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The Lorne Family Vault #1
Provex City
Fifteen-year-old Oliver Grain begins his school year fighting off bullies, learning about the boy who committed suicide in his room, and trying to understand why his history teacher, Mr. Gordon, has taken such a personal interest in him. Do you believe in ghosts? Do you believe you can make bullies simply disappear? Do you believe you can walk through walls? Mr. Gordon tells Oliver: "When you truly believe anything is possible, you will be able to open doors where there were only walls." And one of those doors leads Oliver to Provex City, which puts him in far greater danger than he can possibly fathom. This is a young adult fantasy novel with mild language, sexual situations, and medium violence. It is recommended for readers in Grade 9 and up.
324 pages, Paperback
First published March 5, 2012
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Michael Pierce
38 books291 followersMichael Pierce loves stories that are thrilling and unexpected, fantastical and romantic—addictive tales that keep you reading long past the witching hour.
He currently lives in Southern California with his wife, kids, and two blood-thirsty chiweenies. When he's not at the computer, he enjoys spending quality time with family, practicing yoga, playing guitar behind closed doors, and listening to audiobooks.
Find him on Amazon: https://www.amazon.com/Michael-Pierce...
Visit his website: www.michaelpierceauthor.com
List of Michael's books:
SPELLCREST ACADEMY
Spellcrest Academy (Book 1)
Crestfallen (Book 2)
Crystallize (Book 3)
Medial Candidate (Book 4)
Medial Candidate (Book 5)
Chrysalis (Book 6) ➜ Releasing July 10, 2020
Sapient Curse (Book 7) ➜ Releasing early 2021
ANGELES VAMPIRE
Angeles Vampire (Book 1)
Angeles Underground (Book 2)
Angeles Betrayal (Book 3)
Angeles Covenant (Book 4)
Angeles Prophecy (Book 5) ➜ Releasing Fall 2020
ROYAL REPLICAS (Completed Series)
Royal Replicas (Book 1)
Royal Captives (Book 2)
Royal Threat (Book 3)
Royal Return (Book 4)
HIGHER REALMS (Completed Series)
Provex City (Book 1)
SUSY Asylum (Book 2)
Doria Falls (Book 3)
Archanum Manor (Book 4)
And don't forget to say "hello" on...
Facebook: www.facebook.com/mrpierceauthor
Twitter: @mrpierceauthor
www.michaelpierceauthor.com
He currently lives in Southern California with his wife, kids, and two blood-thirsty chiweenies. When he's not at the computer, he enjoys spending quality time with family, practicing yoga, playing guitar behind closed doors, and listening to audiobooks.
Find him on Amazon: https://www.amazon.com/Michael-Pierce...
Visit his website: www.michaelpierceauthor.com
List of Michael's books:
SPELLCREST ACADEMY
Spellcrest Academy (Book 1)
Crestfallen (Book 2)
Crystallize (Book 3)
Medial Candidate (Book 4)
Medial Candidate (Book 5)
Chrysalis (Book 6) ➜ Releasing July 10, 2020
Sapient Curse (Book 7) ➜ Releasing early 2021
ANGELES VAMPIRE
Angeles Vampire (Book 1)
Angeles Underground (Book 2)
Angeles Betrayal (Book 3)
Angeles Covenant (Book 4)
Angeles Prophecy (Book 5) ➜ Releasing Fall 2020
ROYAL REPLICAS (Completed Series)
Royal Replicas (Book 1)
Royal Captives (Book 2)
Royal Threat (Book 3)
Royal Return (Book 4)
HIGHER REALMS (Completed Series)
Provex City (Book 1)
SUSY Asylum (Book 2)
Doria Falls (Book 3)
Archanum Manor (Book 4)
And don't forget to say "hello" on...
Facebook: www.facebook.com/mrpierceauthor
Twitter: @mrpierceauthor
www.michaelpierceauthor.com
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March 15, 2012
Strange is the first thought I got with this book. The prologue got me confused a bit and doubting my mind. That’s a first. Now it’s true the story can seem very complicated at the beginning, even overwhelming. However, when you enter more and more in the universe it starts to make sense and you make some guesses about what is happening. You have to keep reading even when you get the feeling that’s a bit too much, really after page 200 all become crystal clear. That’s about the plot itself. Like the characters you have to think about a new world of possibilities.
Now the characters, Oliver is a young boy not sure of himself at all, and being bullied isn’t helping. He envies his brother without really knowing him because they are different. Jeremy is popular and confident. He is a bit bothered by his brother but when it’s needed he also can be a protective older brother. This duality will be explained but that’s sure that at the beginning like Desiree I didn’t appreciate him.
Desiree is a girl that seems to be always happy and welcoming but when you see past the appearances you can see she is also fragile, hurt and has secrets. I liked her even if I had some difficulties to understand how she acts with her boyfriend Eli. And they are some mysteries as why is she as good as Oliver with the “other reality” things.
Anna, it’s not that I dislike her but I absolutely hated how she acted with Oliver and at the shopping mall.
So the beginning of the book is more mystery than fantasy for me but the plot is interesting when you get over the confusing part. I will be waiting for book 2 because the end is a small cliff-hanger and you want the answers to “why”. At the end of the book, you understand the base of the story but it’s really a series and not a stand alone. Many questions are left unanswered. Now that we have some knowledge about the universe, it will be easier to immerse ourselves in it I think. So i want more^^.
I loved this book but I admit that I had to go past my first impression; it’s really in the end that you enjoy it the most. It’s an interesting and intriguing first book. A good book to recommend to the ones who like: science fiction, fantasy and of course YA.
A warning: there are mentions of adolescent’s suicide and abuses of alcohol.
Now the characters, Oliver is a young boy not sure of himself at all, and being bullied isn’t helping. He envies his brother without really knowing him because they are different. Jeremy is popular and confident. He is a bit bothered by his brother but when it’s needed he also can be a protective older brother. This duality will be explained but that’s sure that at the beginning like Desiree I didn’t appreciate him.
Desiree is a girl that seems to be always happy and welcoming but when you see past the appearances you can see she is also fragile, hurt and has secrets. I liked her even if I had some difficulties to understand how she acts with her boyfriend Eli. And they are some mysteries as why is she as good as Oliver with the “other reality” things.
Anna, it’s not that I dislike her but I absolutely hated how she acted with Oliver and at the shopping mall.
So the beginning of the book is more mystery than fantasy for me but the plot is interesting when you get over the confusing part. I will be waiting for book 2 because the end is a small cliff-hanger and you want the answers to “why”. At the end of the book, you understand the base of the story but it’s really a series and not a stand alone. Many questions are left unanswered. Now that we have some knowledge about the universe, it will be easier to immerse ourselves in it I think. So i want more^^.
I loved this book but I admit that I had to go past my first impression; it’s really in the end that you enjoy it the most. It’s an interesting and intriguing first book. A good book to recommend to the ones who like: science fiction, fantasy and of course YA.
A warning: there are mentions of adolescent’s suicide and abuses of alcohol.
January 8, 2013
Provex City is a rare read. I have to say that books from boys POV's always intrigues me because you don't get a lot of that in YA but it is starting to become the norm and I love it! To read a book written in a boys POV is wonderful because as we all know boys are always like "yeap", "nope", "oh well, not my problem" so to see this new world and new characters all from Oliver's POV I jumped at the chance to read it.
Oliver has a lot on his plate. He is starting school and he is already dreading it. At school he is bullied and he is not exactly sure how to handle it. Should he strike back or should he just walk away and not let things bother him? If things couldn't be any worse his brother is popular and there are times when Oliver would like to be just like his brother. Then something weird happens to him at school and Oliver is thrust into a world he is not so sure is real. He is questioning himself when he gets an unlikely ally in the form of his History teacher who challenges him in more ways then one.
His History teacher wants Oliver to open his mind to the possibilities of other things. Well what other things you are thinking right? Well maybe ghosts and maybe another paralleled world. What is Oliver to believe in? Once he does open his mind things start to fall in place and Oliver no longer feels like an outsider. Making friends is so easy and what he discovers is more valuable than anything he has ever experienced before.
Come along for the greatest ride of reading in your life. See things from a boys POV and see how boys really think!
Oliver has a lot on his plate. He is starting school and he is already dreading it. At school he is bullied and he is not exactly sure how to handle it. Should he strike back or should he just walk away and not let things bother him? If things couldn't be any worse his brother is popular and there are times when Oliver would like to be just like his brother. Then something weird happens to him at school and Oliver is thrust into a world he is not so sure is real. He is questioning himself when he gets an unlikely ally in the form of his History teacher who challenges him in more ways then one.
His History teacher wants Oliver to open his mind to the possibilities of other things. Well what other things you are thinking right? Well maybe ghosts and maybe another paralleled world. What is Oliver to believe in? Once he does open his mind things start to fall in place and Oliver no longer feels like an outsider. Making friends is so easy and what he discovers is more valuable than anything he has ever experienced before.
Come along for the greatest ride of reading in your life. See things from a boys POV and see how boys really think!
May 10, 2012
There are two things that I really loved about this book. The first is Michael's talent for getting into a teen boy's head and making me feel like I was inside it as well. I was suddenly in high school again, feeling that pressure to make friends and live up to expectations. The thoughtful crafting of Oliver's point of view is partly what made this book difficult to put down.
The second thing I loved was the suspense and mystery that built up as the novel progressed. Just when I was going to put the book down for a break, another question would come up that made me want to keep reading! What were the red pills for at the beginning of the story? Who is Kafka the Bogeyman, the villain of Oliver's nightmares? Is Oliver's room really haunted or is it just his brother teasing him? Why is Mr. Gordon so interested in Oliver? Where does this "Provex City" fit in to the story? (I could go on, but my questions would progress into spoilers, so I won't.)
The one thing I wished to see more of in this book was Provex City itself--most of the story takes place in the "real" world as Oliver unravels the mysteries of his past. The city is incredibly interesting and Michael has created a unique world I am interested in learning much more about! However, I have high hopes that Oliver will spend more time in that magical place in the sequel.
