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Mackenzies & McBrides #5.5
The Untamed MacKenzie
A WOMAN OF BREEDING MEETS A MAN OF NO STANDING…
To redeem her family’s disgraced name, Lady Louisa Scranton has decided to acquire a proper husband. He needs to be a man of fortune and highly respectable in order to restore both her family's lost wealth and reputation. She enters the Marriage Mart with all flags flying, determined to find the right bachelor.
But Louisa’s hopes are dashed when the Bishop of Hargate drops dead at her feet—and she is shockingly accused of murder! Soon, Louisa’s so-called friends begin shunning her, because the company of a suspected killer is never desirable in polite society.
The problem comes to the ears of Detective Inspector Lloyd Fellows, by-blow of the decadent Scottish Mackenzie family and an inspector for Scotland Yard. He has shared two passionate kisses with Lady Louisa–and vows to clear her name. For not only does he know she’s innocent, he recognizes he’s falling for the lovely lady.
Fellows is Louisa's only hope of restoring her family's honor—and it is he alone who intrigues Louisa in a way that may be even more scandalous than murder…
* Includes a preview of the upcoming novel, “THE WICKED DEEDS OF DANIEL MACKENZIE”
To redeem her family’s disgraced name, Lady Louisa Scranton has decided to acquire a proper husband. He needs to be a man of fortune and highly respectable in order to restore both her family's lost wealth and reputation. She enters the Marriage Mart with all flags flying, determined to find the right bachelor.
But Louisa’s hopes are dashed when the Bishop of Hargate drops dead at her feet—and she is shockingly accused of murder! Soon, Louisa’s so-called friends begin shunning her, because the company of a suspected killer is never desirable in polite society.
The problem comes to the ears of Detective Inspector Lloyd Fellows, by-blow of the decadent Scottish Mackenzie family and an inspector for Scotland Yard. He has shared two passionate kisses with Lady Louisa–and vows to clear her name. For not only does he know she’s innocent, he recognizes he’s falling for the lovely lady.
Fellows is Louisa's only hope of restoring her family's honor—and it is he alone who intrigues Louisa in a way that may be even more scandalous than murder…
* Includes a preview of the upcoming novel, “THE WICKED DEEDS OF DANIEL MACKENZIE”
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First published September 10, 2013
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Jennifer Ashley
210 books7,330 followersNY Times Bestselling author Jennifer Ashley writes historical, contemporary, and paranormal romance, historical mysteries, and urban fantasy as Jennifer Ashley, Allyson James, and Ashley Gardner.
Jennifer's novels have been translated into many different languages, and earned starred reviews from Booklist and Publisher's Weekly. More about her books at http://www.jenniferashley.com and http://gardnermysteries.com.
Jennifer's novels have been translated into many different languages, and earned starred reviews from Booklist and Publisher's Weekly. More about her books at http://www.jenniferashley.com and http://gardnermysteries.com.
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July 30, 2020
4.5 Highland warriors have gone soft Stars
first read 5/9/2015
Reread 8/27/2016
Re-reread 7/1/2017
Rereread 7/30/2020
*Spoilers*
OMG Lloyd is just as yummy as the other MacKenzie brothers plus he is a cop. Anyone who knows me knows I have a thing for uniforms so double yummy! The Untamed MacKenzie was a total hit for me the only reason I gave it 4.5 stars instead of 5 is I needed more. More Lloyd and Louisa. More of their romance. I wish Lloyd would have got his own full novel although I will say this was a bigger novella. Daniel Mackenzie is in this book a lot and I loved the hell outta him. Danny shines in all the books he is in , but he really stood out in this one and I can't wait for his book! Louisa and Lloyd had tons of chemistry. The murder mystery kept me intrigued and the story flowed well. I love the brothers bonding. A great addition to the series!
Below I leave a few of my favorites quotes from this book:
“Then why do I think about kissing you every time I see you? I should be at my sister’s ball, hoping one of the gentlemen I dance with will propose to me and solve my troubles. Instead, I ran off with you the moment you beckoned. Whenever I see you, I know I don’t want duty and properness—I want the wicked things my brothers-in-law whisper to my sisters-in-law when they think I don’t hear them. I want to do those things with you, not with the young men I was raised to expect to marry. Please, explain to me how I can be so innocent with those desires in my head.”
“Listen to yourself. Poor martyred Louisa. I predict that Fellows will solve this murder and then sweep you off your feet.” Daniel shrugged. “Well, the sweeping-you-off-your-feet part might take a little nudge. But he wants to do it. It’s a beautiful thing to watch the way he looks at you. Fellows glared at Gil tonight as though he wanted to find a claymore, learn how to use it, and finish him off. Or just pull out a pistol and shoot him.”
“That and a word with Uncle Hart to hurry Hargate’s chances of getting into the House of Lords. Only room for so many bishops’ bums on the seats there. Someone has to die before another can come in the front door. Hargate wanted to be moved to the top of the list. I told him he was optimistic about Hart opening a way for him. Hart’s harder to blackmail than anyone I know. Trust me. I’ve tried. My ears still hurt from the drubbing he gave me.” Daniel rubbed the side of his head. “Of course, I was only ten at the time and not practiced.”
I am on to the next one :)
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first read 5/9/2015
Reread 8/27/2016
Re-reread 7/1/2017
Rereread 7/30/2020
*Spoilers*
OMG Lloyd is just as yummy as the other MacKenzie brothers plus he is a cop. Anyone who knows me knows I have a thing for uniforms so double yummy! The Untamed MacKenzie was a total hit for me the only reason I gave it 4.5 stars instead of 5 is I needed more. More Lloyd and Louisa. More of their romance. I wish Lloyd would have got his own full novel although I will say this was a bigger novella. Daniel Mackenzie is in this book a lot and I loved the hell outta him. Danny shines in all the books he is in , but he really stood out in this one and I can't wait for his book! Louisa and Lloyd had tons of chemistry. The murder mystery kept me intrigued and the story flowed well. I love the brothers bonding. A great addition to the series!
