Angelfire

Dark Angel #1

by Hanna Peach

Librarian Note: This is an alternate cover edition of ASIN # B00ABWN11C.

Forget everything you know about angels…

You’ll likely find Alyxandria slicing demons with her blades rather than plucking at harp strings. Whether it's with weapons, unarmed or with the “borrowed magics” of distilled angel-blood tattoos, she trains harder than any other Seraphim warrior to prove she is nothing like her parents who abandoned her to become Rogues.

When Alyx starts displaying the signs of a strange new magic, most don’t believe her and no one has answers for her. She starts to investigate for herself. The web of lies she uncovers will shatter her world and she’ll be forced to risk everything for Israel, a mortal she barely knows.

Alyx and Israel will soon realize that their destinies are inexplicably tied - and that their choices will determine the fate of Earth itself.

It begins in Angelfire.

Angeldust, the fifth and final installment of the Dark Angel series is now out!

Genres: Angels, Fantasy, Paranormal, Young Adult, Romance, Demons, Paranormal Romance

328 pages, Kindle Edition

First published November 22, 2012

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Hanna is the bestselling author of the Bound romantic suspense series and the Dark Angel fantasy series. Although she writes in more than one genre she can’t write a book without weaving together a complicated plot and filling it with twists. She writes what she believes: good people can do bad things, ordinary people can do great things, and choose love above everything.

If not writing, she can be found wandering a dusty market in Marrakesh or trekking a mountain in Peru, often using her travels as settings in her novels.

Reviews

[Liana · Rating 4 out of 5]

First of all, I would like the author for personally taking the time to email me and introduce me to her book. I thoroughly enjoyed it!

Anyways, let's dive right in.

I felt like Hanna Peach was trying to mash a lot of concepts together all at once, and I sort of felt confused in the beginning, since it started out literally, from the middle of somewhere. I didn't understand it immediately. However, the good thing is, the author actually explained some things at the end of each chapter, like from a textbook.

So, the characters. They're supposed to be angels, which just reminds me of The Mortal Instruments all over again, but, this book just made the angels seem like faeries instead. I mean, angels are supposed to be all angel-y. I don't know how to explain, but yeah. I think they work better off as faeries because everything they do seem so Pixie-Hollow ish I can't help but think of Tinker Bell. They're also categorized by talent. See, they do work off better as faeries.

Now, let's concentrate on one specific character. The main character. Alyxandria. Alyx.

She seemed so ignorant at times I just wanted to reach into the book and slap some sense into her. But then she's really tough and relentless and she's always like, 'damn everything, I'm gonna get what I want' and she reminds me of Isabelle Lightwood from Cassie Clare's Mortal Instruments series.

The author herself said that this book has a lot of similarities with the Mortal Instruments, and yeah, I think I can make a legit analogy:

Nephilim is to TMI as Seraphim is to Angelfire.

Yep.

So, the romance. The romance isn't even that great but I was glad it was there because I LOVE ROMANCE. And it was really good. But it didn't help that the guy had another girl on his mind and they did some really dirty things together and at the end he chooses to remain friends and I'm like WTH SDKFJSKL:DJFSKLDJFSKDJFSKL:DF. I WAS SO FLABBERGASTED I SWEAR

And there's the ending. That ending is so freaking awesome. It totally makes people want to read it!

That's all I have to say. Definitely check this out.

[David Torres · Rating 5 out of 5]

Ok wow. I don't know what took me so long to read this book. I got it when it was on a free promotion and I was all "meh" but I was so wrong. I finally got to it and I was blown away. It started off nice and mellow, and I can't pinpoint the moment I was absolutely hooked.

Alyx (I keep pronouncing it A-licks but it's alex)is a bad ass chick. She's an amazing fighter. She's 18 too! The youngest and most badass lightwarrior. She's headstrong and stuck in her ways, but I wouldn't say she's absolutely stubborn as a mule, but she is stubborn to a certain extent.

Israel is just a street rat. Or so he thinks. But he's actually bound for much much more. What's his destiny? Who knows. But if he has to have a Guardian, then God has very big plans for Israel. Israel has been hunting darkened because they took over his (friend, lover?)friend, Adere. But here's the issue.
With their Guardian bond, they get feelings with each other. Sure it's cliche, but who cares?! I love it. And their love isn't cheesy. But what did kind of bother me is that their romance at times seemed forced. Like they love each other because Raphael prophecized it. But it shouldn't be like that. I mean of course it adds a certain drama and doubt into the mix. But every book I read that has a certain prophecy about two lovers, they think their love is "forced" because it is written in the stars.

But what if it isn't the reason. What if they do legitimately love each other. I think it should be that Raphael prophecized it because they love each other, rather than they love each other because Raphael prophecized it.

That's about all I have to say about this book.

Overall, the story was the main thing. It was what kept me absolutely hooked. The descriptive and creative writing was alright. At least there were no errors. :) So this book was just amazing.

Congratulations Hannah Peach, you've written yourself a damn good book.
FIVE STARS!!!!!!

[Allison ☾ · Rating 4 out of 5]

I actually really enjoyed this book. It was an easy read, fast paced, action and the romance didn't overpower anything in any way. It was fun.

[Atalia • She’s Feeling Bookish · Rating 4 out of 5]

"I think it's easier to let someone else tell you what's right. That way you don't have to be responsible for you life. That way you have someone else to blame when it doesn't turn out the way you think it should. I think if you want to be courageous, truly courageous, you have to decide for yourself what you feel is right an then you fight for it." -Israel

Angels are definitely one of my favorite paranormal creature so reading this book was a no brainer for me. Sometimes it's hard to find a good angel read as most feature some of the same characters because of the angel mythology but this one was one of the different ones. I really liked the twist to the typical angel mythology and the plot definitely made it unique. I love it when you can see different situations in a book through more than one set of eyes and in this book, the author was able to integrate the point of view of multiple characters without making the reader feel as if they were playing a game of ping pong. I feel that the multiple points of view added to the story by allowing the reader to get the whole story instead of just viewing it from one angle. Containing a great mixture of mystery, romance, and action, Angelfire is a definite page turner.

Alyx remembers something the Elders say about love,"Love is an unreliable way to choose a partner. The Seraphim have no use for love if we are to survive." Love. The sin of her parents." -Alyx

ALYX


Being always put down by her peers and members of her community because of her parent's deeds. She copes by distancing herself from those not of her flock and presenting an iron clad facade. Someone who has taught her to not let others bring her down is the only parental figure she's ever had, her flock's leader Symon. At the age of 18, she's one of the youngest light warriors to gain the ability to work different types of magic. Growing up in an environment where everyone followed orders and rules set by the Elders without so much as second guessing them, she always followed them and was very committed to their ways. Unbeknownst to her though, there was so much being kept from her in regards to what really happened to her parents and it seems that everyone was clued in except for her. When she stumbles into the harsh truth that perhaps what she's been told about her parents her entire life may be false, her whole world turns upside down. Especially since at the same time she figures out that maybe her ability to control several magics stems from a prophecy stating that she is to become a Guardian to a special mortal who has a great destiny. Things become even more tricky when for the first time she meets in person the guy whose been taking residency in all of her visions. This event becomes the catalyst to a great journey where betrayals lie ahead and perhaps maybe an unplanned miracle is created. I loved that despite all the hurtful things that occur to her, she stayed strong and determined to fulfill the prophecy no matter the cost.

