I absolutely adored this story. Had it not been for the multiple instances where poor Lourdes’ bosom was exposed to all and sundry, this would have been rated higher, but even with the abundance of that major pet peeve of mine, this was a very solid read.
The originality of the universe Ms. Edwards has created along with the multi-faceted characters grabbed my attention and wouldn’t let me go. I know it sounds cliche, but I quite literally couldn’t put it down. Rhys is easily a favorite hero of mine, and the well-paced developing romance between him and Lourdes had just the right hint of steam.
Recommended for fans of dangerous (yet awesome) heroes, headstrong heroines, and fantasy adventure with just a dash of heat.
4/5 Stars
Expected Release Date: April 17, 2012
Publisher: Samhain
Imprint: N/A
Author’s Website: http://haileyedwards.net/
My Source for This Book: Gift from the Author
Part of a Series: Yes, Book 1, Araneae Nation
Series Best Read In Order: N/A
Steam Level: Steamy
While I admit that I probably would’ve fared better had I had a map of the clans or perhaps a glossary with my copy, I absolutely adored this story. Had it not been for the multiple instances where poor Lourdes’ bosom was exposed to all and sundry, this would have been rated higher, but even with the abundance of that major pet peeve of mine, this was a very solid read.
The originality of the universe Ms. Edwards has created along with the multi-faceted characters grabbed my attention and wouldn’t let me go. I know it sounds cliche, but I quite literally couldn’t put it down. Rhys is easily a favorite hero of mine, and the well-paced developing romance between him and Lourdes had just the right hint of steam.
Recommended for fans of dangerous (yet awesome) heroes, headstrong heroines, and fantasy adventure with just a dash of heat.
4/5 Stars
January 24, 2013
Holy wow, Batman! There is so much world building goodness going on here that my head is spinning. In a good way. This is a world that's created from the ground up and it tickles my fancy in such a big way. SUCH A BIG WAY. Nests and spinning, venomous bites and horrible death, and sweet, sweet lovin' when the sun goes down. <3 <3 <3
My overwhelming love for tortured heroes is in full force here. Rhys has to deal with sly pokes from his family about something he has no control over. He keeps his secrets and he's hesitant to open up to Lourdes. Yet he's noble and protective and he does the things that need to be done to maintain peace between the clans. I LIKE the guy. A lot. He treats Lourdes well and ... I LIKE HIM.
I'm really taken by the world here and I highly recommend giving this book a whirl. It's dark and bloody, there's double crossing and bargains and hatred between the clans and IT'S SO GOOD.
-Kelly @ Reading the Paranormal
A Hint of Frost was a free Kindle book I downloaded on 01/15/13 for the Why Buy the Cow? reading challenge.
My overwhelming love for tortured heroes is in full force here. Rhys has to deal with sly pokes from his family about something he has no control over. He keeps his secrets and he's hesitant to open up to Lourdes. Yet he's noble and protective and he does the things that need to be done to maintain peace between the clans. I LIKE the guy. A lot. He treats Lourdes well and ... I LIKE HIM.
I'm really taken by the world here and I highly recommend giving this book a whirl. It's dark and bloody, there's double crossing and bargains and hatred between the clans and IT'S SO GOOD.
-Kelly @ Reading the Paranormal
A Hint of Frost was a free Kindle book I downloaded on 01/15/13 for the Why Buy the Cow? reading challenge.
April 26, 2012
Beautiful, sweet, exciting, fascinating.
I loved the unique world, characters, and its setting. They were all surprisingly easy to envision and become attached to.
This story was about a battle for survival between clans, with a sweet love story that is born from sacrifice, duty, and honor. I was rooting for Rhys and Lourdes ever since their first glimpses of each other in the midst of fierce conflict. However, nothing goes easy for these two, who are forced into a relationship and then expected to do as everyone wishes for the better of their clans. The way they bonded and fell in love on their own time was beautiful to witness and I was very happy with the outcome.
