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Outlander Leander #1
Flute of the Wind Queen
Leander is an energetic young man who wants to become a treasure hunter. When his dad is deployed he sees it as an opportunity to go on his first adventure; which unfortunately leads him straight into enemy territory. All ambition and no skill or experience, he stumbles his way around enemy camps to find the famous relic the Wind Queen left behind.
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First published December 2, 2012
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February 12, 2013
I wasn’t sure what to expect from this book when I first started to read it. I fully admit that I’m somewhat biased against books with Manga-styled covers. Don’t get me wrong. I like Manga. But I don’t feel Manga-styled stories translate well to literature, primarily because much of its appeal lies in the artwork, as well as the unrealistic action that often takes place within its framework. Thankfully, this book isn’t a Manga-styled book, but rather, a well-told piece of fantasy fiction with a compelling storyline and interesting characters.
What impressed me most about this book is the story isn’t your run-of-the-mill RPG-ish style fantasy adventure as the cover art might lead one to believe. There’s a real story here that’s told with verve and some occasional humor. Joining the main character, Leander, on his quest to find the lost Flute of the Wind Queen, is a joy. I especially enjoyed the themes the book touched upon such as growing up, trust, responsibility, friendship, family, and the futility of war. All elements which strengthens the storyline and gives it depth. The focus on action-adventure brings it all together, culminating in a delightful tale full of some exciting scenes where you can't help but root for Leander to find the missing treasure.
Some of the passages read a little slow. But the story is well-written and edited. It’s also worth mentioning that the book periodically features beautifully hand drawn Manga-styled artwork. They certainly help to bring the scenes in the book to life as well as add another layer of quality to the presentation. Flute of the Wind Queen is the first installment in a series that looks to be fun to read. I am certainly looking forward to seeing where the story goes from here.
4 Stars for some very creative and delightful storytelling.
What impressed me most about this book is the story isn’t your run-of-the-mill RPG-ish style fantasy adventure as the cover art might lead one to believe. There’s a real story here that’s told with verve and some occasional humor. Joining the main character, Leander, on his quest to find the lost Flute of the Wind Queen, is a joy. I especially enjoyed the themes the book touched upon such as growing up, trust, responsibility, friendship, family, and the futility of war. All elements which strengthens the storyline and gives it depth. The focus on action-adventure brings it all together, culminating in a delightful tale full of some exciting scenes where you can't help but root for Leander to find the missing treasure.
Some of the passages read a little slow. But the story is well-written and edited. It’s also worth mentioning that the book periodically features beautifully hand drawn Manga-styled artwork. They certainly help to bring the scenes in the book to life as well as add another layer of quality to the presentation. Flute of the Wind Queen is the first installment in a series that looks to be fun to read. I am certainly looking forward to seeing where the story goes from here.
4 Stars for some very creative and delightful storytelling.
May 4, 2018
A boy seeking adventure and notoriety travels into enemy territory seeking a famous artifact. While dodging detection and trying to find his way home, he learns that there are more to his "enemies" than he previously assumed.
This book had fantastic moments. I especially liked some of the dialogue between Deckard and Leander. Witty moments, fun overall feel. I loved the twist at the end.
I just wanted... More. More characterization, more world building, a more three-dimensional experience (and more pictures!). I think this author has a lot of potential. There were some real gems in here...
Favorite line: "So the question is, does that make you brave or stupid?"
I smirked at him. "It makes me stupid if I get caught and brave if I make it back home."
I just did not emotionally connect with any of the characters.
There was also a lot of "telling" versus "showing" (this is something I struggle with when writing too), which made the world building a little less believable to me.
But all that mentioned, I really don't want to belittle the work of a very talented writer. I just, personally, as a reader, would appreciate more character building dialogue (the dialogue was for the most part fantastic) and less "telling" (this is this and that is that).
In short: a fun book with great little writing gems throughout that I wanted a little more from.
Thank you to the author for giving me a copy of the book in exchange for an honest review.
This book had fantastic moments. I especially liked some of the dialogue between Deckard and Leander. Witty moments, fun overall feel. I loved the twist at the end.
I just wanted... More. More characterization, more world building, a more three-dimensional experience (and more pictures!). I think this author has a lot of potential. There were some real gems in here...
