Carlos Fuentes, "Nietzsche on his Balcony." E. Shaskan Bumas and Alejandro Branjer, translators. Dalkey Archive Press, 2012/2016.
This is Carlos Fuentes’s last novel, published posthumously. I bought it at Book Passage in San Francisco and thought that I would take a chance, given that he was one of the most important Boom authors and that the other books I’ve read by him ("The Death of Artemio Cruz," "Burnt Water") are daring postmodern creations that helped shape my understanding of Mexican and Latin American literatures.
Unfortunately, "Nietzsche on his Balcony" falls far short of his canonical works. The premise is interesting. The main characters are Friedrich Nietzsche and his interlocutor(the narrator, Fuentes?), and the setting is a hotel in an unnamed city. Magically, Nietzsche “eternally returns” occasionally to the balcony of this hotel room to observe the world, which is where the interlocutor/narrator/Fuentes encounters him from a neighboring balcony. What happens between them feels something like a writers’ workshop. After some conversation, they each begin to create character sketches and plot lines which develop into a story about a revolution, perhaps in France, after which there is some discussion of what each has created. The book shifts between a character sketch/plot line chapter to a framing discussion chapter about the previous chapter. It is very orderly: character sketch/plot line→commentary, character sketch/plot line→commentary, building toward the larger story. The subtitle of the book should be, though, something like "Two Dirty Old Men Shoot the Breeze." I expected that the dialogues between the characters as well as the narratives they created would explore elements of Nietzsche’s philosophy, and they do but to a very limited degree. Rather, the underdeveloped philosophical discussions seem more of an excuse to initially lead to stories about women, particularly abject and objectified women, criminal sexuality (pedophilia), and hermaphroditism.There is much prurience running through the book, and many of the character sketch/plot line chapters are simply voyeuristic verging on titillating. The female characters who are not objectified, sexualized or abjectified, inevitably subjugate themselves to serve patriarchy: “O those men are so brilliant, and I just need to support them.” The Latin American Boom was a boys’ club, and "Nietzsche on his Balcony" seems to be a last, anachronistic gasp of that club. Besides the sexist portrayal of women, there is the narrative of revolution, a revolution which is, of course, led by men. For this, Nietzsche and his interlocutor focus primarily on aristocratic characters who want to pursue a “revolution,” which they really don’t know how to pursue, because at best they have a generic sense of what a revolution is. Their discussions are shallow and trite, and their words are empty signifiers, stereotypes, and slogans. The characters are “beautiful people,” and the resulting narratives are leading less to a novel and more toward a soap opera or telenovela. Nietzsche and his interlocutor do create an arc leading to the failure of this revolution, which is predictable, but as the story of revolutions peters out in backstabbing, murder, assassination Nietzsche and his interlocutor return to prurience and voyeurism. Revolutions may fail, but violating, exploitative sexuality is always worth looking at. Yuck! The eternal return of sexual obsession: porn will out.