Before I begin, I want to applaud Jake and Kate Persy for sharing their story with the world. It takes a lot of guts to put your work on display for other to critique, and they did just that.
Also, I received an eBook copy of this book for an honest review so here we go:
Codename: Chimera is about the death of a famous millionaire, who is found with a book on ancient Greek mythological creatures. Kevin Kris, a private detective, is hired to prove that the millionaire’s wife is to be blamed; however, as Kevin and his team dig deeper into the mystery, they start the unravel the contents of Codename: Chimera.
Overall, Codename: Chimera is a pretty solid debut novel. When it comes to mysteries, more often than not, I end up solving the problem long before the story finishes; however, with this book, I found myself guessing throughout the entire read, which was such a refreshing feeling.
What I did find that this story lacked is more complex characters. The main character Kevin Kris is way too perfect for my liking. Not only is he smart and über resourceful, but he’s also a trained fighter, who happens to be friends with all the right people. How convenient. He is never depicted in a bad light, and while the other characters would struggle to figure out the little mysteries in the story, he’s always at ease with pretty much anything. Penny, Kevin Kris’ assistant, was so much of a Mary Sue that I can’t even talk about her right now, although I did like Michael, Kevin Kris’ best friend. I thought he added an interesting flare to the trio.
Also, the story didn't seem complete. The narration was too choppy, certain sentences just didn't sound right, and there was a surprising amount of grammatical errors in the text. And I’m gonna put it out there: I hated the dialogue, which sucked because dialogue is usually my favourite. The dialogue in this book felt too exposition-heavy, and it didn't sound the way people usually talk. All of the dialogue just sounded really awkward once you say them out loud.
I hate sounding so mean when I give negative reviews, especially since the authors probably worked really hard on this, but giving a dishonest review would be a disservice to other book-lovers and the authors themselves. That being said, this story has a lot of potential, and if given enough time and work, I think it could be a really great mystery novel.