Alyx has found herself in the nook of Israel's left arm again, with her head resting against his chest. "I aways end up here," she says. "You belong here." -Alyx & Israel

"…those few seconds where his facade dropped and she saw him. Really saw him. He carries more pain with him than he should. More pain than she carries with her. He is alone with no one, as Alyx was before Symon took her in." -Alyx

ISRAEL


A homeless guy who has had to fend for himself from a young age. Having a head a near death experience when he was a little boy, the result was his ability to see demons through their human facade despite being a mortal. When demons started realizing that he had this ability, they began to come after him. Since no one knew that he had this ability, his aunt and her husband decided to send him to an institution thinking that he was having psychological problems. He decided to not return home as he knew that if he did, the demons would only hurt his aunt to get to him. And so began his new life alone. A journey that took him through several situations like stealing in order to eat and becoming a member of a street gang who became his family and where he learned many key elements to his survival. As the demons got close though, this all ended and again he had to flee in order to protect his new family. Once again he was alone and decided that enough was enough. Especially when someone he really cared about became a pawn in the demons' attempts to get to him. He was done running; it was time to fight back. And so the prey became the predator and along the way to vengeance he came across a girl who would change his life forever and one who would lead him to a destiny far greater than he'd ever imagined.

"… he could see the dapples of green in her irises, could smell the wind on her hair. He knew then, under that fierce facade she was more delicate than anyone realized. She makes him want to protect her." -Israel

Overall, this series is one that I will definitely continue to follow. From the very beginning, Angelfire grabbed my attention so much so that I even found myself reading in-between classes because I just need to know what happened next.
I could not get enough of these characters. I would recommend this book to readers who enjoy original angel books that will have you in suspense with every page turn.

Other Favorite Quotes:

"Love can make you do strange things." -Jordan

"Look within your soul to find the path to the truth." - Raphael

"The enemy of my enemy is my friend." -Alyx

His voice is so quiet she barely hears him, "Why do you fit so perfectly here?" When I was made I was carved out from the space between your arms. Instead she says,"I don't know." -Israel & Alyx

"Sometimes the struggle is part of getting where you want to go." -Mayrekk

"More than anything the path of destiny takes great courage, not the greatest gifts or skill. And you, my girl, already have more courage in your little finger than most of these gifted Seraphim I see come in and out of my hut every day." -Mayrekk

[Michelle's Paranormal Vault of Books · Rating 5 out of 5]

Angelfire (Dark Angel #1)Review

Wow, this was an amazing book. I really got into it, and could see the world through Alyx’s eyes. I will admit a few parts did have me confused, as in I was not sure on the whole wings part, like if they only show when she is in her own realm, and not when on the Earth plane? As it has her still flying, but never mentions the wings. I assume she has them, as the cover shows them. But other than that, I had no problems with this story at all.

I am anxious for the next book, AngelStone (Dark Angel #2)

I was able to connect really well with the main character Alyx, she is strong minded, and fierce, which I love to see in a female character.
I was not sure of Isreal at first, but he grew on me, but will say, I really like Jordan, he seems to care what happens to Alyx, and think there will be more to that in the future books.

Here is a cute part where Alyx first meet the mortal she is connected too, I thought it was funny:

“You’re being here is no coincidence, is it?” His eyes narrow. “What are you?”
“What a silly question,” Alyx says, trying not to let her panic show. “I’m a mortal just like you.”
He grins. Alyx feels like an animal that has just been caught in a trap.
“Firstly,” he says, “a real mortal would never call herself a ‘mortal’. And secondly, real mortals don’t come falling out of the sky to land delicately on the ground. No, real mortals break bones doing things like that,” he says this last sentence in a mock hush as if he was revealing some great secret. “Just keep that in mind when you try to pass yourself off as one of us next time.”
Alyx’s breath sticks in her throat, a strangled sort of cry.
But it only seems to amuse him further. “Yes, I saw you drop down to the ground before you knifed that thing. Scaring the living hell out of me I might add.” He glances up at the buildings that loom over them. “What is that, five storys that you just jumped from? Neat little trick. No you obviously aren’t human and you don’t look like one of them. So the question is... what are you?”
“It’s dark. You shouldn’t have seen that.”
“My night vision is fantastic.” He shrugs as if in apology. “Okay. Maybe ‘what are you?’ is too personal a question to ask so soon after we just started our friendship?”

Here is a little of a steamy part for you, much later on in the book:

Alyx traces her fingers across his top lip and presses her mouth to it, soft like the first drops of spring rain, her thumb trapped between the corners of their mouths. A rush fills her head. He gasps. Or does she? She isn’t sure.
She pulls back to look at him. The way he is looking at her is... like he is seeing the stars for the first time.
“Alyx...”
She kisses him again, cutting him off. The world around them dissolves like sandcastles until there are just his lips and his hands.

Also this part with some steam:

Alyx traces his collarbones with her fingers.
“I am sure. I want you. And. I want you to have me. All of me.”
Israel nods. He kisses her again before pulling away. He slips his fingers under her shirt finding her skin. She lifts up her arms. He draws her shirt up off her, his hands dragging along her sides.
Alyx can’t meet his gaze. It is too much. She lowers her eyes as Israel drops her shirt. She can feel him staring at her. She moves to cross her arms over herself but he catches her hands.
“You have no reason to hide,” he says. He leans down to kiss her bare shoulder then runs his lips along her neck up to her ear. “You are so... painfully beautiful.”

Yeah, this book is great. It has it all, you have some great steamy parts, great exciting story with many twist you won’t see coming. I was shocked at one of them. I sure can’t wait for the next book.

I highly recommend this book, it’s a great Paranormal romance, its YA, but with clean steamy parts that will satisfy those that love some swoon parts. It has the suspense and action too. Written very well too.

5 out of 5 stars for sure. A Must read!

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[Lillian · Rating 4 out of 5]

More than anything the path of destiny takes great courage, not the greatest gifts or skill. -Mayrekk

Angelfire the first book of the Dark Angel series by Hanna Peach took me on such a wonderful adventure, full of suspense, twists and turns, and new romance. This series starts with a demon meeting a seraph in a bar called Purgatory, but they are being watched, spied on by another. This prologue hooked me. Then we are introduced to Alyx, the main character who is a lightwarrior for Michaelea, a seraphim city. Alyx is bonded to a mortal Israel. It is her job to protect him at all costs because a bond such as this means that he is destined for something great. But is Alyx up for the challenge? Who can she trust?

Who was this killer? Who was this Rogue? Why could she now feel his presence with her? Why could she hear the strands of his thoughts on her mind like a ghostly melody? Why was she so damn connected to him?

I must say I loved the characters in this novel. Written in third person limited POV, we get a chance to see not only the main character's feelings and what she is thinking but also the other characters. The author does a wonderful job of transitioning into these different POVs with chapter breaks and the way in which it is written tells me the author knows her characters because each one has a distinct personality. Not once when I was reading from Israel's POV did I forget and think I was in Alyx's POV, the writing is just enough different that it helps to define the characters' personalities which is a wonderful achievement!