For a beautiful fantasy romance, I recommend this to anyone looking to escape for a bit. It was well worth the small price of only $3.85 at Samhain.
Now, I am SUPER excited there will be a sequel featuring Vaughn! You do not want to miss him!
I loved the unique world, characters, and its setting. They were all surprisingly easy to envision and become attached to.
This story was about a battle for survival between clans, with a sweet love story that is born from sacrifice, duty, and honor. I was rooting for Rhys and Lourdes ever since their first glimpses of each other in the midst of fierce conflict. However, nothing goes easy for these two, who are forced into a relationship and then expected to do as everyone wishes for the better of their clans. The way they bonded and fell in love on their own time was beautiful to witness and I was very happy with the outcome.
For a beautiful fantasy romance, I recommend this to anyone looking to escape for a bit. It was well worth the small price of only $3.85 at Samhain.
Now, I am SUPER excited there will be a sequel featuring Vaughn! You do not want to miss him!
May 3, 2012
Well....Hmmm...I liked this. I really did. And I can't wait to hear what some more of ya'll think of it... (K! It's FANTASY! Let me know when ya read it!)
I think maybe it was just a bit to MUCH fantasy for me...I've gotta have a bit more of the Urban thrown in there...pure fantasy usually kind of makes me feel...I don't know...dumb I guess.
Alpha Male...CHECK! (Rhys IS YUMMY SOUNDIN FOLKS!)
Confused-Sheltered-Her-Whole-Life-Female...CHECK! Although she did NOT annoy me. I liked her and felt for her and grieved for her and was thrilled for her as she stood up for herself from the start!
All in all I think this was a great book and I will try the next one that comes along.
The world is amazing and origional and Hailey Edwards has a beautiful way with words!
I can see myself falling in love with these characters!
Guess I'll just have to take my Smart Gals Fantasy Pill for book two. OR maybe get some more sleep.....yeah sleep sounds good.....
;)
I think maybe it was just a bit to MUCH fantasy for me...I've gotta have a bit more of the Urban thrown in there...pure fantasy usually kind of makes me feel...I don't know...dumb I guess.
Alpha Male...CHECK! (Rhys IS YUMMY SOUNDIN FOLKS!)
Confused-Sheltered-Her-Whole-Life-Female...CHECK! Although she did NOT annoy me. I liked her and felt for her and grieved for her and was thrilled for her as she stood up for herself from the start!
All in all I think this was a great book and I will try the next one that comes along.
The world is amazing and origional and Hailey Edwards has a beautiful way with words!
I can see myself falling in love with these characters!
Guess I'll just have to take my Smart Gals Fantasy Pill for book two. OR maybe get some more sleep.....yeah sleep sounds good.....
;)
May 5, 2019
To be honest, I didn't pay too much attention to what went on in this book. I was too busy trying to figure out how the Araneae work.
Like, is everyone the same species, and they're just different races?
Some of them eat human flesh. I thought that the cannibalism would make the book better, but it just confused things even more.
Is it uncomfortable to have a venom sac in your mouth? How do you get rid of unwanted venom? One of the characters had this insanely powerful venom, and he had to secretly dispose of it so nobody took his poison to use.
But how would one get rid of extra venom? Does he milk himself, or have someone else come in and milk him?
I suppose this review's gotten a bit out of hand, but these are the questions that keep me up at night.
Like, is everyone the same species, and they're just different races?
Some of them eat human flesh. I thought that the cannibalism would make the book better, but it just confused things even more.
Is it uncomfortable to have a venom sac in your mouth? How do you get rid of unwanted venom? One of the characters had this insanely powerful venom, and he had to secretly dispose of it so nobody took his poison to use.
But how would one get rid of extra venom? Does he milk himself, or have someone else come in and milk him?
I suppose this review's gotten a bit out of hand, but these are the questions that keep me up at night.
