Pali Moon is not your average literary sleuth: she's a Maui native, a former TSA air marshal, a martial arts student with a black belt, and a wedding planner. Things get interesting when she's asked to plan a wedding for a spoiled rich kid whose fiance happens to have been reported missing at sea ...
(Editing oversights found in the Kindle text: Page 1, I said looking up not expecting / I SAID, looking UP, not expecting ; 2, I said zeroing in on her left hand / I SAID, zeroing in on her left hand ; 3, you're fiance's gone missing / YOUR fiance's gone missing ; 7, Hi Pali. / HI, Pali. ; 7, your vender contact files / your VENDOR contact files (preferred spelling) ; 13, original Charlies's Angels / original CHARLIE'S Angels ; 23, in a less than a week / IN LESS than a week (omit first "a") ;
Page 26, littered with little kid's toys / littered with little KIDS' toys ; 43, Thanks guys / THANKS, guys ; 44, Well if it's okay with you guys / WELL, if it's okay with you guys ; 45, are also a given a position of trust / are ALSO GIVEN a position of trust ; 52, After fives rings / After FIVE rings ; 71, not delve into that subject / not TO delve into that subject ; 80, Hi Kevin / HI, Kevin ; 81, Will Lisa Maria be coming / Will Lisa MARIE be coming ;
Page 86, ten purple orchid lei / ten purple orchid LEIS ; 87, snatching four lei / snatching four LEIS ; 87, It'd be a clear of dereliction of duty / It'd be a clear CASE of dereliction of duty ; 96, Yes we do / YES, we do ; 103, they traced the it back to a karate school / they TRACED IT back to a karate school (omit "the") ; 107, Before another customer comes in let's get / Before another customer comes IN, let's get ;
Page 108, interrupting the Prescott's dinner / interrupting the PRESCOTTS' dinner (plural possessive) ; 109, That didn't exactly jive with the notion / That didn't exactly JIBE with the notion (jibe = agree) ; 115, she's on the clock, Marv" said Tina / she's on the clock, MARV," said Tina (add comma) ; 117, a backward toodle-doo wave / a backward toodle-OO wave ; 119, Hey guys, I'm home / HEY, guys, I'm home ;
Page 119, Well yeah, I've still got / WELL, yeah, I've still got ; 132, This laying around eating fancy food / This LYING around eating fancy food ; 147, picking the tourist's pockets / picking the TOURISTS' pockets ; 148, Hello Ms. Moon / HELLO, Ms. Moon ; 155, well I think you need to rest / WELL, I think you need to rest ; 157, Everything okay Bea? / Everything OKAY, Bea? ; 167, with my plan or not I was / with my plan or NOT, I was ;
Page 175, "Bob, in Hawaiian. / "Bob, in HAWAIIAN." (needs end quote) ; 180, allow me connect the dots / allow me TO connect the dots ; 181, Yeah Pali / YEAH, Pali ; 186, invest in Brad Sander's company / invest in Brad SANDERS'S company ; 186, not one to pour over business plans / not one to PORE over business plans ; 188, by me saying 'pussy' are you / by me saying 'PUSSY,' are you (add comma) ;
Page 191, something folks who come by / something FOR folks who come by ; 192, Me and my wife can handle / MY WIFE AND I can handle ; 196, Driving to the bar my adrenaline kicked in / WHILE driving to the BAR, my adrenaline kicked in ; 208, You're a trooper / You're a TROUPER ; 219, the bridesmaid's black limo / the BRIDESMAIDS'S black limo ; 221, sounds like Darth Vadar / sounds like Darth VADER ;
Page 222, the rest of fifty / the rest of THE fifty ; 228, the answer's still no Ms. Moon / the answer's still NO, Ms. Moon ; 229, I need to tell you to something / I need to tell YOU SOMETHING ; 230, to my business, RRI: which is a damn site bigger / to my business, RRI, WHICH is a damn SIGHT bigger (comma after RRI, not colon) ; 234, keep "Let's Get Maui'd" out / keep 'LET'S Get MAUI'D' out (single quotes, not double) ;
Page 241, She shot me a saccharin smile / She shot me a SACCHARINE smile ; 242, she said pointing to the pile / she SAID, pointing to the pile ; 244, Who'd of ever thought / Who'd HAVE ever thought ; 246, I let Kevin down: in the worst possible way / I let Kevin DOWN, IN the worst possible way (comma, not colon) ; 246, back to her apartment that in the morning / back to her APARTMENT IN the morning ;
Page 250, This is a really good / This IS REALLY good ; 251, Sander's and McGillvary's company / SANDERS'S and McGillvary's company ; 253, going to try and weasel out / going to try TO weasel out ; 261, Don't try and change the subject / Don't try TO change the subject ; 265, want to give him a call. / want to give him a CALL." (add end quote) ; 266, love a party; even a search party / love a PARTY, EVEN a search party (comma not semicolon) ;
Page 267, there's a protocol; a hierarchy / there's a PROTOCOL, A hierarchy (comma not semicolon) ; 270, I got into my car lost in thought / I got into my CAR, LOST in thought ; 271, Maybe they had eye witnesses / Maybe they had EYEWITNESSES ; 272, in full gear; SCBA tank / in full GEAR, SCBA tank (comma not semicolon) ; 279, They swarmed Farrah offering condolences / They swarmed FARRAH, OFFERING condolences ;
Page 284, Hi Josie / HI, Josie ; 285, consider this Pali / consider THIS, Pali ; 286, my porch at sunset; Steve sitting / my porch at SUNSET, STEVE sitting (comma not semicolon) ; 301, My curiosity peaked, I wanted to see / My curiosity PIQUED, I wanted to see ; 318, and Brad and me would be on our honeymoon / and Brad AND I would be on our honeymoon ; 320, And as for you young lady / And as for YOU, young lady ;
Page 321, off of Sanders feet and hands / off of SANDERS'S feet and hands ; 321, the last few sentences; probably alerting / the last few SENTENCES, PROBABLY alerting (comma not semicolon) ; 327, was a martyr: a guy who'd sacrificed / was a MARTYR, A guy who'd sacrificed (comma not colon) .)