Alyx is our main character and she is a strong-willed, unsanctioned lightwarrior who, by no fault of her own, bounced from home to home until being taken in by her flock leader Symon. Basically she was an orphan and because of this she has many insecurities about herself, mainly around love and people leaving. I loved watching this character's struggles and I can see just how much she will grow in this series.

Israel is a mortal or is he more? Alyx started having visions, seeing things that Israel was seeing and experiencing as it happened. Israel is a complex character. Also an orphan, he has some of the same insecurities that Alyx has and continually pushes her away when she gets too close.

Not only are the characters great, but the world-building is outstanding! I was sucked right into the Seraphim City, the Purgatory bar, and the mortal world that is caught in-between the demon/seraphim war. Things were described in such detail that I could picture it in my mind. Probably my favorite though is Israel's home when we first meet him, it is an abandoned theater. The descriptions were so good that I felt like I could smell the musty, rotting seat cushions!

So why four stars and not five? Well after the hook in the prologue, we get dropped right in the middle of a scene with Alyx and Symon and I found myself confused. It wasn't until three or four chapters later that things became clear for me and I became interested in the story again. However after that initial confusion I was hooked. I spent the entire weekend reading this series and loved every minute of it!

This story has a little of everything. Angels and demons, magic (through their blood ink), pirates (yes and I loved them!!!). Action-packed, suspenseful, and heartbreakingly romantic at times, I can't wait for the next one!

I received a copy of this ebook from the author in exchange for an honest review.

[Sarah Elizabeth · Rating 3 out of 5]

(Source: Downloaded for free from Amazon.co.uk.)
18-year-old Alyx is an angel (or seraphim) who works as a lightbringer – a soldier in the battle against the demons (or darkenings). Her parents were both ‘rogues’ – angels who went against the rules and fell in love with each other, and were kicked out of the lightbringers.

Alyx suddenly begins having dreams of events that are yet to happen, and gets herself in trouble because of them – the daughter of two rogues cannot possibly be a prophet! But then Alyx finds herself dreaming of one boy in particular – a mortal boy (Israel), and things begin to make even less sense. What Alyx does know though is that she needs to protect Israel, and that she’d give her life to do it.

Alyx is in for even more trouble when a valuable artefact goes missing from one of the guardian’s rooms, and she is somehow implicated.
Why was the amulet stolen? Why does Alyx feel the need to protect Israel? And is there any way for an angel and a mortal to be together?


I really wasn’t sure about this book in the beginning, but thankfully it got better!

Alyx was a girl who knew that she was looked down upon because of her parents, but was also determined to be a great lightbringer, and determined to get what she wanted. She wasn’t afraid to stand up for what she thought was right, and wasn’t afraid to displease people if that’s what happened when she did what she needed to do. She also wasn’t afraid to confront people if she thought that they lied to her, and had a strong moral compass.

Israel was a likeable character, and he grew on me as the story progressed. I had a bit of a difficult time keeping up with a lot of the other characters, but funnily enough, at one point the boy who Alyx was supposed to be ‘entwined’ with (like marriage) grew on me quite a bit too.

I did find the story difficult to get into at first, but thankfully it picked up. I liked the romance most, even though Alyx and Israel’s relationship was a little strange(!), and it was interesting to find out what really happened to Alyx’s parents. Alyx and Israel’s relationship did progress quite quickly it seemed to me, but I think this was needed to get in certain plot points.

The ending was alright, and it was obvious that there would be more books in this series to continue the on-going storylines. I believe this is the author’s debut novel, and I’m guessing that this series will get better as it goes along.
Overall; an interesting start to a angels and demons series.
6.5 out of 10.

[Aman · Rating 4 out of 5]

Reviewed @ Enticed by Books

Oh. My. Goodness! I wasn't expecting to love it this much. Angelfire by Hanna Peach is a shockingly great book with a very well thought out world building. I was a little skeptical going into the book because it has third person narrative, and I'm not the biggest fan of that, they tend to be very challenging, and if not done right, straight-out confusing, but that was not the case with this book. I loved the writing, it was clean, simple, and very addictive. In one word, Angelfire was phenomenal.

Alyx is a lightwarrior (a Seraphim which is another word for Angel) who fights Darkened, demons possessed in a mortal's body. She is the best amongst her group, and besides the basic magic like fire, water, etc, she is gifted with special visions which makes other people very judgmental towards her. The lightwarriors use specific magic by getting a Bloodink related to that particular magic tattooed on their body. That is the only tiny part of the story that is not original, rest assured everything else is unique, well researched, and highly entertaining. There is so much action & mystery going on in every part of the story, and it's interesting to watch everything blend together perfectly at the end.

Angelfire is a take on Angel/Demon mythology. The world created by the author is one of the strongest points of the story, and it was my favorite part, but the back-story of how everything came to be was a bit hazy. We know parts of it, and in specific I'm referring to the Elder's (Head of the lightwarriors) history which was not clear, and did cause some confusion, but that's just minor. The main focus of this novel was for Alyx to find out the truth about the things she has been taught since childhood, discover the lies that had been sewn by the Elders , and to start making right choices for herself. I adored Alyx, she was very strongheaded, she knew the difference between right & wrong, and was not afraid to fight for what she wanted. I can't wait to read more about her, and after that ending, you bet her journey will be something to watch out for.

Overall, I'm so happy to have read this book, it was my last book of 2012, and what a great way to end it. Angelfire is highly recommended to fans of Mortal Instruments series by Cassandra Clare or anyone who likes a different take on Angels & Demons. I, for one, thoroughly enjoyed it.

A Copy was provided by the author for an honest review. (Thanks You!)

[Iris Hunter (InstagramREADS) · Rating 4 out of 5]

Alyx is a young smart woman with special blood tattoos and she is ready to kick some ass. Meet this fantastic new paranormal series from Hanna Peach!



Angelfire is the first installment of the Dark Angel series written by Hanna Peach. I am still figuring out if this is an adult paranormal / urban fantasy or YA. Although there was a tiny romance scene, I still had to use my imagine about what happens in that night between the main characters Alyx and Isreal. But first things first. Hanna Peach has done a fantastic job writting this first installment. The world building is fenominal, its like entering a new world. Angelfire kind of reminded me somhow of the Guardians of Ascension Series by Caris Roane with a strange mix of the movie "the game". Paranormal beings, a kick-ass heroine, action and games. What more can you wish for!

Angelfire is about a place on each that is out of reach for mortals beacuase of kind of shield that makes people turn around and never find out this strange place. Ruled by the Elders living by The Code: obey your Elders, kill all demons, eliminate Rogue-angels, protect the mortals, remain hidden. Their warriors are working in flocks and are the ungifted earthborn angels armed with blades and the ‘borrowed magics’ that is embedded in there body in form of the blood tattoos thy wear on arms and other body parts.

Alyxandria (Alyx) is a young warrior with dreams about a mysterious man Israel. When Alyx saves Israel she discovers they have a Guardian-bond and that she bound to protect him at all costs. Together with their enemies, the romance and a third man named Jordan.