Below I leave a few of my favorites quotes from this book:
“Then why do I think about kissing you every time I see you? I should be at my sister’s ball, hoping one of the gentlemen I dance with will propose to me and solve my troubles. Instead, I ran off with you the moment you beckoned. Whenever I see you, I know I don’t want duty and properness—I want the wicked things my brothers-in-law whisper to my sisters-in-law when they think I don’t hear them. I want to do those things with you, not with the young men I was raised to expect to marry. Please, explain to me how I can be so innocent with those desires in my head.”
“Listen to yourself. Poor martyred Louisa. I predict that Fellows will solve this murder and then sweep you off your feet.” Daniel shrugged. “Well, the sweeping-you-off-your-feet part might take a little nudge. But he wants to do it. It’s a beautiful thing to watch the way he looks at you. Fellows glared at Gil tonight as though he wanted to find a claymore, learn how to use it, and finish him off. Or just pull out a pistol and shoot him.”
“That and a word with Uncle Hart to hurry Hargate’s chances of getting into the House of Lords. Only room for so many bishops’ bums on the seats there. Someone has to die before another can come in the front door. Hargate wanted to be moved to the top of the list. I told him he was optimistic about Hart opening a way for him. Hart’s harder to blackmail than anyone I know. Trust me. I’ve tried. My ears still hurt from the drubbing he gave me.” Daniel rubbed the side of his head. “Of course, I was only ten at the time and not practiced.”
I am on to the next one :)
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March 25, 2015
"You are the beauty I’ve been seeking all my life. My existence was dark, grim, full of struggle, until you. You are the light that pushes the darkness away. When I’m with you, I can see my way, and I can breathe again."
A short review for a shortie :D
Well, Fellows was never one of my favorite characters in this series, but he warmed up to me here :)
It was a lovely romance, though the three stars go to the uninteresting story/mystery.
Oh, and it was wonderful to see everyone from the previous books <3
January 10, 2016
My MacKenzie Love Affair continues with the
illegitimate MacKenzie, Detective Inspector Lloyd Fellows
Detective Inspector Lloyd Fellows is the illegitimate son of the Duke MacKenzie. He thinks his life was bad. Growing up poor, and envying the life of his brothers and their wealth. Little did he know the brothers he envied were being beaten by his dad every night. Lloyd grew up to hate his brothers to point of obsession. But life is full of surprises. And his brothers have far more love in their hearts than their father was capable of.
Lady Louisa Scranton is the naive sister of Isabella, sister in-law to Mac MacKenzie. Her life has been full of scandal from her sister's elopement and separation, to her father's investment schemes. She is now being accused of murder, and needs the help of Detective Fellows to clear her name.
I wasn't looking forward to this book as much because I wasn't a big fan of the hero and heroine from previous books. Jennifer Ashley does a great job of helping me get over that dislike some. I really wanted to like Lloyd, but I can't say that I like him anymore after reading his book, than I did before hand. Which is a shame. He was so uptight, wound tight, and out of place. The one love scene was not what I had wanted or hoped for, for a virgin's first time.
This book was OK, but if you choose to skip this one, I don't think you will be missing much. It's a solid 3 star read. I did enjoy all the interactions with the rest of the MacKenzie clan. I truly love this family of characters that JA has created. I can't wait to read the next book because it involves Daniel MacKEnzie.
Sexxy MacKenzie Reviews:
The Madness of Lord Ian Mackenzie
Lady Isabella's Scandalous Marriage
The Many Sins of Lord Cameron
The Duke's Perfect Wife
A Mackenzie Family Christmas: The Perfect Gift
The Untamed Mackenzie
The Wicked Deeds of Daniel Mackenzie
Scandal and the Duchess
Rules for a Proper Governess
illegitimate MacKenzie, Detective Inspector Lloyd Fellows
Detective Inspector Lloyd Fellows is the illegitimate son of the Duke MacKenzie. He thinks his life was bad. Growing up poor, and envying the life of his brothers and their wealth. Little did he know the brothers he envied were being beaten by his dad every night. Lloyd grew up to hate his brothers to point of obsession. But life is full of surprises. And his brothers have far more love in their hearts than their father was capable of.
Lady Louisa Scranton is the naive sister of Isabella, sister in-law to Mac MacKenzie. Her life has been full of scandal from her sister's elopement and separation, to her father's investment schemes. She is now being accused of murder, and needs the help of Detective Fellows to clear her name.
I wasn't looking forward to this book as much because I wasn't a big fan of the hero and heroine from previous books. Jennifer Ashley does a great job of helping me get over that dislike some. I really wanted to like Lloyd, but I can't say that I like him anymore after reading his book, than I did before hand. Which is a shame. He was so uptight, wound tight, and out of place. The one love scene was not what I had wanted or hoped for, for a virgin's first time.
This book was OK, but if you choose to skip this one, I don't think you will be missing much. It's a solid 3 star read. I did enjoy all the interactions with the rest of the MacKenzie clan. I truly love this family of characters that JA has created. I can't wait to read the next book because it involves Daniel MacKEnzie.
Sexxy MacKenzie Reviews:
The Madness of Lord Ian Mackenzie
Lady Isabella's Scandalous Marriage
The Many Sins of Lord Cameron
The Duke's Perfect Wife
A Mackenzie Family Christmas: The Perfect Gift
The Untamed Mackenzie
The Wicked Deeds of Daniel Mackenzie
Scandal and the Duchess
Rules for a Proper Governess
October 8, 2013
Such a wonderful, hard earned, well deserved, happily ever after!