October 28, 2019
I really enjoyed this book. To be honest, I wasn't sure what to expect but very pleasantly surprised. Lourdes and Rhys are perfect together! Looking forward to reading more from this author and continuing this series.
*Edit*
Even better the second time around!!!
*Edit*
Even better the second time around!!!
June 28, 2015
What a pleasant surprise! Intriguing plot & characters woven throughout this world - at times it is intense with danger & betrayal everywhere and at times, it's smoking hot with chemistry sizzling between the H/h. What a unique blend of fantasy & romance. Loved it.
July 29, 2019
Pet peeve: virgin
Minuscule effort placed into world building
Minuscule effort placed into world building
June 10, 2012
Review Courtesy of Dark Faerie Tales
Quick & Dirty: A love story discovered within the binds of duty.
Opening Sentence: Fear kept my steps nimble.
The Review:
Don’t let the title fool you, A Hint of Frost may start out a little cold, but the characters heat it up fast. It has a nice balance of sexual tension without dipping into porno territory. The two main characters, Lourdes and Rhys, are thrust into a marriage based on alliance rather than love. Though they did not choose one another initially, the choice to remain together is their own. It is a lovely tale of two people finding love within circumstances out of their control.
When Lourdes discovers the murder of her parents, she finds herself thrust into the role of ruler during a coup. In order to help secure her people’s lives, she pledges herself to the youngest son of a neighboring clan in exchange for security. In addition, her partisan, or her betrothed, will seal the alliance by finding the persons responsible for the deaths of her parents. Mutiny and conspiracy abound within the walls of the Araneidae clan and Lourdes must do what she can to insure survival for herself, her family, and her people; even if that means aligning with a clan better known for their mercenary tactics and barbaric practices. Can she learn to make lemonade out of lemons? Or will she falter under the weight of responsibility and doom her clan to subjugation?
Lourdes is an intriguing character. The burdens thrust upon her would drown any normal person. Her fortitude and strength of will translate into putting aside things, thoughts, and emotions that cannot help her and concentrating on making the best of her situation. When she agrees to bind herself to a man she had never met, she does so with the full understanding that it will not necessarily grow into a loving relationship. As luck would have it, she gets Rhys.
Rhys is more than what he seems. He is considered a ruthless fighter among a clan that prizes such talents. When he first meets Lourdes, she can only make assumptions based on his cutthroat reputation. As time passes, he reveals more of himself to her, allowing her to glimpse a much different man than he presents to the outside world. Rhys is a very stereo-typical romance hero. He comes off as an alpha, but is really soft-hearted and misunderstood inside. Usually, this ideal puts me off, but with Rhys, he never falters in his attentions with Lourdes. Like a man, he shows a different side with the one he loves than he does with everyone else. In this book, it seems that it is Lourdes’s character that is the one jumping to conclusions about Rhys while he maintains a more open mind about her.
Lourdes and Rhys have a lot to learn about each other. I appreciate going through this journey along with them. I liked “watching” the two of them grow to respect one another. That leads to them appreciating one another’s qualities, which leads to affection. And finally, observing their reactions to discovering that love has blossomed between them. It is this journey that allows me to relate to them on a more emotional level. I found myself sighing when they finally realize that they love each other. Love found within political machinations is something that appeals to the romantic within me.
Though the love story is prevalent, there is another overall plot taking place. Not only are there those that would see the wealthy Araneidae clan fall, but those that would take advantage of the apparent weakness presented. How can Lourdes maneuver through these shark-infested waters when she is uncertain of former alliances? Can she even trust in Rhys’s clan to uphold their end of the bargain to keep her people safe while she looking for her lost sister?
A Hint of Frost combines the passion of romance with the power of paranormal in a new and wondrous world. It is packed full of new political and supernatural flavors that will keep a reader coming back for more. Though I would have liked a flow chart to refer to each of the clans and their specialties, the story does not become needlessly complicated without it. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment of this new and exciting series. Hailey Edwards is definitely someone that I will be watching from here on out.