Of course there where some parts where I thought the romance could have come a little bit more in the beginning of the book, maybe when she was having her visions or was dreaming about Israel. And there where some dictionary parts/ explaining some of terms from the book at the beginning of a chapter that interrupted to much and therefor pulled me out of the story.


Overall I enjoyed this book. Is a great read for the YA fans. There is lots of action and when you least expecting it, Hanna gives it an extra notch that keeps you suspended till the end. Let me know what you think of this book!

[Linda · Rating 5 out of 5]

If you are looking for an enthralling new epic fantasy about angels and demons, this may be the series you are looking for. Ms. Peach has created a fascinating world of epic proportions with intrigue, betrayal, battles, demons, and traitorous angels surrounding Raphael's Blood Prophecy. This story is a roller-coaster ride of twists and turns as Alyx slowly uncovers truths that have been concealed for centuries. Friendships are tested, conspiracies are revealed, new relationships are forged, and love tries to bloom.

This story is told through Alyx, a young Lightwarrior. She is intelligent, head-strong, flawed, and well written. As are all of the characters in this story and there are several. Each character holds a different piece of the puzzle and no one is telling the whole truth. Ms. Peach is setting up an epic battle between good and evil where the boundaries are blurred just enough that there is no black or white. With Alyx coming into her own as a free-thinker she is discovering no one is who she believed them to be and historical facts have been altered by the Elders.

I think I can safely say there are many more surprises to come in this story. I can sense the hierarchy of Elder angels and Lightwarriors being turned upside-down. This is the first book of the series setting up things to come so it didn't surprise me when I was left hanging. At least there are sequels published with more to follow... and I've heard rumors that all have cliff-hanger endings.

Format/Typo Issues: No significant errors.

**Originally written for "Books and Pals" book blog. May have received a free review copy.** January 7, 2014

[Violet · Rating 4 out of 5]

I would like to say a HUGE THANKYOU to the author for giving me this book to review for free.

Hanna Peach really has a nice way with words. Her descriptions of the worlds and the different elements between angels and demons was perfectly described. I actually felt like I was there, literally experiencing and seeing it all through the characters' eyes.

The beginning really dragged on and did take me a while to get into it. But some chapters in and I was hooked and caught my interest to read on. And as the first book in the series it really did have me surprised, intrigued and wanting to know more.

The characters were ALL nicely written - especially Alyx who was just the right amount of kick-ass! :)
The other characters fit well into the story cause they didn't seem to just be put in there for the sake of having more characters. It balanced the story out really well and they all fit as they all had a real and reasonable purpose in the story.

The world building was done really, REALLY well. And EVERYTHING just fit and came together in a nice package of Angelfire.

Besides some minor spelling/grammar mistakes, this book is greatly written and I would recommend ANYONE and EVERYONE to pick it up and give it a go. Ms. Peach really put a lot of thought in the world of angels and demons, magical elements, the romance, the characters and the entire storyline and it all works.

Thanks Hanna Peach again and happy reading to you all. :)

[Loren · Rating 4 out of 5]

I received this book in exchange of an honest review...

OK... so O M G! This book is not what I was expecting and in a very good way. OK, so you might be like me and it might take you a few chapters to get the hang of it. To be honest, at the beginning it is a little bit confusing but please, please, don't stop. Keep going, cause it is just so nice to find a book that takes your preconceived ideas of good vs evil and turns them upside down. OK, maybe not upside down but at least reminds you that nothing is black and white.

The heroine is pretty likable, things happen at a different pace (usually faster than normal), not everything gets solved (leaving you asking for more, but in a good way) and in general I liked most of the characters that needed to be liked and despised those that needed it too. The best part is that the lore is so different from what you might be used to when it comes to Angels and Demons. Hope the next books are as great if not better than this one. Please Ms Hanna Peach, don't disappoint me.

Cannot wait to read the other books and hopefully find out why the heck God kicked them out of Heaven, cause I seriously doubt Lucifer had anything to do with that. Or at least not in the way the Elders claim.

[Lanie (Lanies Book Thoughts) · Rating 4 out of 5]

Angelfire is not what I thought it would be, it was much much better. Alyx is a pretty awesome MC, she's tough, but she's still got a big heart. Unlike a lot of heroines, Alyx can't be classified as one stereotype, she's very well rounded. I thought the mixture of demons,angels, and mortals was interesting. Earth isn't really earth anymore, it's like a deconstructed version of modern times. Demons take people over and the seraphim try to destroy the demons and "protect" the mortals.

Alyx is an 18 year old seraphim who loves fighting and winning her competitions, however as the book progresses she learns she's meant for more. She's learning that she has a choice, she no longer has to mindlessly follow her Elders. There's a lot of twists and turns when it comes to who's good and who's evil. Most of the characters are well developed, some of them are cool, others are tools.

Overall, I thought it was a great start to the series. It's a refreshing take on the whole angel and demon genre, not your basic story with this one. There's some mystery, romance and of course action an adventure throughout the book. I'd recommend it, and look forward to reading the next book.

[Vanessa · Rating 5 out of 5]

Wow, wow, double wow. It is not easy or a writer to get a five star rating from me, yet Hanna Peach's Angelfire had me hooked from page 1. Loved the storyline and the writing is excellent. The writer's imagination takes you on a veritable joy ride with non stop action and emotional roller coaster rides. The subject matter is fresh and interesting; characters are three dimensional,their psychological growth leaves you begging for more. Enter a world in which lightwarriors are battling demons and a pub named Purgatory. Be embroiled in Alyx's life as she becomes the fulfillment of an age old prophecy. The novel has everything- paranormal, supernatural, magic, romance, action- a smorgasbord of delights, which leaves you craving more.I have dived directly into the second novel with no hesitation whatsoever. Angelstone promises even more delights!
Hanna Peach is a writer to take note of and when she publishes something, grab it before you lose out.
I loved it- so will you!

[Jennifer · Rating 5 out of 5]

It took me a while to get into this novel. But once I hit around 40% that was it I was turning page after page eager for more.

The 1st 40% of the book is not bad, it's just setting the scene, introducing the characters and explains the various 'abilities' that the Angels can weild.

For me the romance in this book is secondary to the conflicts and deception of the two communities of Angels and Demons. There is betrayal, friendship, deception to name but a few of the conflicts and this leads to a riveting read.

The author really knows how to set the scene and this book is well worth a read and would not be out of place amongst some of the mainstream fantasy writers. I look forward to the remainder of the series.

Please note that I was provided with a copy of this book in return for an honest review

[Emma · Rating 4 out of 5]

I really enjoyed this novel, and I anxiously await the second!

[Amanda [darjeeling_and_jade] · Rating 5 out of 5]

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Angelfire gripped me from the first chapter. It dropped you right into the action and the world of lightwarriors and Darkened, demons who use their human disguises to suck the life force from other humans. Alyx is one of these lightwarriors, Seraphim whose job is to find the demons who have possessed humans and take care of them. Of course, everything can’t be as simple as all that. Alyx has strange visions, which leads to suspicion and undesired attention. She feels like her she’s meant to be a lightwarrior and she’s worried that the visions will threaten that when the rumors spread that she’s the next Seer. Angelfire is a great start to her story that is just the right amount of self-discovery, romance, and plot-thickening. I’m excited to see how it continues in the next book.