The Untamed Mackenzie is a novella, book 5.5 in the Highland Pleasures series. This is Inspector Lloyd Fellows’s story, the Mackenzie by-blow of the late and not-so-great Duke of Kilmorgan. Lloyd has had to fight his way through the streets, through hunger, through all the things no child should have to deal with, but he did it and came out on top, as one of London’s most distinguished, successful, inspectors.
To redeem her family’s disgraced name, Lady Louisa Scranton has decided to acquire a proper husband. He needs to be a man of fortune and highly respectable in order to restore both her family's lost wealth and reputation. She enters the Marriage Mart with all flags flying, determined to find the right bachelor.Jennifer Ashley has struck gold with these Mackenzie men, each and every one a force to be reckoned with. Tormented, tortured, and brutalized by life… these are men in need of a woman’s love. And though he might not carry the name or have been raised at Castle Kilmorgan, but Lloyd Fellows is a Mackenzie through and through.
But Louisa’s hopes are dashed when the Bishop of Hargate drops dead at her feet—and she is shockingly accused of murder! Soon, Louisa’s so-called friends begin shunning her, because the company of a suspected killer is never desirable in polite society.
The problem comes to the ears of Detective Inspector Lloyd Fellows, by-blow of the decadent Scottish Mackenzie family and an inspector for Scotland Yard. He has shared two passionate kisses with Lady Louisa–and vows to clear her name. For not only does he know she’s innocent, he recognizes he’s falling for the lovely lady.
Fellows is Louisa's only hope of restoring her family's honor—and it is he alone who intrigues Louisa in a way that may be even more scandalous than murder…
I absolutely enjoyed his story, and to be honest, I wasn’t sure I would. For one, it's a novella and novellas are never enough when it comes to series' I love. But we've had book after book to get to know Lloyd, and that makes his story not feel like a novella at all. But that wasn't my only concern. I mean, he wasn't raised Scottish. He wasn't raised in a kilt. He doesn’t speak with that sexy brogue… but let me tell you…he is Scottish, he does wear a kilt, and he might not have a sexy brogue, but he knows how to use his mouth, just the same.
Lady Louisa is a wonderful match for Lloyd. The more he pushes her away, the more she pulls him back. They’re perfect for each other, not only in their similarities, but also in their differences, and this makes for a lovely happily ever after story.
I'm excited to read Daniel's story next!
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July 2, 2013Fellows and Louisa's story. Out in September 2013.
September 14, 2013
4.5 stars, rounded up to five because -- it's the Mackenzies!
I adore the Mackenzies, so there was little doubt that I would enjoy this novella featuring Chief Inspector Lloyd Fellows, illegitimate half-brother to Hart, Cam, Mac, and Ian. We've had glimpses of him before; in The Madness of Lord Ian Mackenzie, he was something of a villain, determined to pin a couple of murders of prostitutes on Hart and Ian. But when Ian's new wife, Beth, figured out that Fellows was a Mackenzie by birth, the family immediately embraced the man, and his mother, whom their late, unlamented father had cruelly ignored. Ian, who noticed everything but didn't always understand what he had seen, figured out immediately how Fellows fit into the family.
Before that, however, the story opens with a heart-rending flashback scene where a very young Fellows contrives to reveal himself to his father. Not surprisingly, it doesn't work out well. His hatred and resentment toward the Mackenzies has disappeared, but Fellows still does not feel comfortable moving about in their world. Now, he must interrogate a bunch of toffs to figure out which of them murdered the Bishop of Hargate at a fancy garden party in Richmond. Louisa is the obvious culprit, but he knows she could not be guilty, and he doesn't think twice about lying and covering up evidence in his quest to find the real murderer. I doubt that they ever would have gotten together though if Louisa had not taken the initiative.
It is great fun to see all of the Mackenzie brothers, their wives, and their children, but as in the Christmas novella, Daniel Mackenzie (Cam's nineteen-year-old son) steals every scene that he is in. If you're eagerly awaiting his book, due out on October 1, 2013, you'll be tantalized by the excerpt at the end of this novella.
I thoroughly enjoyed this story, but deducted half a star for two reasons.
I adore the Mackenzies, so there was little doubt that I would enjoy this novella featuring Chief Inspector Lloyd Fellows, illegitimate half-brother to Hart, Cam, Mac, and Ian. We've had glimpses of him before; in The Madness of Lord Ian Mackenzie, he was something of a villain, determined to pin a couple of murders of prostitutes on Hart and Ian. But when Ian's new wife, Beth, figured out that Fellows was a Mackenzie by birth, the family immediately embraced the man, and his mother, whom their late, unlamented father had cruelly ignored. Ian, who noticed everything but didn't always understand what he had seen, figured out immediately how Fellows fit into the family.
“All of us are mad in some way,” Ian said. “I have a memory that won’t let go of details. Hart is obsessed with politics and money. Cameron is a genius with horses, and Mac paints like a god. You find out details on your cases that others miss. You are obsessed with justice and getting everything you think is coming to you. We all have our madness. Mine is just the most obvious.”In Lady Isabella's Scandalous Marriage, Fellows helped find the man who was trying to kill Mac, and he once again practiced his crime-solving skills in The Duke's Perfect Wife. Moreover, he had his first personal encounter with Lady Louisa Scranton, younger sister of Mac's wife Isabella, when she brazenly dared to kiss him. Their encounter was brief but portentous:
He was not quite sure what had just changed in his life, but the world felt different, and he would make certain that he and Louisa continued to explore what had begun in this room.Fellows and Louisa shared another, more passionate, kiss under the mistletoe in A Mackenzie Family Christmas: The Perfect Gift. Afterward, however, he returned to his solid middle class life in London, while Lady Louisa resumed socializing with all of her aristocratic friends. Both of them recognized their unsuitability, and yet . . . :
Mr. Fellows, a working-class man with scandalous connections and illegitimate birth, was a most ineligible bachelor. But he kissed like fire, and he’d stirred a longing in Louisa’s heart she’d never forgotten.That is the set-up for the events in this wonderful novella, where Louisa is an unlikely murder suspect in a crime that Fellows is assigned to investigate.
