I remember this being a much better book in my twenties. It is still an interesting story set in a fascinating world, and that is what keeps me reading.
There are a few things in this book that made it less likeable for me. Essentially a lot of the same jarring points from the first book, except multiplied.
The cons:
- I really, really hate the possessiveness and jealousies of the male characters in this book. I’ve never liked Sebastian, even in his own book, but he is utterly unbearable in this book. Why or how he even thinks it’s his right to be so overprotective and possessive of his cousin, Glorianna, is ridiculous, and frankly, disturbing. It’s none of his business who Glorianna decides to take on as a significant other. She’s in thirties for Christ’s sake! She’s older than him! The way he treated Michael was awful. And the way Michael treated him was just as appalling. Michael himself wasn’t exempt from judgey possessiveness with Glorianna and his sister Caitlyn. Hell, even Lee, the most likeable of the three main males jumped in on the possessiveness. It was horribly off putting to read the entitlement the males felt they had over the females in this book.
- The weird family ‘sex conversations’. For a book that has no sex, this book sure brings it up a frigging lot in dialogue with family members. Awkwardly and inappropriately. The way Glorianna’s sex life is speculated between her cousin, her brother, her mother, her cousin’s wife, and her lover is uncomfortable. Why the hell are Michael and Lee discussing Michael wanting sex from Glorianna!? Why would anyone have these conversations?
- The lack of sex. This was an issue with the first book for me. Why does the author spend so much time focusing on sex if they aren’t actually going to write the big moment and just fade to black!? It’s fine if you don’t want to write a sex scene in your book, but seriously, if you aren’t going to write a sex scene, don’t focus so much time building up to one to then fade to black and elude to the act. Honestly, this series would have been better to have not brought sex up at all, and instead focused on building actual relationships.
- the relationship between Michael and Glorianna was lacklustre. These two are destined, fated to be together and the author spends more time with Michael and Glorianna separately discussing/defending their relationship with her family than they do actually having one. I really wish more time had been spent developing their actual relationship instead of ‘just being together because fate’. Their relationship was such a huge part to the plot of this book, that it was disappointing how we as the readers had to assume this truth, rather than get to read it.
The pros
- the world building is astounding in this series. Just the nature of the world and its history is fascinating to read.
- the plot. Despite the author’s flaws in writing characters and what she chose to focus on, the overall plot is a good one. It was interesting and exactly what I look for in a fantasy series.
Overall, it’s an okay book. I’m disappointed that it’s not as good as I remember it being, and I wish the author had spent less time focusing on sex that never happens on the page, and used that time to actually build a real relationship between Michael and Glorianna.