Balancing her new ability and the gossip it brings is not easy for Alyx. All she wants to do is fight Darkened, something that she feels born to do. She feels powerful when she’s able to bring down a Darkened with her flock mates. With rumors swirling around her, she feels like she can’t act normal. It doesn’t help that the visions are compelling her to follow them, convinced that what she’s seeing is happening in real time. Alyx is a powerful fighter and character; following her as a character meant that we were constantly in the action, which could be nerve-wracking at times. Alyx has her own agency and tries to have some measure of control over her life and growing secrets. It often gets her into trouble. She has a hard time backing down from a slight on her parents and has difficulties controlling her rage when they are brought up. There are a few people that she’s willing to swallow her pride for, even if it goes against her instinct. If there’s anything Alyx needs to do it is to control her emotions. There are times when she’s all over the place and it makes her act rashly. It is better to keep some things secret as long as you can.

I loved the two main characters, Alyx and Israel. I hated when they made mistakes that could have been solved just by talking to each other. Israel is consumed by righting a wrong that occurred in his past, and Alyx is forced to help him due to their connection. As their relationship grew, so did the things that she kept secret from him, convinced that in order to help them, she needed to keep her feelings hidden. It was a weird experience to read that because of how conflicting it was. There were several times when I made “This is upsetting me” noises because of how ridiculous they were being. Just talk to each other! Toward the end of the novel more characters were introduced. There wasn’t a lot of time left in the book for them to be really expanded on, so I’m hoping to see more characterization in the second novel.

The setting of Angelfire is wonderful. Thousands of years ago, the Angels were locked out of heaven and now have to live in elder run cities that exist hidden on earth. The cities are named after the powerful elders and seem to be run by their namesake. Michaelea is located in the forests at the foot of a mountain range, hidden in the depths far from mortal eyes. If a mortal happens across it, they are compelled to turn away. It’s cloaked, and only those who know it’s there can get into the city. The city is vivid, with training grounds, living quarters, and social areas where dinner and Entwinement ceremonies occur. There is a culture that is detailed through showing rather than an information dump. One of the more important sources of their power is bloodink, tattoos made of pure magic. Lightwarriors are able to draw on the magic inked into their skin when they need to dispose of Darkened bodies, search caverns with air, or get people to sleep. It was really cool. I’m disappointed that more of the story didn’t happen here because there seems to be a rich backstory hiding underneath the action. It seems like Hanna Peach has more that she could say about Michaelea and its customs, but didn’t want to bog down the narration with it. I hope that I can read more about the other cities in the next novels. Luckily the mortal world is just as interesting. I particularly liked the underground city and would love if a separate story happened here. There’s a bit more risk when Alyx is in the mortal world. She can’t always fly and has to match her look to that of a mortal. Wearing tons of blades openly will get a few looks.

The plot was really interesting. At first I was worried that it sounded similar to the Nephilim of Mortal Instruments fame / infamy, but it quickly turned out to not be the case at all. There was just the right amount of hinting at things to come: it got me hooked, but didn’t give too much away. I anticipate that each book will gradually build on that, revealing secrets in each of them until the conclusion of the series. It is a slow build and I appreciate that we’re not given everything right away. I also have a strong suspicion that things are not the way they seem and believe that some of the things we know as truth now may not turn out that way in the end. At least, I hope so.

I’m really excited to continue reading this series. Angelfire had a nice balance of characterization, setting, romance building, and prophecy dropping in it. I hope more answers about characters and their roles will come in the next novel.

5 stars.

[Preri · Rating 3 out of 5]

Review to come.

I wrote a longass review for this book, and then it got deleted. FML.

[Cyle · Rating 4 out of 5]

GENRE: Paranormal
THEME: Angels/Romance/demons
RECEIVED: Author
BLOG: http://seeingnight.blogspot.com/

REVIEW:
This book was definitely unexpected; debut author Hanna Peach does a fantastic job creating a world where Angels and Demons walk among mortals. The plot is crafted with a ton of twist and well-developed characters. I’m definitely going to be continuing this series.

Angelfire follows Alyx who is a Seraphim aka Angel that fights demons (Darkened) who can take over the human’s body when they are on earth. She is one of the best fighters among her flock of warriors. They have skills in magic using water fire, dreams and more. But Alyx has an extra gift and that is she can see visions. But when Alyx visions show her the people whom she’s supposed to trust are lying Alyx starts to go against them and follows her instinct. Which bring her to earth and to a mortal named Israel whom her visions have been pushing her towards.

Alyx is a trained warrior angel, which makes her tough and very determined. At some moments it was very clear on who the actual villains were and I just wished that Alyx could have seen what was right in front of her. Sadly she has grown up surrounded by lies and I enjoyed watching her journey as she discovers the truth. Also I loved learning about her past and hope the readers get to know more about her parents. She is a character that follows her instinct and heart; she wants the truth and will fight and protect those who need her.

I don’t want to give away much about the other character since they are key to the plot. Israel is a boy that Alyx is protecting, he hold answers that she needs and he wants to help her fight the demons that he has dealt with many times. I liked that the male character was the weaker one, though the readers will find out there is more that meets the eye with him. I didnt however connect with Israel as much as I would like for the main male character, he was lacking that spark I look for. Jordan is a fellow Angel like Alyx that has become a rogue angel, leaving behind the place Alyx and he grew up thinking was safe. I’m very curious about him as well and the readers do get some history about him too.

Overall I enjoyed this fast paced and very well thought out story. There are a lot of details, magic and names to learn but for me it wasn’t hard to follow. Peach made it easy to understand the world she created and I never felt overwhelmed. She did mention that if I liked the Mortal Instruments that I would hopefully enjoy her novel, I do see minor similarities but I feel this was very original and stands apart from the other series. There is romance but it’s minor, I wished there was more but I felt that it gives me more to look forward to in the next book. This was a great debut and I can’t wait for the next book in the Dark Angel series.

RECOMMENDATION:
This is a young adult novel that will get the heart pumping with an action packed story of angels and demons. Fans of the Mortal Instrument series by Cassandra Clare and the Hush Hush series by Becca Fitzpatrick will want to get there hands on Angelfire by Hanna Peach.

[Lori · Rating 4 out of 5]

PJV Quickie: An interesting take on the war between Angels vs. Demons, Angelfire is an all around entertaining book with plenty of mystery and romance to keep the reader coming back but the ending feels incomplete.

