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Histories of Purga #1
Dragon
I read Dragon and liked it - Piers Anthony, bestselling author of the Xanth novels.
Rooks have embraced science and technology, inventing microscopic robots called nanos to create any machine they need. The Terraquois are their opposite. They embraced the spiritual and developed a deep bond with nature. This bond allows them to shift into the animal that resembles their true inner selves.
These two races have fought each other with brutal savagery for centuries, but a new threat called the Blak Army has emerged and its evil is matched only by its ruthlessness. With insidious, ancient power at the fingertips of their mad leader, Wilhelm Coran, their victory is nearly assured. The only threat to his plans are a Terraquois girl named Keiara and the Rook Prince, Rone Varlamagne. When Rone crashes near enemy lands after he is shot out of the sky, Keiara is the one that stumbles upon him. Instead of leaving him to die, she saves his life. It is one conscious choice but it sets in motion a chain of events bigger than either of them could imagine.
Together, the two face foes from every direction and they will stop at nothing to protect each other.
Rooks have embraced science and technology, inventing microscopic robots called nanos to create any machine they need. The Terraquois are their opposite. They embraced the spiritual and developed a deep bond with nature. This bond allows them to shift into the animal that resembles their true inner selves.
These two races have fought each other with brutal savagery for centuries, but a new threat called the Blak Army has emerged and its evil is matched only by its ruthlessness. With insidious, ancient power at the fingertips of their mad leader, Wilhelm Coran, their victory is nearly assured. The only threat to his plans are a Terraquois girl named Keiara and the Rook Prince, Rone Varlamagne. When Rone crashes near enemy lands after he is shot out of the sky, Keiara is the one that stumbles upon him. Instead of leaving him to die, she saves his life. It is one conscious choice but it sets in motion a chain of events bigger than either of them could imagine.
Together, the two face foes from every direction and they will stop at nothing to protect each other.
194 pages, Kindle Edition
First published November 1, 2012
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Rustin Petrae
23 books31 followersRustin Petrae is the author of the Histories of Purga Novels, the Bane Pack Novels, Hybrid Earth, and Forfeit. He is also a graphic designer and recent BFA graduate from The Ohio State University. Currently, he lives in Ohio but was actually born in San Antonio, TX. However, he spent most of his childhood and early adulthood overseas in Japan and Korea. The experiences gained from living in Japan (Misawa Air Force Base) and Korea (Yongsan Army Base and Osan Air Force Base) helped shape his writing. Living among other cultures did a lot to expand his worldview. He started writing very early on but was interested in becoming an author even back in elementary school. In fact, when asked what he wanted to be when he grew up as part of a school project, he said he wanted to be either a cartoonist or an author. While he still draws here and there, he spends most of his time working to hone both his writing and graphic design skills. He's written several stories, flash fictions, a few novellas, and five novels. He also creates his own cover art and promotional materials.
To get up to date news on Rustin's projects, freebies, and more, check out his official website at: rustinpetrae.com.
To get up to date news on Rustin's projects, freebies, and more, check out his official website at: rustinpetrae.com.
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January 28, 2013
I received this book for free in exchange for an honest review (but it was also free for a promotion at the same time).
With Dragon, I was hooked from the beginning. The story covers two distinct societies: a technologically advanced one, and one with advanced natural powers. The two main characters (Rone and Keiara) were very likable and well developed. The action was well-paced and the world was very well detailed. I could easily imagine the peoples in my mind and how their world worked. The uses of the nano-technology were varied and interesting, while on the other hand, all the natural powers possessed by the Terraquois were just as varied. While the main antagonist is quite evil, there was enough back-story and nuance to make him very interesting. Both main characters are essential to the story, but I felt that Rone was pretty transparent whereas Keiara was full of mystery. They are a nice combination together and Keiara will obviously be central to the second book.
I do my best to write balanced reviews, but I just can't think of anything negative to say about this one. It is one of the few books I have read recently that I couldn't put down and it is very skillfully written. It reminds me a lot of another one of my favorites...Graceling. You have the romance, the self-discovery of the heroine's powers, the rich fantasy world, and ultimately the fight against the evil tyrant. This is one of my favorites now and I can't wait to read the next book in the series.
See my reviews at http://www.michaelscifan.us
With Dragon, I was hooked from the beginning. The story covers two distinct societies: a technologically advanced one, and one with advanced natural powers. The two main characters (Rone and Keiara) were very likable and well developed. The action was well-paced and the world was very well detailed. I could easily imagine the peoples in my mind and how their world worked. The uses of the nano-technology were varied and interesting, while on the other hand, all the natural powers possessed by the Terraquois were just as varied. While the main antagonist is quite evil, there was enough back-story and nuance to make him very interesting. Both main characters are essential to the story, but I felt that Rone was pretty transparent whereas Keiara was full of mystery. They are a nice combination together and Keiara will obviously be central to the second book.
I do my best to write balanced reviews, but I just can't think of anything negative to say about this one. It is one of the few books I have read recently that I couldn't put down and it is very skillfully written. It reminds me a lot of another one of my favorites...Graceling. You have the romance, the self-discovery of the heroine's powers, the rich fantasy world, and ultimately the fight against the evil tyrant. This is one of my favorites now and I can't wait to read the next book in the series.
See my reviews at http://www.michaelscifan.us
February 6, 2013
Dragon is a strong debut novel from Rustin Petrae. The author is ultra-creative and has a huge imagination, which really came through in the details of the world he's created. The story has everything from nano-creations to Avatars to shapeshifters, all surrounding an ongoing power struggle that threatens to tear two very different civilizations apart. The villains are ultra-evil, the good guys are true heroes, and there are no weak characters in this book.
In a lot of ways, it was similar to Avatar, the movie, and if you liked that, there's a good chance you'll like this book.
My main reason for taking two stars off were some issues I had with the third person omniscient point of view, many readers may not even notice the things I found to be somewhat distracting.
Overall, an excellent start to a creative sci-fi fantasy series!
In a lot of ways, it was similar to Avatar, the movie, and if you liked that, there's a good chance you'll like this book.