Favorite line: "So the question is, does that make you brave or stupid?"
I smirked at him. "It makes me stupid if I get caught and brave if I make it back home."
I just did not emotionally connect with any of the characters.
There was also a lot of "telling" versus "showing" (this is something I struggle with when writing too), which made the world building a little less believable to me.
But all that mentioned, I really don't want to belittle the work of a very talented writer. I just, personally, as a reader, would appreciate more character building dialogue (the dialogue was for the most part fantastic) and less "telling" (this is this and that is that).
In short: a fun book with great little writing gems throughout that I wanted a little more from.
Thank you to the author for giving me a copy of the book in exchange for an honest review.
March 9, 2013
Fun and easy to read.
Flute of the Wind Queen is the debut story of Leander, a teen-aged Naggian whose greatest dream is to follow in the footsteps of his hero, Tevias, and become a reknowned treasure hunter. The story opens with Leander sneaking (not so stealthily) into a theatre basement hoping to find the lost Flute of the Wind Queen, a treasured relic of his country which disappeared when a neighboring country invaded.
But his inexperience and a crashing fall from rotting scafolding quickly attracts the attention of one of the actresses, who decides to let him go after a brief encounter. They meet up again a short time later by chance and decide that the flute must have been looted by the Geuranian army. Leander decides to risk a foray into enemy territory, and on a whim Ellora, the actress, decides to help him get there.
My favorite things about this story are the close calls, rookie mistakes and lucky breaks that Leander experiences. He's an imperfect hero just starting on his chosen path, so he isn't handed success. I also enjoy how he comes to understand that the world isn't all black and white, right and wrong, when he meets an irreverent Geuranian soldier who reveals that the "enemy" attacks on his city weren't completely unprovoked as Leander had always assumed they were.
I also enjoyed the illustrations. They were well done and complimented the story without distracting from it. One only one picture didn't quite match the vision that the words evoked in my mind. I won't say which due to spoilers but it didn't synch with my interpretation of what was going on.
Overall, the Flute of the Wind Queen is a quick, fun read. There are lessons, but they aren't too deep or heavy handed. And, Leander is a likeable fellow who I wouldn't mind following in future installments.
Note: I received a free copy of this book in return for an honest review.
Flute of the Wind Queen is the debut story of Leander, a teen-aged Naggian whose greatest dream is to follow in the footsteps of his hero, Tevias, and become a reknowned treasure hunter. The story opens with Leander sneaking (not so stealthily) into a theatre basement hoping to find the lost Flute of the Wind Queen, a treasured relic of his country which disappeared when a neighboring country invaded.
But his inexperience and a crashing fall from rotting scafolding quickly attracts the attention of one of the actresses, who decides to let him go after a brief encounter. They meet up again a short time later by chance and decide that the flute must have been looted by the Geuranian army. Leander decides to risk a foray into enemy territory, and on a whim Ellora, the actress, decides to help him get there.
My favorite things about this story are the close calls, rookie mistakes and lucky breaks that Leander experiences. He's an imperfect hero just starting on his chosen path, so he isn't handed success. I also enjoy how he comes to understand that the world isn't all black and white, right and wrong, when he meets an irreverent Geuranian soldier who reveals that the "enemy" attacks on his city weren't completely unprovoked as Leander had always assumed they were.
I also enjoyed the illustrations. They were well done and complimented the story without distracting from it. One only one picture didn't quite match the vision that the words evoked in my mind. I won't say which due to spoilers but it didn't synch with my interpretation of what was going on.
Overall, the Flute of the Wind Queen is a quick, fun read. There are lessons, but they aren't too deep or heavy handed. And, Leander is a likeable fellow who I wouldn't mind following in future installments.
Note: I received a free copy of this book in return for an honest review.
October 26, 2013
I signed up to read and review this book by mistake. Goes to show that not all mistakes are bad. It’s a top notch YA novel; an easy read, witty, and with good characters. The moral aspects of the story are delivered well too.
Leander is an excellent hero. His motivations are simple and endearing, as he aspires to be a treasure hunter like his hero Tevias – starting with the flute of the Wind Queen, lost in an act of war. He is a young man trying to find his place in the world and make his mark – a good character for a teen audience. I do have a soft spot for treasure hunters, but Leander also appeals for his innocence and the way he bravely bumbles his way through his maiden quest. He’s offset nicely by the fiery and slightly mysterious Ellora, and the argumentative Deckard.