Alyx leads a tough life as a light warrior. Even within this low class system of Angels she is an outsider. Abandoned by her rogue parents she feels she must always work harder than every one else to prove her worth. Her whole life changes when she starts recieving visions. She soon learns her destiny is bigger than even she can imagine and that her whole life has been covered in shadows.
I loved this take on Angels. I didn’t really feel like I was reading about angels. They were more kick-a$$ warriors that had cool powers and fought demons. Alyx is strong, stubborn and tough. Very little gets her down and nothing keeps her down. No matter what she stays true to what she believes in. I admire that about her character. She may be small but she works hard to be sure that this is never a disadvantage to her.
I, at times, found this new angel mythos a bit confusing. I am not a religious person so most of my point of reference comes from the TV show from Supernatural. About half way through the book everything started clicking together and I genuinely started enjoying the story. The little lesson chapters on bloodink (angel ink that has been distilled and is used in tattoos to give magical powers) and the angel magic had also stopped so maybe I was just over-thinking a bit.
Okay, Okay so angelic warriors using tattoos for extra power is not exactly something that is new. I think Cassandra Clare fans will immediately see similarities in those things. However, for the most part this book stands on it’s own. That is where the similarities between the two works start and finish.
I’m action girl. If the author can write gripping -fast paced action scenes then I will always be a satisfied reader. Reading about Alyx flipping through the air and using her swords was beyond awesome.
The book overall was evenly paced and was easy to keep coming back to. Every time I set down my kindle I came back wanting more. No typos that I can recall, the writing was clean and well edited.
My biggest complaint was the ending. I finally felt like I was getting a good grip on the characters and what was happening and the book ended. I was like “uhh…that’s the ending”. It’s like when you are watching your favorite show and the final scene is incomplete or just fades out with giving you that final piece of information you have been waiting six episodes to see.
Overall I recommend this book for readers that are looking for a good angel tale, who like lots of action and a kick-a$$ heroine and love books that come in series. I also recommend it for people who do not hate cliff-hangers, because this one is a doozy.

[Victoria Limbert · Rating 5 out of 5]

Angelfire is a truly good book by a very talented Author.

I was offered this book for review and I am so glad I have read it and fully intend to buy the rest of this series to follow Alyx, Isreal and the others on their journey. Also loving the angsty romance budding and hope there is more angst in the future.

Alyx is a Lightwarrior, not particulary gifted but an exceptional fighter. She has a troubled past, is stubborn and kicks ass more often than not. Still, its nice to see her flaws and weaknesses. Though Alyx has a very strong 'voice' throughout Angelfire, she can be indecisive and too trusting.

Alyx has been having visions of a man who is killing Darkened (demon spirits possessing human bodies) and through this link she develops a bond, called the Guardian-Bond, a rare thing to happen and with that comes emotions and feelings she doesnt understand. The night she feels him in danger and flies to rescue him marks the night that everything in Alyx's world is turned upside down. Those she has trusted all her life have lied to her, the teachings her Leaders have taught her have been fabricated and beneath it all is an evil plot and betrayers around every corner and Alyx is at the very centre of it. The man, Israel, she is Guardian-Bonded with is entwined with her destiny completely.

I love Alyx. She is the girl I would want to be best friends with, I would trust her with my life. She is strong and brave and fights to do what feels right. Hanna Peach has developed her so well, this delicate little warrior who is beautiful and stands tall in the middle of chaos, who is loyal and passionate about every decision she makes, who inspires others around her to be better. Israel, the man bonded to her, though a bit frustrating, is a wonderful character and he kind of reminded me of Disney's Aladdin (I am not sure why) but he lives on the streets, fends for himself, steals food to live and, having trained in Parkour, can jump from building to building with little effort. the development of his and Alyx's relationship is refreshing. There is no insta-love, but time to understand each other, a time to let feelings grow between them.

What I really enjoyed about the book were the magical elements, the Bloodink tattoos which contain magic, and the descriptions used to help the reader visualise them as they were being used. They were unique and beautifully written.

I did worry whether I would like Angelfire for the first 10% as it is a little slow to start and many names to keep track of, but as the story progresses the reader is sucked in to a whirwind of betrayal, lies and evil plans. The ending was a little abrupt, but it definately makes me want to get book 2 and I cant wait to read it.

[Naomi · Rating 4 out of 5]

After reading the blurb I knew that this is going to be an awesome book and it certainly lived up to my expectations!! The first chapter is an encounter of a meet in purgatory which already had me intrigued. Then we meet Alyx and learn about her and her place amongst the angels; what her role is, that she has been having visions and has had a tough upbringing.

Alyx has learnt from an early age that she has to look after herself since she was abandoned by her parents when she was born. Her flock leader, Symon raised her since then and has been the only person she has been able to count on. She is a tough character as she is an immortal and always puts her duties first, not questioning anything until she meets a Rogue who gets her thinking.

Alyx is dedicated to do her work but finds it hard to stick up for herself. The longer I read though, the more I liked her. She starts to question her beliefs and people begin to notice her and try to keep her under control. She is very talented as she has fulfilled most of her marks at an early age and she is a unique Angel. No matter what happens though she tries to think for herself and is able to see who is trying to manipulate her. It is hard for her to allow people to get close but once you earn her trust she will guard you with her life.

Israel is an honest person and once he meets Alyx you can see they already have a connection. They will need to work together to remain alive and to figure out the Blood Prophecies which were foretold by Raphael before he died. The Blood Prophecies were a great twist into the building plot and I like the way it is headed as Alex doesn’t realise how big of a part she will play in it.

The Blood Tattoos were an interesting concept that I really liked. The angels tattoo themselves with the ink of another Angel so that they can use different magics that may not be in their bloodline. The author even writes small paragraphs in between chapters to detail the use of each magic and I found it really helpful in grasping the whole Angel/magic concept.

I enjoyed this book from cover to cover. There are plenty of lies, deception, action and lust. Just when I thought I knew what was going to happen, Hanna would throw in a twist which would take us in a different direction. There were times I was saying “Don’t do it!” and the characters would, of course do it!! Angelfire was an entertaining read and I can’t wait to see what happens next because that ending left me wanting more!!

I received a copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review.

[Kachuu · Rating 1 out of 5]

First, thanks to Hanna Peach for giving me her book in exchange for an honest review!

Well, this is five piece installment, and I'd prefer to review the entire series, because I felt that this first piece was rather short, so perhaps the problems I had with it would solve themselves throughout the rest of the books? Hopefully?

I liked it, but not loved it.

I think the concept is great, and it gave me a "The Mortal Instruments" sort of vibe, but it moved way to fast for the things that were actually happening. What I mean is there was one sequence after another, they kill some demons, they spied on some demons, the infiltrated Michaela, got captured, tortured and rescued all in what, 20 pages?. And all of this didn't really move the plot any further. Besides, the relationships between Alyx and her fellow angel friends was so little explored that I could feel nothing for Passar's predictable betrayal. And although I wanted to know more about the Angels-Demons world and mythology, there was little about it.

Also, the love interest was a little bit forced. Alyx realized that she had this especial connection and was automatically in love with Israel? And the same the other way around. They met for five minutes and already love each other? And what bothered me further was that in spite of the connection, of the fact that Alyx says she feels what Israel feels, because she was basically in his mind, she somehow can´t feel that he loves her or cares about her and ends things in the most predictable and insipid break-up ever.

Maybe I'm being a little too harsh, but again, I got four more books to read on this story, so hopefully there will be more character, relationship and plot development there!

I do want to read the next one, and that is a great compliment to any book I read!

[Sven · Rating 4 out of 5]

I received a free copy of this book from the 'Lovers of Paranormal' Group for an honest review.

