A Simple Mistake - a suspense short story

by Randall Allen Dunn

Sybil Strang can’t help being suspicious of the nervous man loitering in the convenience store at closing time. But did she really see a gun inside his rolled-up newspaper?

Young Sybil Strang is ready to close up Quick’s Convenience Store when a man with a scraggly beard enters and begins wandering the aisles. A man who might be hiding a gun.
But with the deputy just five minutes away and a phone in the back room, there’s no reason to panic. As long as Sybil was right about what she saw …

13 pages, Kindle Edition

First published November 20, 2012

About the author

Randall Allen Dunn a.k.a. D.A. Randall


Randall Allen Dunn was raised on a steady diet of James Bond, Batman, Star Trek and Indiana Jones. He writes stories of action, adventure, and infinite possibility, as well as instructional books about writing.
You can follow him on Facebook, Twitter, Pinterest, Goodreads and YouTube, and follow his Packing Action blog at www.RandallAllenDunn.com.
Please send comments or feedback to: Randall@RandallAllenDunn.com

Reviews

[Chris · Rating 3 out of 5]

Enjoyable. The girl takes a huge risk and gives a man a second chance.