The setting, the nations of Nagdecht and neighbouring Gueran, is a modern fantasy world. It has been filled out nicely, with recent war between the nations and cultural misconceptions arising from propaganda. It reminds me somewhat of Berlin before the wall came down, or the cold war of the 1980s. And certainly, the futility of war is a theme this book also explores.
I expected a lightweight read for a young adult novel, but it has some surprisingly tender moments, such as Leander’s account of the attack and the wait for his father to come home. Yes, it has the potential to explore some aspects of the story and characters in more detail, but as a YA novel, I have no complaints.
Overall, Flute of the Wind Queen is a well-written, crisply edited book, punctuated nicely by Silvia Texido Viyuela’s illustrations. Good read. Give it to your teenagers.
Leander is an excellent hero. His motivations are simple and endearing, as he aspires to be a treasure hunter like his hero Tevias – starting with the flute of the Wind Queen, lost in an act of war. He is a young man trying to find his place in the world and make his mark – a good character for a teen audience. I do have a soft spot for treasure hunters, but Leander also appeals for his innocence and the way he bravely bumbles his way through his maiden quest. He’s offset nicely by the fiery and slightly mysterious Ellora, and the argumentative Deckard.
The setting, the nations of Nagdecht and neighbouring Gueran, is a modern fantasy world. It has been filled out nicely, with recent war between the nations and cultural misconceptions arising from propaganda. It reminds me somewhat of Berlin before the wall came down, or the cold war of the 1980s. And certainly, the futility of war is a theme this book also explores.
I expected a lightweight read for a young adult novel, but it has some surprisingly tender moments, such as Leander’s account of the attack and the wait for his father to come home. Yes, it has the potential to explore some aspects of the story and characters in more detail, but as a YA novel, I have no complaints.
Overall, Flute of the Wind Queen is a well-written, crisply edited book, punctuated nicely by Silvia Texido Viyuela’s illustrations. Good read. Give it to your teenagers.
March 5, 2013
Book Review
The Flute of the Wind Queen is the first book in the Outlander Leander series. Despite my reservations over reading a novel which had manga style illustrations, this novel turned out to be very interesting. The characters were well developed, multidimensional and realistic. Leander, the main character, for instance was a normal boy who was rash and reckless and yet a brave risk taker. He had elements of the hero and the bumbling normal teenager, making him endearing. This allows the reader, especially the teenagers, to establish an emotional connection with someone like themselves who has both good and bad aspects in his personality.
The other important character, Ellora, provided an interesting balance since she was more grounded, smart and practical. The story flowed very well and maintained a well-balanced pace. Additionally, the author effectively recreated the world of Nagdecht, allowing the reader to accurately visualize his representation with the vivid illustrations and well-placed descriptions of the setting. The story is well-layered, keeping the reader guessing as to what would happen next and never faltering in terms of excitement. Finally, the direct language puts the reader in Leander’s shoes, as if experiencing everything alongside him. This adds an emotional aspect to the adventure, keeping the reader engaged, especially in the most climactic scenes of the book. Overall, this was a surprisingly fun read, and I would recommend it to all, especially young adults and fans of the Hunger Games series, as the writing style is similar.
The Flute of the Wind Queen is the first book in the Outlander Leander series. Despite my reservations over reading a novel which had manga style illustrations, this novel turned out to be very interesting. The characters were well developed, multidimensional and realistic. Leander, the main character, for instance was a normal boy who was rash and reckless and yet a brave risk taker. He had elements of the hero and the bumbling normal teenager, making him endearing. This allows the reader, especially the teenagers, to establish an emotional connection with someone like themselves who has both good and bad aspects in his personality.
The other important character, Ellora, provided an interesting balance since she was more grounded, smart and practical. The story flowed very well and maintained a well-balanced pace. Additionally, the author effectively recreated the world of Nagdecht, allowing the reader to accurately visualize his representation with the vivid illustrations and well-placed descriptions of the setting. The story is well-layered, keeping the reader guessing as to what would happen next and never faltering in terms of excitement. Finally, the direct language puts the reader in Leander’s shoes, as if experiencing everything alongside him. This adds an emotional aspect to the adventure, keeping the reader engaged, especially in the most climactic scenes of the book. Overall, this was a surprisingly fun read, and I would recommend it to all, especially young adults and fans of the Hunger Games series, as the writing style is similar.
