Dragon Empire is Science fiction, Fantasy, Action and Adventure book for readers thirteen and up. Fifteen year old John and twelve year old Grace were regular children from New York who lived a regular life, until something happened and they ended up in a world ruled and sustained by seven Dragons. The two children were the only pure humans there. They were to undergo a series of training for a terrifying fate ahead. In the world full of peace and harmony, the Dark Dragon raised hell and broke the balance that upheld that very peace. He created a monster designed to slay Dragons, so the rest of the six would be powerless against him. They were to face a terrifying foe, and were still clueless on how to deal with the Dark Dragon. If he was killed, balance would still be broken. A prophecy foretold that the ones who underwent all sorts of training and discoveries would be the ones to partake in a war that would decide the fate of their future. This fantasy adventure series features a large cast of characters, combat sequences, discoveries, supernatural powers and suspense. Find out how the two siblings survive long enough and grow strong enough to do as the prophecy stated; restore balance in the world.
Shahid Junior Aziz was born in Almaty Kazakhstan, 1995. His place of residence is Pakistan.
He was multi-system educated throughout the years as he and his family traveled a lot. He speaks English, Russian, Japanese and Urdu.
He started taking interest in writing at the age of 13-14 in the form of written roleplay, and took on the challenge of writing a book at the age of 15. He finished the book when he was 16.
I enjoyed reading this story, however, this book desperately needs an editor.
The writing is fragmented, jumbled, and switches past tense and present tense up very often. There are also words used that are completely incorrect for the context. Characters and scenarios are introduced, and then suddenly described in great detail much later, often in the middle of something else. Many sentences even contradict themselves. This does seem to improve as the book goes on.
Many characters are not even introduced and are simply referred to as white tiger warrior or the like, even when there are many of them. It was often confusing as to which exact character the author meant at that moment.
Despite all of that, I enjoyed the tale. Overall the premise of the story is sound, if a bit simplistic.
I must urge the author to hire a professional editor and turn this tale into something that will delight readers.