Wingless and Cursed

by D.M. White

108 pages, Paperback

Published December 14, 2012

About the author

Dawn White resides in southern CA with her husband and three daughters. She has always been an avid reader and seems to live a busy life as a wife and mother. In between home schooling her children and taking care of the house she finds a few minutes at a time to write her novella series. Wingless and Damned is now available! Wingless and Cursed is the YA version of Wingless and Damned and will be published under D.M. White.

Reviews

[Julia · Rating 2 out of 5]

This is the same book as Wingless and Damned. I downloaded both of them before I realized they were the exact same book. Why did the author put out the book twice with different titles? Confusing.

I thought the story had promise, but the writing style was lacking. There were a lot of grammatical errors. And the story jumped around with very little explanation. I was especially annoyed with the battle scene, when Lea enters the battle scene, and suddenly she is surrounded by dismembered bodies. Where did they all come from. In the paragraph before, all the warriors were alive. We can infer they were killed in battle, but we didn't get to read about it. It could have been an epic battle scene. Instead we were left with a very short chapter where we basically jump from we are in a battle, to we have won the battle.

I think the story needs to be fleshed out more. It is a good idea for a book, but we never come to care for any of the characters.

[Tyf]

Amazon freebie 5/13