Just plain bad! I was reading this book alongside another book and decided to focus on this one. Well that wasn't the best idea. It takes off at about the 40% mark and starts to get interesting, building up different characters and storylines, building an elaborate and intriguing plot. Then it falls flat. The main character is severely overpowered compared to every other character in the book, sometimes. It is like reading about Superman, but he chooses for some odd reason not to use any of his powers and gets beat by Batman, well it is like reading a Batman vs. Superman comic. The lead character Asher is a gritty human that doesn't like others and doesn't make friends easily, until he does and then it's pretty much just instant friendship. There are several other likeable characters that are introduced, but they tend to disappoint or be killed off (spoiler) like he was trying to pull some George Martin stuff, but without the well-developed character, or the first person chapters from the killed off character. The POV changes constantly within a chapter, paragraph, or although rare, sentence. You don't have the continuity of storytelling that you would expect from non-fan fiction, which I think this should be classified as. As fan fiction I would give it at least 3 stars, because I would expect the editorial mistakes, and the continuity issues. As an actual novel I can't believe I am giving it 2 stars.
Major Cons are numerous, but I will try to sum up the most annoying and grating. First and foremost, I have the kindle version and it has some of the worst editing I have ever seen, toward the end of the book there is a quote that is italicized and has nonsensical repeated words right in the middle of it. If anyone has actually read through this version and gave it a thumbs up, they need to give a refund or get a different profession or hobby. Next I would say is the inconsistency we are talking DBZ levels of power difference from scene to scene.
***Spoiler***
The lead character has the most powerful magical artifact on the planet on his finger, and it has been lost for over a thousand years. It is small and he wears it as a ring. This ring allows him infinite use of magic without knowledge of magical spells, or the need to store up energy like the other characters in the book. He almost never uses it though, and when he does it is at strange times. He will choose to heal himself a few hours after a fight instead of during it. He will choose to use the most useless magical spells instead of being creative, even though he is portrayed as a tactician and all around awesome dude. He doesn't lose the ability, he just chooses not to use it. Then the final battle in the book he all but gives the ring away without even bothering to use it to defend himself to the bad guy who he knows is going to use it for evil. He for some reason doesn't remember his past, but there is no good reason for that, because he isn't a baby when the events in question happened and they aren't particularly stressful compared to the rest of his life. The author could have easily given him something that he could drop, not use at times, doesn't fully understand, or otherwise can't always use, but no he has it, and just doesn't use it for no good reason.
The next bad thing would be the Elves, not that they aren't great, but again they are inconsistent. They can either be extremely perceptive, or snuck up on. They can either be incredibly mighty warriors or be defeated by a single human. Seriously several elven warriors were easily defeated by a single (larger than average) human in one scene and just one elf kills him later with almost no effort. A legendary almost godlike thousand plus year elf can be defeated by a single human that is no more than 50. Yeah seams a little unlikely considering the writing in this very same document. They are often times snuck up on by well anything, but other times can see for miles, and are near supernaturally perceptive.
Next would be the Arakesh, this is a league of assassins that is near immortal in the past 40 years not one has been killed and left, only 2 have been known to be killed in combat. In 40 YEARS! Then they meet a small contingency of somewhat competent soldiers, the lead character, and some elves they are easily bested and only manage to take down an amount of humans equal to their numbers. Then later on after having difficulty one on one in the earlier mentioned encounter the lead character beats hundreds by himself, it actually read that the assassins were having trouble getting through the massed bodies of their comrades.
Then I would say dragons and mermaids. These aren't bad characters they are awesome, and well written, if not briefly mentioned. Like he just needed some cool stuff to add and further the story a little, again they are great but it was just not enough to bother. The characters largely depended on your current knowledge of fantasy characters as well, not an original work basing his system off of either D&D or LOTR or something similar, seems like Tolkien.
Good stuff! Not a lot. There were some great scenes, the love interest seems tasteful, the magic seems well done sometimes. The scenes are well explained (minus certain editorial oversights). The overall objective seems fun, and exciting. Don't waste your time with this book like I did. If writing this review causes one person not to pick it up I have done my job. I have already caused at least 4 people not to read it by word of mouth. Not to say that this writer doesn't have a bright future, and that other books won't be great, but don't take a lot of shortcuts to publishing, then send out inconsistent, poorly edited fan fiction and call it decent.