My main reason for taking two stars off were some issues I had with the third person omniscient point of view, many readers may not even notice the things I found to be somewhat distracting.
Overall, an excellent start to a creative sci-fi fantasy series!
January 31, 2013
This book is a creative mix of fantasy and science fiction (that isn't likely all too futuristic, though it may seem that way when reading, yet the building blocks are already well established). Be prepared, for this book is filled with fascinating characters, a creatively designed world, and plot twists that easily challenge a corkscrew. Once you begin reading you won't want to stop until you've finished the book, and then all you'll do us want to grab Book Two, which sadly isn't due out until July, 2013.
The story gets off to a bit of a slow start, and it is a bit difficult to feel lots of empathy for the main male character, but all that changes as the story progresses. The characters develop depth as the story finds its stride, with the plot serving as an excellent vehicle to create this world that seems familiar and foreign at the same time.
As the description states, Rone is the wounded Prince, and Keiara saves his life, yet they are mortal enemies. But the truth is, it is their people that are mortal enemies. They are just two young people attracted to each other. With the persistence of youth in the first blush of a possible romance she convinces her people to allow him to stay for a time and learn about their culture. Then, once educated about the real Terraquios, Rone can return to his people, the Rook, share his newly discovered truth about the Terraquois, helping dispel all of the ridiculously manufactured fairy tale stories of what heinous monsters they are supposed to be.
Slowly many Terras come to see the truth of Prince Rone's desire for peace between the two peoples - and his shame for the way his people always attacked the Terraquios, without any provocation to justify such attacks. Just as things are starting to look up for the pair Rone acts on his feelings for Keiara. Confused and flustered by her own emotions, Keiara runs away to another tribe without a word. Before she can return and explain her behavior to Rone the world is plunged into chaos.
Rone's father, the King, is overthrown by a villain and the capital city is attacked by evil forces. Once Rone learns of this, by running into a family of refugees that he knows from home, he promptly returns home, determined to fix things. Skirmishes and battles ensue across the planet. Keiara is taken prisoner by one of the antagonists and taken to the capital of Rone's 'former' kingdom.
From here on the action just keeps going without a pause - action on emotional, physical, and mystical levels. To avoid any spoilers I'll just say that families and friends are torn apart, while there are reunions for others. Secrets of all sizes are revealed. There is far, far more to this tale than I have shared here, and having to wait until July to learn what happens next is going to be sheer torture!
The story gets off to a bit of a slow start, and it is a bit difficult to feel lots of empathy for the main male character, but all that changes as the story progresses. The characters develop depth as the story finds its stride, with the plot serving as an excellent vehicle to create this world that seems familiar and foreign at the same time.
As the description states, Rone is the wounded Prince, and Keiara saves his life, yet they are mortal enemies. But the truth is, it is their people that are mortal enemies. They are just two young people attracted to each other. With the persistence of youth in the first blush of a possible romance she convinces her people to allow him to stay for a time and learn about their culture. Then, once educated about the real Terraquios, Rone can return to his people, the Rook, share his newly discovered truth about the Terraquois, helping dispel all of the ridiculously manufactured fairy tale stories of what heinous monsters they are supposed to be.
Slowly many Terras come to see the truth of Prince Rone's desire for peace between the two peoples - and his shame for the way his people always attacked the Terraquios, without any provocation to justify such attacks. Just as things are starting to look up for the pair Rone acts on his feelings for Keiara. Confused and flustered by her own emotions, Keiara runs away to another tribe without a word. Before she can return and explain her behavior to Rone the world is plunged into chaos.
Rone's father, the King, is overthrown by a villain and the capital city is attacked by evil forces. Once Rone learns of this, by running into a family of refugees that he knows from home, he promptly returns home, determined to fix things. Skirmishes and battles ensue across the planet. Keiara is taken prisoner by one of the antagonists and taken to the capital of Rone's 'former' kingdom.
From here on the action just keeps going without a pause - action on emotional, physical, and mystical levels. To avoid any spoilers I'll just say that families and friends are torn apart, while there are reunions for others. Secrets of all sizes are revealed. There is far, far more to this tale than I have shared here, and having to wait until July to learn what happens next is going to be sheer torture!
December 30, 2012
I simply could not put this down. Book One: Dragon by Rustin Petrae is an outstanding story in which fantasy and science fiction are seemlessly melded together in a believable world.
The story begins with Prince Rone, the bored heir to the throne of the Kingdom of Roanoke, a technologically advanced civilization whose citizens make use of personal nanobots and blueprint programs to build a nearly limitless variety of machines for themselves.
Feeling trapped by the duties and responsibilities that are his birthright, The Prince yearns for freedom, but settles for minor acts of rebellion instead . Getting a rare ok from his father to go on a solo flight (using a flightpack he designed for his nanobots), the Prince jumps at the opportunity, only to be shot down by a missile after an hours long chase that takes him to the far edge of the desert adjacent to his kingdom.
Meanwhile, Keiara and her little brother, Asher, are setting out to collect some herbs for a local healer in the distant Terraquois held lands. Unlike the people in the Kingdom of Roanoke, the Terraquois live a simple life, so close to nature that most of them are able to take on the form of the animal with which their souls resonate. Their homes are, for the most part, high in the bows of massive trees, which are linked together with suspended bridges.
Keiara, like Prince Rone, is unhappy with her lot in life and desires nothing more than to explore the entirety of Purga, including the land of the Rooks (the Terraquois name for the people living in the Kingdom of Roanoke). In the desert, she and her brother find Rone unconscious and critically injured and she decides to save him, though others of her race would have either finished him off or simply left him to die instead.
From there the story takes off in a whirlwind of action, social angst, love and magic. Every element of this story works: the dynamic characters, the fantastic world of Purga, the long standing fear and hate between the Rooks and the Terraquois, the technology, and the magic.
This is one of those stories that makes you want to read everything the author has written, and more than once. I can honestly say I cannot wait to read the next one.
The story begins with Prince Rone, the bored heir to the throne of the Kingdom of Roanoke, a technologically advanced civilization whose citizens make use of personal nanobots and blueprint programs to build a nearly limitless variety of machines for themselves.