April 19, 2014
Flute of the Wind Queen by Eisah is a middle grades YA science fiction fantasy story about a young man named Leander and his adventures recovering a stolen royal flute from a foreign land.
During his break-in at a local theatre to find information about the legendary instrument of the Wind Queen, seventeen-year-old Leander teams up with the pragmatic Ellora. The flute disappeared several years ago during their town’s invasion by the Geuranians. Convinced that the Geuranians took the flute as pillage, the two teens concoct a plan to hide Leander in a crate and ship it into the enemy’s territory so he can recover the flute.
One of the best elements of Flute of the Wind Queen was the artwork on the cover and other pictures sprinkled throughout the text. My Kindle Fire turned these full-color gems into a delightful visual element that complimented the story. The clever interactions between Leander and Ellora made for a fun read, and the plot tossed in some unexpected turns that kept me reading to the very end.
The story mixed fantasy troupes, such as two not-so-different races with pointed ears, and science fiction elements like computer touch screens and space station ports. This amalgamation made for a jarring read at the beginning. But the story’s progression brought these diverse threads together in a satisfactory way that pleased this reader.
Flute of the Wind Queen is an entertaining early-YA story relating gentle adventures about two fantasy races that are not so different from the rest of us. I especially enjoyed the beautiful illustrations along the way.
During his break-in at a local theatre to find information about the legendary instrument of the Wind Queen, seventeen-year-old Leander teams up with the pragmatic Ellora. The flute disappeared several years ago during their town’s invasion by the Geuranians. Convinced that the Geuranians took the flute as pillage, the two teens concoct a plan to hide Leander in a crate and ship it into the enemy’s territory so he can recover the flute.
One of the best elements of Flute of the Wind Queen was the artwork on the cover and other pictures sprinkled throughout the text. My Kindle Fire turned these full-color gems into a delightful visual element that complimented the story. The clever interactions between Leander and Ellora made for a fun read, and the plot tossed in some unexpected turns that kept me reading to the very end.
The story mixed fantasy troupes, such as two not-so-different races with pointed ears, and science fiction elements like computer touch screens and space station ports. This amalgamation made for a jarring read at the beginning. But the story’s progression brought these diverse threads together in a satisfactory way that pleased this reader.
Flute of the Wind Queen is an entertaining early-YA story relating gentle adventures about two fantasy races that are not so different from the rest of us. I especially enjoyed the beautiful illustrations along the way.
April 7, 2013
Fun, well-plotted adventure story that moves fast and has some interesting twists and turns. Reading it felt a little like playing a video game: I was a human-like creature with funny ears, plunged into an alternate reality, overcoming obstacles and facing danger, in pursuit of a bizarre quest. Books can start anywhere, and this one starts in the middle, with a back story that is gradually filled in later.
The hero is impulsive, resourceful, and sweet-natured...very easy to root for...but the motivation for his quest seems light. He's risking life imprisonment or death for the sheer glory of bringing back a valuable object?...On the other hand, he is a teenager....
The other main characters are a formidable female whom we meet early, and a laid-back male who turns up later. The dubious trustworthiness of these two adds to the story's suspense.
Recommended for those who like light, action-oriented, young-adult fiction. The illustrations are a nice bonus.
The hero is impulsive, resourceful, and sweet-natured...very easy to root for...but the motivation for his quest seems light. He's risking life imprisonment or death for the sheer glory of bringing back a valuable object?...On the other hand, he is a teenager....
The other main characters are a formidable female whom we meet early, and a laid-back male who turns up later. The dubious trustworthiness of these two adds to the story's suspense.
Recommended for those who like light, action-oriented, young-adult fiction. The illustrations are a nice bonus.
March 24, 2013
I liked this story. It's a fast-paced novel geared to a young adult reader of 15-18, told by the 17-year-old Leander as he starts off on his adventure to find the flute of the Wind Queen. Slowly, thorugh his eyes, his home town of Nagdecht unfolds and we find out why he would even take on such a risky task.