4.5 stars

Firstly, hats off to Hanna Peach for coming up with such a awesome plot. I loved it! And plot is the main thing I look for in a book. If there's plot, I'll love it. The book was a bit difficult to understand at the beginning because BAM! We are thrust into this world with no clue of what's going on. But that made me want to read even more than before.It made me curious.

The blurb kinda made me feel that this was going to be another YA Paranormal novel about forbidden love, but I'm glad I was proven wrong. For once we had a dominant heroine who was supposed to protect the male protagonist, not the other way around. The female was a supernatural creature, not the guy. Speaking of which, I didn't like how romance progressed in this book. It's the only thing that prevented me from giving it 5 stars. Alyx is tied to Israel through an ancient guardian bond. I wish their relationship started out as a bromance kind of thing with both of them slowly falling for each other. And I didn't even realize when they made love. The only thing mentioned pertaining to romance except for the fiery tingling on skin and stuff was a teeny tiny kiss.

There are several complete new and unique elements in this book. I totally loved those. All the angel hierarchy and bloodinks. Btw, Micheal's a complete bastard. But I don't like that two of the characters are named after countries.

I had a love/hate relationship with the ending. I can't wait to start book 2! Btw, Hanna Peach, if you are reading this, can you make book 3 available as an ARC too? I'm not old enough to own a credit card to buy books online. Pleeeeeese? Pretty please with a cherry on top? Thanks.

[Mel (Reviews In A Pinch) · Rating 4 out of 5]

I received a free copy of this book from the author on GoodReads in exchange for an honest review. The ultimate battle for the Earth will apparently be between angels and demons, at least according to most fictional literature. I figured Angelfire would be another average supernatural/fantasy book. Boy was I wrong and happy to admit it. This novel (283 pages on the Nook) had me completely sucked in. There were some grammar and spelling mistakes that I was surprised were missed in editing. It didn’t have a slow start, but the author throws you right into the main character, Alyx’s world, which was kind of confusing. I felt like I was playing catch-up trying to figure out who people were and how things worked in this novel’s world. It was well worth the effort of sticking with it though. The last time I was so completely enthralled in a story was in Panem with Katniss Everdeen. Frankly, I’m not really sure when or how it happened. I was reading along and next thing I know I’m done, it’s dark out and after 11pm. I had to show some self-control and not immediately buy the second book to continue the saga. The story line was a creative take on well-known figures, Seraphim (or angels). If you go into Angelfire expecting traditional angels then you are going to get one heck of a shock. These angels kick some major butt and harbor secrets that rivals those of the demons. I personally can’t wait to buy book #2. Unless you absolutely loathe the fantasy genre, I would highly recommend Angelfire.

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[Keliiyy · Rating 3 out of 5]

Before I begin, I liked to thanks Hanna Peach for giving me a copy in exchange for an honest review

3.5 :)

Overall, it's an interesting start to a angels and demons series.

Alyx's, a lightwarrior, life changes when she starts having visions - an unusual gift. She soon learns her destiny is bigger and dangerous than even she can imagine. When I was reading it, I kept forgetting they're angels. They were more like superlative warriors that had cool gifts and slain demons. I like her, she's strong, she doesn't care about rules and she cares a lot for the people she loves.

I did find the story difficult to get into at first, and I kinda felt confused in the beginning, I didn't understand it immediately but thankfully it picked up. I liked the bond between the couple, even though Alyx and Israel’s relationship was a little strange - can't wait to read book 2 to get more of it. Hanna Peach spin in many different elements in this book, there is betrayal, deception and friendship. This made Angelfire saturated - in a good way, of course.

Israel was alright, didn't really get him yet but he's sweet and genuinely cares for her so that earned him some bonus! I can't wait to know more about Israel in the next installment.

And I loved how Hanna added in the Lightwarrior's protocols when a new gift is introduced.

[Cheryl Duval · Rating 4 out of 5]

I received this book in exchange for an honest review from the “Lovers of Paranormal” Group on Goodreads.com

Never have I read about Angels like this. This is such an ingenious twist on what we are suppose to believe. Alyxandria is a low level angel who is pulled into a conspiracy that changes everything she thought was true and real in her life. She finds that she has been lied to her entire life and betrayed by those closest to her.

The attention to detail in this book is more then amazing. From the description of Michaelea City to the specifics of battles there is no detail overlooked. I could visualize the story as I read it.

Alyx is a strong, well written character. She takes time to come into her own and she still has a way to go but I love her. I am having a little difficulty warming up to Isreal, his personality is a little lackluster and flat. I hope to see more of his personality emerge in the next book. Some of the Elders are pure evil and so easy to hate! I liked the way the Lightwarrior's Protocol was incorporated into the story.

Creative, imaginative, ingenious and very well written. I am very much looking forward to reading the next book in the series!

[Maryblack · Rating 5 out of 5]

Angelfire Dark Angel #1

I was given this book by the Lovers Of Paranormal in an exchange of an honest review

At first I thought that the series would not be anything different from all the other angel-demon book I've read. I am grateful to say that not only did they fullifill my expectations but they surpassed them!

Alyxandria's- the main heroine- world is completely magical though built on lies. A world where the 'just and righteous' are corrupted and the evil are raising an army to win this world and terminate humanity.

Alyx a warrior (angel without gifts) is standing right in the middle waiting for the chaos to hit her, not to mention her job as guardian to a mortal or so they think.

Hannah's writing is steady and full of twists and turns. By the time I finished I wanted more!!

[Sharon · Rating 4 out of 5]

I received this book in exchange for a review.

Alyx is a seraphim without powers. Because of this she has been trained as a warrior against demons. Something strange begins happening to her. She can "see" a rogue killing somebody. As she explores this strange occurrence, she discovers that she is a guardian for Israel and that the Elders have been lying to them.

I enjoyed the book. There were very few errors in the book. It presents the war between angels and demons. It is presented well and leaves the reader wanting to know more. I'll be reading the next book in the series.

[Shayna Varadeaux · Rating 4 out of 5]

I received this book in exchange for an honest review.

Four Fabulous Stars!

Alyx is an un-gifted earthbound angel. She's a warrior to the Earthbound Angels. She uses blades and "borrowed magic" from distilled angel blood tattoos to disperse demons and rogue angels.
Symon is like a father, and he's in charge of her unit, since her parents abandoned her to become rogues.
She's a daring one. Illegal night races and such.
I like her as a character.
Strong yet feminine. But not whiny.
And after the announcement ball oh wow! Yea and that's just the first jaw dropper I encountered!

A warrior
A gift
Lost Prophecies
A Conspiracy
Tattoos
Promises
Friends
Betrayals
And Even Love?

What more could you ask for?!

The first ten chapters kind of drug along. And from there to chapter fourteen it was hit and miss for me.
Chapter sixteen marks my need to know point when my nails get bit. I zone out and the outside world is essentially gone.

Getting lost in a book is the reason I read! It turns into a mental movie and from chapter sixteen on I found my reading picking up seriously. Its a really fast paced ride after the bombshells Alyx uncovers.

This definitely turned out to be a delightfully good read!
Definite Kudos to Hanna Peach!
Let me just say I would go crazy if I didn't have the ARC of Angelstone in my possession!!!
I RECOMMEND THIS SERIES!!! It's a standing O!