Feeling trapped by the duties and responsibilities that are his birthright, The Prince yearns for freedom, but settles for minor acts of rebellion instead . Getting a rare ok from his father to go on a solo flight (using a flightpack he designed for his nanobots), the Prince jumps at the opportunity, only to be shot down by a missile after an hours long chase that takes him to the far edge of the desert adjacent to his kingdom.
Meanwhile, Keiara and her little brother, Asher, are setting out to collect some herbs for a local healer in the distant Terraquois held lands. Unlike the people in the Kingdom of Roanoke, the Terraquois live a simple life, so close to nature that most of them are able to take on the form of the animal with which their souls resonate. Their homes are, for the most part, high in the bows of massive trees, which are linked together with suspended bridges.
Keiara, like Prince Rone, is unhappy with her lot in life and desires nothing more than to explore the entirety of Purga, including the land of the Rooks (the Terraquois name for the people living in the Kingdom of Roanoke). In the desert, she and her brother find Rone unconscious and critically injured and she decides to save him, though others of her race would have either finished him off or simply left him to die instead.
From there the story takes off in a whirlwind of action, social angst, love and magic. Every element of this story works: the dynamic characters, the fantastic world of Purga, the long standing fear and hate between the Rooks and the Terraquois, the technology, and the magic.
This is one of those stories that makes you want to read everything the author has written, and more than once. I can honestly say I cannot wait to read the next one.
December 6, 2014
Thank you to the author, Rustin Petrae, for gifting me with a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review!
I don't think I've ever read a book quite like this one. It's like a combination of everything I imagine in my head (science fiction stuff). I don't really know how to structure this review so lets just jump right in!
I really loved the setting and just generally the world. It was really different but also was described in a way that I could picture everything and I always knew what was going on. The nanos as well were a very nice addition. They blended well with the story and I've never seen that concept used before so that was cool.
I also loved the whole message of acceptance. There are these two groups at war and two people try to bridge the gap. Some other crazy stuff happens along the way and it definitely isn't smooth sailing but it's such a great message! Sort of going along with that, I loved Keiara's character! She's so strong and able to do whatever needs to be done. Rone's POV was also very interesting to read.
I would have liked a bit more background about the Rook's and the Terraquois past relationship. At some points, it felt like this was the second book in the series (like there's a prequel that I'm missing). So characters were introduced like we had already met them and their relationship to everyone else was just explained with parentheses and certain plot points from a seemingly non-existent but still existent history were referenced. Maybe a prequel is in order?
The Final Verdict:
A very interesting read with a wonderful message and strong MC's. A little more background information would be helpful though!
4 stars
Quotes:
WHAT IS THIS MADNESS?? This is like the third book in a row that I didn't take notes on the quotes!! What has the world come to?? I'll get this updated ASAP!
I don't think I've ever read a book quite like this one. It's like a combination of everything I imagine in my head (science fiction stuff). I don't really know how to structure this review so lets just jump right in!
I really loved the setting and just generally the world. It was really different but also was described in a way that I could picture everything and I always knew what was going on. The nanos as well were a very nice addition. They blended well with the story and I've never seen that concept used before so that was cool.
I also loved the whole message of acceptance. There are these two groups at war and two people try to bridge the gap. Some other crazy stuff happens along the way and it definitely isn't smooth sailing but it's such a great message! Sort of going along with that, I loved Keiara's character! She's so strong and able to do whatever needs to be done. Rone's POV was also very interesting to read.
I would have liked a bit more background about the Rook's and the Terraquois past relationship. At some points, it felt like this was the second book in the series (like there's a prequel that I'm missing). So characters were introduced like we had already met them and their relationship to everyone else was just explained with parentheses and certain plot points from a seemingly non-existent but still existent history were referenced. Maybe a prequel is in order?
The Final Verdict:
A very interesting read with a wonderful message and strong MC's. A little more background information would be helpful though!
4 stars
Quotes:
WHAT IS THIS MADNESS?? This is like the third book in a row that I didn't take notes on the quotes!! What has the world come to?? I'll get this updated ASAP!
January 13, 2013
Really good book. I had a hard time putting it down. I enjoyed the way you brought the two different worlds together. The Terraqouis people being connected to nature, and the Rooks being connected to technology. The way this author has brought these two worlds together was seemless.
One thing that I would like to have seen sooner in the book is the powers of Keiara develope a little sooner in the story. Granted the way the book ended with her fully developed powers makes you want to read the second book just to see what is going to happen. I know I can't wait to read the second book. Can't wait to see what happens to Roanoke with the Terraqouis Army coming in full strenght after the Rooks, and what happens with Rone and Ahser going after Keiara.
Great book and I can't wait to read the next edition.
One thing that I would like to have seen sooner in the book is the powers of Keiara develope a little sooner in the story. Granted the way the book ended with her fully developed powers makes you want to read the second book just to see what is going to happen. I know I can't wait to read the second book. Can't wait to see what happens to Roanoke with the Terraqouis Army coming in full strenght after the Rooks, and what happens with Rone and Ahser going after Keiara.
Great book and I can't wait to read the next edition.
January 26, 2013
Oh my god, I hate you!!!!!!!!! Argh! Why do you have to make me wait so long for the next book?!?!?!?! I'M DYING HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
April 24, 2013
I got a copy for review in exchange for an honest review.
I really enjoyed reading this book, although I did have some issues with it. Mainly it is a very enjoyable story with a nice idea, but some of it could’ve been done better.
The story is really interesting and enjoyable. I liked the idea of having two groups of people live next to each other that are so different and are always in war. Although contrary to what the blurb suggest this book is not much about war. The blurb made me expect a very different book, with more epic battles and undying love and such, but both the love story and the battles take less time of the story than I expected.
This book is told from multiple point of views and I liked getting to know more than one character. Again from the blurb you may gather that the story is told from both characters perspectives, but we actually get to see more than their point of views. I did thought the perspective was done a bit strange, because sometime when reading from a certain point of view some comments were thrown in about another characters thought or about something the character didn’t know, It was just a bit strange and I would’ve preferred to only know things from the person who’s pov it was.