I like the way the scene descriptions accent the action and there is always something going on. He meets up with Ellora and they take off together, both having the same goal. But can he trust her? As he passes into enemy territory, we get a bit of history as to why the two nations are at war.
Building a fantasy world is not an easy task and found this a refreshing and enjoyable read.
I like the way the scene descriptions accent the action and there is always something going on. He meets up with Ellora and they take off together, both having the same goal. But can he trust her? As he passes into enemy territory, we get a bit of history as to why the two nations are at war.
Building a fantasy world is not an easy task and found this a refreshing and enjoyable read.
May 24, 2013
Flute of the Wind Queen is a fantasy adventure for young readers. It was entertaining and well written. The book includes several nice illustrations. Our hero is Leander, a seventeen-year-old boy, living on his own while his father is off at war. Told in the first person, Leander often views life with a mild sense of humor. His floppy, expressive ears were funny and his loving relationship with his father was sweet.
The story starts with a bang as Leander, who admires the heroic treasure hunter Tevias, and decides to make a name for himself by finding the Wind Queen’s flute and returning it to her memorial. The queen’s flute disappeared around the time Nagdecht was attacked by neighboring Gueran. Leander teams up with Ellora, an aspiring actress and Deckard, a young Gueranian soldier who has been imprisoned for refusing to fight. Ellora does not seem particularly trust worthy and Deckard is Gueranian, a sworn enemy of Nagdecht.
I found it interesting when the young men argue over war propaganda. Leander was uncomfortable to discover that what he had been led to believe might not be the entire truth. That there are two sides to the conflict and neither land is totally right or wrong.
At only 181 pages, I think the book was too thin and could have been pumped up with more background and some of the tension could have been heightened. I wanted to know about the Wind Queen, why she was so important and what made her talent so special. Why would this young man risk his life for her flute? Some parts of the story were vividly told while other aspects were glossed over or left completely unexplained. For example, how Leander escaped from a wooden packing crate was told in minute detail--which I did not mind because it displayed the hero’s tenacity and sharp reasoning skills. Later when he was captured by Gueranians, the story jumps straight to a prison cell. It felt like something was missing.
Overall, Flute of the Wind Queen was a good story and I would recommend it to young readers who enjoy fantasy. The ending left the reader ready for the sequel.
The story starts with a bang as Leander, who admires the heroic treasure hunter Tevias, and decides to make a name for himself by finding the Wind Queen’s flute and returning it to her memorial. The queen’s flute disappeared around the time Nagdecht was attacked by neighboring Gueran. Leander teams up with Ellora, an aspiring actress and Deckard, a young Gueranian soldier who has been imprisoned for refusing to fight. Ellora does not seem particularly trust worthy and Deckard is Gueranian, a sworn enemy of Nagdecht.
I found it interesting when the young men argue over war propaganda. Leander was uncomfortable to discover that what he had been led to believe might not be the entire truth. That there are two sides to the conflict and neither land is totally right or wrong.
At only 181 pages, I think the book was too thin and could have been pumped up with more background and some of the tension could have been heightened. I wanted to know about the Wind Queen, why she was so important and what made her talent so special. Why would this young man risk his life for her flute? Some parts of the story were vividly told while other aspects were glossed over or left completely unexplained. For example, how Leander escaped from a wooden packing crate was told in minute detail--which I did not mind because it displayed the hero’s tenacity and sharp reasoning skills. Later when he was captured by Gueranians, the story jumps straight to a prison cell. It felt like something was missing.
Overall, Flute of the Wind Queen was a good story and I would recommend it to young readers who enjoy fantasy. The ending left the reader ready for the sequel.
September 11, 2013
I received a free copy of this book in return for an honest, non-reciprocal review.
Flute of the Wind Queen is the first in what promises to be a series of books about Leander, an adventurous teen in the land of Nagdecht, who dreams of being a treasure hunter. He embarks on his first quest in this book, as he searches for a Flute that is a priceless artifact for his country. Unfortunately, he learns that the Flute was stolen during an attack by the country of Geuran, which is seen as a violent enemy, sworn to Nagdecht's destruction. Leander has to travel to Geuran to try to recover the Flute, and this tale recounts his various adventures in the attempt. Along the way he meets and befriends and young Geuranian named Deckard, and Leander learns a lesson about how the mysterious foreigners that his people suspect and fear so much might be living in equal fear of his own country. The lessons about not prejudging people, and getting to know your supposed enemies are not too heavy-handed, and blend in easily with the adventure part of the story.
