Impurity

by Bellakentuky

Zach Thompson is an ordinary teenager just out looking to have some fun. One night he embarks on an evening of partying with his friends and discovers that there are unseen forces at work in his life, forces that could ultimately determine his destiny.

36 pages, Kindle Edition

First published April 26, 2012

About the author

Kent DuFault is a photographer and an author. He often writes under the pseudonym, Bellakentuky. Why Bellakentuky? It is a nickname that resulted from a romance that spanned two continents. He uses the nickname to commemorate that loving relationship with his wife, Clarisa. Bellakentuky has a special fascination with the "short story" and writes many short stories and novellas. He does have several full length novels under way.

Reviews

[Clarisaponcedeleon · Rating 5 out of 5]

I really like this story. It was a bit short. I didn't realize it was a short story. But the author did a great job of characterization and weaving an interesting story in a short period of time. I especially liked Bryce and Starr. If you're into the supernatural, I think you'll like this. It's free on Smashwords by the way.

[ChaoticallyNatasha · Rating 5 out of 5]

VERY interesting with relatable events and consequences that could happen.

[Tuan Ho · Rating 5 out of 5]

I've never smoked pot before, but after reading this, I'll definitely make sure to never smoke it at all.

The story is intriguing, funny, and at times very intense.

If you've ever been in a situation where you've felt peer pressure, then this story will rekindle those memories (pardon the pun).

Bellakentuky's writing reminds me of the great short stories by Raymond Carver. He pulls you in and drags you along for the ride.

Overall, I definitely had a lot of fun reading this.

[Melissa · Rating 1 out of 5]

Awful