If there was ever an author in need of an editor, it's Girard. So imagine my surprise when I read the acknowledgments and this author thanks her--wait for it--editor. And a team of beta readers. And so-called experts. It reads like a self-published book and worse, it reads like a very rough first draft.
I had high hopes for this book. The premise was intriguing. sadly, the book fails to deliver on so many levels.
First, this book is riddled with errors. So much so that it's distracting and I almost didn't finish the novel out of sheer annoyance. It's repetitive. Page upon page of her telling us the same thing over and over, sometimes on the same page. How an editor misses or overlooks this is beyond me. There are numerous typos. For example, she says "investigator" in one sentence followed by "inspector" a few sentences later. Some of the dialogue made absolutely no sense. Why? No clue. This author shows zero attention to detail. I'd suggest cutting at least 20K words from this manuscript and it would still probably be too long and wordy. Editor? Beta readers? Either they need to change occupations or this author chose to ignore their advice. (In addition to the aforementioned issues, the writing is rather monotonous and lacks imagination. 100% pedestrian.)
Second, the law enforcement aspects of this book were weak. Very weak. If she spoke with or hung out with actual detectives, she either wasn't paying attention or she was punked. There's a lot of competition in this genre (police procedural, crime drama, etc.) so you'd better get it right. This read like someone's immature idea of what being a police officer or CSI tech might be like. Way off the mark. it was full of cliches and ridiculous stereotypes.
Third, the characters aren't very realistic and most fall flat. Did you know that every single female police officer is super hot with the exception of one (Jamie)? Wrong. They are ordinary people. Sure, there are attractive detectives, police officers, and criminalists, but real life isn't CSI (the TV shows) where detectives and crime scene techs race around with perfectly coiffed locks, high heels, and short skirts. Not a plain Jane among them. And news flash: not everyone on the police force is having an affair or in an unhappy marriage. They don't all come from broken homes or have baggage from childhood incidents. Most are just ordinary people who heed the calling to make the world a safer place.
Finally, the plot was predictable and unimaginative. We all knew who the serial rapist was from the get-go. It made this story arc feel almost like a distraction or an afterthought. As for the Devlin murder, I disliked the character so much I didn't really care who killed her. She was such a cliche, it was hard to imagine her as human much less empathize with her character. Learning who killed her was almost anti-climactic.
This author missed the mark on all counts.