I'm going to open this review with three open letters to the people responsible for Beginnings:
Dear Charles E Gannon,
I have no doubt that if you look hard enough on the campus you work on, you will find one or more 'Green' or environmental groups. I would like to suggest that you attend one of their meetings. You do not need to really do anything there, though some engagement would not do much harm. I am sure you will find no one suggesting a one-state government, especially not one that engages in historical revisionism, scientific denialism or political purges.
As you might imagine, I found your portrayal of 'Greens' as willing to engage in all of the above as more than a little offensive. While By The Book was flawed in many other ways, your inclusion of such lazy, inaccurate strawmen politics was simply the final straw. I have no doubt that your story was included in Beginnings to increase readers' awareness of your work and on that front, it is not hard not to say that it failed. Next time, you may wish to base your story on something more than personal prejudices.
Yours faithfully,
Timothy Maguire
Dear David Weber,
Over fifteen years ago, I found your book Heirs to Empire in my local library. It was, quite simply, an eye-opener, making me want to write my own novels. Since then, I have ravenously consumed your body of work. While I won't pretend I have enjoyed every single one, that's always been due to my own personal preferences.
Yet it is hard not to say that for the first time I've been disappointed by one of your books. Beginnings' inclusion of Charles E Gannon's By the Book was quite simply embarrassing. Beyond the offensive stereotypes it uses as villains, the sheer blatantness by which it is crudely welded into the Honorverse is an insult to the intelligence of everyone reading it. I have no doubt that its inclusion was the idea of the editors at Baen, but it simply reflects poorly upon you that you went along with it.
Yours faithfully,
Timothy Maguire
Dear Baen editorial team,
I get that you consider yourself to be a right-wing publishing house. It's hard not to think so when you publish Tea-party handbooks after all. Yet, I have to ask: why are you so willing to let it be such utter dross?
By The Book is, quite frankly, a bad story. It's driven by lazy, often poorly thought-out ideas, relies on a central character so bland you can almost see through him and is so badly tied to the Honorverse it's supposed to be set in that you can all but see the lines where it was converted across. This isn't the first time you seem to have published something based on its politics and I suppose it's better that it's just one short story rather than some of your other howlers (The Last Centurion, anyone?).
I'd like to suggest a new position in your editorial team: Quality Control Officer. This doesn't really need to be a new staff member, but it should probably be someone who doesn't attend the local Tea Party rallies. Their job would be, quite simply, to point out when you're letting your enthusiasm for an author's opinions blind you to the failings of their writing. I think you'll find it helps.
Yours sincerely,
Timothy Maguire
PS: I was a little disappointed to see that you didn't bother including Joelle Presby's bio on Beginnings' dust jacket. Given that her story was the highlight of this book, that's a little sad. As it's also a commentary on institutionalised sexism, it's also a little embarrassing when she's the only woman writing in the book.
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I'm sure by now it's clear that I wasn't hugely impressed by Beginnings, but why? Let's get down to the basics.
Beginnings is the 6th Worlds of Honor anthology published in David Weber's Honorverse, collecting five stories themed around 'beginnings'. Two of these were written by David Weber himself, with Joelle Presby, Timothy Zahn and Charles E Gannon providing one each. So I'll go over each one individually as the quality varies wildly.
By The Book
Charles E Gannon
1 Star
Yeah, I'm pretty sure that my opinion of this is very clear already, but I do need to at least explain my loathing for this. I'll try and keep it short, but this is one flawed story. To be honest, if I was asked to teach a course on Creative Writing, By The Book would be on the syllabus as an example of how not to do it. In short, it's a generic story told very badly whose sole redeeming feature it that it's utterly irrelevant to the universe it's set in.
By The Book's constant flaw is that it's generic in all the worst ways. It's about the exploits of a rebellious captain serving under an evil regime. It's about the conflict between those living on Earth and those living in space. It's about determining the fate of the human race. The plot is a who-dunnit in space that relies almost entirely on supposition rather than anything that looks convincingly like investigation. Stop me if you've seen this before. It's the second longest story in the book (Only one of Weber's own is longer) and I honestly couldn't tell you why.