I am impressed with Michael's writing talent and his initiative in self-publishing this book, and am looking forward to reading the next.
The second thing I loved was the suspense and mystery that built up as the novel progressed. Just when I was going to put the book down for a break, another question would come up that made me want to keep reading! What were the red pills for at the beginning of the story? Who is Kafka the Bogeyman, the villain of Oliver's nightmares? Is Oliver's room really haunted or is it just his brother teasing him? Why is Mr. Gordon so interested in Oliver? Where does this "Provex City" fit in to the story? (I could go on, but my questions would progress into spoilers, so I won't.)
The one thing I wished to see more of in this book was Provex City itself--most of the story takes place in the "real" world as Oliver unravels the mysteries of his past. The city is incredibly interesting and Michael has created a unique world I am interested in learning much more about! However, I have high hopes that Oliver will spend more time in that magical place in the sequel.
I am impressed with Michael's writing talent and his initiative in self-publishing this book, and am looking forward to reading the next.
May 28, 2012
I am choosy when it comes to what I spend my time reading. If a book does not have merit, for whatever reason, I stop reading it, no matter how popular. As an avid reader of the YA genre, I can safely say that Pierce's writing is up there with the best of them. From Oliver's normal life in highschool with highschool problems to the fantastical Provex City, Pierce makes you feel as if you are right there with the characters. In the words of Mr. Gordon, "Let me show you something extraordinary" Read Provex City and see for yourself.
August 12, 2020
Phenomena occurring here!
Definitely for young high school age kids. Interesting theories presented to explain the phenomena occurring in the story to make it believable. Some intense moments I think YAs would love. And perhaps older folks would appreciate reminiscing about their younger days. I certainly did. I can easily recommend this book.
Definitely for young high school age kids. Interesting theories presented to explain the phenomena occurring in the story to make it believable. Some intense moments I think YAs would love. And perhaps older folks would appreciate reminiscing about their younger days. I certainly did. I can easily recommend this book.
January 7, 2013
(I received this book for a blog tour and for review purposes.)
To view the full post and other reviews, click here The Lorne Family Vault: Book 1 Provex City by Michael Pierce
Gore: Yes (a little bit)
Magic: Yes, kind of
Romance: Yes
Action: Yes, a little bit
Pacing: 4 stars
Plot: 4.5 stars
Oliver Grain and his family have just moved from a place called Lake Arrowhead. Oliver's new room belonged to a kid who was said to have committed suicide. He immediately becomes friends with a girl named Desiree and already there are three bullies at school who are picking on him.
This book had something new, it felt new. It didn't have the usual: vampires, werewolves, zombies, faeries, etc. I won't tell you what it is because I might or might not end up spoiling the story for you guys. So you'll just have to read the book or read someone else's review to find out. This time the guy, who is the main character, has amazing mental powers, usually they don't show that in other books, so I liked that. So far there aren't many books with a male main character and as much as I love female POVs, it was nice to read a young adult book with a male main character sometimes.
I liked Oliver, he was so real. He wasn't some popular guy who always bragged and he wasn't some bad boy either (as much as I love reading about them), he was an averagish teenage boy. Although sometimes he was a bit confusing. Then again, I don't really know much about boys since I only have sisters and I stopped hanging out with boys when I was fourteen, I have issues, anyways, back to the book. I usually like reading about main character's who have a temper, but it was nice and interesting reading about a main character that was usually so calm. I wonder if it's true what people say that girl's get angrier faster than guys do, at least that's what I read in books, although I haven't noticed it in high school (which I graduated in 2011).
He may seem like the average guy, but we get hints that he's not, plus he also can't remember anything before he was five years old, he was told that a fire happened and everything along with his dad's pictures were burned. We're basically learning what Oliver's learning, although there were some things that I was speculating that Oliver wasn't. This book might seem like a contemporary at first, the life of a teenage boy, but there's more to the story, it's actually a fantasy with normal life issues: like bullies at school and romance, etc. It kind of reminded me a little about the Yu-Gi-Oh manga and anime, Yugi had only one friend, but when she wasn't with him, he would always get bullied and he just couldn't stand up for himself, but when he started making more friends, he got bullied less and he enjoyed life more. That story had a lot to do with friendship, actually, that was the theme of that story, I feel like there was a similar theme in this story and that it wasn't focused as much on romance as other YA novels are, which was interesting and I liked. If you think about it, in real life (at least not when I was in high school) some people don't focus a lot on romance, like others do, but then again, that's just how me and my group of friends were like, I didn't pay much attention to other people. I think I'm rambling again, sorry about that, I do that a lot on my reviews.
Anyways, besides the paranormal issues, teenagers, especially boys can relate to the real life issues that Oliver is facing in life. I didn't relate to some of these issues mostly because I don't go to high school anymore, and because I live with both of my parents.
Anyways, I enjoyed this book a lot, I only had a few problems with it. I didn't understand the love exactly, I didn't feel any chemistry between Oliver and the girl. I felt like Oliver had more chemistry with Desiree than the other girl, but at least there wasn't any of that lame love at first sight or feeling that that person is in love with the other, it's kind of hard to explain, but I'm getting tired of that, so this story was refreshing.
Overall, this book was very enjoyable. This book was kind of adventurous, has some mystery in it, has some interesting twists and some cute romance in it. I recommend this to everyone, even if you're a girl, like me, you would probably enjoy this.
To view the full post and other reviews, click here The Lorne Family Vault: Book 1 Provex City by Michael Pierce
Gore: Yes (a little bit)
Magic: Yes, kind of
Romance: Yes
Action: Yes, a little bit
Pacing: 4 stars
Plot: 4.5 stars
Oliver Grain and his family have just moved from a place called Lake Arrowhead. Oliver's new room belonged to a kid who was said to have committed suicide. He immediately becomes friends with a girl named Desiree and already there are three bullies at school who are picking on him.
This book had something new, it felt new. It didn't have the usual: vampires, werewolves, zombies, faeries, etc. I won't tell you what it is because I might or might not end up spoiling the story for you guys. So you'll just have to read the book or read someone else's review to find out. This time the guy, who is the main character, has amazing mental powers, usually they don't show that in other books, so I liked that. So far there aren't many books with a male main character and as much as I love female POVs, it was nice to read a young adult book with a male main character sometimes.
I liked Oliver, he was so real. He wasn't some popular guy who always bragged and he wasn't some bad boy either (as much as I love reading about them), he was an averagish teenage boy. Although sometimes he was a bit confusing. Then again, I don't really know much about boys since I only have sisters and I stopped hanging out with boys when I was fourteen, I have issues, anyways, back to the book. I usually like reading about main character's who have a temper, but it was nice and interesting reading about a main character that was usually so calm. I wonder if it's true what people say that girl's get angrier faster than guys do, at least that's what I read in books, although I haven't noticed it in high school (which I graduated in 2011).
He may seem like the average guy, but we get hints that he's not, plus he also can't remember anything before he was five years old, he was told that a fire happened and everything along with his dad's pictures were burned. We're basically learning what Oliver's learning, although there were some things that I was speculating that Oliver wasn't. This book might seem like a contemporary at first, the life of a teenage boy, but there's more to the story, it's actually a fantasy with normal life issues: like bullies at school and romance, etc. It kind of reminded me a little about the Yu-Gi-Oh manga and anime, Yugi had only one friend, but when she wasn't with him, he would always get bullied and he just couldn't stand up for himself, but when he started making more friends, he got bullied less and he enjoyed life more. That story had a lot to do with friendship, actually, that was the theme of that story, I feel like there was a similar theme in this story and that it wasn't focused as much on romance as other YA novels are, which was interesting and I liked. If you think about it, in real life (at least not when I was in high school) some people don't focus a lot on romance, like others do, but then again, that's just how me and my group of friends were like, I didn't pay much attention to other people. I think I'm rambling again, sorry about that, I do that a lot on my reviews.
Anyways, besides the paranormal issues, teenagers, especially boys can relate to the real life issues that Oliver is facing in life. I didn't relate to some of these issues mostly because I don't go to high school anymore, and because I live with both of my parents.
Anyways, I enjoyed this book a lot, I only had a few problems with it. I didn't understand the love exactly, I didn't feel any chemistry between Oliver and the girl. I felt like Oliver had more chemistry with Desiree than the other girl, but at least there wasn't any of that lame love at first sight or feeling that that person is in love with the other, it's kind of hard to explain, but I'm getting tired of that, so this story was refreshing.
Overall, this book was very enjoyable. This book was kind of adventurous, has some mystery in it, has some interesting twists and some cute romance in it. I recommend this to everyone, even if you're a girl, like me, you would probably enjoy this.
October 14, 2013
(This review can be found on my blog The (Mis)Adventures of a Twenty-Something Year Old Girl).
Okay, so I have to be honest here. It's only because the book synopsis mentioned the word ghost that I wanted to read this book. However, I'm super glad I did read it because it was really good!
Oliver Grain starts school as a new student. Immediately, he meets a girl named Desiree and is picked on by the school bullies. After a fight between Oliver and the bullies, Mr. Gordon, one of Oliver's teachers, miraculously heals Oliver's injuries. Oliver wants to learn how Mr. Gordon was able to perform that kind of healing. He tells him to open his mind. It's when Oliver's mind is open that he discovers the alternate world of Provex City. From the outside, it is gorgeous, but its what's on the inside that could potentially hurt Oliver.
I wouldn't say that the title caught my attention because it didn't, not one bit. It's a bit of a boring title even though Provex City is mentioned in the book. Don't let the title put you off because this is actually quite a good book!
As for the cover, I love it, and I hate it. I hate that it just seems a bit too...cartoonish, but I love how it shows Provex City from beyond Los Angeles. I do love the colors, but I didn't really take this book too seriously when I first looked at the book. This is definitely one of those books that you shouldn't judge it by its cover.
I enjoyed the world building! I love how the author was able to take his readers from one world to the next. I found the transitioning between the world as we know it to this other city that is on a different plane to be done really well. I felt like I was part of these different planes. I also found Provex City to be absolutely breathtaking!
