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I really wanted to like this instalment after being disappointed with the first two books in the Night Prince series. I tried really hard not to get irritated by the awful heroine but that failed spectacularly, which was a shame since I actually like the Night Huntress world and have enjoyed past heroines/heroes. I just couldn't with the ridiculous Leila though, she was such a bland insufferable cow.
-There wasn't much of a story, there were no decent twists or turns or good action scenes or funny moments. It was a simple plot consisting of Vlad and his enemy (Szilagyi) trying to kill each another. It wasn't thrilling or edge of the seat stuff, it was so obvious how things would play out.
It didn't help that Szilagyi was a cookie cutter villain with generic dialogue/actions and petty reasons behind his war with Vlad. Even when he captured Leila and skinned her alive, there was never a moment where it felt like he was intimidating or a genuine threat, he was just so flat and cartoonish.
-Leila and Vlad had very little chemistry, their relationship was so forced and nonsensical. I honestly didn't even get why Vlad could have feelings for Leila, how could he have fallen in love with someone so vanilla and generic? On top of that most of the time his 'love' for Leila didn't come across as passionate or even believable, it was plain unconvincing. I did on the other hand believe Vlad's love for Clara (his dead wife), despite Clara only ever being mentioned a few times their love actually came across as genuine and epic, unlike the tepid 'love' Vlad had for Leila.
-It didn't help that Vlad treated Leila more like an errant child than a partner/wife. His attitude towards her wasn't sweet or protective it was cringey, and it only ended up making Leila look like a silly, pouty child that didn't fit into Vlad's world. Ugh, it was embarrassing to read their exchanges sometimes.
-I absolutely LOATHED Leila's irritating inner voice, did she think she was in Fifty Shades of Grey or something? Her bitchy, insecure, whiny inner voice was one of the worse aspects of her character.
Also, all her lame one liners and cheesy threats against far older and powerful vampires didn't make her seem strong or snarky it just made her seem like a grade A thicko.
-Was Leila worrying about Vlad and giving him advice to be strong when she was just about to be tortured and raped supposed to be admirable or brave? If anything it made Leila even more of an insufferable corny Mary Sue.
-I rolled my eyes at Leila's ridiculous guilt for kissing Maximus when she was out of her mind, what she did was a natural response after getting blood when she'd been starved, but the silly cow did nothing but berate and hate herself for it. She even felt guilty for wanting it to happen again despite only wanting it so she could be strong and healthy for an escape/fight. Her guilt and shame was dumb and over the top considering the dire circumstances she was in. Ugh, her thoughts and feelings about something that was necessary and couldn't be helped were beyond irritating, she was such a twit. Oh, and then there was her guilt at trying to kill Vlad when she'd been spelled to do so and didn't have any memory or control over it whatsoever. Her martyrish-I'm-always-guilty-over-things-I-have-no-control-over personality was infuriating to read and the absolute opposite of likeable.
-Vlad used to be endearing, interesting and entertaining in Cat's books but in his own/Leila's he was mostly blah. There was nothing swoony, funny or memorable about him. Even Maximus and Samir came across as more interesting than him. Maybe, I'm just over the cookie cutter alphas with dark pasts and snowflakey powers.
-Leila couldn't stop mentioning that whenever Vlad smiled or spoke in a friendly manner it meant he was at his most dangerous, why did she feel the need to keep banging on about that boring, already established and obvious fact? She also kept going on about his powerful aura, his locked out emotions, his secret pain and his tortured past. I already knew about all those the first 50 times she mentioned them all, I didn't need to be hit over the head with his unoriginal and uninspired personality again and again. I'm pretty sure all the repeated mentions of all things Vlad were done to try and make him seem nuanced, enigmatic and interesting but Leila's thoughts were so superficial, repetitive, and banal that it ended up achieving the exact opposite.
-What a prick Leila's dad was, she should have told him to piss off after the way he'd treated her for her years. It was obvious he didn't love her all that much, he was the one that was at fault but he blamed her for everything and made her beg and do all the work in their relationship. I wish Leila had gotten a backbone and just told him to piss off instead of acting all sad and pathetic about him.
-Loved Gretchen, she was great. I would have much preferred her to be the heroine than boring Leila.
-Loved the brief appearances of Cat/Bones/Mencheres.
-What was the point of Mircea and the necromancy spell on him/Leila? It felt like he was only added to be another villain-of-the-week so that the series could be needlessly extended to four books instead of three. Ugh.
Overall, not a fun read.. Mainly because of the immature-uninteresting-snowflake heroine who thoroughly ruined the story/the hero/the romance. I hope Ian and the other male secondary characters in the Night Huntress world never get their own story, they'll only end up being ruined as well by ending up with some variation of a boring-insufferable-Mary-Sue-vanilla-twit. Ugh, no thanks.