It's also told spectacularly badly. Virtually ever political group and label has to be laboriously explained to our fearless lead, because he's somehow managed to get to a high rank in a highly political military without learning any of it. The villains are strawmen we never see during the course of the novel. The finale basically invents an explanation for everything that's happened that conveniently allows the hero to determine the fate of the human race. A minor plot point relies on the entire cast failing to understand the basic concept of quarantine (in short, the main character completely violates the quarantine he himself put into place). The main character is somehow a decent guy, totally lacking the inane stupidity that drives the rest of the 'Dirtsiders'. This is, of course, due to him being brought up by a bunch of people who still believe in the US Constitution.
The sole solace of this story is also one of it's worse features. The only connection between By The Book and the Honorverse it's supposed to be set in is a crudely taped-on epilogue, giving a historian's perspective on how this affected the history of the Honorverse (spoiler alert: it didn't). This is one of the laziest ways to connect two stories I've ever seen. Add in the fact that it's also not very well written (on a scale with the rest of the story, to be honest) and well it's all a bit of a waste. It's entirely obvious that the epilogue was added on afterwards and solely to tie it to the Honorverse. The only good thing that comes from it is that you can easily pretend the whole thing has nothing to do with the Honorverse.
Over all, By The Book is simply one of the worst short stories I've read in recent years. It's driven entirely by lazy stereotypes, the main character's so frikking perfect one-dimensional seems like a compliment and the plot seems to mostly rely on a general dose of stupidity. How this got into a book with this large an expected readership is incomprehensible.
A Call To Arms
Timothy Zahn
4 Stars
Given its predecessor, it's hard not to massively over-egg this simply just for having the temerity to be decent. However, A Cal To Arms is a genuinely decent, engaging story, possessing the only moment of this book where I went 'That was awesome!'. Its only real flaw is that it reads like it's a bit of a rehash of many Honorverse themes without a lot of originality.
Setting the story in the early days of Manticore initially seems like an odd choice, but once the plot gets going, this really works. Zahn uses the technological limitations of the setting ('Autocannons, really?' One of my first thoughts when reading this) to tell a story that simply wouldn't work during the main timeline, which is all kinds of cool. It also emphasizes in many ways the timeless nature of the conflicts that are at the core of the Manticorian Navy. A nice touch is the finale, which emphasizes the political conflicts, to produce a bittersweet ending.
What works less well is that it uses a lot of the same tropes as many other Honorverse stories. The clash between patronage and professionalism is something that's been done over and over in this setting and this doesn't do as much new with it (excepting the bittersweet ending). A few extra touches, a page or two here or there could also have done wonders to flesh this story out a bit more.
A Call To Arms is perhaps more satisfactory than great. It's got some great moments, but the overall story is perhaps a bit more weak than I'd like.
Beauty and the Beast
David Weber
2 Stars
The first of Weber's entries in Beginnings, it tells how Honor's parents, Alfred and Abigail, met. While this shows a lot of initial promise, it really fails to do as well as could be hoped. Unfortunately, the most interesting parts of the story are generally ignored in favour of a fairly extraneous subplot and what's hard to describe as anything other than a really odd narrative choice.
Let's get to the story's main problem. Early on in the novel, Alfred and Abigail form a powerful psychic connection, which not only allows them to know what the other is feeling, but also their bearing. While this is the story's main driver, it suffers on a number of levels. Firstly, this connection isn't even hinted at during the novels that the Harringtons have appeared in, which makes the idea a little hard to swallow, but it's also a level of psychic ability the series really hasn't shown in humans (it's more treecat level). Now while this isn't in itself, a huge problem, the way it's used to resolve the plot is. In short, this psychic connection allows Weber to short-cut around the problems his characters face. This plot point's sole saving grace is that both characters regularly mock its absurdity, making some unfavourable comparisons to bad romance novels.