I liked the pacing in this book. The pacing starts off at a decent pace, but it isn't long before you have to strap yourself in because this book really takes off! I don't mean that it goes way too fast that you can't really understand what's going on, but I mean that it becomes one of those books that's hard to put down because it is just so awesome!
I definitely enjoyed the plot. I liked how Oliver was told to clear his mind and try to see beyond what's around him. I also liked that he was told to believe that he could actually see and do whatever he wanted as long as he put his mind to it. In fact, the plot seems so believable, that there were times I was actually trying to see beyond what was around me in case there was some other plane of existence that I wasn't aware of. (True story)! Sadly, I didn't find anything.
I thought the characters were written really well! I loved how down to Earth Oliver seemed to be. Some may think he was a bit too gullible with everything he was being told, but I didn't think he was. I think if someone created a door out of nothing and could do miraculous healing, I'd pretty much believe anything was possible as well. Desiree was my favorite character, and I found her to be down to Earth as well. I loved how sweet she came across to be. I didn't like Eli, but that's only because I wanted Desiree and Oliver to be together. I also felt this way with Anna. Oh, and I also liked how Oliver's parents were written into the story. They actually seemed like caring parents, and they seemed like real parents of a young teenage boy! For example, Oliver wasn't allowed to have girls in his room. It was nice to see parents in a YA novel that cared.
The dialogue was very interesting, and I couldn't get enough of it! It flows very smoothly and is consistent with a YA novel featuring 15 year olds. There are a few swear words, but nothing major.
Overall, Provex City by Michael Pierce is an extremely interesting journey, and I use the word journey because that's what it feels like. This book makes different planes of existence feel like they could exist.
I'd recommend this book to those aged 14+ who are after a book that can make them feel as if there's something more out there.
I'd give Provex City (Lorne Family Vault #1) by Michael Pierce a 4.5 out of 5.
Okay, so I have to be honest here. It's only because the book synopsis mentioned the word ghost that I wanted to read this book. However, I'm super glad I did read it because it was really good!
Oliver Grain starts school as a new student. Immediately, he meets a girl named Desiree and is picked on by the school bullies. After a fight between Oliver and the bullies, Mr. Gordon, one of Oliver's teachers, miraculously heals Oliver's injuries. Oliver wants to learn how Mr. Gordon was able to perform that kind of healing. He tells him to open his mind. It's when Oliver's mind is open that he discovers the alternate world of Provex City. From the outside, it is gorgeous, but its what's on the inside that could potentially hurt Oliver.
I wouldn't say that the title caught my attention because it didn't, not one bit. It's a bit of a boring title even though Provex City is mentioned in the book. Don't let the title put you off because this is actually quite a good book!
As for the cover, I love it, and I hate it. I hate that it just seems a bit too...cartoonish, but I love how it shows Provex City from beyond Los Angeles. I do love the colors, but I didn't really take this book too seriously when I first looked at the book. This is definitely one of those books that you shouldn't judge it by its cover.
I enjoyed the world building! I love how the author was able to take his readers from one world to the next. I found the transitioning between the world as we know it to this other city that is on a different plane to be done really well. I felt like I was part of these different planes. I also found Provex City to be absolutely breathtaking!
I liked the pacing in this book. The pacing starts off at a decent pace, but it isn't long before you have to strap yourself in because this book really takes off! I don't mean that it goes way too fast that you can't really understand what's going on, but I mean that it becomes one of those books that's hard to put down because it is just so awesome!
I definitely enjoyed the plot. I liked how Oliver was told to clear his mind and try to see beyond what's around him. I also liked that he was told to believe that he could actually see and do whatever he wanted as long as he put his mind to it. In fact, the plot seems so believable, that there were times I was actually trying to see beyond what was around me in case there was some other plane of existence that I wasn't aware of. (True story)! Sadly, I didn't find anything.
I thought the characters were written really well! I loved how down to Earth Oliver seemed to be. Some may think he was a bit too gullible with everything he was being told, but I didn't think he was. I think if someone created a door out of nothing and could do miraculous healing, I'd pretty much believe anything was possible as well. Desiree was my favorite character, and I found her to be down to Earth as well. I loved how sweet she came across to be. I didn't like Eli, but that's only because I wanted Desiree and Oliver to be together. I also felt this way with Anna. Oh, and I also liked how Oliver's parents were written into the story. They actually seemed like caring parents, and they seemed like real parents of a young teenage boy! For example, Oliver wasn't allowed to have girls in his room. It was nice to see parents in a YA novel that cared.
The dialogue was very interesting, and I couldn't get enough of it! It flows very smoothly and is consistent with a YA novel featuring 15 year olds. There are a few swear words, but nothing major.
Overall, Provex City by Michael Pierce is an extremely interesting journey, and I use the word journey because that's what it feels like. This book makes different planes of existence feel like they could exist.
I'd recommend this book to those aged 14+ who are after a book that can make them feel as if there's something more out there.
I'd give Provex City (Lorne Family Vault #1) by Michael Pierce a 4.5 out of 5.
July 2, 2013
What? Are you kidding me? You cannot end the book like that? I have so many questions! I was fortunate enough to receive a copy of this book for review and I am SO glad I read it.
Despite the ending that sort of tied up the adventure in this book, but set up some pretty ominous foreshadowing for the second book in the series. Let me tell you, the author had better be hard at work on the sequel, because that ending leaves you with more questions than answers. Well played, Sir. Well played.
My favorite thing about this book was just the way the Author wrote in general. I loved the writing style and I love love LOVED Oliver's character. This book is now in my list of favorite books where a guy is the MC! Let me just talk a little bit about Oliver for a minute.
Oliver, bless his heart, is a regular ole teenage boy. He has bully problems. He is overshadowed by his older brother. He is nervous around girls. And he is NOT perfect. And never claims to be. I loved being inside his head and listening to his sarcastic remarks. Also, I absolutely love the relationship he develops with Desiree after she decides they are going to be friends. It is so sweet! Ah, I love best friends in books. While I am on the subject..
Desiree- I love this girl. She is so fun, sarcastic and hyper. She is a lovely supporting character and since my favorite part of the book was the characters [and they wonderful writing style], I feel safe saying the book would definitely not have been the same without her. [except for like that one page of the book I will hold against her until I read the 2nd book. REDEEM YOURSELF.]
Jared- I love how his brother is cocky, but still a fun character who, despite sibling rivalries, comes through for Oliver.
The other characters are still pretty important, but there are SO MANY [well, maybe not that many. but there are a lot of different characters who are important to the story and contribute- even if they are minor characters]
I love how there are - in reality- around 4 different things going on in this book at the same time, so it is like I am reading a romance, mystery, a fantasy, and a paranormal book at the same time! But they had even screen time, so no one aspect of the story was more prominent.
The actual Fantasy part of the book was a little confusing at first and I think it developed a little too fast right there in the very beginning [and right at the very end], but between that, I was able to just go with the flow. (:
Loved the paranormal and mystery, though! The romance was pretty cute at times, but other times I wanted to slap different people in the face. But! since they are teenagers, and being annoying is in their DNA, It factored into the story quite nicely. (: Plus, Oliver was just so clueless, it was so ADORABLE. eep!
All in all? Great story with an easy to follow style of writing + cute banter. Some bits were a little confusing at times, I will admit, but you can push right on through them. Heck, it may just be me that was confused. ;) The characters were awesome- had one of every personality- type [unique characters]
I loved the alternate world the author created. A LOT of thought was put into this book. I mean A LOT. (:
A lot of the characters are still such a mystery to me! That is going to be the part I am most looking forward to in the sequel; [or coming sequels. who knows how many there will be?] Discovering all the skeletons buried in everyone's closet! There is still so much I need to learn about EVERYONE. O.O. I.. cannot wait for the next book.
Despite the ending that sort of tied up the adventure in this book, but set up some pretty ominous foreshadowing for the second book in the series. Let me tell you, the author had better be hard at work on the sequel, because that ending leaves you with more questions than answers. Well played, Sir. Well played.
My favorite thing about this book was just the way the Author wrote in general. I loved the writing style and I love love LOVED Oliver's character. This book is now in my list of favorite books where a guy is the MC! Let me just talk a little bit about Oliver for a minute.
Oliver, bless his heart, is a regular ole teenage boy. He has bully problems. He is overshadowed by his older brother. He is nervous around girls. And he is NOT perfect. And never claims to be. I loved being inside his head and listening to his sarcastic remarks. Also, I absolutely love the relationship he develops with Desiree after she decides they are going to be friends. It is so sweet! Ah, I love best friends in books. While I am on the subject..
Desiree- I love this girl. She is so fun, sarcastic and hyper. She is a lovely supporting character and since my favorite part of the book was the characters [and they wonderful writing style], I feel safe saying the book would definitely not have been the same without her. [except for like that one page of the book I will hold against her until I read the 2nd book. REDEEM YOURSELF.]
Jared- I love how his brother is cocky, but still a fun character who, despite sibling rivalries, comes through for Oliver.
The other characters are still pretty important, but there are SO MANY [well, maybe not that many. but there are a lot of different characters who are important to the story and contribute- even if they are minor characters]
I love how there are - in reality- around 4 different things going on in this book at the same time, so it is like I am reading a romance, mystery, a fantasy, and a paranormal book at the same time! But they had even screen time, so no one aspect of the story was more prominent.
The actual Fantasy part of the book was a little confusing at first and I think it developed a little too fast right there in the very beginning [and right at the very end], but between that, I was able to just go with the flow. (:
Loved the paranormal and mystery, though! The romance was pretty cute at times, but other times I wanted to slap different people in the face. But! since they are teenagers, and being annoying is in their DNA, It factored into the story quite nicely. (: Plus, Oliver was just so clueless, it was so ADORABLE. eep!
All in all? Great story with an easy to follow style of writing + cute banter. Some bits were a little confusing at times, I will admit, but you can push right on through them. Heck, it may just be me that was confused. ;) The characters were awesome- had one of every personality- type [unique characters]
I loved the alternate world the author created. A LOT of thought was put into this book. I mean A LOT. (:
A lot of the characters are still such a mystery to me! That is going to be the part I am most looking forward to in the sequel; [or coming sequels. who knows how many there will be?] Discovering all the skeletons buried in everyone's closet! There is still so much I need to learn about EVERYONE. O.O. I.. cannot wait for the next book.