Notable Scene:
Closing the distance between us, he stalked me with deliberation. “No more gowns.”
I was breathless. “I can’t make you any promises. I must dress to fit my new station.”
“I agree.” His fangs hadn’t receded. “As my wife, you should wear pants or gowns spun from a fabric my sword has some hope of slaying. Your silk is beautiful, but it…frustrates me.”
“I don’t know,” I teased him. “I think a little frustration looks good on a male.”
“I can tell.” Humor laced his tone as his voice lowered. “I like the look of you now.”
“I’m almost naked.” I cast a suggestive glance his way, then let my gaze slide toward the bed. “Perhaps I should find some cover?”
He caught my look and measured the distance from the bed to me. “Is that an invitation?”
“If it is?” My smile turned wicked as I canted my head. “Are you inclined to accept?”
The Araneae Nation Series:
1. A Hint of Frost
2. A Feast of Souls
FTC Advisory: The author provided me with a copy of A Hint of Frost. No goody bags, sponsorships, “material connections,” or bribes were exchanged for my review. The only payment received came in the form of hugs and kisses from my little boys.
Quick & Dirty: A love story discovered within the binds of duty.
Opening Sentence: Fear kept my steps nimble.
The Review:
Don’t let the title fool you, A Hint of Frost may start out a little cold, but the characters heat it up fast. It has a nice balance of sexual tension without dipping into porno territory. The two main characters, Lourdes and Rhys, are thrust into a marriage based on alliance rather than love. Though they did not choose one another initially, the choice to remain together is their own. It is a lovely tale of two people finding love within circumstances out of their control.
When Lourdes discovers the murder of her parents, she finds herself thrust into the role of ruler during a coup. In order to help secure her people’s lives, she pledges herself to the youngest son of a neighboring clan in exchange for security. In addition, her partisan, or her betrothed, will seal the alliance by finding the persons responsible for the deaths of her parents. Mutiny and conspiracy abound within the walls of the Araneidae clan and Lourdes must do what she can to insure survival for herself, her family, and her people; even if that means aligning with a clan better known for their mercenary tactics and barbaric practices. Can she learn to make lemonade out of lemons? Or will she falter under the weight of responsibility and doom her clan to subjugation?
Lourdes is an intriguing character. The burdens thrust upon her would drown any normal person. Her fortitude and strength of will translate into putting aside things, thoughts, and emotions that cannot help her and concentrating on making the best of her situation. When she agrees to bind herself to a man she had never met, she does so with the full understanding that it will not necessarily grow into a loving relationship. As luck would have it, she gets Rhys.
Rhys is more than what he seems. He is considered a ruthless fighter among a clan that prizes such talents. When he first meets Lourdes, she can only make assumptions based on his cutthroat reputation. As time passes, he reveals more of himself to her, allowing her to glimpse a much different man than he presents to the outside world. Rhys is a very stereo-typical romance hero. He comes off as an alpha, but is really soft-hearted and misunderstood inside. Usually, this ideal puts me off, but with Rhys, he never falters in his attentions with Lourdes. Like a man, he shows a different side with the one he loves than he does with everyone else. In this book, it seems that it is Lourdes’s character that is the one jumping to conclusions about Rhys while he maintains a more open mind about her.
Lourdes and Rhys have a lot to learn about each other. I appreciate going through this journey along with them. I liked “watching” the two of them grow to respect one another. That leads to them appreciating one another’s qualities, which leads to affection. And finally, observing their reactions to discovering that love has blossomed between them. It is this journey that allows me to relate to them on a more emotional level. I found myself sighing when they finally realize that they love each other. Love found within political machinations is something that appeals to the romantic within me.
Though the love story is prevalent, there is another overall plot taking place. Not only are there those that would see the wealthy Araneidae clan fall, but those that would take advantage of the apparent weakness presented. How can Lourdes maneuver through these shark-infested waters when she is uncertain of former alliances? Can she even trust in Rhys’s clan to uphold their end of the bargain to keep her people safe while she looking for her lost sister?