The characters were really likeable characters and because we get to see multiple point of view, you get a better idea of who everyone is. While I liked the characters I would’ve liked feeling more of their emotions. Their emotions were described, but I couldn’t really feel them.
There were some parts of the story that were a bit predictable and a few parts that didn’t make much sense to me. Also some characters made decisions a bit too fast and didn’t really seem to think about things. Some things were a bit too easy. And at the end there are still many loose ends, but I guess the reason for that is to make readers curious for the next book. Still I would’ve preferred for the ending to be a bit different, because now the ending was a bit sudden and left many loose ends.
I really liked the world and there certainly was attention for world building, many small things are explained and we do get a sense of how things work in this world. Although I still think there are some huge gaps, like why the two species are in war with each other and why they developed so differently, but also some small things like why a certain injury could be healed and others not. I just had the feeling there was more to the world and what we got to see was interesting that I wanted to know more.
To conclude: an interesting and enjoyable story. It is told from multiple point of views, but sometimes there were a few sentences from another pov thrown in the middle of a paragraph. I really liked the characters, but I didn’t really feel their emotions. I also would’ve preferred to get more world building, but I liked what we learned about the world.
I really enjoyed reading this book, although I did have some issues with it. Mainly it is a very enjoyable story with a nice idea, but some of it could’ve been done better.
The story is really interesting and enjoyable. I liked the idea of having two groups of people live next to each other that are so different and are always in war. Although contrary to what the blurb suggest this book is not much about war. The blurb made me expect a very different book, with more epic battles and undying love and such, but both the love story and the battles take less time of the story than I expected.
This book is told from multiple point of views and I liked getting to know more than one character. Again from the blurb you may gather that the story is told from both characters perspectives, but we actually get to see more than their point of views. I did thought the perspective was done a bit strange, because sometime when reading from a certain point of view some comments were thrown in about another characters thought or about something the character didn’t know, It was just a bit strange and I would’ve preferred to only know things from the person who’s pov it was.
The characters were really likeable characters and because we get to see multiple point of view, you get a better idea of who everyone is. While I liked the characters I would’ve liked feeling more of their emotions. Their emotions were described, but I couldn’t really feel them.
There were some parts of the story that were a bit predictable and a few parts that didn’t make much sense to me. Also some characters made decisions a bit too fast and didn’t really seem to think about things. Some things were a bit too easy. And at the end there are still many loose ends, but I guess the reason for that is to make readers curious for the next book. Still I would’ve preferred for the ending to be a bit different, because now the ending was a bit sudden and left many loose ends.
I really liked the world and there certainly was attention for world building, many small things are explained and we do get a sense of how things work in this world. Although I still think there are some huge gaps, like why the two species are in war with each other and why they developed so differently, but also some small things like why a certain injury could be healed and others not. I just had the feeling there was more to the world and what we got to see was interesting that I wanted to know more.
To conclude: an interesting and enjoyable story. It is told from multiple point of views, but sometimes there were a few sentences from another pov thrown in the middle of a paragraph. I really liked the characters, but I didn’t really feel their emotions. I also would’ve preferred to get more world building, but I liked what we learned about the world.
November 22, 2012
Mr. Petrae let me just start by saying you are a master storyteller. Your talent shines through in this novel and I now consider myself a huge fan. I didn't want to put this book down and was saddened that my life kept pulling me away from your world.
I don't even know where to start. The story is filled with so much that I'm afraid I will leave something out and not do it justice in my review. To keep from giving too much away I will stick to the basics and tell you my general thoughts.
First, it is hard to describe the two different time periods that collide in this world. And I am in awe of how beautifully Petrae pulled it off. I was worried at the beginning that I wouldn't be able to wrap my mind around it, but he does such an amazing job that it feels natural and easy. Like its how things have always been described before and he isn't saying anything new...except that he is.
This book is filled with Princes and warriors that use technology as weapons. And then there are "savages" that use nature and the earth. Rone, the Rook Prince and advanced nano user survives an attack on his life, but in doing so lands at the foot of Keiara, the daughter of the Terraquois Chief. The Terraquois and the Rooks have battled since the beginning of time. Each of them believe the other to be horrible in their own way. But when Keiara nurses Rone back to health and decides to show him the errors of his peoples judements by letting him see how the Terraquios live, not only does a bond form between them, but love begins to the stir the air.
I don’t want to give anymore away, but an unmatched love is only the beginning of the problems that Rone and Keiara face. This story is filled with supernatural, paranormal beings tied together in a rich plot line fraught with death, war, and love.
The characters were vivid with very unique personalities and I grew to love each of them in some way. Petrae made it easy to see how each person and each side came to feel the way that they did despite all of them being so very wrong in their harsh judgments of one another.
Read this story. You will not be disappointed. In fact I guarantee that you’ll be pleasantly surprised. I wish I could give something higher than a 5 Star rating because Dragon and Mr. Petrae deserve it.
I don't even know where to start. The story is filled with so much that I'm afraid I will leave something out and not do it justice in my review. To keep from giving too much away I will stick to the basics and tell you my general thoughts.
First, it is hard to describe the two different time periods that collide in this world. And I am in awe of how beautifully Petrae pulled it off. I was worried at the beginning that I wouldn't be able to wrap my mind around it, but he does such an amazing job that it feels natural and easy. Like its how things have always been described before and he isn't saying anything new...except that he is.
This book is filled with Princes and warriors that use technology as weapons. And then there are "savages" that use nature and the earth. Rone, the Rook Prince and advanced nano user survives an attack on his life, but in doing so lands at the foot of Keiara, the daughter of the Terraquois Chief. The Terraquois and the Rooks have battled since the beginning of time. Each of them believe the other to be horrible in their own way. But when Keiara nurses Rone back to health and decides to show him the errors of his peoples judements by letting him see how the Terraquios live, not only does a bond form between them, but love begins to the stir the air.
I don’t want to give anymore away, but an unmatched love is only the beginning of the problems that Rone and Keiara face. This story is filled with supernatural, paranormal beings tied together in a rich plot line fraught with death, war, and love.