January 15, 2013
Provex City doesn't fall into just one genre for me--it transcends any labels I can think of. It was written so differently and creatively that I loved how it wasn't anything like what I expected. It's filled with creepy moments, teenage angst, heartwrenching situations, and mysterious characters. The characters seemed like people I could know in real life with each having his or her own distinct personality and voice. Reading this book, I was completely enthralled and hated any time I had to put it down. I wanted to forget about all of my obligations, even sleep, and I love to sleep!
I really loved Oliver; he's a character you can't help but love. The story is told from his point of view. He goes through some painfully awkward situations that many adolescents experience. He's bullied, gets kind of thrown together romantically with a girl named Anna (a friend of Oliver's friend, Desiree), is dealing with his dad's death, is attending a new school, living in a new house with a tragic history, and wondering if he's being haunted. That's a lot for anyone to have to deal with! But he does the best he can do and is stronger than he credits himself.
Oliver feels he's outshined by his brother, Jeremy, who has no problem fitting in at their new school--they're both in high school. They don't seem to be close at all. While Oliver is introverted, Jeremy is extroverted and seemed to rub it in Oliver's face that he became popular instantly and easily. I was so angry when Oliver was being bullied and his brother wasn't really there for him--it brought back a lot of memories for me when I was in high school and was physically threatened almost everyday by a group of girls who had it out for me for no reason. Jeremy seemed like a shady character, and I know there has to more to him that I hope will be explored in the next book.
Jeremy was gone so often that I couldn't believe his mom and stepdad weren't that concerned about where he was and whether he was home at a decent hour or not. Though they never questioned Jeremy about his life, they gave Oliver a hard time about whether Desiree is his girlfriend, why he spends so much time with her if she isn't his girlfriend, and then about Anna when she met them for the first time. I guess I felt protective of Oliver!
Oliver dresses up as a specific character from a specific movie for Halloween though it was never spelled out exactly who he dressed up as. I thought it was incredibly clever and totally enjoyed the reference! I wonder how many readers have or will pick up on that. :) It was one of my favorite surprises in the book.
Oliver's history teacher, Mr. Gordon, was one of my favorite characters. He's like a father figure to Oliver, and I really liked that. I love the way Mr. Gordon thinks, too. There are so many possibilities of what is going on in Oliver's life that I'm still trying to figure it out, trying to put all the pieces together, and I really enjoy a book that has my imagination going into hyperdrive. :)
There are so many questions I had along the way, I can't wait to find out answers to some of those questions in the next book of the series. I want to know the backstories of Oliver's friends Desiree, Anna, and Eli--they're all mysterious characters, and I know there has to be more to them there than what I saw in this first book. I'm recommending Provex City to everyone I know. You'll fall in love with this story just like I have!
I really loved Oliver; he's a character you can't help but love. The story is told from his point of view. He goes through some painfully awkward situations that many adolescents experience. He's bullied, gets kind of thrown together romantically with a girl named Anna (a friend of Oliver's friend, Desiree), is dealing with his dad's death, is attending a new school, living in a new house with a tragic history, and wondering if he's being haunted. That's a lot for anyone to have to deal with! But he does the best he can do and is stronger than he credits himself.
Oliver feels he's outshined by his brother, Jeremy, who has no problem fitting in at their new school--they're both in high school. They don't seem to be close at all. While Oliver is introverted, Jeremy is extroverted and seemed to rub it in Oliver's face that he became popular instantly and easily. I was so angry when Oliver was being bullied and his brother wasn't really there for him--it brought back a lot of memories for me when I was in high school and was physically threatened almost everyday by a group of girls who had it out for me for no reason. Jeremy seemed like a shady character, and I know there has to more to him that I hope will be explored in the next book.
Jeremy was gone so often that I couldn't believe his mom and stepdad weren't that concerned about where he was and whether he was home at a decent hour or not. Though they never questioned Jeremy about his life, they gave Oliver a hard time about whether Desiree is his girlfriend, why he spends so much time with her if she isn't his girlfriend, and then about Anna when she met them for the first time. I guess I felt protective of Oliver!
Oliver dresses up as a specific character from a specific movie for Halloween though it was never spelled out exactly who he dressed up as. I thought it was incredibly clever and totally enjoyed the reference! I wonder how many readers have or will pick up on that. :) It was one of my favorite surprises in the book.
Oliver's history teacher, Mr. Gordon, was one of my favorite characters. He's like a father figure to Oliver, and I really liked that. I love the way Mr. Gordon thinks, too. There are so many possibilities of what is going on in Oliver's life that I'm still trying to figure it out, trying to put all the pieces together, and I really enjoy a book that has my imagination going into hyperdrive. :)
There are so many questions I had along the way, I can't wait to find out answers to some of those questions in the next book of the series. I want to know the backstories of Oliver's friends Desiree, Anna, and Eli--they're all mysterious characters, and I know there has to be more to them there than what I saw in this first book. I'm recommending Provex City to everyone I know. You'll fall in love with this story just like I have!
March 25, 2013
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I am not sure where to start with this one. It had a lot of potential, but somewhere it all fell apart for me.
The concept started off strong, a boy in a new school who felt very much like a regular kid. I'm so used to reading about the strong boys who are super swoony and dreamy so it is so refreshing to meet someone a little more vulnerable, normal, and perhaps a little lonely. Well, he soon finds himself on the wrong side of a bully and his pack of friends. But this isn't the only thing going on in his world... He also discovers he is living in the room of a boy who committed suicide and he thinks the ghost is trying to tell him something. Dealing with these heavy issues, he finds inspiration from a teacher who vows to show him that anything is possible.
Like I said, I appreciated the bullying story. It is always refreshing to have a normal character dealing with real issues that kids face. I was also really intrigued about this ghost in his room! Unfortunately, he felt a little out of place to me, like he wasn't detrimental to the story and only added more questions. I really wish that wasn't so, but perhaps this was just a stepping stone to his placement in the series. I have a strong feeling he might play a bigger role later on.
I think somewhere around the introduction of this teacher is where I got a little lost. He added another dynamic to the story that left me scratching my head a little bit. The instant healing and Room of Enlightenment where he shows Oliver how to make things appear by almost willing them to, was a little too much for me. That's where the story took a turn and I became disappointed. There were also a few big events that happened with no real follow through or repercussions. I had to go back and question if what I read really happened because afterwards it was like it didn't. I mean, these were big things! Why weren't people talking about it?! What happened afterwards? I didn't get it. But this all played into what this story really is about, and that is different planes of consciousness. We learn of a whole new reality that Oliver is meant to be a part of and I must say, this part is quite interesting! Provex City had some really cool technology and I would love to know more about this place. Perhaps if we were introduced to this in a different manner I would have liked it more. I can't be sure. For some reason, all the concepts together didn't flow right.
I wish I can say I enjoyed the secondary characters at least, but I really didn't. They were probably real enough. It is common for friends to put a little bit of peer pressure on each other for certain things, but honestly, after dealing with the bully and a flighty brother, it was a little overkill. I just wanted to snatch Oliver away from this new place and all of these people and show him what real friends can be like.
Overall, this one didn't quite work for me, but I can see what the appeal might be to others. If you like the concept of alternate realities, than it is possible you will like this one.
I am not sure where to start with this one. It had a lot of potential, but somewhere it all fell apart for me.
The concept started off strong, a boy in a new school who felt very much like a regular kid. I'm so used to reading about the strong boys who are super swoony and dreamy so it is so refreshing to meet someone a little more vulnerable, normal, and perhaps a little lonely. Well, he soon finds himself on the wrong side of a bully and his pack of friends. But this isn't the only thing going on in his world... He also discovers he is living in the room of a boy who committed suicide and he thinks the ghost is trying to tell him something. Dealing with these heavy issues, he finds inspiration from a teacher who vows to show him that anything is possible.
Like I said, I appreciated the bullying story. It is always refreshing to have a normal character dealing with real issues that kids face. I was also really intrigued about this ghost in his room! Unfortunately, he felt a little out of place to me, like he wasn't detrimental to the story and only added more questions. I really wish that wasn't so, but perhaps this was just a stepping stone to his placement in the series. I have a strong feeling he might play a bigger role later on.
I think somewhere around the introduction of this teacher is where I got a little lost. He added another dynamic to the story that left me scratching my head a little bit. The instant healing and Room of Enlightenment where he shows Oliver how to make things appear by almost willing them to, was a little too much for me. That's where the story took a turn and I became disappointed. There were also a few big events that happened with no real follow through or repercussions. I had to go back and question if what I read really happened because afterwards it was like it didn't. I mean, these were big things! Why weren't people talking about it?! What happened afterwards? I didn't get it. But this all played into what this story really is about, and that is different planes of consciousness. We learn of a whole new reality that Oliver is meant to be a part of and I must say, this part is quite interesting! Provex City had some really cool technology and I would love to know more about this place. Perhaps if we were introduced to this in a different manner I would have liked it more. I can't be sure. For some reason, all the concepts together didn't flow right.
I wish I can say I enjoyed the secondary characters at least, but I really didn't. They were probably real enough. It is common for friends to put a little bit of peer pressure on each other for certain things, but honestly, after dealing with the bully and a flighty brother, it was a little overkill. I just wanted to snatch Oliver away from this new place and all of these people and show him what real friends can be like.
Overall, this one didn't quite work for me, but I can see what the appeal might be to others. If you like the concept of alternate realities, than it is possible you will like this one.
September 27, 2012
Provex City was a fabulous read for me and that's for several reasons. First of all, the main character, Oliver, is a boy! I love male POV's and am happy to see them becoming more popular in YA. Another thing I loved was Oliver himself and that's because he was so real. When I read Oliver's story I felt like I really knew him. He wasn't some super stud and wasn't some bad boy, he was just a normal teen. He had insecurities and didn't always know where he stood or even how he felt about things. But that's how boys are. What I thought of a lot when I read this was when I was a teenager and me and my friends would make such a big deal about things, everything was drama, drama, drama. And the boys were like 'yeah, whatever'. And that was Oliver. The girls would ask him to do something and he'd say "sure, I guess so". And that simple saying right there is exactly what guys say. Okay, not all guys, but you know, a lot of them. And it made me feel like Oliver was really just an average guy.
