Two and a half stars.
The story is well written, the dialogue clear, and the description good. That bought it two stars.
HOWEVER... (I feel a little like John the Revelator)... 'nevertheless I have this against thee':
We have a heroine who works as a teacher's aide by day, takes classes by night (and WEEKENDS!), AND... as a result is neglecting the heck out of her son. No wonder he ends up drinking and partying. She's. NOT. there. for him.
We have a 'matchmaking' friend who is basically throwing Clay at Beth, regardless of whether Beth is okay with it or not. It's ridiculous. Worse is the fact that her friends have children - smaller children! - and are NEVER with them. They're having a BBQ, they're working a fair, they're doing a missions thing, they're having a co-ed baby shower, they're having a farewell party, they're off camping (and even if the kids were along, dad's out fishin' with the guys while the mom's are on kitchen duty)... NOBODY watches the kids. And this is par for churchianity's course. BTDT... for *decades*.
What's hilarious is then they're all like, "Yeah, we have an adults-only retreat next week, and BOY do we need it!!" This is one of *THE* biggest peeves I have with church people. They pretend to be all about family, but are NEVER actually parenting.
In the book, Beth cuts off Clay's long ponytail with "one swift click" of a scissors. Have you ever tried to cut thru a ponytail?!??! What the farts is this?!?!?! One snip. You're JOKING, right?
Now for the DEEPER complaints: Merrillee says that Max won't go to church because some woman said nasty things about him being illegitimate. It's *SO FAR FETCHED* to write this in here... because nobody knows Beth wasn't married, before. It's stupid, stupid, stupid. Even her friends think her husband was killed in a motorcycle accident. Nobody was treating Max like a bastard, hello. And in 2011? That's not even a THING, anyhow. Not even here in uber-chrischun, rural west Michigan. My second cousins are the ex-kids of 'Children's Bible Hour' and have illegitimate kids coming OUT their EARS. It's seriously NOT a thing, anymore.
Then there's the non-stop, constant, NEVER-ending "I like him, but he's leaving." "I like her, but she's not a believer." "I like him, but he's LEAVING." "I like her, but she's NOT a believer." And this is hammered at us over. And over. And OVER again. ((((We get it. Honest.)))))
The other major thing (that REALLY took a star) was the 'faith' of these idiots. Page 186: "Lord, You know how I feel about Beth, Help me to do and say the right things that will turn her heart to you." <<< Like God *NEEDS* Clay to convert Beth? It's the Holy Spirit that convicts a person, NEVER another human. That's Clay (and every other chrishun out there), inserting themselves where they may not even factor, hello. I despise this. They aren't asking for the Spirit to intercede, or for the Lord's will to be done. They want THEIR place in a conversion story. ((gag))
More than that, I despised how Whren *DOESN'T* have Beth come to a saving knowledge/acceptance of Ha'Mosiach Yeshua. Her idea of a 'sinner's prayer' is 'Thank you Gawd for reminding me that you love me, even though I don't deserve it. Help me to be a good mom. I need you.' AND THAT'S A SALVATION PRAYER?!?!?!?! Are. You. *KIDDING* me?!?!
Immediately after that, Kim is bellowing to the townsfolk that Beth 'made a decision for Christ'. CHRIST WASN'T EVEN MENTIONED!! There was no 'take my sins, I give you my heart, my life, my will'... N.O.T.H.I.N.G. Nooo, we get 'help me to be a good mom'. Might as well throw in, 'Dear God, I'd like a pony and a plastic rocket'. !!!!!
I. Can't. EVEN. with churchianity.
I really can't.