Before that, however, the story opens with a heart-rending flashback scene where a very young Fellows contrives to reveal himself to his father. Not surprisingly, it doesn't work out well. His hatred and resentment toward the Mackenzies has disappeared, but Fellows still does not feel comfortable moving about in their world. Now, he must interrogate a bunch of toffs to figure out which of them murdered the Bishop of Hargate at a fancy garden party in Richmond. Louisa is the obvious culprit, but he knows she could not be guilty, and he doesn't think twice about lying and covering up evidence in his quest to find the real murderer. I doubt that they ever would have gotten together though if Louisa had not taken the initiative.
It is great fun to see all of the Mackenzie brothers, their wives, and their children, but as in the Christmas novella, Daniel Mackenzie (Cam's nineteen-year-old son) steals every scene that he is in. If you're eagerly awaiting his book, due out on October 1, 2013, you'll be tantalized by the excerpt at the end of this novella.
I thoroughly enjoyed this story, but deducted half a star for two reasons.
March 11, 2018
3 Stars
I was wondering why Lloyd’s story was a novella because he’s technically half of a Mackenzie, but after reading The Untamed MacKenzie I was really disappointed in this book.
I was really excited for Lloyd because he has been in the previous books a lot and there was a huge scene with him and Louisa in the Christmas novella. I wanted this book to be super romantic and have it show a side of Lloyd we didn’t see, but it didn’t.
Louisa is in trouble and only Lloyd can solve the case and save Louisa. The entire book is about Lloyd saving the case and as much as I like a murder / mystery book, I didn’t want that to the be the focal point of the plot.
I wanted the couple to be the driving point of the plot and it wasn’t. I felt like like the romantic or the relationship building was on the back burner for me and I was skimming to get through to the ending.
Very disappointing since I was excited for Lloyd’s story. It’s also so sad how he grew up and the beginning is very sad and I kind of wanted a little more relationship talk between Lloyd and the other Mackenzies.
I was wondering why Lloyd’s story was a novella because he’s technically half of a Mackenzie, but after reading The Untamed MacKenzie I was really disappointed in this book.
I was really excited for Lloyd because he has been in the previous books a lot and there was a huge scene with him and Louisa in the Christmas novella. I wanted this book to be super romantic and have it show a side of Lloyd we didn’t see, but it didn’t.
Louisa is in trouble and only Lloyd can solve the case and save Louisa. The entire book is about Lloyd saving the case and as much as I like a murder / mystery book, I didn’t want that to the be the focal point of the plot.
I wanted the couple to be the driving point of the plot and it wasn’t. I felt like like the romantic or the relationship building was on the back burner for me and I was skimming to get through to the ending.
Very disappointing since I was excited for Lloyd’s story. It’s also so sad how he grew up and the beginning is very sad and I kind of wanted a little more relationship talk between Lloyd and the other Mackenzies.
February 23, 2018
3 1/2 "Finally" Stars!
I was very happy to see Lloyd and Louisa find their HEA. They'd been dancing around each other for a bit. Mr. Lloyd Fellows, the unclaimed Mackenzie of course thought Lady Louisa Scranton was above him; so he had to try very hard to resist. Plus there was a nice little mystery to solve.
I do love these Mackenzie men. Their passions are unrestrained; and once they decide on a lady they are done. I'm diving right into Daniel's story because he reminds me of Ian in some ways. I love Ian best! But Daniel is going to be wild, I'm sure.
"You are the beauty I’ve been seeking all my life. My existence was dark, grim, full of struggle, until you. You are the light that pushes the darkness away. When I’m with you, I can see my way, and I can breathe again." ~Detective Inspector Lloyd Fellows
Happy reading!
I was very happy to see Lloyd and Louisa find their HEA. They'd been dancing around each other for a bit. Mr. Lloyd Fellows, the unclaimed Mackenzie of course thought Lady Louisa Scranton was above him; so he had to try very hard to resist. Plus there was a nice little mystery to solve.
I do love these Mackenzie men. Their passions are unrestrained; and once they decide on a lady they are done. I'm diving right into Daniel's story because he reminds me of Ian in some ways. I love Ian best! But Daniel is going to be wild, I'm sure.
"You are the beauty I’ve been seeking all my life. My existence was dark, grim, full of struggle, until you. You are the light that pushes the darkness away. When I’m with you, I can see my way, and I can breathe again." ~Detective Inspector Lloyd Fellows
Happy reading!
May 27, 2023
⭐⭐⭐
3 stars.
➕ What I liked :
The hero was not a aristocrat/nobility.
Somewhat interesting character. (The hero.)
Rather interesting mystery.
Interesting side characters.
The hero was not a womanizer.
➖ What I disliked:
Some parts were rather clichéd.
Some parts felt rushed and needed to be a little bit more fleshed out. (a longer story/plot was needed.)
The chemistry and romantic build up was lacking and needed more depth.
The why and how of why the main characters feel in love was rather lacking.
The sex scenes were underwhelming.
A little too much focus on the murder mystery and not enough on the romance or the main characters.
The hero was little bit too aloof/stoic.
3 stars.
➕ What I liked :
The hero was not a aristocrat/nobility.