Far more interesting are the problems that Alfred faces outside of this psychic connection. His lust for violence and his horror at it are some of the most effective parts of the narrative. This side of Honor's father is a surprise, but a welcome one. Also interesting is his desire to find a cure to neural disruptor effects. Not only is this a fun bit of foreshadowing, but it's also a good way of illustrating his guilt over the battles he's been in. Both of these elements of the story are, to be honest, far more interesting than the psychic connection, but they receive far less time.
To be honest, I found that Beauty and the Beast had more potential than satisfaction. Parts of it feel simply trite and overdone, with a plot that's unfortunately exceedingly predictable.
Best Laid Plans
David Weber
3 Stars
The shortest of the stories in Beginnings, Best Laid Plans is the only story that features Honor in the book. It's a quick, short piece that hits a few high notes, but is unfavourably close to a story from a previous Worlds of Honor book.
The short problem with this is that this preceding story (which introduced Stephanie Harrington, the first person to bond with a treecat, which formed the core of Weber's young adult novel) is simply better. It's a more interesting story, a better take and is simply a lot more thrilling. In comparison, Best Laid Plans has a lot less going for it. It's less engaging, with smaller stakes and a simpler narrative.
Still, that said, it's fun to see Honor being utterly uninterested in bonding with a treecat. It's a take on her character that's missing from the main novels, in particular because of the way it reflects on her ambitions. Unfortunately, this is only a small part of the story and doesn't do a whole lot to raise it up.
Obligated Service
Joelle Presby
5 Stars
Quite simply, the highlight of this book, Presby's story is an excellent piece dissecting the institutional and occasionally unconscious sexism of the Honorverse's Graysons, managing to be something quite unique. Out of all the Mil SF I've ever read, this is one of the very few books that's really made me think.
What's kind of awesome about this is that Presby doesn't write about a great leader or a skilled warrior, but rather an ordinary woman. Claire's just a skilled engineer with some severally lacking social skills who just wants to finish her term of enlistment and get a decent job. She's only in the Navy because it offers her an opportunity she can't find anywhere else. I'll be honest and say I've never seen a character like her in a SF novel before and she's extremely welcome.
Even better (for a kind of grim, depressing version of 'better') is the dissection of the often unconscious sexism that fills her life. It's one thing to read about the unfairness of gender stereotypes, but it's another thing to see a character being ordered to beauty clinics to fix skin scars or upbraided in the street about her dress by strangers purely because of her dress. It's exceedingly well written and, again, genuinely unique. I dare anyone to not be enraged by the frequent, petty problems inflicted on Claire, just because of her gender.
What really works in this novel is that most of her problems come not from genuine misogyny, but rather simple thoughtlessness. Claire's cousin, the 'man of the house', piles indignities on her because he's too young and feckless to take responsibilities for his actions. Several other characters take offensive actions simply because they're making incorrect assumptions. Only her first captain acts stupidly because of genuine misogyny, making bizarre assumptions that rely entirely on his belief that Claire can't possibly be anything other that an incompetent sex addict. Claire in many ways is also guilty of this, having internalised many of these ideas and her rebellions against it are some of the most impressive parts of the story.
Overall, I found Obligated Service to be excellent. The really good news is that apparently Presby and Weber are planning to collaborate on a novel in the future, which I won't deny I'm really looking forwards to. Obligated Service is, quite simply, excellent, a depiction of unconscious sexism that manages to not only make it pervasive and offensive, but also really stupid.
Overall thoughts
I bought Beginnings primarily because it was signed by David Weber and as a result I wasn't disappointed. That said, I was quite disappointed by its contents. With the exception of Presby and Zahn's entries, the stories were nowhere near as satisfying as I'd hoped. Both of Weber's entries were below what I expected and it's hard to look at Gannon's opener as anything other than utterly terrible. It's not something I would recommend as a hardback and as a paperback it's only for the dedicated fan.