But you know what? He's not just an average guy. The thing is as we read we get hints of things from his past. We know that there's more to everything but we don't know what it is. Is it ghosts? Is it a parallel universe kind of thing? It's really cool trying to figure it out by the subtle things that happen. And we're learning alongside Oliver cause he doesn't know either. But how things start out is his teacher starts teaching him to use more of his brain. You know that theory that we only use a small portion of our brain but if we learn to use more we can do incredible things like heal ourselves and others and do miraculous and amazing things? Well, that's kind of what happens here but it really takes things a step further.
The book is definitely not contemporary, but it has a lot of contemp issues in it. Oliver is picked on really bad by a couple kids and we see that he struggles with his fear and his need/want to protect himself and others. I liked this aspect of the story a lot. I also liked that there was a lot of friendship as well as a different sort of unexpected romance. It all felt real to me, there wasn't any stretching our imagination to picture it. It's not exactly the way I might have *wanted* the romance to go, but there's a bit of twist, fortunately, and I thought it made things more interesting while keeping it real. There's also a bit of dealing with peer pressure and with family issues, one of which is a hint at alcoholism.
I think boys and girls alike will like this book but I think it would especially appeal to boys. I think they could really connect with Oliver and relate to the things he's going through (the ones of the contemp variety anyway). I most definitely recommend you pick this book up and give it a shot!
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But you know what? He's not just an average guy. The thing is as we read we get hints of things from his past. We know that there's more to everything but we don't know what it is. Is it ghosts? Is it a parallel universe kind of thing? It's really cool trying to figure it out by the subtle things that happen. And we're learning alongside Oliver cause he doesn't know either. But how things start out is his teacher starts teaching him to use more of his brain. You know that theory that we only use a small portion of our brain but if we learn to use more we can do incredible things like heal ourselves and others and do miraculous and amazing things? Well, that's kind of what happens here but it really takes things a step further.
The book is definitely not contemporary, but it has a lot of contemp issues in it. Oliver is picked on really bad by a couple kids and we see that he struggles with his fear and his need/want to protect himself and others. I liked this aspect of the story a lot. I also liked that there was a lot of friendship as well as a different sort of unexpected romance. It all felt real to me, there wasn't any stretching our imagination to picture it. It's not exactly the way I might have *wanted* the romance to go, but there's a bit of twist, fortunately, and I thought it made things more interesting while keeping it real. There's also a bit of dealing with peer pressure and with family issues, one of which is a hint at alcoholism.
I think boys and girls alike will like this book but I think it would especially appeal to boys. I think they could really connect with Oliver and relate to the things he's going through (the ones of the contemp variety anyway). I most definitely recommend you pick this book up and give it a shot!
You can find this review and others like it on my blog at http://www.candacesbookblog.com
July 28, 2012
If you've read any of my previous reviews, you know that I love a good ghost story. Once I saw the offering of ghosts in the summary, I was sold. And Mr. Pierce didn't disappoint. Don't be fooled though - that is only a small part of this story. Provex City is so much more than that. There are so many layers to the story that it does make you stop and think here and there and when it comes to the YA genre, I think that is an excellent thing. Challenging young minds to think outside the box is always a good thing. Heck, it challenged my mind and I am most definitely not a young adult.
I'm not used to male leads. I honestly think I've only read two other books in this genre that had a male lead, so it took me a bit to sort of get in the mind set of how a teenage boy would think rather than a teenage girl. Once there, everything seemed to be exactly on target with how one would think, react, etc.
Oliver is a typical teenage boy. One that is, in my opinion, more realistic than the stereotypical football player that is always Mr. Popularity. Oliver gets bullied, looks up to his older brother while simultaneously always feeling like he's living in his shadow, he is artistic, confused by girls and hates gym class. When he meets Desiree, they just seem to click, much to her boyfriend's chagrin. Having several classes together, Desiree introduces him to some of her friends. Oh, and did I mention that he is living in the room of a boy that killed himself?
I actually love that Oliver is somewhat of an underdog, while his brother is the more likely hero. The converse situation that comes about in the end was unexpected. Mr. Gordon is an interesting character and a little mysterious. You know what he's about but at the same time you don't. It's a mystery hopefully to be solved in upcoming sequels. Throughout the course of the book, however, it is Mr. Gordon who teaches Oliver about the things he is capable of and gives him the confidence he needs to succeed. He explains the science behind Oliver's abilities in one of those "so simple it's confusing" sort of ways. Also, Desiree's boyfriend, Eli, is a mystery. Sometimes he is nice, other times not so nice and at times he seems to have ulterior motives that aren't revealed to us.
The world building was fascinating and makes you wish you could visit. It also raises some questions about things like parallel universes and dimensions.
This is a well written, complex and intriguing first book from Mr. Pierce. I really enjoyed the plot and the characters, the suspense that kept me reading and the threads that were left dangling. I very much look forward to checking out future installments of this series. If you enjoy the YA genre, this is an author to check out, especially if you are looking for an original paranormal.
I'm not used to male leads. I honestly think I've only read two other books in this genre that had a male lead, so it took me a bit to sort of get in the mind set of how a teenage boy would think rather than a teenage girl. Once there, everything seemed to be exactly on target with how one would think, react, etc.
Oliver is a typical teenage boy. One that is, in my opinion, more realistic than the stereotypical football player that is always Mr. Popularity. Oliver gets bullied, looks up to his older brother while simultaneously always feeling like he's living in his shadow, he is artistic, confused by girls and hates gym class. When he meets Desiree, they just seem to click, much to her boyfriend's chagrin. Having several classes together, Desiree introduces him to some of her friends. Oh, and did I mention that he is living in the room of a boy that killed himself?
I actually love that Oliver is somewhat of an underdog, while his brother is the more likely hero. The converse situation that comes about in the end was unexpected. Mr. Gordon is an interesting character and a little mysterious. You know what he's about but at the same time you don't. It's a mystery hopefully to be solved in upcoming sequels. Throughout the course of the book, however, it is Mr. Gordon who teaches Oliver about the things he is capable of and gives him the confidence he needs to succeed. He explains the science behind Oliver's abilities in one of those "so simple it's confusing" sort of ways. Also, Desiree's boyfriend, Eli, is a mystery. Sometimes he is nice, other times not so nice and at times he seems to have ulterior motives that aren't revealed to us.
The world building was fascinating and makes you wish you could visit. It also raises some questions about things like parallel universes and dimensions.
This is a well written, complex and intriguing first book from Mr. Pierce. I really enjoyed the plot and the characters, the suspense that kept me reading and the threads that were left dangling. I very much look forward to checking out future installments of this series. If you enjoy the YA genre, this is an author to check out, especially if you are looking for an original paranormal.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
January 14, 2013
The first few chapters reminded me of a MG novel, but the second half of the story is definitely YA. I really do appreciate that this book had a male lead that acted like a guy and a leading female co-star that wasn’t a whiny, damsel in distress.
What marks this book as five star quality is the characters. After the first couple of chapters, I no longer felt like I was reading a book, rather peeking into the lives of Oliver and Desiree and the rest of the cast. Not once did the teenagers act like anything but teenagers. The only character that seemed to “guide” the story was Mr. Gordon, which was a much needed thing considering how much trouble this lot attracted. Left to their own devices, the story could of easily rambled on another hundred pages, until Oliver and friends stumbled into the right direction.
Oliver is naive and insecure when we first meet him. He’s jealous of how easily his older brother, Jeremy, blends into the crowd. Desiree is a show-stopper and when Oliver first meets her, it’s clear that the two are meant to be together, however, there’s one problem. Desiree has a boyfriend and she has no intention of breaking up with Eli. Eli is mostly a background character and only shows up to remind the reader that yes, Desiree is still not available to date. But not only does Desiree have a boyfriend, but she plays matchmaker and hooks Oliver up with her best friend, Anna.
The “magic” is very unique. Like Mr. Gorden tells Oliver: Anyone can do magic, but only certain people can believe they can make magic happen. In a weird way, Mr. Gordon opens up Oliver up to the matrix. I really like how there’s so much depth to both the plot and the characters. I kind of guessed what happened with Jeremy at the end, but the rest came at a surprise. When I actually figured out what Provex City was, I was stunned. I can’t wait to see more about this place in the future.
I typically let my nephew read books of this genre that I get for review, but since he’s only 10, I don’t think his mother would approve of this book. There’s underage drinking, implications of teenage sex, and minor violence. This is a book meant to be read by teenagers and adults (Although I did read parts of it out loud to my toddler. Then again, I read him pieces of every book I read but erotic. That would be awkward.).
I didn’t realize how much I truly enjoyed the characters and plot of this novel until I picked up my next book. In comparison to Provex City, the next book on my TBR list was crap. For that reason alone, instead of it being a A-, I HAVE to bump this book up to an A+. Not many books haunt me days after I finish the last page and leave me wondering “What’s next?”
(I received a copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review.)
What marks this book as five star quality is the characters. After the first couple of chapters, I no longer felt like I was reading a book, rather peeking into the lives of Oliver and Desiree and the rest of the cast. Not once did the teenagers act like anything but teenagers. The only character that seemed to “guide” the story was Mr. Gordon, which was a much needed thing considering how much trouble this lot attracted. Left to their own devices, the story could of easily rambled on another hundred pages, until Oliver and friends stumbled into the right direction.
Oliver is naive and insecure when we first meet him. He’s jealous of how easily his older brother, Jeremy, blends into the crowd. Desiree is a show-stopper and when Oliver first meets her, it’s clear that the two are meant to be together, however, there’s one problem. Desiree has a boyfriend and she has no intention of breaking up with Eli. Eli is mostly a background character and only shows up to remind the reader that yes, Desiree is still not available to date. But not only does Desiree have a boyfriend, but she plays matchmaker and hooks Oliver up with her best friend, Anna.