A Hint of Frost combines the passion of romance with the power of paranormal in a new and wondrous world. It is packed full of new political and supernatural flavors that will keep a reader coming back for more. Though I would have liked a flow chart to refer to each of the clans and their specialties, the story does not become needlessly complicated without it. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment of this new and exciting series. Hailey Edwards is definitely someone that I will be watching from here on out.
Notable Scene:
Closing the distance between us, he stalked me with deliberation. “No more gowns.”
I was breathless. “I can’t make you any promises. I must dress to fit my new station.”
“I agree.” His fangs hadn’t receded. “As my wife, you should wear pants or gowns spun from a fabric my sword has some hope of slaying. Your silk is beautiful, but it…frustrates me.”
“I don’t know,” I teased him. “I think a little frustration looks good on a male.”
“I can tell.” Humor laced his tone as his voice lowered. “I like the look of you now.”
“I’m almost naked.” I cast a suggestive glance his way, then let my gaze slide toward the bed. “Perhaps I should find some cover?”
He caught my look and measured the distance from the bed to me. “Is that an invitation?”
“If it is?” My smile turned wicked as I canted my head. “Are you inclined to accept?”
The Araneae Nation Series:
1. A Hint of Frost
2. A Feast of Souls
FTC Advisory: The author provided me with a copy of A Hint of Frost. No goody bags, sponsorships, “material connections,” or bribes were exchanged for my review. The only payment received came in the form of hugs and kisses from my little boys.
April 22, 2012
Title: A Hint of Frost
Author: Hailey Edwards
Genre: Fantasy
Publisher: Samhain Publishing (April 17, 2012)
Available: $3.85 at Samhain Publishing
Rating: 4 stars
Rater: Lesleigh
For a novel with such a chill throughout, the author’s lush writing provides an especially warm and welcome counterpoint. I found myself lulled by her rhythmic use of sentences, some long and textured and other short and sparse. Readers who enjoy minimalist writing with few descriptors would do better looking elsewhere for a fantasy fix; Edwards is a devout sensualist.
Like any good romance writer, Edwards puts the romance front and center and spins everything in the world around its primacy. That said, her story is smart and realistic, introducing characters and situations that she clearly intends to develop further over the course of several books. In this one, Lourdes, the main character, finds her parents poisoned and herself thrust into the role of leading her people during a time of war. Her first act as “maven”? Marrying herself to a clan that will protect hers.
The novel moves forward and derives its narrative tension from the defection/abduction of Lourdes’ sister, Pascale, and Lourdes’ determination to bring her home safely. She and her new consort embark on a journey to distant lands, all the while learning more about one another, a plague spreading across the lands, and the scope of their feelings for one another.
Even without the world-building Edwards does in this book, the story and characters are compelling; it’s comfortingly familiar, as romance novels should be, while introducing enough twists to keep the readers intrigued. Edwards’ strength, however, lies in her world-building. Edwards’ Araneae Nation features several clans, each of which specializes, not only occupationally but physiologically, in producing certain goods or services. The clans are separate but interdependent, each important but hierarchically situated. For examples, Lourdes’ clan, the Araneidae, weave silks and make clothing, while Rhys, her “partisan,” belongs to the cannibalistic warrior clan known as the Mimetidae. This interdependent clan arrangement might fall into a Hunger Games-esque patterns were it not for the very real physiological and cultural differences characterizing clan members. For example, depending on their clan heritage, characters in Edwards’ world may spin silk from their very own bodies or use their bites to inject venom into their prey. Edwards notes in her acknowledgements she researched various Native American tribes for inspiration, and it is most apparent in her choices of names, skills, and relationships among her clansfolk. As a sociologist, I found myself intrigued and impressed by the various traditions (thread-binding, for example) that Edwards constructed as growing organically from the structure of clan relationships.