The characters were vivid with very unique personalities and I grew to love each of them in some way. Petrae made it easy to see how each person and each side came to feel the way that they did despite all of them being so very wrong in their harsh judgments of one another.
Read this story. You will not be disappointed. In fact I guarantee that you’ll be pleasantly surprised. I wish I could give something higher than a 5 Star rating because Dragon and Mr. Petrae deserve it.
April 10, 2013
Dragon is quite the compelling novel. Like an AU Romeo and Juliet. The blend of science-fiction and fantasy, futuristic and old world, high tech and natural, within its pages is well-done and will appeal to readers of both genres. I really enjoyed the aspects of the nano machines as well as being able to shape-shift. The characters were likeable, and each had their own voice.
While Dragon has a lot of good points, it does have its flaws, which can be easily fixed. There are a few grammatical/spelling errors. The omnipotent POV shifts mostly without transitions. It's not too disorientating, thankfully; but while it has perks, there are downfalls as well. The reader gets to see into the minds of each of the main characters, allowing them to be in all the key locations. Yet, because of this, scenes can become repetitive. Towards the end, we see the same exact scene 4 times from 4 different POVs. There could have been a bit more eloquent descriptions, especially in the action sequences. I understand action scenes are tough to write, but "beating the crap out of him" and "a neat twist in the air" is just being lazy, in my opinion. Thankfully, these were the only 2 lines I noticed like this. The rest of the novel more than makes up for it.
All in all, I quite enjoyed this book. I look forward to reading and seeing where the rest of this quartet goes.
Note: I received a free copy from the author for a fair and honest review. I also purchased it during a free promotion.
While Dragon has a lot of good points, it does have its flaws, which can be easily fixed. There are a few grammatical/spelling errors. The omnipotent POV shifts mostly without transitions. It's not too disorientating, thankfully; but while it has perks, there are downfalls as well. The reader gets to see into the minds of each of the main characters, allowing them to be in all the key locations. Yet, because of this, scenes can become repetitive. Towards the end, we see the same exact scene 4 times from 4 different POVs. There could have been a bit more eloquent descriptions, especially in the action sequences. I understand action scenes are tough to write, but "beating the crap out of him" and "a neat twist in the air" is just being lazy, in my opinion. Thankfully, these were the only 2 lines I noticed like this. The rest of the novel more than makes up for it.
All in all, I quite enjoyed this book. I look forward to reading and seeing where the rest of this quartet goes.
Note: I received a free copy from the author for a fair and honest review. I also purchased it during a free promotion.
February 7, 2013
Rustin Petrae creates a tangible world unlike any I have ever read about.
Where you are either a "Rook" technologically advanced person. One who has grown up using tiny nano robots to recreate an extension of your ideas. If you are one of the few you can create anything you put your mind to. But most have vast blueprints at a fingers touch.
OR~
Your life has been one close to the earth, living off what is naturally grown. Terraquois the totally counter part of the Rooks in almost every way. Upon living hand and hand with nature, this way of life definitely has its perks.. like say changing in to an animal, or being able to communicate with plants..
Kinda like a Romeo and Juliette in a fantasy setting! The Rook prince is saved by a Terraquois girl. They slowly learn that besides the obvious differences they do have allot of similarities. Which just happen to be the way they start to feel about each other.
Every story needs a bad guy and the one who shows his ugly face in this tale is nefarious to the core. I found this book to be a jem in YA fiction I received it for an honest review. First time reading this author but his work is a fast favorite.
The story line is beautifully written and I found myself consuming line by line. I truly felt moved by various parts of the book. When I say tangible I mean the description is so lush your mind can not help but visualize the world Rustin Petrae has created!!
Where you are either a "Rook" technologically advanced person. One who has grown up using tiny nano robots to recreate an extension of your ideas. If you are one of the few you can create anything you put your mind to. But most have vast blueprints at a fingers touch.
OR~
Your life has been one close to the earth, living off what is naturally grown. Terraquois the totally counter part of the Rooks in almost every way. Upon living hand and hand with nature, this way of life definitely has its perks.. like say changing in to an animal, or being able to communicate with plants..
Kinda like a Romeo and Juliette in a fantasy setting! The Rook prince is saved by a Terraquois girl. They slowly learn that besides the obvious differences they do have allot of similarities. Which just happen to be the way they start to feel about each other.
Every story needs a bad guy and the one who shows his ugly face in this tale is nefarious to the core. I found this book to be a jem in YA fiction I received it for an honest review. First time reading this author but his work is a fast favorite.
The story line is beautifully written and I found myself consuming line by line. I truly felt moved by various parts of the book. When I say tangible I mean the description is so lush your mind can not help but visualize the world Rustin Petrae has created!!
July 17, 2013
This was a fun fantasy story with some really fun ideas. I loved the sci-fi elements in regards to the people of Roanoke. I felt the story started strong, especially with nanobots and mechpaks, which are specialized computers physically part of the Rook people, and have the capacity to release nanobots (tini robots) that turn into or become whatever the person has asked it to become. This was a really fun idea.
I also loved the Terraquois people and there ability to shape shift and take on the form, strength, and power of whatever creature they turn into. I like that they could change at will and then return to their human form when needed.
I found the contention between the two groups of people to be believable and I felt like it gave a great back drop for the misunderstandings that the Rooks and Terraquois people have for each other.
Having said all that, I felt like I was reading a ruff draft that had been edited over and over again, but not enough. There were parts throughout the story that felt choppy and forced. This also overlaps into the some of the relationships and character development. For me the characters of Keira, Rone, and Darvian seemed older than their age in the story, and especially with Keria and Rone, there wasn't enough relationship development to support their actions for each other.
I liked the story, but I think it needs to be edited more and developed more fully.
I also loved the Terraquois people and there ability to shape shift and take on the form, strength, and power of whatever creature they turn into. I like that they could change at will and then return to their human form when needed.
I found the contention between the two groups of people to be believable and I felt like it gave a great back drop for the misunderstandings that the Rooks and Terraquois people have for each other.