The story is told in a light, casual way, as one would expect when it is being narrated by a teen. The tone does get more serious and thoughtful at times, as Leander learns certain truths about himself and his world. While the adventure is not too long or overly-complex, it works as an entertaining and easy read. Leander and Deckard's characters are well-fleshed out, although we have yet to get a complete picture of Ellora, a young woman who partners with Leander in his quests. The book ends with the promise of getting to know her better as there are more adventures in store for them.
Flute of the Wind Queen is the first in what promises to be a series of books about Leander, an adventurous teen in the land of Nagdecht, who dreams of being a treasure hunter. He embarks on his first quest in this book, as he searches for a Flute that is a priceless artifact for his country. Unfortunately, he learns that the Flute was stolen during an attack by the country of Geuran, which is seen as a violent enemy, sworn to Nagdecht's destruction. Leander has to travel to Geuran to try to recover the Flute, and this tale recounts his various adventures in the attempt. Along the way he meets and befriends and young Geuranian named Deckard, and Leander learns a lesson about how the mysterious foreigners that his people suspect and fear so much might be living in equal fear of his own country. The lessons about not prejudging people, and getting to know your supposed enemies are not too heavy-handed, and blend in easily with the adventure part of the story.
The story is told in a light, casual way, as one would expect when it is being narrated by a teen. The tone does get more serious and thoughtful at times, as Leander learns certain truths about himself and his world. While the adventure is not too long or overly-complex, it works as an entertaining and easy read. Leander and Deckard's characters are well-fleshed out, although we have yet to get a complete picture of Ellora, a young woman who partners with Leander in his quests. The book ends with the promise of getting to know her better as there are more adventures in store for them.
June 6, 2014
In Flute of the Wind Queen Eisah's protagonist is Leander, a member of the Naggian race whose longing for adventure sends him on a journey to find the Queen's stolen instrument. Along the way, he meets Ellora and later pairs with Deckard, whose Geuranian bloodline should make him an enemy but he turns out to be a friend. The dialogue is fun, the action non-stop and the pacing is swift in this short and mostly satisfying story. Lingering questions remain at the story's end; however, they may be answered in future volumes of the series. Editorial miscues stall the narrative in a few instances, but Eisah does a fine job in creating an engaging story in Flute of the Wind Queen that will appeal to fans of the genre. *I was given this copy free of charge for review purposes.*
May 17, 2014
Confused and Unresolved Plot
Title: Flute of the Wind Queen
Author: Eisah
Genre: Young Adult Science Fiction
Length: 30,000 words (estimated)
Reviewer: Pearson Moore
Rating: 2 stars
Flute of the Wind Queen is the tale of young Leander's quest to retrieve a priceless relic from his people's ancient past, the Flute of the Wind Queen. At great personal risk, Leander crosses enemy lines, finds the flute, and smuggles it back to Nagdecht. He gives the flute to his friend Ellora, and she in turn sells it to a party unnamed in the novel. Ellora splits the money with Leander and the story ends.
Flute of the Wind Queen is at times charming but often mechanical, with no real character development. I did not discern any deeper meaning, though there was brief discussion of an intriguing, advanced concept: the possibility that Leander's country started a war while proclaiming the nation's peaceful nature. If the idea had been developed, I might have awarded another star. The initial recounting of the story of the fabled Wind Queen's Flute led me to believe that this would be the tale of a heroic, selfless young man who retrieved an object representing his nation's cultural heritage. But the ending proved that this story was nothing more than a simple adventure tale.
This is problematic because of the structure of the story. The first telling of the history of the legendary flute would have us attach great importance to the fact that the flute ended up in the hands of the Geuranians, the Naggians' mortal enemies. Because the flute was also the storied possession of the Naggians' greatest ancient leader, the Wind Queen, we are led to believe that retrieving the flute was not only a personal quest, but the embodiment of Nagdecht's desire to define itself as a free and independent country. But we know from the end of the story that the fate of the flute was so unimportant that the person or entity that bought it from Ellora was never identified. For all we know Ellora sold it to a Geuranian. That's a problem, since rescuing the flute was the explicit goal of Leander's quest.