My concerns with the book are somewhat small since overall, I found myself quite delighted. Edwards’ prose is effusive and her characters bold and vibrant. I was somewhat disappointed when she lapsed into the occasional modern American idioms and clichés. Of course, English is likely her first language, as it is mine, but clichés, colloquialisms, and idioms are verbal shortcuts and should be avoided in most literature; in fantasy realms, they become even more awkwardly visible. Words like “potshots,” “look a gift animal in the mouth,” and so on pulled me from the richness of the words and the story they built. They’re small concerns overall, but I found myself annoyed several times to have my attention yanked from the lushness of her prose.
My rating: Four out of five stars. This is a smartly written novel in the best tradition of romances that also includes enough fantasy staples and uniqueness to keep just about any reader spellbound.
from Critique de Book: web site http://critiquedebook.blogspot.com/20...
Author: Hailey Edwards
Genre: Fantasy
Publisher: Samhain Publishing (April 17, 2012)
Available: $3.85 at Samhain Publishing
Rating: 4 stars
Rater: Lesleigh
For a novel with such a chill throughout, the author’s lush writing provides an especially warm and welcome counterpoint. I found myself lulled by her rhythmic use of sentences, some long and textured and other short and sparse. Readers who enjoy minimalist writing with few descriptors would do better looking elsewhere for a fantasy fix; Edwards is a devout sensualist.
Like any good romance writer, Edwards puts the romance front and center and spins everything in the world around its primacy. That said, her story is smart and realistic, introducing characters and situations that she clearly intends to develop further over the course of several books. In this one, Lourdes, the main character, finds her parents poisoned and herself thrust into the role of leading her people during a time of war. Her first act as “maven”? Marrying herself to a clan that will protect hers.
The novel moves forward and derives its narrative tension from the defection/abduction of Lourdes’ sister, Pascale, and Lourdes’ determination to bring her home safely. She and her new consort embark on a journey to distant lands, all the while learning more about one another, a plague spreading across the lands, and the scope of their feelings for one another.
Even without the world-building Edwards does in this book, the story and characters are compelling; it’s comfortingly familiar, as romance novels should be, while introducing enough twists to keep the readers intrigued. Edwards’ strength, however, lies in her world-building. Edwards’ Araneae Nation features several clans, each of which specializes, not only occupationally but physiologically, in producing certain goods or services. The clans are separate but interdependent, each important but hierarchically situated. For examples, Lourdes’ clan, the Araneidae, weave silks and make clothing, while Rhys, her “partisan,” belongs to the cannibalistic warrior clan known as the Mimetidae. This interdependent clan arrangement might fall into a Hunger Games-esque patterns were it not for the very real physiological and cultural differences characterizing clan members. For example, depending on their clan heritage, characters in Edwards’ world may spin silk from their very own bodies or use their bites to inject venom into their prey. Edwards notes in her acknowledgements she researched various Native American tribes for inspiration, and it is most apparent in her choices of names, skills, and relationships among her clansfolk. As a sociologist, I found myself intrigued and impressed by the various traditions (thread-binding, for example) that Edwards constructed as growing organically from the structure of clan relationships.
My concerns with the book are somewhat small since overall, I found myself quite delighted. Edwards’ prose is effusive and her characters bold and vibrant. I was somewhat disappointed when she lapsed into the occasional modern American idioms and clichés. Of course, English is likely her first language, as it is mine, but clichés, colloquialisms, and idioms are verbal shortcuts and should be avoided in most literature; in fantasy realms, they become even more awkwardly visible. Words like “potshots,” “look a gift animal in the mouth,” and so on pulled me from the richness of the words and the story they built. They’re small concerns overall, but I found myself annoyed several times to have my attention yanked from the lushness of her prose.
My rating: Four out of five stars. This is a smartly written novel in the best tradition of romances that also includes enough fantasy staples and uniqueness to keep just about any reader spellbound.
from Critique de Book: web site http://critiquedebook.blogspot.com/20...
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