The “magic” is very unique. Like Mr. Gorden tells Oliver: Anyone can do magic, but only certain people can believe they can make magic happen. In a weird way, Mr. Gordon opens up Oliver up to the matrix. I really like how there’s so much depth to both the plot and the characters. I kind of guessed what happened with Jeremy at the end, but the rest came at a surprise. When I actually figured out what Provex City was, I was stunned. I can’t wait to see more about this place in the future.
I typically let my nephew read books of this genre that I get for review, but since he’s only 10, I don’t think his mother would approve of this book. There’s underage drinking, implications of teenage sex, and minor violence. This is a book meant to be read by teenagers and adults (Although I did read parts of it out loud to my toddler. Then again, I read him pieces of every book I read but erotic. That would be awkward.).
I didn’t realize how much I truly enjoyed the characters and plot of this novel until I picked up my next book. In comparison to Provex City, the next book on my TBR list was crap. For that reason alone, instead of it being a A-, I HAVE to bump this book up to an A+. Not many books haunt me days after I finish the last page and leave me wondering “What’s next?”
(I received a copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review.)
February 18, 2013
This review was originally posted at Pages of Forbidden Love
I was very excited to jump into this story because it sounded like something fresh for the YA genre. First off I’m a sucker for male pov’s in YA books and I liked the idea of a ghost story mixed with some serious mind powers and a city that I have never heard of before. All of the pieces drew me into wanting to read this book, plus it helped that one of my favorite bloggers recommended it!
The characters to me seemed very real, that they had real teenage problems. Sometimes teens in fantasy or paranormal books seem to just run around doing whatever they wish at any given moment with no parents around to stop them and personalities that sometimes seem more adult that teen. So I’m grateful that the author gave real teens. Oliver was awkward and bullied at school, he wasn’t your bad boy to be certain and I liked that he seemed more like any normal teenage guy, he had his insecurities and his problems asking girls out so I really liked that about his character. Then there was the larger than life Desiree who was just a fun character, the girl who seemed sure about her quirky personality but had her moments of weakness which I really enjoyed. I would say I really liked just about every character except for Anna, I felt her to be dull and not right for Oliver’s life.
The storyline while interesting was a bit of a confusing mess at times. There were so many different plot pieces that at times I had a hard time convincing myself that they would all come together in the end. There is Kafka who is a bad man who seems to be in a strange skill set of certain powers, Mr. Gordon and his lessons he needs to teach Oliver, Oliver’s father and his death, TJ who is the ghost, and Provex City. For a long portion of the book I was really struggling to understand what all the random pieces had to do with one another, plus I wanted answers. I do have to say I was a little impressed with the fact that most of the random story plot lines did come together in a way in the end. I’m still not too sure what TJ’s real role in all of this is but I’m hoping the next book answers some still unanswered questions and moves the storyline along a little faster now that we know some huge back plot pieces.
Overall, I did like this book for the great characters and the way the author was able to bring a moment of clarity to the end of the story. There are still a few questions I have so I’m interested to see more of Provex City in the second book because I feel it is a bit unexplored at this point and I need to know more.
3.5 Hearts
I was very excited to jump into this story because it sounded like something fresh for the YA genre. First off I’m a sucker for male pov’s in YA books and I liked the idea of a ghost story mixed with some serious mind powers and a city that I have never heard of before. All of the pieces drew me into wanting to read this book, plus it helped that one of my favorite bloggers recommended it!
The characters to me seemed very real, that they had real teenage problems. Sometimes teens in fantasy or paranormal books seem to just run around doing whatever they wish at any given moment with no parents around to stop them and personalities that sometimes seem more adult that teen. So I’m grateful that the author gave real teens. Oliver was awkward and bullied at school, he wasn’t your bad boy to be certain and I liked that he seemed more like any normal teenage guy, he had his insecurities and his problems asking girls out so I really liked that about his character. Then there was the larger than life Desiree who was just a fun character, the girl who seemed sure about her quirky personality but had her moments of weakness which I really enjoyed. I would say I really liked just about every character except for Anna, I felt her to be dull and not right for Oliver’s life.
The storyline while interesting was a bit of a confusing mess at times. There were so many different plot pieces that at times I had a hard time convincing myself that they would all come together in the end. There is Kafka who is a bad man who seems to be in a strange skill set of certain powers, Mr. Gordon and his lessons he needs to teach Oliver, Oliver’s father and his death, TJ who is the ghost, and Provex City. For a long portion of the book I was really struggling to understand what all the random pieces had to do with one another, plus I wanted answers. I do have to say I was a little impressed with the fact that most of the random story plot lines did come together in a way in the end. I’m still not too sure what TJ’s real role in all of this is but I’m hoping the next book answers some still unanswered questions and moves the storyline along a little faster now that we know some huge back plot pieces.
Overall, I did like this book for the great characters and the way the author was able to bring a moment of clarity to the end of the story. There are still a few questions I have so I’m interested to see more of Provex City in the second book because I feel it is a bit unexplored at this point and I need to know more.
3.5 Hearts
March 17, 2013
I love Oliver.
It’s true; I want to run away with him. Provex City was awesome. I know I say a lot of books are good, and it’s true, in my opinion are. But there are some author’s that create a world far beyond what you expected from them and Michael Pierce is definitely one of those authors. I have read a lot of books, no really I have and so many of them have similar plots. Sure, they each have their own twists and turns, but there have been very few books with a truly original plotline.
I can legit count the number of books with them on one hand and Provex City has not only been added to the list, but just shot up to my second favorite! I love this plot. I want to have this plots babies. Pierce is an evil genius. Yes, evil because I need to know what happens next and there are no more pages in the book! Rude.
I don’t often read stories from the point of view of a male main character. Not because I have anything against male leads, but because a lot of the stories I read are more on the girly side. So, it was a nice change seeing how guys view things like starting a new school, meeting girls, and having family issues. It was a fresh take on things and I think Pierce did a nice job of staying true to what makes teenagers them.
I really want to fangirl about everything that happens in this book and all the cool twists that I didn’t see coming. I also have so many questions about characters and whether or not they are allies or enemies. But I don’t want to spoil the book because then you won’t get to have the same jaw dropping reaction I did at certain parts.
I will say this, it’s action packed and though there are a few times where I was like why are you crying Oliver don’t be a bitch, he really stepped up and was there for his Mom. Oh! Did I mention my love for Desiree? She’s this awesome spunky almost sidekick to Oliver. They’re best friends, but I swear it’s so much more and neither of them realize it…Or do they? (I’m laughing evilly right now)
But seriously I am drawing so many pink fluffy hearts around this book and its characters. I can’t wait to read the next installment and journey with Oliver to remember his forgotten past.
January 24, 2013
This review is also posted on my blog, Anatea's Bookshelf
I love this book! There is so much to it, and honestly, I didn't expect it to be so good. Provex City is the book I've been searching for years, and finaly I've found it.
The story is told from male's perspective which only adds to why I liked it so much. I love reading a book from male's perspective because there aren't much books with a male as a leading character.
Oliver is starting school in a new place where he doesn't know anyone. He tries to blend in, but the only person who is nice to him is Desiree. He is very insecure about himself and doesn't know how to act around girls, what to say or do in some moments. It doesn't help that his brother is already popular. Soon, strange things begin to happen and his history teacher, Mr. Gordon, decides to help him and teach him stuff he never dreamed could be true.
I liked Oliver. He's just a normal boy with a lot of insecurities, girl problems and you can really relate to him. He's not some super-hot-good-looking-guy, he's a normal teenage boy without superpowers or sparkling skin and fangs.
The other character I liked a lot is Mr. Gordon. I saw his character as a younger version of Dumbledore. He is wise, he teaches children and everything he says has some depth and it makes you think if that stuff really could be possible?
This book has elements of paranormal, but I felt so close to it that in moments I actually forgot that it isn't true and it is all fictional.
The romance didn't go exactly as I wanted it to go, but it was still sweet.
You probably ask yourself what does the title has to do with this book? Well it has a lot, but I won't say much because it would be too spoilery. But let me say this, if I could choose one fictional city I wanted to live in, it would probably be Provex City
Overall, I really enjoyed this book and I can't wait for the next book to come out as this one ends in quite a cliffhanger. I'd recommend this book to everyone. It is hard to imagine that someone wouldn't like it.
I love this book! There is so much to it, and honestly, I didn't expect it to be so good. Provex City is the book I've been searching for years, and finaly I've found it.
The story is told from male's perspective which only adds to why I liked it so much. I love reading a book from male's perspective because there aren't much books with a male as a leading character.
Oliver is starting school in a new place where he doesn't know anyone. He tries to blend in, but the only person who is nice to him is Desiree. He is very insecure about himself and doesn't know how to act around girls, what to say or do in some moments. It doesn't help that his brother is already popular. Soon, strange things begin to happen and his history teacher, Mr. Gordon, decides to help him and teach him stuff he never dreamed could be true.
I liked Oliver. He's just a normal boy with a lot of insecurities, girl problems and you can really relate to him. He's not some super-hot-good-looking-guy, he's a normal teenage boy without superpowers or sparkling skin and fangs.
The other character I liked a lot is Mr. Gordon. I saw his character as a younger version of Dumbledore. He is wise, he teaches children and everything he says has some depth and it makes you think if that stuff really could be possible?
This book has elements of paranormal, but I felt so close to it that in moments I actually forgot that it isn't true and it is all fictional.
The romance didn't go exactly as I wanted it to go, but it was still sweet.
You probably ask yourself what does the title has to do with this book? Well it has a lot, but I won't say much because it would be too spoilery. But let me say this, if I could choose one fictional city I wanted to live in, it would probably be Provex City
Overall, I really enjoyed this book and I can't wait for the next book to come out as this one ends in quite a cliffhanger. I'd recommend this book to everyone. It is hard to imagine that someone wouldn't like it.
January 25, 2013
I have never been a big reader of fantasy but lately I have found myself being drawn to them more and more and *gasp* even liking them!
