I remember when “Raiders of the Lost Ark” was first released. On the surface, it was about a guy looking for a lost artifact. The folks who had it did a pretty good job of hiding it. Oh yeah, and he was racing a bunch of nazi's who were trying to get to it first – or failing that, at least have possession at the end. Then, it turned out that there was this mystical element hovering over the whole thing.
Gerald J. Kubicki takes that generalization at its highest level, and modernizes it. Our hero is a rich guy in Chicago. The villains are neo-nazis – including a couple of survivors of the Third Reich – with some Chinese government operatives mixed in for good measure. And yes, there's a mystical element. Then … mix in a little espionage and political thriller around the side, and spice it up with 4 incredibly sexy women, and you have “A Dubious Artifact”.
I've been a little lax in writing this review, because I'm really not sure how I felt about this book. There were some significant plusses. It kept my interest from beginning to end. It was usually fast-paced, as a good thriller should be, with occasional slower moments to allow the reader to catch his or her breath before the next action sequence. And I found I liked most of the characters – at least, most of the “good guys” like Colton Banyon and his live-in former FBI girlfriend Loni. I wanted them to not simply survive, but to come out on top in the end.
But the novel and its author also managed to make me uncomfortable at the same time. I felt Kubicki crossed the line from simply having the Chinese government and its operatives acting as the villains into the “Yellow Menace” themes that were echoed in the past by characters such as Fu Manchu where almost everyone of East Asian background was out to conquer the rest of the world. This would be a difficult tightrope for any writer; I'm sure more experienced hands than Mr. Kubicki's would have also failed. Case in point: the excessive use of the term “Chinaman”. The term is seen as offensive by many. I could understand where some characters in a book may use terms like that. However, when EVERY character does so, including the narrator, we can consider it to be thematic.
Also, the “every woman wants to sleep with the hero” sub-theme was eased out of the James Bond movie franchise because it is perceived by a growing number of individuals of both genders as an anachronistic attitude. Yet here, we have 4 absolutely beautiful women – 3 of them sisters – all with a history (and maybe a future, possibly even a current) uncontrollable desire to sleep with our protagonist. Explaining it away with “a curse” doesn't make it go away; it made me feel dirty reading it.
From a technical perspective, the book shows either a good but not perfect effort at self-editing, or a poor job by a professional editor. For example, there were too many misused words – the “there” / “their” variety.. This occurred enough that it actually distracted from the content at times. (I wish I'd thrown a bookmark or a paper clip into my printed copy of the book when I came across a significant example so I could cite specifics.)
Overall, this book provided enough positives to overcome its negatives and was a good read. I would expect more from subsequent efforts.
DISCLOSURE: This book was provided free of charge by the author, in return for a commitment to provide an honest review upon completion.