Somewhat interesting character. (The hero.)
Rather interesting mystery.
Interesting side characters.
The hero was not a womanizer.
➖ What I disliked:
Some parts were rather clichéd.
Some parts felt rushed and needed to be a little bit more fleshed out. (a longer story/plot was needed.)
The chemistry and romantic build up was lacking and needed more depth.
The why and how of why the main characters feel in love was rather lacking.
The sex scenes were underwhelming.
A little too much focus on the murder mystery and not enough on the romance or the main characters.
The hero was little bit too aloof/stoic.
March 13, 2021
An enjoyable short novel about a Mackenzie b*stard, Lloyd Fellows, who falls for Isabella's sister Louisa. This one was a murder whodunnit, actually, and as usual for me with whodunnits, I didn't guess the killer. LOL. I loved Lloyd and Louisa together, and the class difference was not a problem. Very nice read.
November 15, 2017
Lady Louisa Scranton needs to marry well. Her family seem to create scandal wherever they go, her sister Isabella eloping with a Mackenzie only to separate from him and her father robbing half the ton of their money only to be found out and leaving her and her mother almost destitute. Marriage to a respectable gentleman seems the answer, even if the only man she dream of, who she shared two passionate kisses with is the man she wants, so when the Bishop of Hargate asks for her hand, she almost says yes…only he drops dead of poison before she can answer him. Chief Inspector Lloyd Fellows, bastard half brother of the Mackenzies, has been called to look investigate the murder of a Bishop, and when he sees Louisa is a suspect he vows to clear her name and try and keep his hands off her. But it is much harder then he thought when the lady in question looks at him with such simmering passion in her eyes…
We have come to the end of the first generation of Mackenzie men, what are your thoughts, does Fellows lead them off with a bang?
Suzanne: I can’t believe a whole generation of sexy Scottish Mackenzies have gone already, I loved every book, including Fellows. He was all repressed passion with lust and love just bubbling under the surface ready to be released on one lucky lady. Although Fellows book may not have been my favourite, he definitely didn’t let the Mackenzies down, and I now can’t wait to get to Daniel’s book to see which woman will be able to capture his attention.
Annie: I was one of those readers who was interested in reading Fellows’ story. Though I don’t necessarily think he is up to par with the rest of the Mackenzie men, I did enjoy his story. I’m glad Ashley had the chance to give Fellows his own novella because I think it brought greater insight to his character and also, it tied up some loose ends in the series.
How were the main couple, did Louisa and Fellows have the same chemistry as the previous couples?
Suzanne: After the two kisses that Louisa and Fellows shared in previous books, I was ready for them to have an explosive and passionate romance…unfortunately that never seemed to come to pass. They did have chemistry together and the few hotter scenes between them were great, but I just wish there was more of them together like that.
Annie: Being that this is a novella, the length very much played a part in how much I enjoyed the story. I was very impressed by the setup that Ashley managed to do with this story, but I also felt like it was a little rushed in some parts and slow in others. Fellows and Louisa have great chemistry, but I don’t think it truly burned bright in comparison to the other books in the series.
What are your thoughts on the next book in the series?
Suzanne: I can’t wait for Daniel’s book, he is full of charisma and that Mackenzie charm, although I don’t think he is as intense perhaps as his father or his uncles, I still have high expectations for his book
Annie: Gimme gimme gimme! I am SO excited for Daniel’s book! I truly wasn’t expecting him to get his own book, but please don’t let that stop it from coming out. I wonder how Ashley will make a man out of Daniel. He’s always seemed a little goofy and young in the previous books of the series, so I am eager to see how Ashley shows some character growth!
*ARC provided by publisher
February 1, 2025
I have a hard time giving Jennifer Ashley books anything but 4-5 stars because I enjoy her style so much. In this installment of the MacKenzie series, Lloyd Fellows and Louisa finally come together. We’ve seen them dance around each other in past books, so it was about time.
Lloyd’s at Scotland Yard, so of course there has to be a murder for him to solve. Side note: JA has said she has considered a spin off series where Lloyd and Louisa solve mysteries with his constables as secondary characters.)
There was a bit of a jump at the end, where the denouement reveals info we never even saw hinted about. That was a little odd, but we got our happily ever after.
Lloyd’s at Scotland Yard, so of course there has to be a murder for him to solve. Side note: JA has said she has considered a spin off series where Lloyd and Louisa solve mysteries with his constables as secondary characters.)
There was a bit of a jump at the end, where the denouement reveals info we never even saw hinted about. That was a little odd, but we got our happily ever after.
December 14, 2021
Another great book in the Mackenzie & McBrides series — Lloyd finally gets his much deserved HEA.
January 2, 2020
You have got to love 💘 the Mackenzies and Jennifer Ashley. Such a good plot and story about Lowell and Louisa HEA.
Totally a nice listen for me and love the H/h. Hard to stop listening and didn't put down until I finished late in the morning. This series has not disappoint and the narration takes some getting used to with this book but was well done.
4-Stars
Totally a nice listen for me and love the H/h. Hard to stop listening and didn't put down until I finished late in the morning. This series has not disappoint and the narration takes some getting used to with this book but was well done.
4-Stars
January 7, 2015
There are some series that are totally addictive and Jennifer Ashley's Highland Pleasures is one of them. The Mackenzies have completely woven their way into my heart and I am always eagerly waiting for the next book!
Ms Ashley certainly captured my interest with the intriguing developments between Inspector Lloyd Fellows (the Mackenzies' illegitimate half-brother) and Lady Louisa Scranton (younger sister of Isabella, Mac Mackenzie's wife) in the previous books. They had shared two passionate kisses and something definitely sparked between them. But it seemed that spark was never to be ignited.