Having said all that, I felt like I was reading a ruff draft that had been edited over and over again, but not enough. There were parts throughout the story that felt choppy and forced. This also overlaps into the some of the relationships and character development. For me the characters of Keira, Rone, and Darvian seemed older than their age in the story, and especially with Keria and Rone, there wasn't enough relationship development to support their actions for each other.
I liked the story, but I think it needs to be edited more and developed more fully.
July 31, 2013
I received this book from the author in exchange for a fair and unbiased review! Having said that, i really liked the book. Rustin Petrae did an excellent job of blending sci fi and fantasy into a most enjoyable story.
The novel revolves around the technology loving Rooks and the nature loving Terraquois. The son of the Rooks' king, Rone, is targeted for assassination by a rebel element within the Rooks. When the attempt appears to be successful and Rone crashes his transport in the desert near the Terraquois' territory, the scene is set for the story.
Filled with a bit of romance between Rone and Keiara (the daughter of the head of the Terraquois), wonderful use of technology, and satisfying plot twists, it is a nice read.
The novel revolves around the technology loving Rooks and the nature loving Terraquois. The son of the Rooks' king, Rone, is targeted for assassination by a rebel element within the Rooks. When the attempt appears to be successful and Rone crashes his transport in the desert near the Terraquois' territory, the scene is set for the story.
Filled with a bit of romance between Rone and Keiara (the daughter of the head of the Terraquois), wonderful use of technology, and satisfying plot twists, it is a nice read.
February 17, 2013
I was given this book to read for free from the author in return for an honest review.
I absolutely loved this book. It reads like a sci-fi movie playing in your head. The characters are lovable and memorable. and I love how the narrative is told through multiple characters instead of just one or the author himself.
The world created by the author as well as the races of people created are fascinating to say the least and very original.
It's a very fast paced read and none stop action.
I will most certainly be looking forward for the next installment later this year and the rest of the series to come about Rone and Keiara.
I absolutely loved this book. It reads like a sci-fi movie playing in your head. The characters are lovable and memorable. and I love how the narrative is told through multiple characters instead of just one or the author himself.
The world created by the author as well as the races of people created are fascinating to say the least and very original.
It's a very fast paced read and none stop action.
I will most certainly be looking forward for the next installment later this year and the rest of the series to come about Rone and Keiara.
March 10, 2013
This is a good book. It's worth reading even though its kinda confusing at the start.
I'm not stupid, just slightly confused. :D
Love the merging of old and new, love and hate, war and peace.
I love the setting and the characters.
I also love the way both Rooks and Terraquois were so bloody misinformed of each other that its funny.
This book also reminded me that wars started because of men with huge egos.
No offence, guys. :D
Love the surroundings and love love love love EVERYTHING.
Rustin Petrae is definitely in my favourite authors list.
Sincerely and Truthfully,
Selina.
:D
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I'm not stupid, just slightly confused. :D
Love the merging of old and new, love and hate, war and peace.
I love the setting and the characters.
I also love the way both Rooks and Terraquois were so bloody misinformed of each other that its funny.
This book also reminded me that wars started because of men with huge egos.
No offence, guys. :D
Love the surroundings and love love love love EVERYTHING.
Rustin Petrae is definitely in my favourite authors list.
Sincerely and Truthfully,
Selina.
:D
http://booksandsweetepiphany.blogspot...
July 5, 2013
I thought this was a great book. The creativity of it in itself was amazing. Rustin Petrae created two completely different worlds, and put so much detail into both of them. I was in love with both Rone and Keiara right from the beginning. The only thing I would criticize is the fact that there's no mystery in the book; that everything is given to you right away. For example: who the monster is and what animal Keiara is. But all in all it was a very good book, and I would recommend it to those who love action, fantasy, and romance books. I, personally, would read it again and can't wait for the next one.
February 23, 2013
Yeah, this was pretty good. Good story, good characters, good writing. :) Just a good Fantasy novel that I enjoyed reading. It certainly was worth my time (not that I had something else to do, I was sick so... okay) and I will be reading it again when I feel like reading some good fantasy. =)
Short review, sorry!
Short review, sorry!
March 8, 2013
This is a new mix of Fantasy & Sci/Fi with great action, interesting characters. A titanic struggle between two different races of human, one with Hi-Tech toys galore. The other shape shifters and a deep attachment to nature.
This book left me spellbound and panting for the next volume.
This book left me spellbound and panting for the next volume.
February 12, 2020
Hamlet meets Avatar in this exciting blend of sci-fi and fantasy. On one end you have the Terraquois, who live high up in trees and can magically transform into animals. On the other end you have the Rooks, an elite and technologically advanced society who wield nanobots that can be transformed on the fly into pretty much anything.
I particularly liked the nanos. Most Rooks wear a small pack on their arm that can release a swarm of tiny robots . These little duders then combine to create something else. It's very similar to the microbots from Disney's Big Hero 6, except much smaller.
Over the course of the book, you'll see people use their nanos to create weapons, tools, disguises, prostheses, and even vehicles. These are typically achieved using blueprints (canned programs that tell a person's nanos what to do), but especially adept nano-users can wield on the fly.
The basic premise is that the aforementioned Terraquois and Rooks have been at war forever. The King of the Rooks is usurped by a disgruntled ex-soldier and Rone, the Rook Prince, is chased from the city and presumed dead. He's rescued by a Terraquois girl named Keiara, and after he's nursed back to health, he returns to the city to restore order.
Dragon's characters seem mostly formed from traditional archetypal molds, and the plot wears its influences on its sleeve, but this is one heck of a good time. It's funny and exciting and packed with memorable set-pieces. Highly recommended.
I listened to the audio book, and it's worth pointing out that while the narrator does an admirable job, his delivery is often mismatched with the description. One late example reads something like: "'Alive?' he said in a pained whisper." For that sentence, the narrator said "Alive?" like he was Falcor the luck dragon--not at all in a tone approaching a pained whisper. This is a minor quibble, though, and overall it was a great listen.