There is nothing wrong in telling an adventure story that has no underlying moral or meaning. Leander was motivated by money, pure and simple, and there's nothing wrong with that. The crux of my disappointment with this short story (about 30,000 words according to the author) is that it was inconsistent, misleading, undeveloped, and left important plot threads (such as the fate of the flute itself) unidentified. Not only is there no rhyme or reason to the story, it is confused and does not bring decisive conclusion to critical story elements.
Conceptual confusion and lack of thought show in inadequate editing as well. A common mistake throughout the novel is inappropriate and too frequent use of exclamation marks. This is often thought to be a sign of an inexperienced writer. Here are a few examples:
"Surely she must have heard about the Queen’s Flute if she worked here!" (Location 97)
"What does people dying have to do with the flute!” (Location 292-293)
"Why did you put the money in the desk!" (Location 2060)
Though the story is marketed as young adult, I have difficulty believing anyone older than 14 would find the story interesting enough to continue to the end. My guess is that the tale may be suitable for children 9 to 12 years of age who are looking for nothing more than an adventure story.
Two stars.
Title: Flute of the Wind Queen
Author: Eisah
Genre: Young Adult Science Fiction
Length: 30,000 words (estimated)
Reviewer: Pearson Moore
Rating: 2 stars
Flute of the Wind Queen is the tale of young Leander's quest to retrieve a priceless relic from his people's ancient past, the Flute of the Wind Queen. At great personal risk, Leander crosses enemy lines, finds the flute, and smuggles it back to Nagdecht. He gives the flute to his friend Ellora, and she in turn sells it to a party unnamed in the novel. Ellora splits the money with Leander and the story ends.
Flute of the Wind Queen is at times charming but often mechanical, with no real character development. I did not discern any deeper meaning, though there was brief discussion of an intriguing, advanced concept: the possibility that Leander's country started a war while proclaiming the nation's peaceful nature. If the idea had been developed, I might have awarded another star. The initial recounting of the story of the fabled Wind Queen's Flute led me to believe that this would be the tale of a heroic, selfless young man who retrieved an object representing his nation's cultural heritage. But the ending proved that this story was nothing more than a simple adventure tale.
This is problematic because of the structure of the story. The first telling of the history of the legendary flute would have us attach great importance to the fact that the flute ended up in the hands of the Geuranians, the Naggians' mortal enemies. Because the flute was also the storied possession of the Naggians' greatest ancient leader, the Wind Queen, we are led to believe that retrieving the flute was not only a personal quest, but the embodiment of Nagdecht's desire to define itself as a free and independent country. But we know from the end of the story that the fate of the flute was so unimportant that the person or entity that bought it from Ellora was never identified. For all we know Ellora sold it to a Geuranian. That's a problem, since rescuing the flute was the explicit goal of Leander's quest.
There is nothing wrong in telling an adventure story that has no underlying moral or meaning. Leander was motivated by money, pure and simple, and there's nothing wrong with that. The crux of my disappointment with this short story (about 30,000 words according to the author) is that it was inconsistent, misleading, undeveloped, and left important plot threads (such as the fate of the flute itself) unidentified. Not only is there no rhyme or reason to the story, it is confused and does not bring decisive conclusion to critical story elements.
Conceptual confusion and lack of thought show in inadequate editing as well. A common mistake throughout the novel is inappropriate and too frequent use of exclamation marks. This is often thought to be a sign of an inexperienced writer. Here are a few examples:
"Surely she must have heard about the Queen’s Flute if she worked here!" (Location 97)
"What does people dying have to do with the flute!” (Location 292-293)
"Why did you put the money in the desk!" (Location 2060)
Though the story is marketed as young adult, I have difficulty believing anyone older than 14 would find the story interesting enough to continue to the end. My guess is that the tale may be suitable for children 9 to 12 years of age who are looking for nothing more than an adventure story.
Two stars.
May 22, 2014
This is a book I received for free through Goodreads Free Reads.
Okay, so I finally got around to reading this book. Truthfully, I wasn’t looking forward to it when I first got it.