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So Alyxandria is an ungifted earthbound angel.
She's a lightwarrior and a good one. Even though she's still in school. Mentored by Symon her father figure since both parents left her to become rogues.
She uses borrowed magic by way of tattoos. It's pretty cool.
She's having dreams or visions. Some speculations point toward Oracle... interesting.
She gets sent to get specially trained by a very grumpy yet gifted Mayrekk.
She's getting great tips plus no straight answers from him. Only hints and shushed convo.
There's definitely a bigger picture she frustratingly can't see.
She meets the mysterious Jordan who says find me when you need me and you will....
Hmmm

Mayrekk has her "find" someone he only calls "him" and she does but still gets no straight answers!
She goes to the "announcement" ball and gets "promised" to the son of Michael the lead elder.... Daniel.
He showed interest before but now calls her "my promised".... creepy LOL.
He's a Castus aka popular and privileged earthbound angel.
He's a bit pushy... Yea that's it.
Her friends are happy for her but not with her. They feel abandoned mostly and she's stunned and bewildered.
She just wants to be a lightwarrior. Fighting the darkened is all she's known.
Then it happens. She has a vision or dream of "him" and he's in danger. Alyx has an overwhelming need to help him. She goes at a moments notice and saves him from a darkened. He shouldn't be able to see what they really are.
She makes him leave only after she promises to meet him again.
she is quickly gaining the suspicion of her peers with her cover up but has no choice but to follow her gut.
Later Michael calls her to a meeting.
She's punished and not allowed to leave the city for four weeks.
No more lightwarrior status, only patrol duties til she's entwined with Daniel. Great! Now how's she supposed to meet "him" and get her blade back?!
She sneaks into the restricted part of the records hall and finds more than she bargained for in the Rogue file.
Truth... about Jordan and about her parents unsanctioned pregnancy and escape. Plus that one died trying to take her from the city and the other is out there somewhere.
She confronts Symon and he begs her to let it be. She leaves and sneaks out to meet "him".
They touch just once and she feels bound to protect him. He felt it too but she leaves quickly. His name is Israel.
On her way back she stumbles upon Daniel and the evil Castus vixen Constantine. But Daniel's quick with answers and Alyx knows he's lying. She heard plenty, including the fact Michael is the one who matched them.
Speaking of Michael he was talking about her and she overheard that too. Prophecies and what not. He took loafs of threads from the archives restricted section. Now she won't read about this prophecy. That was before she went to meet Israel.
Anyway after Daniel trying to sweet talk her and her not buying his phony bologna it goes to a scene of her and Symon. They're weapons training.
Alyx can't seem to focus but who blames her with the whoppers she's been unearthing! She thinks she sees Israel the mortal and gets knock on her behind.
Later that night Israel appears in her room. Apparently thinking about her brought a semi see through version of both together. Both in their own rooms but together and they can touch....
They talk till morning.
She goes to Mayrekk he explains that she's Israel's guardian and must protect him because he has an important destiny.
He tells her to find the prophecy.
She breaks into Elder Michael's pod and finds confusing info.
She was spotted by an animale. A familiar of an Elder. But they're blaming her for stealing an amulet she didn't take. She's warned by Symon and has to hide out.
She has to find a way to out Michael's evil plan.
She has to leave so she slips out of the city. She finds Israel and stays the night with him.
The next day they ho to the market which was fun.....
Then they spar... and Alyx gets to train him to fight.
I'm loving their chemistry!
They are definitely getting closer and Alyx isn't sure what to make of that.
They go to arm up and break into an antique store when they're spotted by Yael and Do'hann.
They give chase and have to drop to the underground. In the sewers they encounter Israel's old gang. He has to invoke Horatii. Mason chooses the fighters and he chooses Terrapin and Alyx... needless to say that pretty much peeves Israel but there's nothing he can do but watch!
Well I bet you are wondering who won that fight and how it went down.... but I am not going to tell you!
I will say they made their peace.
Mason the head of the gang.
Mason takes them back to their place and feeds them and honor Alyx and rename her Dark Angel to the Clan of the Saints.
Offering their help in times of need and an open door.
It's bed time and Mason comes to talk to Alyx.
He tells her that he knows how she feels about Israel. He had told Israel earlier that he knew how he felt about Alyx. They're so obviously falling hard for each other when an awkward conversation between them has Alyx downplaying feelings they have for each other. Putting it off as a Guardian Bond thing. (Really!! That was frustrating!)
She learned earlier that Mason knew what she was and that Israel has second sight.
Alyx and Israel decide to sleep a few hours and head out in the morning.
Back at the theater Alyx finally realizes she's free. Free of the rules and the Elders. She flies with Israel. They talk about scars and tattoos.... and they finally kiss!!!!! They go back to the theater and make the most of their night.
That night Alyx awakens in a dreamscape with Elder Michael. He's trying to find her location.
She and Israel leave the theater.
An abandoned warehouse is their new refuge...
They go out to search for Adere and find mythical greater demons.
Michael tries to torture Alyx in a nightmare that Jordan rescues her from! She goes to meet him and when she steps out, Adere visits Israel's dreamscape.
Gets him to meet her at Remembrance Park where he's captured by Michael's lightwarriors. Meanwhile Alyx is back at the warehouse looking for him when they appear to each other through the guardian bond.
He's being held in a cell in the Hollows. Alyx goes to Jordan for help and Michael has talked Gabriel out of his piece of the Trinity amulet. Alyx and Jordan sneak into Michealea the Seraphim City. They knock out two lightwarriors guarding Mayrekk's house. Mayrekk fesses up about Raphael's prophecy and what a whopper!!!!
He gives her a necklace that Raphael left for her then tattoos her with all the bloodink he has left.
She goes to the Hollows and gets captured.... ugh!
Michael demands she tell him which piece of her jewelry leads to the third amulet piece. She says she hasn't a clue and he lashes her back with a whip. He leaves her passed out covered in blood. Israel tells her about his relationship with Adere and she convinces herself that he loves Adere and not her. But Passar her friend breaks them and a young human girl out. He's leading them to safety when Alyx puts two and two together. Passar is working for the demons now...
She eventually puts him out with DreamWalker and runs into Jordan and two other rogues. They send Lukas ahead with Israel and the girl from the Hollows and turn to hold off the lightwarriors.
Alyx tries to tell them the truth but they are stubborn and the demons Passar called are quickly approaching. Alyx suggests they fight the darkened together but the lightwarriors think she is with the darkened. When they approach she uses sparrow to her advantage and tells them they are with the sparrow and need help against the lightwarriors.
It gets them a chance to get away but she knows in that moment she sealed her fate and will never be allowed to return home.
Holed up in Tara with Jordan Alyx calls the girl Mini and it sticks. She eats like she's never had food before and all she has said is min-ee.
Israel awakens after being knocked out ....again! Alyx is there and she tells him he has to stop looking for Adere. He says he can't and Alyx is resolved. She tells him there can be no "us" and they agree to be friends but the heartbreak is clear...
And just as all the pieces are falling into place as Jordan and Alyx talk with linked hands..... to be continued!!!!!!
LOL way to go Hanna Peach!!!