Alix is back from a three week holiday in Rhodes, and anxious to get back to work for her aunt, the famous actress Bianca Layton. Bianca bought Alix the holiday because Bianca wanted to seduce Alix’s almost-boyfriend without Alix hanging around looking all disappointed and judgemental.
Alix is sort of ok about it, in the way that you’re sort of ok when you get a virus and it’s really horrible, but at least it didn’t turn into pneumonia. She wasn’t in love with almost-boyfriend Paul, but she knows she could have been, and it probably wouldn’t have made any difference to Bianca.
Bianca is beautiful and selfish and entitled, and another one of those other women that are a million years older than the heroine. Alix will suffer pangs of jealousy over the hero preferring Bianca. Actually, she’ll assume that the hero is doing every woman he looks at, because she’s crazy jealous.
I wonder, before I was a million years older than the heroine, did I really think she deserved to win simply because she was young, downtrodden but shyly sarcastic, and unconsciously beautiful?
Now I’m a bit more critical and prefer it when the heroine bitterly competes against horrible women her own age. Here’s Bianca: incredibly successful in her career and probably about 40? She puts an incredible amount of work into her appearance, which Alix is incredibly sniffy about. I found myself uncharitably hoping that Alix would age badly, since she wasn’t taking time to moisturise or use sunscreen or sleep or eat properly. Unfortunately, the glow of true love will make her beautiful forever.
The hero, Liam Brant, turns up to write Bianca’s biography and dig out all her secrets. Bianca’s had four failed marriages and is incredibly rich and successful. It’s clear she hasn’t got there without making some choices that generally earn women the label of bitch. Her life is an open book …
Liam has written other critically acclaimed star bio’s. He gets off on pointing out how fatuous famous people are. Alix, even with her troubled and resentful relationship with her aunt, doesn’t really want to see her receive the same treatment.
A couple of weeks ago I saw the Amy Schumer skit where she comes across Tina Fey, Patricia Arquette and Julia Louis-Dreyfus celebrating Julia Louis-Dreyfus’s last bangable day, and marvelling that she’d managed to make it to 50 as a sex object. The whole backstory with Bianca is about the same thing – it’s now time for Bianca to retire gracefully into supporting roles.
I found all of this very distracting. Sara Craven has a lot of characters point out that this is the way the world works, but it meant that Alix’s romance, and resolving the conflict with her family over her choice to work for her family couldn’t really compete. There was a lot of conflict: Alix suddenly found that, for inexplicable reasons, her sister and to a lesser extent her mother, were shutting her out of the family. Alix makes an attempt at one stage to quit her job: partly because she’s fallen in love with Liam at first sight and doesn’t want to watch Bianca steal him, but mostly because she wanted to reconnect with her family.
Instead, Bianca drags her off to Italy in that final pursuit of starring role.
It turns out Liam’s a friend of the Italian director who wants to discuss the role in his movie with Bianca, so he’s there when Bianca and Alix arrive.
I couldn’t get past how useless and mean Liam’s job was. He didn’t make a great impression on me.
The ‘unguarded moment’ from the title comes when Alix and Liam are having an impromptu cuddle beside the director’s pool. ‘Love me,’ Alix murmurs, staring deeply into Liam’s chest. ‘Pull yourself together, kid,’ he (sort of) says. ‘We’re about to have company.’
This is not that great an unguarded moment. My favourite so far comes from a Michelle Reid book, where the heroine licks the hero’s neck while they’re dancing. It happens at the dance after the wedding rehearsal dinner for the hero’s upcoming nuptials to the heroine’s best friend. Fortunately, the hero had managed to dance the heroine out onto the terrace so he could be licked in semi-privacy, but it all goes terribly, wonderfully wrong from there.
Alix and Liam’s romance is troubled by Alix’s jealousy and Liam’s inability to say anything nice to her. Given I didn’t think much of either of them, I didn’t much care. They have a few passionate moments, but I think this book needed less of a distracting backstory.