The fact that this story is told from the male point of view of Oliver, helps too. Oliver is so likeable. He is just your ordinary down to earth very real feeling teenage boy. He isn't a bad boy, he isn't super popular, not a jock, just...average (or so it seems) and I adore that about him. He has insecurities and fears and hopes and dreams just like the rest of us. He doesn't have everything figured out and he doesn't know what he is doing half the time, but again, that is what makes him so believable and so appealing.
When Oliver moves to a new town and into the house that may be haunted, his world really starts to change. When a new teacher takes a liking to him and starts to show him what is really possible, his world does change. Oliver learns things that he never knew, about himself and the world around him. We never get everything all at once but rather bits and pieces through resurfacing memories and through the things Mr. Gordon shows him. And it is pretty clear from the get go and his mom is hiding something. That Oliver and Jeremy are special in some way, we just don't know how yet.
I loved the Room of Enlightenment, it reminded me so much of Harry Potter and the Room of Requirements. I couldn't help it, I had to smile at some of the similarities, though they were few.
Desiree was an interesting character. I couldn't help but like her in all her eccentricities.
Really this was a great read and I like it way more than I was anticipating. I don't want to say too much more on it but, if you like fantasy, YA and a story told through the voice of a very likeable male protagonist, then please do give this one a try. I don't think you will be disappointed.
The fact that this story is told from the male point of view of Oliver, helps too. Oliver is so likeable. He is just your ordinary down to earth very real feeling teenage boy. He isn't a bad boy, he isn't super popular, not a jock, just...average (or so it seems) and I adore that about him. He has insecurities and fears and hopes and dreams just like the rest of us. He doesn't have everything figured out and he doesn't know what he is doing half the time, but again, that is what makes him so believable and so appealing.
When Oliver moves to a new town and into the house that may be haunted, his world really starts to change. When a new teacher takes a liking to him and starts to show him what is really possible, his world does change. Oliver learns things that he never knew, about himself and the world around him. We never get everything all at once but rather bits and pieces through resurfacing memories and through the things Mr. Gordon shows him. And it is pretty clear from the get go and his mom is hiding something. That Oliver and Jeremy are special in some way, we just don't know how yet.
I loved the Room of Enlightenment, it reminded me so much of Harry Potter and the Room of Requirements. I couldn't help it, I had to smile at some of the similarities, though they were few.
Desiree was an interesting character. I couldn't help but like her in all her eccentricities.
Really this was a great read and I like it way more than I was anticipating. I don't want to say too much more on it but, if you like fantasy, YA and a story told through the voice of a very likeable male protagonist, then please do give this one a try. I don't think you will be disappointed.
October 19, 2013
Disclaimer: I received my copy of PROVEX CITY to review for a book tour. I was in no way compensated for my opinion, which follows.
It was really refreshing for me to read a book with a male protagonist. It isn't that it hasn't happened, but it hasn't happened in the last stream of books (wonderful though they were) I've read! And often, male protagonists don't sound male, if that makes any sense.
The beginning of this book read a little younger than I was expecting, but quickly turned more towards the upper end of YA. There is some serious background that we're just not seeing in the beginning between Oliver and his older brother, Jeremy. I got the feeling that while Jeremy was looking out for his brother, there was also some hidden animosity. And it didn't really make sense as Oliver is the one living in Jeremy's shadow.
I truly enjoyed the "what if" scenario presented to Oliver by Mr Gordon and the "magic". It makes you wonder if that is true for everyone or just for Oliver since he, though he doesn't remember it thanks to a pill, is from someplace else. Provex City is on a different plane of consciousness, a higher one if you will, and that is where Oliver and his brother and mother are from, although none remember it for their own safety. As Oliver learns more and more from Mr Gordon, he is also dealing with high school and its complications: bullies, school work, jealous boyfriends, a opposite sex best friend, and a new girlfriend.
I liked this realm of possibilities Michael Pierce has created for us. Energy healing, various planes of consciousness, layered on top of one another, etc. Parallel dimensions are always fascinating...but what about TJ? He committed suicide, yet he's sentient wherever he is and able to communicate with Oliver! Oh and the ending? Yes, you should get book 2 while you're buying book one. Just a suggestion! ;)
It was really refreshing for me to read a book with a male protagonist. It isn't that it hasn't happened, but it hasn't happened in the last stream of books (wonderful though they were) I've read! And often, male protagonists don't sound male, if that makes any sense.
The beginning of this book read a little younger than I was expecting, but quickly turned more towards the upper end of YA. There is some serious background that we're just not seeing in the beginning between Oliver and his older brother, Jeremy. I got the feeling that while Jeremy was looking out for his brother, there was also some hidden animosity. And it didn't really make sense as Oliver is the one living in Jeremy's shadow.
I truly enjoyed the "what if" scenario presented to Oliver by Mr Gordon and the "magic". It makes you wonder if that is true for everyone or just for Oliver since he, though he doesn't remember it thanks to a pill, is from someplace else. Provex City is on a different plane of consciousness, a higher one if you will, and that is where Oliver and his brother and mother are from, although none remember it for their own safety. As Oliver learns more and more from Mr Gordon, he is also dealing with high school and its complications: bullies, school work, jealous boyfriends, a opposite sex best friend, and a new girlfriend.
I liked this realm of possibilities Michael Pierce has created for us. Energy healing, various planes of consciousness, layered on top of one another, etc. Parallel dimensions are always fascinating...but what about TJ? He committed suicide, yet he's sentient wherever he is and able to communicate with Oliver! Oh and the ending? Yes, you should get book 2 while you're buying book one. Just a suggestion! ;)
October 14, 2013
Original review posted on Gin's Book Notes...http://ginsbooknotes.com
Provex City is book 1 in Michael Pierce’s Lorne Family Vault series. It is a young adult fantasy novel that is a mixed bag of genres and emotions wrapped up in a fascinating and original story told mostly from fifteen-year-old, Oliver Grain’s, point-of-view.
All of the characters are very well developed and easy to identify with but Oliver easily became my favorite. Oliver is your “average” teenage boy. He is beginning a new school, worried about making new friends, and feels he is overshadowed by his annoying and always popular, older brother, Jeremy. Oliver learns that much of what he has believed about himself, his family, and his world is a lie and knowing who to trust and what to believe is more difficult than he ever imagined it could be.
There is a lot going on in this story, not just with the plot, but the characters, their emotions, and the whole mystery surrounding Oliver, his family, and Provex City. I found myself having to pause or reread a passage several times to make sure I was following the story correctly but as I continued to read the confusion was cleared away and the more I read, the deeper I fell, into the story and worlds created by Michael Pierce.
At the end of the book you feel a small sense of closure but are left with many more questions than answers and will definitely want to continue Oliver’s story and read, Book 2, SUSY Asylum.
I really liked this story and enjoyed the unique story line, world building, and well developed characters. This is a series and author that I will continue to follow.
Provex City is book 1 in Michael Pierce’s Lorne Family Vault series. It is a young adult fantasy novel that is a mixed bag of genres and emotions wrapped up in a fascinating and original story told mostly from fifteen-year-old, Oliver Grain’s, point-of-view.
All of the characters are very well developed and easy to identify with but Oliver easily became my favorite. Oliver is your “average” teenage boy. He is beginning a new school, worried about making new friends, and feels he is overshadowed by his annoying and always popular, older brother, Jeremy. Oliver learns that much of what he has believed about himself, his family, and his world is a lie and knowing who to trust and what to believe is more difficult than he ever imagined it could be.
There is a lot going on in this story, not just with the plot, but the characters, their emotions, and the whole mystery surrounding Oliver, his family, and Provex City. I found myself having to pause or reread a passage several times to make sure I was following the story correctly but as I continued to read the confusion was cleared away and the more I read, the deeper I fell, into the story and worlds created by Michael Pierce.
At the end of the book you feel a small sense of closure but are left with many more questions than answers and will definitely want to continue Oliver’s story and read, Book 2, SUSY Asylum.
I really liked this story and enjoyed the unique story line, world building, and well developed characters. This is a series and author that I will continue to follow.
February 15, 2013
What a wonderful and rare read. After the first couple of chapters you really get into this book. Oliver is the new kid in town. Starting a new high school and moving into a new house with a haunting past. The boy who used to live in Oliver's room committed suicide and sometimes Oliver can feel his presence. Oliver is having a tough time adjusting to high school unlike his popular brother, Jeremy, who manages to snag the hottest girl in town. Oliver befriends the cute Desiree, her boyfriend Eli and friend Anna. Desiree pushes Oliver and Anna together but maybe there is more going on between Oliver and Desiree than they want to admit.
Oliver is drawn to his teacher Mr. Gordon, who takes an interest in Oliver. He teaches Oliver to open and free his mind. Anyone can do magic and it is there for the taking if he is bold enough to take the first step. Is there really such a thing as a parallel universe? When Jeremy disappears, Oliver has to use what he has learned in order to go find him. He is the only one who may hold the clues to find him.
This book leaves you with as many questions as it does answers. There is so much packed into this book it is hard to hit all the high points. From Oliver's missing childhood memories to his deceased father, it will keep you guessing. I was so disappointed when the book ended and I am so looking forward to the next book in this series. Michael Pierce has written a wonderful book. It is one of the best books I have read in a while. I recommend this book to everyone. Read it!
Oliver is drawn to his teacher Mr. Gordon, who takes an interest in Oliver. He teaches Oliver to open and free his mind. Anyone can do magic and it is there for the taking if he is bold enough to take the first step. Is there really such a thing as a parallel universe? When Jeremy disappears, Oliver has to use what he has learned in order to go find him. He is the only one who may hold the clues to find him.
This book leaves you with as many questions as it does answers. There is so much packed into this book it is hard to hit all the high points. From Oliver's missing childhood memories to his deceased father, it will keep you guessing. I was so disappointed when the book ended and I am so looking forward to the next book in this series. Michael Pierce has written a wonderful book. It is one of the best books I have read in a while. I recommend this book to everyone. Read it!
