The ideas Duncan expresses in this book are fascinating. The idea of poetry as a personal act that, through dissemination, can become a political act. And the lyric interrogation of word by different Renaissance poets, and how those poems are trying to do the same thing he is doing, makes this book a structural pleasure to read. My main issue is with the language. I am in love with Duncan's felicity with language, especially in the course of a poem, and it just feels to me he put concept before style in this book.