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282 pages, Hardcover
First published June 18, 2013
He had a slightly big head and rice-tray eyes that flashed back at his surroundings like a fawn on the run.As it happens, I know what a rice-tray looks like and while I haven't seen a fawn on the run, there can't be any similarity between the two.
She watches the reflections of the lights on the window, like eyes of sick pigeons staring.Huh?
Inside, it was if her heart had been soaked in a pond of freezing light.A sexual simile, which does not seem particularly apt:
It was the most silent lovemaking they’d ever had, like the sky had landed on them.Here’s another unfortunate sexual image, describing a couple having a post-coital nap.
And they fell asleep in the scent of each other’s bodies, serene , like children content, collapsing after a long day at the beach.I highlighted dozens of these strange, inappropriate or just plain nonsensical similes and the odd inane metaphor. When the language is so distractingly bad, getting lost in the story becomes impossible.