I particularly liked the nanos. Most Rooks wear a small pack on their arm that can release a swarm of tiny robots . These little duders then combine to create something else. It's very similar to the microbots from Disney's Big Hero 6, except much smaller.
Over the course of the book, you'll see people use their nanos to create weapons, tools, disguises, prostheses, and even vehicles. These are typically achieved using blueprints (canned programs that tell a person's nanos what to do), but especially adept nano-users can wield on the fly.
The basic premise is that the aforementioned Terraquois and Rooks have been at war forever. The King of the Rooks is usurped by a disgruntled ex-soldier and Rone, the Rook Prince, is chased from the city and presumed dead. He's rescued by a Terraquois girl named Keiara, and after he's nursed back to health, he returns to the city to restore order.
Dragon's characters seem mostly formed from traditional archetypal molds, and the plot wears its influences on its sleeve, but this is one heck of a good time. It's funny and exciting and packed with memorable set-pieces. Highly recommended.
I listened to the audio book, and it's worth pointing out that while the narrator does an admirable job, his delivery is often mismatched with the description. One late example reads something like: "'Alive?' he said in a pained whisper." For that sentence, the narrator said "Alive?" like he was Falcor the luck dragon--not at all in a tone approaching a pained whisper. This is a minor quibble, though, and overall it was a great listen.
April 29, 2023
3.5 stars. Interesting story about a city of people with the ability to create complex machines with nanos who are in conflict with another group of naturalist vegetarians who can shapeshift into animals. The king's son, Rone, is rescued by the chieftain's daughter, Keiara.
Abandon:
The 2nd book, Roc was published in 2013 and there is not a third book, so I am abandoning this series after 1 book.
Abandon:
The 2nd book, Roc was published in 2013 and there is not a third book, so I am abandoning this series after 1 book.
January 23, 2014
I was given a copy of Dragon: Book One (Histories of Purga) by author Rustin Petrae, in exchange for an honest review. I met Mr. Petrae on www.goodreads.com. After a quick discussion about his book, I was more than interested in reading what he had. I actually was to read the book Roc: Book Two (Histories of Purga). However, in order to understand what was going on, he sent me the first book, just to catch up.
Dragon starts off in the Kingdom of Roanoke. Rone sees that Lady Guilder is sporting wounds that she received at the hands of her brutal husband, Lord Guilder. Not having patience with this, his father, King Rowan Varlamagne, expels Lord Guilder from the kingdom. Not only is he expelled, he is stripped of title an all benefits he has received for his title. Just a little upset over this, Guilder has basically sworn revenge for this action and will stop at nothing to make King Rowan pay.
To help Guilder exact his revenge, a dark hooded, mechanical voice, mysterious individual appears and offers his help. Not questioning who it is or what will be expected from him in the future, Guilder seizes the opportunity to make Rowan pay.
Knowing that the only thing that could bring King Rowan down would be to witness his beloved son Rone suffer. With the help of a little magic, mysterious person changes his appearance into King Rowan and gives permission for Rone to do what he is never allowed to do, go flying. Never questioning his father’s motives, Rone, being the adventurous and young man that he is, takes the leap and is flying over the kingdom.
While flying, Rone is all of a sudden attacked by something. Thinking that he can out maneuver the missile, he heads for the Javardi Desert. Over the desert, he has the room to do some fancy moves and avoid the attack. Unable to avoid the attack, he is hit, thrown into a dune and left to die.
While out wandering out in the Javardi Desert looking for akavi herb, Keiara and her brother Asher discover Rone. Bringing him back to their village for help due to his injuries, Keiara brings the wrath of her parents down on her. The Tarraqouis are enemies of the Rooks. This is only going to cause problems for the Tarraqouis.
However, being the kind hearted person she is, Keiara insists that they help Roan. This is their one chance to prove they aren’t the evil and cruel people they have been made out to be. Seeing the logic behind his daughter’s argument, Roan is welcomed into their village. He learns of who these strangers actually are. He sees that the Rook’s have been wrong in their views of the Terraqouis. Now it’s up to him to prove this to his father and the people of Roanoke.
I really enjoyed this story. The author did a great job at describing this new world the he created. His descriptions are so vivid that you can actually picture what everything looks like. It also helps that he has created a detailed map that shows the lay of the land. Some books go overboard with details on geography or they just lack the details. This was just the perfect amount of what you needed to envision this fantasy.
I really enjoyed the way that the characters were able to grow and adapt to the way things were evolving. With the two tribes not knowing and misunderstanding, it takes the younger generation to see the wrongs of the elders.
The book builds up to this really dramatic ending. At first, I was questioning the title of the book. I was enjoying the sci-fi parts as well as the magical aspects. But it was the ending that has me gasping and wanting more. I do have the second installment, Roc, I can’t wait to jump to this book and see how things continue.
I can’t say enough good things about what this author has created. It takes a special person to create an entire new world of things that we have never seen. The imagination of Rustin Petrae has me in awe. I admire people who are willing to put those thoughts into words.
Dragon starts off in the Kingdom of Roanoke. Rone sees that Lady Guilder is sporting wounds that she received at the hands of her brutal husband, Lord Guilder. Not having patience with this, his father, King Rowan Varlamagne, expels Lord Guilder from the kingdom. Not only is he expelled, he is stripped of title an all benefits he has received for his title. Just a little upset over this, Guilder has basically sworn revenge for this action and will stop at nothing to make King Rowan pay.
To help Guilder exact his revenge, a dark hooded, mechanical voice, mysterious individual appears and offers his help. Not questioning who it is or what will be expected from him in the future, Guilder seizes the opportunity to make Rowan pay.
Knowing that the only thing that could bring King Rowan down would be to witness his beloved son Rone suffer. With the help of a little magic, mysterious person changes his appearance into King Rowan and gives permission for Rone to do what he is never allowed to do, go flying. Never questioning his father’s motives, Rone, being the adventurous and young man that he is, takes the leap and is flying over the kingdom.
While flying, Rone is all of a sudden attacked by something. Thinking that he can out maneuver the missile, he heads for the Javardi Desert. Over the desert, he has the room to do some fancy moves and avoid the attack. Unable to avoid the attack, he is hit, thrown into a dune and left to die.