After her father died, disgraced and penniless, Louisa is determined to find a suitable husband to help restore her family's reputation. As much as Lloyd Fellows might stir her blood like no other man, his illegitimate birth and working-class background make him totally unsuitable. Lloyd Fellows' dreams may be haunted by the beautiful Lady Louisa Scranton but he knows that a man of his humble origins could never aspire to such a lady of breeding.
It takes a dramatic turn of events to finally bring these two together again, when Louisa becomes the main suspect in a murder case and Lloyd is called in to investigate.
Lloyd has always been the ruthlessly dedicated policeman...never a man to show his emotions. So I enjoyed seeing his obvious love and concern for his mother which reveals a much softer and caring side to him. His overwhelming need to protect Louisa is pretty awesome...even to the point of being willing to sacrifice his own job.
It is easy to sympathise with Louisa's feelings of bewilderment...her whole world has been turned upside down. She knows she's innocent but even former friends are quick to shun her. But, she is braver than she thinks, particularly when it comes to trapping the real murderer.
The romance between them is tender, poignant and passionate. I was amused by the scene when Lloyd is initially questioning Louisa about the events surrounding the murder. On the surface, he is the cool, calm, professional policeman but, all the time, he is having difficulty keeping his hands off her! The sexual tension is heightened by a sense of the forbidden and, when they finally succumb to their feelings, look out for a pretty steamy scene in Lloyd's office!
Of course, the whole Mackenzie clan makes an appearance and I just love seeing a further glimpse into their lives beyond their own books. When Mac says to Louisa - "Remember, Louisa, we are always here to catch you." – it seems to embody everything I love about the Mackenzies…that unbreakable family bond. I have to admit that I just adore Daniel Mackenzie...funny, charming, smart, perceptive and not above trying his hand at a little matchmaking.
I enjoyed how the murder mystery unfolded and there were just enough red herrings to keep the plot moving, and the identity of the murderer quite a surprise.
Jennifer Ashley has yet to disappoint with this series and THE UNTAMED MACKENZIE is another worthy addition. Now I'm eager to read Daniel's story and luckily there's not long to wait until 1 October.
REVIEW RATING: 4/5 Stars
SENSUALITY RATING: HOT
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March 13, 2022
Una novelita de época para pasar el rato. Nada memorable, unfortunately.
September 29, 2013
I had a tough time getting into this one but it was probably because I'd just left a post-apocalyptic, UF world that I loved and that was on my mind. I probably should have done a reread of something for a transition so I can't blame this book for my sluggishness at fully engaging.
Jennifer Ashley is back to her solid Mackenzie writing in this lovely book where Lloyd Fellows -- the bastard Mackenzie -- finally gets his HEA. Those who have read the Christmas novella know he's got a thing for Lady Louisa Scranton and vice versa, but how can she possibly settle for a duke's bastard who's a mere Detective Inspector? By surviving her own family's scandal, that's how.
But things get worse for Lady Louisa and Lloyd is there to help her stand tall against a legal system that caters to the demands of the aristocrats who couldn't give a rat's patoot about anyone but themselves. Even another aristo is not safe when one of them wants something.
It's a good story and we see our old Mackenzie friends. Daniel takes a nice featuring role in this one and makes me even more excited for his story.
I love the Mackenzie series. The family is so quirky and full of love, they've even managed to soften Lloyd a bit. Every time I crack a new one I'm happy to be back in their world.
It's probably more like a 4.5 in truth, but easily rounded up for enjoyment and suitable novella length. On top of that it was -- and still is at the time of writing this review -- only $1.99. Highly recommended.
Jennifer Ashley is back to her solid Mackenzie writing in this lovely book where Lloyd Fellows -- the bastard Mackenzie -- finally gets his HEA. Those who have read the Christmas novella know he's got a thing for Lady Louisa Scranton and vice versa, but how can she possibly settle for a duke's bastard who's a mere Detective Inspector? By surviving her own family's scandal, that's how.
But things get worse for Lady Louisa and Lloyd is there to help her stand tall against a legal system that caters to the demands of the aristocrats who couldn't give a rat's patoot about anyone but themselves. Even another aristo is not safe when one of them wants something.
It's a good story and we see our old Mackenzie friends. Daniel takes a nice featuring role in this one and makes me even more excited for his story.
I love the Mackenzie series. The family is so quirky and full of love, they've even managed to soften Lloyd a bit. Every time I crack a new one I'm happy to be back in their world.
It's probably more like a 4.5 in truth, but easily rounded up for enjoyment and suitable novella length. On top of that it was -- and still is at the time of writing this review -- only $1.99. Highly recommended.
January 20, 2015
Finally! Lloyd and Louisa's story! I liked this one, just not as much as the others. Lloyd is still an alpha-male of few words and all action. Louisa is still a good girl trying to thread the needle of propriety, all the while wishing she could have her heart's desire, society be damned.
The story was good, however, the pacing was off and there was a lot of over description that became repetitive. I found myself skimming when the characters would think things - the same things - over and over.
In the end, I liked their story, but I wish Still, it was fun to see how all of my favorite characters were fairing.
The story was good, however, the pacing was off and there was a lot of over description that became repetitive. I found myself skimming when the characters would think things - the same things - over and over.
In the end, I liked their story, but I wish Still, it was fun to see how all of my favorite characters were fairing.
September 25, 2017
Gotta say I did not expect to love Fellows but I did. He was a terrific hero even though it took him FOREVER to get off his ass! It was full of intrigue and I did not predict the bad guy. Couple was not together enough - which was disappointing.
August 31, 2021
Apesar de mais pequeno, não consigo deixar de adorar este livro e todas as personagens.
Adorei o pequeno mistério que se encontra neste livro.
