This is going to be more of a review of the complete trilogy than of this instalment.
I've bought and read the whole trilogy, and I certainly admire Malley's world-building and the initial concept of this trilogy - the idea of people attaining eternal life through Longevity drugs, the illegal-isation of children, and the problems that causes to the 'surplus' population. The novels appear to be very well researched in the science and philosophy departments, but unfortunately, Malley's writing just doesn't equate to the power of the idea she had.
The first book was formulaic and predictable, relying upon overdone plot devices, coincidences, and clichés - the only thing that kept me reading was the original idea. A genius idea that I'd never really thought of before that was interesting and played on the mind. However, the actual story around the Longevity concept just doesn't seem to get off the ground. It felt rushed and rather forced. Though the novels are fast-paced with action and drama, they never seem to escape that snare of predictability and cliché. It had so much potential and could have been a really intriguing start of something, but all that resulted was a poor YA novel series full of the completely obvious. It's a real shame.
All the way through the series I kept hoping Malley would do something original and unexpected with this idea, but it didn't really happen. There were moments when I thought something might be cooking, but those feelings usually faded when the predictable element pushed it aside. Almost every step of the characters' journeys are obvious and seriously unsurprising, through all three books. The writing is shallow and brief, making this a quick read that doesn't stray far from the straightforward, and the dialogue is at times rather annoyingly coy. I think as this trilogy is intended for teens rather than children, as such, the style is rather too basic, which is unfortunate.
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The characters are also rather shallow - their morals and personalities usually uncomplex and formulaic, despite the very complex world they live in. Stereotypes abound, but somehow they seem to stay out of the 'sue' categories. Pip and Margaret were two of the most interesting characters as they both revealed very little and appeared to have bigger things at play, but both of their 'unmaskings/reveals' also very Scooby-Doo `Oh it's you!' and disappointing.
The ending to this books was like a typical exposition of Malley's banal plot twisting, reminding me of the closing scenes of old Scooby Doo episodes where the characters all gather together to tell everyone how everything was done, strings and all, unravelling everything for all to see so we go `ohhhhh' and wonder how we didn't see it. Except I did, and I doubt I was the only one, and this just felt like an insult. It felt very false and like she was pointing at her awesomeness, expecting me to congratulate her. And if it couldn't get worse, the final chapter goes all mysterious and 'dun-dun-duhhh' with the Jumangi drums in the sand. Like, no, just no. >.<
I didn't start this review intending to be so negative. I enjoyed the series as a light and very quick read, but I can't escape the disappointment of such an intriguing, and, unfortunately, wasted idea such as Malley's. For pre-teens/early teens looking for something a bit darker and realistic than Jacqueline Wilson, this is a good introduction to YA novels, and will probably be enjoyed by that kind of age group. It's certainly a trilogy that gets you thinking about morals, independence, authority, and how people treat each other, which is always a good thing in my opinion.