July 17, 2012
I found this book extremely entertaining. Michael Pierce did a great job of creating a compelling story that leaves me wanting more. The idea of a boy being able to break the barriers between dimensions and see ghosts as well as other amazing things is definitely a good read.
I’m looking forward to the next installment in the series. There are so many great aspects of this book that can be built upon and I’m excited to see which direction Pierce decides to take his characters.
I’m looking forward to the next installment in the series. There are so many great aspects of this book that can be built upon and I’m excited to see which direction Pierce decides to take his characters.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
August 10, 2012
This is the first non-mainstream book that I've read since connecting with self published and aspiring writers in a blogging network. I'm not going to lie, I went into this not expecting much. I mean, I'm used to reading novels by authors that I will never speak to or correspond with in any way. To think that someone I've communicated with, even someone who's read bits and pieces of my work, would produce something exceptional just wasn't on my radar. To be fair, I think my preconceived notions stemmed from reading post after post from many lesser known writers of the YA genre and not connecting with the material. There was something that drew me to this book, however, and I am happy to report that it did not disappoint. Michael Pierce may have written the first book in a series where the main character is a boy in high school, but I did not feel like I was reading a book written for teenagers. While there are coming of age aspects and familiar challenges that appear to most of us who've been through high school, the core of this book contains a solid, interesting and well told story. If you like sci-fi and ghost stories, then this would be a good read for you because it's got both! Do you miss Harry Potter? Well, then here's your replacement. It's the first in a series... and I do love a good series. I intend to write a more thorough book review on Amazon where I purchased this in e-book format for an amazingly low price. I recommend that you go and do the same.
August 8, 2012
This book is pretty good.
It's told in first person from the perspective of a boy named Oliver. There's plenty of angst, the boy is the focus of the attention from two girls, and I liked the experimentation with drugs like alcohol (this is what kids do).
The most incredible portion of the story involves Oliver's discovery of Provex City, a place he's able to travel to using what can only be described as a paranormal power. Provex City is a remarkable place populated by people as varied as the ones on Earth, but with more impressive technology (or magic), most notably being the ability to heal others.
I would recommend this read to anyone that is looking for a fast contemporary read told from the boy's perspective.
It's told in first person from the perspective of a boy named Oliver. There's plenty of angst, the boy is the focus of the attention from two girls, and I liked the experimentation with drugs like alcohol (this is what kids do).
The most incredible portion of the story involves Oliver's discovery of Provex City, a place he's able to travel to using what can only be described as a paranormal power. Provex City is a remarkable place populated by people as varied as the ones on Earth, but with more impressive technology (or magic), most notably being the ability to heal others.
I would recommend this read to anyone that is looking for a fast contemporary read told from the boy's perspective.
January 19, 2013
I'm going to admit straight out that when I first started Provex City I was utterly confused. This book somehow manages to have a fantasy/sci fi feel while still walking in the contemporary genre. It's odd at first. Still, the more I read, the deeper I was pulled in. It was amazing.
As a very character driven reader, I really appreciated Pierce's writing style. Oliver is the main character and he is so beautifully built, so wholly fleshed out, that it's hard not to like him. His life is what you'd expect a normal teenage boy's to be. Family, friends, and of course girl problems. That is, until he finds out just how extraordinary he really is.
Which brings me to the one area I had a bit if issue with. Although I totally understand the need to suspend disbelief in a story like this, I still had so many unanswered questions after finishing. I would love to know more about Oliver's ability and definitely about the other world! Here's hoping for another book so I can sate my curiousity.
Despite any small issues I may have had though, Provex City ultimately ended as an enjoyable read for me. A bit of magic and a touch of romance, this kept me immersed. I definitely recommend you give it a shot.
As a very character driven reader, I really appreciated Pierce's writing style. Oliver is the main character and he is so beautifully built, so wholly fleshed out, that it's hard not to like him. His life is what you'd expect a normal teenage boy's to be. Family, friends, and of course girl problems. That is, until he finds out just how extraordinary he really is.
Which brings me to the one area I had a bit if issue with. Although I totally understand the need to suspend disbelief in a story like this, I still had so many unanswered questions after finishing. I would love to know more about Oliver's ability and definitely about the other world! Here's hoping for another book so I can sate my curiousity.
Despite any small issues I may have had though, Provex City ultimately ended as an enjoyable read for me. A bit of magic and a touch of romance, this kept me immersed. I definitely recommend you give it a shot.
November 2, 2012
Provex City by Michael Pierce leaves the reader guessing all the way through. It is hard to say much about the story line itself without giving away spoilers, so I won’t say too much.
The characters interact with one another well and it is hard to work out what is going on, until close to the end of the story, which keeps you guessing all the time.
The setting is mostly in an ordinary high school where the main character, Oliver is bullied by a gang of school yard bullies. He finds help from a ghost who haunts his bedroom, a teacher with secrets who helps him to tap into a way to his past and another existence lost to his memory and a girl he has feelings for, but is involved with someone else.
Oliver’s past is the key to his future, but he remembers nothing from before his family’s unfortunate circumstances after a devastating fire changed their lives.
I enjoyed Provex City and as I said before, was kept guessing until the end.
The characters interact with one another well and it is hard to work out what is going on, until close to the end of the story, which keeps you guessing all the time.
The setting is mostly in an ordinary high school where the main character, Oliver is bullied by a gang of school yard bullies. He finds help from a ghost who haunts his bedroom, a teacher with secrets who helps him to tap into a way to his past and another existence lost to his memory and a girl he has feelings for, but is involved with someone else.
Oliver’s past is the key to his future, but he remembers nothing from before his family’s unfortunate circumstances after a devastating fire changed their lives.
I enjoyed Provex City and as I said before, was kept guessing until the end.
June 15, 2013
Provex City by Michael Pierce leaves the reader guessing all the way through. It is hard to say much about the story line itself without giving away spoilers, so I won’t say too much.
The characters interact with one another well and it is hard to work out what is going on, until close to the end of the story, which keeps you guessing all the time.
The setting is mostly in an ordinary high school where the main character, Oliver is bullied by a gang of school yard bullies. He finds help from a ghost who haunts his bedroom, a teacher with secrets who helps him to tap into a way to his past and another existence lost to his memory and a girl he has feelings for, but is involved with someone else.
Oliver’s past is the key to his future, but he remembers nothing from before his family’s unfortunate circumstances after a devastating fire changed their lives.
I enjoyed Provex City and as I said before, was kept guessing until the end.
The characters interact with one another well and it is hard to work out what is going on, until close to the end of the story, which keeps you guessing all the time.
The setting is mostly in an ordinary high school where the main character, Oliver is bullied by a gang of school yard bullies. He finds help from a ghost who haunts his bedroom, a teacher with secrets who helps him to tap into a way to his past and another existence lost to his memory and a girl he has feelings for, but is involved with someone else.
Oliver’s past is the key to his future, but he remembers nothing from before his family’s unfortunate circumstances after a devastating fire changed their lives.
I enjoyed Provex City and as I said before, was kept guessing until the end.
June 18, 2012
Well, first of all I loved this book.
My initial interest was that there would be a ghost in this story, and that it was YA.
Micheal's take is very imaginative and it is so much more than a ghost story. It reminded me of The Matrix in a lot of ways. I love the tension, the discoveries, the action scenes, and the romantic tension between Oliver and Desiree (with Eli and Anna adding a lot of complications).
It is a wild ride of a hero's journey for Oliver. Most of the characters are not what they seem, and he has to deal with some mean bullies and falling in love with someone who already has a boyfriend. There is inspirational philosophy throughout the book. I especially liked the characters, I fell in love with Desiree right away and I loved Mr. Gordon and his training sessions with Oliver.
Andrea
My initial interest was that there would be a ghost in this story, and that it was YA.
Micheal's take is very imaginative and it is so much more than a ghost story. It reminded me of The Matrix in a lot of ways. I love the tension, the discoveries, the action scenes, and the romantic tension between Oliver and Desiree (with Eli and Anna adding a lot of complications).
It is a wild ride of a hero's journey for Oliver. Most of the characters are not what they seem, and he has to deal with some mean bullies and falling in love with someone who already has a boyfriend. There is inspirational philosophy throughout the book. I especially liked the characters, I fell in love with Desiree right away and I loved Mr. Gordon and his training sessions with Oliver.
Andrea
October 22, 2013
You can read the full review on my blog.
Oliver is a character you learn to love as the story moves forward, and I found the other characters really intriguing as well- especially Desiree, TJ, and Jeremy. Jeremy had the most spunk to him, and there was this exciting air of mystery to him throughout the whole novel. You can clearly tell that there is a lot more to TJ's and Desiree's stories that I hope the author will elaborate more on in the sequel, SUSY Asylum. The magic of the story was unique in that that it is not magic, rather plains of consciousness and realms of possibilities that average humans do not see, but could if they wanted to- a refreshing aspect.
Oliver is a character you learn to love as the story moves forward, and I found the other characters really intriguing as well- especially Desiree, TJ, and Jeremy. Jeremy had the most spunk to him, and there was this exciting air of mystery to him throughout the whole novel. You can clearly tell that there is a lot more to TJ's and Desiree's stories that I hope the author will elaborate more on in the sequel, SUSY Asylum. The magic of the story was unique in that that it is not magic, rather plains of consciousness and realms of possibilities that average humans do not see, but could if they wanted to- a refreshing aspect.
July 5, 2012
so good.
this book has everything you could want.
action?
check.
strong characterization?
check.
romance?
check.
creepy bits?
check.
driving plot?
check
originality?
triple check.
just so much to love here. and so much that happens.
and i'm just extremely stoked that it's the first of a series, because i want to hear more from oliver and the gang.
well done, mr. pierce. well done.
:)
this book has everything you could want.
action?
check.
strong characterization?
check.
romance?
check.
creepy bits?
check.
driving plot?
check
originality?
triple check.
just so much to love here. and so much that happens.
and i'm just extremely stoked that it's the first of a series, because i want to hear more from oliver and the gang.
well done, mr. pierce. well done.
:)
September 24, 2012
Absolutely loved this book! Michael Pierce has an incredible imagination, and weaves a captivating story!
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