While out wandering out in the Javardi Desert looking for akavi herb, Keiara and her brother Asher discover Rone. Bringing him back to their village for help due to his injuries, Keiara brings the wrath of her parents down on her. The Tarraqouis are enemies of the Rooks. This is only going to cause problems for the Tarraqouis.
However, being the kind hearted person she is, Keiara insists that they help Roan. This is their one chance to prove they aren’t the evil and cruel people they have been made out to be. Seeing the logic behind his daughter’s argument, Roan is welcomed into their village. He learns of who these strangers actually are. He sees that the Rook’s have been wrong in their views of the Terraqouis. Now it’s up to him to prove this to his father and the people of Roanoke.
I really enjoyed this story. The author did a great job at describing this new world the he created. His descriptions are so vivid that you can actually picture what everything looks like. It also helps that he has created a detailed map that shows the lay of the land. Some books go overboard with details on geography or they just lack the details. This was just the perfect amount of what you needed to envision this fantasy.
I really enjoyed the way that the characters were able to grow and adapt to the way things were evolving. With the two tribes not knowing and misunderstanding, it takes the younger generation to see the wrongs of the elders.
The book builds up to this really dramatic ending. At first, I was questioning the title of the book. I was enjoying the sci-fi parts as well as the magical aspects. But it was the ending that has me gasping and wanting more. I do have the second installment, Roc, I can’t wait to jump to this book and see how things continue.
I can’t say enough good things about what this author has created. It takes a special person to create an entire new world of things that we have never seen. The imagination of Rustin Petrae has me in awe. I admire people who are willing to put those thoughts into words.
February 22, 2014
If there is a map in the book, it makes me expect a good story. One where is a whole different world and people dealing with some kind of danger threatening to destroy what they have. And it was a really good story. The more I read, the more and more eagerly I turned pages.
This story is kind of a legend. It starts with seemingly small events but eventually it comes to a big picture and it gets bigger and bigger. It has intensity, actions, dangers, secrets and treachery. At the same time it tells a story about people, about their fears and prejudice, about being different and not knowing each other, about friendship and trust, about making changes, about bravery and bringing the best (and sometimes the worst) from ourselves.
There's plenty of various characters in here. Each one is unique and takes their own part in the story, brings their own perspective of events. And bit by bit they became dear to me. I enjoyed to read how they deal with difficult situations and how they learn from it. I loved to see how their stories intertwine and to wait for it. They made me feel anxious, sad, excited and joyful along with them.
For me this book was amazing. Because it gave intensive and enjoyable story which hold me till the very end. Because it told a legend of different world and different people. Because it showed people with their best and worst. Because it brought a bunch of various emotions in me.
I loved it and I'm excited to know what's next in the story and what's ahead for these characters I enjoyed to meet.
This story is kind of a legend. It starts with seemingly small events but eventually it comes to a big picture and it gets bigger and bigger. It has intensity, actions, dangers, secrets and treachery. At the same time it tells a story about people, about their fears and prejudice, about being different and not knowing each other, about friendship and trust, about making changes, about bravery and bringing the best (and sometimes the worst) from ourselves.
There's plenty of various characters in here. Each one is unique and takes their own part in the story, brings their own perspective of events. And bit by bit they became dear to me. I enjoyed to read how they deal with difficult situations and how they learn from it. I loved to see how their stories intertwine and to wait for it. They made me feel anxious, sad, excited and joyful along with them.
For me this book was amazing. Because it gave intensive and enjoyable story which hold me till the very end. Because it told a legend of different world and different people. Because it showed people with their best and worst. Because it brought a bunch of various emotions in me.
I loved it and I'm excited to know what's next in the story and what's ahead for these characters I enjoyed to meet.
May 24, 2014
HE WAS HER ENEMY. SHE SAVED HIS LIFE. THE REST IS HISTORY.
Rooks have embraced science and technology, inventing helpful, microscopic robots called nanos to create any machine they need.
The Terraqouis are their opposite. They embraced the spiritual, developing a deep bond with nature. This bond allows them to shift into the animal that resembles their own, inner selves.
These two races have fought each other with brutal savagery for centuries. But things change when the Rook prince, Rone Varlamagne, is attacked and left for dead by an unknown force. Keiara, the daughter of the Terraqouis chieftain, finds him, but instead of killing him, she saves his life. It is one act. One conscious choice. But it changes everything for them and the entire world of Purga.
Together, they face foes from every direction...and they will stop at nothing to protect each other.
I received this book as part of the Goodreads’ ARR Program in exchange for an honest review.
I really enjoyed this book. Rustin has come up with a story that is a creative mixture of sci-fi and fiction, technology and shape shifters. I liked how the book started with little stories that all came together as the story moved along. The character and world building is great.
And most of all a great plot. If you love sci-fi & fantasy read, try this one.
Rooks have embraced science and technology, inventing helpful, microscopic robots called nanos to create any machine they need.
The Terraqouis are their opposite. They embraced the spiritual, developing a deep bond with nature. This bond allows them to shift into the animal that resembles their own, inner selves.
These two races have fought each other with brutal savagery for centuries. But things change when the Rook prince, Rone Varlamagne, is attacked and left for dead by an unknown force. Keiara, the daughter of the Terraqouis chieftain, finds him, but instead of killing him, she saves his life. It is one act. One conscious choice. But it changes everything for them and the entire world of Purga.
Together, they face foes from every direction...and they will stop at nothing to protect each other.
I received this book as part of the Goodreads’ ARR Program in exchange for an honest review.
I really enjoyed this book. Rustin has come up with a story that is a creative mixture of sci-fi and fiction, technology and shape shifters. I liked how the book started with little stories that all came together as the story moved along. The character and world building is great.
And most of all a great plot. If you love sci-fi & fantasy read, try this one.
November 13, 2012
I really hope that everyone who reads this book enjoyed it. I have always been a fan of both science-fiction and fantasy and I had fun combining the two genres into one book. I think that I melded them together convincingly but only time, and reader opinion, will tell.
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