O casal principal: Luísa e Lloyd Fellows mereciam um livro maior.
Não há como não gostar desta família MacKenzie.
A minha família de sonho 💗
Adorei o pequeno mistério que se encontra neste livro.
O casal principal: Luísa e Lloyd Fellows mereciam um livro maior.
Não há como não gostar desta família MacKenzie.
A minha família de sonho 💗
October 13, 2020
Já tinha saudades desta autora mas confesso que tinha grandes expectativas para este livro depois de já conhecermos a história do irmão bastardo dos livros anteriores faltou-me mais romance embora perceba que o foco era provar a inocência de Lady Louisa e ele ter que provar o valor enquanto investigador...foi tudo muito rápido no final!
September 12, 2013
****3.75 stars****
My first Mackenzie and almost certainly not my last!
I'm a novella lover who often complains (rather vociferously, in fact) that the majority of today's romance novels are of a pointlessly, frustratingly excessive length. This is one of those very rare cases, however, when I found myself wishing the author had written a bit more. With both a murder mystery and a romance to present to us in relatively few pages, neither seemed quite as richly developed as I might have hoped. I also found myself not having much of a handle on Louisa's character: she seemed like a mildly likable but rather generic heroine to me, with even supporting characters who got far less page time seeming to be more sharply and carefully defined. Our hero, Lloyd Fellows, is an uncommonly driven, intense detective who's got a not-so-secret passionate side. I liked him despite the fact that he's a bit perpetually pissed off and anger-prone for my personal taste, but that's how many heroes are written these days, and I gather he'll be a tad more cheery now that he's gotten his HEA. ;)
Jennifer Ashley's actual prose and dialogue didn't necessarily 'wow' me, but she's so good at actually telling a story----a sadly underrated skill these days, when many books feel like just a series of random conversations---that I found myself impressed by her writing anyway. She balanced action with emotion quite skillfully. The mystery was engaging enough to hook me, albeit not exactly one that would turn Dame Agatha Christie green with envy.
Even as a newcomer to this series, I found myself enjoying the glimpses we got of the other Mackenzies, so I'm guessing veteran Mackenzie fans will find that aspect of this novella even more of a treat than I did.
Overall, this was very entertaining and engaging. I don't see it as a novella I'm likely to reread, but it definitely piqued my interest in catching up with other entries in this series.
My first Mackenzie and almost certainly not my last!
I'm a novella lover who often complains (rather vociferously, in fact) that the majority of today's romance novels are of a pointlessly, frustratingly excessive length. This is one of those very rare cases, however, when I found myself wishing the author had written a bit more. With both a murder mystery and a romance to present to us in relatively few pages, neither seemed quite as richly developed as I might have hoped. I also found myself not having much of a handle on Louisa's character: she seemed like a mildly likable but rather generic heroine to me, with even supporting characters who got far less page time seeming to be more sharply and carefully defined. Our hero, Lloyd Fellows, is an uncommonly driven, intense detective who's got a not-so-secret passionate side. I liked him despite the fact that he's a bit perpetually pissed off and anger-prone for my personal taste, but that's how many heroes are written these days, and I gather he'll be a tad more cheery now that he's gotten his HEA. ;)
Jennifer Ashley's actual prose and dialogue didn't necessarily 'wow' me, but she's so good at actually telling a story----a sadly underrated skill these days, when many books feel like just a series of random conversations---that I found myself impressed by her writing anyway. She balanced action with emotion quite skillfully. The mystery was engaging enough to hook me, albeit not exactly one that would turn Dame Agatha Christie green with envy.
Even as a newcomer to this series, I found myself enjoying the glimpses we got of the other Mackenzies, so I'm guessing veteran Mackenzie fans will find that aspect of this novella even more of a treat than I did.
Overall, this was very entertaining and engaging. I don't see it as a novella I'm likely to reread, but it definitely piqued my interest in catching up with other entries in this series.
June 5, 2021
I was curious about Lloyd Fellows since the beginning of the series. Illegitimate son of a Duke and Scotland Yard inspector who grew up on the streets and now can enter the highest society. What's not to love? Well, I can say with certainty that I disliked Louisa immensely. She is such a bland character - dull as ditch water with nothing to recommend her except that her oldest sister is Isabella who married into Mackenzie family. She is the worst partner for a man such as Fellows. The romance was lackluster and felt very forced. I didn't get what Fellows saw in her at all.
I did like small tidbits that showed Fellows life outside of Mackenzies and his work. His relationship with his mother showed him as a good son and a kind man. The Mackenzie family featured a lot and I liked their shenanigans. I guess for such a short story they should have been featured less with more focus on the case and the relationship.
I don't think that mystery is this author's forte. It was unexciting and over way too quickly. How Fellows came about who the culprit was is not mentioned. The investigation itself is choppily written and not well thought out. The book had potential but the author decided to make it a novella and therefore didn't have enough space to make me get invested into the story or try to like Louisa by herself and Louisa and Fellows together. It was an absolute hodgepodge of characters that didn't suit and the story plot that went unrealized. Fellows deserved better.
I did like small tidbits that showed Fellows life outside of Mackenzies and his work. His relationship with his mother showed him as a good son and a kind man. The Mackenzie family featured a lot and I liked their shenanigans. I guess for such a short story they should have been featured less with more focus on the case and the relationship.
I don't think that mystery is this author's forte. It was unexciting and over way too quickly. How Fellows came about who the culprit was is not mentioned. The investigation itself is choppily written and not well thought out. The book had potential but the author decided to make it a novella and therefore didn't have enough space to make me get invested into the story or try to like Louisa by herself and Louisa and Fellows together. It was an absolute hodgepodge of characters that didn't suit and the story plot that went unrealized. Fellows deserved better.
January 29, 2022
4.25 Stars
A lovely little romance with a dash of murder mystery, Jennifer Ashley is brilliant with her story telling. Finally Llyod gets his HEA 💕💕💕
*Detailed review later
A lovely little romance with a dash of murder mystery, Jennifer Ashley is brilliant with her story telling. Finally Llyod gets his HEA 💕💕💕
*Detailed review later
August 23, 2020
Writing a series is challenging. When the author tries to cater to the audience and provide cute updates about beloved characters, it could do a disservice to the main storyline. In this book, the MacKenzies crowded the main couple out of their own story. I empathized with Lloyd’s difficult life but did I miss something? I dont know what he saw in Isabella Louisa (oh dear, I even forgot her name). She never had moments to shine, and 80% of her actions in the novel were baseless accusations against the hero who is trying to help her.
Despite the short length, there was a tight focus to this story. But, and I never say this, I cared about the plot more than the main couple. I liked Daniel, a totally irrelevant side character, more than the main couple. Heck, I even connected with the hero’s mom and her tragic past more than this romance.
Despite the short length, there was a tight focus to this story. But, and I never say this, I cared about the plot more than the main couple. I liked Daniel, a totally irrelevant side character, more than the main couple. Heck, I even connected with the hero’s mom and her tragic past more than this romance.
September 23, 2018
2 1/2
Way too short, this novellette mostly lacks a plot. The resolution was kind of a sham, but then I guess the 'mystery' was an afterthought compared to the romance.
Still it reads easily.
Way too short, this novellette mostly lacks a plot. The resolution was kind of a sham, but then I guess the 'mystery' was an afterthought compared to the romance.
Still it reads easily.
October 18, 2014
3 stars
It's a story about solving a murder case and Louisa is a main suspect and Fellows has to prove her innocence.
Things I like:
The mystery and puzzles. Very intriguing.
Fellows and Louisa are surprisingly hot couple.
Things I dislike:
Why the hell this book has to be anthology/short story because damn it, I want more!
The first 50% of the story was terribly slow and had no initial lead it was both frustrating and boring at the same time.
And suddenly, the answers were all out and it happened so fast it lacked of thrill I was seeking of.
I wasn't happy with how things end. I mean, it ended just like that.
The romance didn't reach to my satisfaction.
So...
This book could do much better than this. I was heartbroken because I wanted Fellows to have his own full, long story not this short story. He's a bastard to old Kilmorgan, yes but truly, he deserves it. He's a tortured soul man just like his other half-siblings are and he suffered a lot, way more than others so why can't he have one? Whyyyyy? *crying*
Okay, enough with the frustration and move on. I'm looking forward to read the next Mackenzie.
Read on your own peril.
It's a story about solving a murder case and Louisa is a main suspect and Fellows has to prove her innocence.
Things I like:
The mystery and puzzles. Very intriguing.
Fellows and Louisa are surprisingly hot couple.
Things I dislike:
Why the hell this book has to be anthology/short story because damn it, I want more!
The first 50% of the story was terribly slow and had no initial lead it was both frustrating and boring at the same time.
And suddenly, the answers were all out and it happened so fast it lacked of thrill I was seeking of.
I wasn't happy with how things end. I mean, it ended just like that.
The romance didn't reach to my satisfaction.
So...
This book could do much better than this. I was heartbroken because I wanted Fellows to have his own full, long story not this short story. He's a bastard to old Kilmorgan, yes but truly, he deserves it. He's a tortured soul man just like his other half-siblings are and he suffered a lot, way more than others so why can't he have one? Whyyyyy? *crying*
Okay, enough with the frustration and move on. I'm looking forward to read the next Mackenzie.
Read on your own peril.
October 26, 2013
I love this series and highlanders (Hot men kilts what is not to love), but this book didn’t do it for me. And to be honest Fellows was never a character in the previous books I liked. Reading his story, didn’t make me love him anymore unfortunately. To be blunt this book was boring,
Fellows is a detective for Scotland yard and half brother the the Mackenzie’s. While Fellow is quite good at his job and he appears to have a simmering anger that he keeps in tight control, i found him unemotional and distant. And then there is Lady Louisa Scranton, wrong accused of murder she is dependent on Fellows to clear her. While Louisa is a sweet enough character she is rather reserved as well. Being that this is a historical romance I understand somewhat, but this story pales in comparison to the other wonderful books in this series.
I enjoyed this story for what it was, a sweet tame romance and a step to the book I was waiting for….
Onto Daniel’s story!! YAY..
Fellows is a detective for Scotland yard and half brother the the Mackenzie’s. While Fellow is quite good at his job and he appears to have a simmering anger that he keeps in tight control, i found him unemotional and distant. And then there is Lady Louisa Scranton, wrong accused of murder she is dependent on Fellows to clear her. While Louisa is a sweet enough character she is rather reserved as well. Being that this is a historical romance I understand somewhat, but this story pales in comparison to the other wonderful books in this series.
I enjoyed this story for what it was, a sweet tame romance and a step to the book I was waiting for….
Onto Daniel’s story!! YAY..
March 14, 2022
Me gustó mucho, mucho. Es una novela corta pero redonda, con suspenso, tensión sexual y distensión sexual.
Muy linda. Quizá el final un poco precipitado.
Pero bien por Lloyd Fellows (el quinto Mackenzie) y Louisa (la hermana de Isabella)
Muy linda. Quizá el final un poco precipitado.
Pero bien por Lloyd Fellows (el quinto Mackenzie) y Louisa (la hermana de Isabella)
May 2, 2016
Loved this little gem! Just wished it could have been full length, because I loved these two so much as a couple. So I hope we get to see more of them in Daniel's book. Can't wait for that one!!
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