Mostly, because I was under the impression that it was a graphic novel (which it isn’t). There are a few black and white pictures here and there, but overall this is a novel with mostly words. Now it’s not like I don’t read novels, but since I initially thought it was a graphic novel I was a bit disappointed. The few pictures in the book are gorgeous though! They may be black and white, but they were so beautifully drawn (as you can probably guess from the cover). So kudos to the illustrator there! If you’re reading this, you should illustrate a full-length graphic novel.
The other reason I was hesitant was because this looked a lot like a children’s book. I thought it was at least YA. At least my younger sister was happy.
[Note: While flipping through the book, I came across the picture on page 148 which is finally what got me excited to read the book. I love subtext…]
Now despite my misgivings starting the book, I was very pleasantly surprised! The book is very fast-paced and starts right in on the action. You meet the main character, Leander as he tries to find a flute owned by the deceased Wind Queen. Why? Because he wants to be a treasure hunter. That is the driving force of the whole book. Leander is really just a kid though (only 17 years old) so he gets the help of a very mysterious girl named Ellora.
I really liked Leander. He came off a bit too innocent and naïve in the beginning, but he was really clever. I have no doubt he’ll probably become a treasure hunter one day. Ellora on the other hand seemed so untrustworthy. I never liked her and even in the end, despite her coming back, I still didn’t like her. What she did was just so rotten and her reason even worse. She didn’t trust him to keep his cool when he was the one that got the flute; that put his life on the line. I’m sure Leander would have been able to keep himself under control after going through what he’d been through. I just did not like Ellora at all.
Deckard… oh my god, Deckard. He was my absolute favourite! His whole personality was just so refreshing. His scenes with Leander made me giggle the whole time. (That may also be because I am a huge fan of BL.) I honestly wished he’d stayed.
My only real problem with the book was probably that some of the events that took place seemed just a bit too coincidental, like the author needed to keep the story going so she had to make something happen. That and it was predictable at times. Nothing really caught me off guard (even Ellora leaving).
Overall, I did like the book a lot. I’m glad I received a copy or else I’m sure I wouldn’t have read it.
Okay, so I finally got around to reading this book. Truthfully, I wasn’t looking forward to it when I first got it.
Mostly, because I was under the impression that it was a graphic novel (which it isn’t). There are a few black and white pictures here and there, but overall this is a novel with mostly words. Now it’s not like I don’t read novels, but since I initially thought it was a graphic novel I was a bit disappointed. The few pictures in the book are gorgeous though! They may be black and white, but they were so beautifully drawn (as you can probably guess from the cover). So kudos to the illustrator there! If you’re reading this, you should illustrate a full-length graphic novel.
The other reason I was hesitant was because this looked a lot like a children’s book. I thought it was at least YA. At least my younger sister was happy.
[Note: While flipping through the book, I came across the picture on page 148 which is finally what got me excited to read the book. I love subtext…]
Now despite my misgivings starting the book, I was very pleasantly surprised! The book is very fast-paced and starts right in on the action. You meet the main character, Leander as he tries to find a flute owned by the deceased Wind Queen. Why? Because he wants to be a treasure hunter. That is the driving force of the whole book. Leander is really just a kid though (only 17 years old) so he gets the help of a very mysterious girl named Ellora.
I really liked Leander. He came off a bit too innocent and naïve in the beginning, but he was really clever. I have no doubt he’ll probably become a treasure hunter one day. Ellora on the other hand seemed so untrustworthy. I never liked her and even in the end, despite her coming back, I still didn’t like her. What she did was just so rotten and her reason even worse. She didn’t trust him to keep his cool when he was the one that got the flute; that put his life on the line. I’m sure Leander would have been able to keep himself under control after going through what he’d been through. I just did not like Ellora at all.
Deckard… oh my god, Deckard. He was my absolute favourite! His whole personality was just so refreshing. His scenes with Leander made me giggle the whole time. (That may also be because I am a huge fan of BL.) I honestly wished he’d stayed.
My only real problem with the book was probably that some of the events that took place seemed just a bit too coincidental, like the author needed to keep the story going so she had to make something happen. That and it was predictable at times. Nothing really caught me off guard (even Ellora leaving).
Overall, I did like the book a lot. I’m glad I received a copy or else I’m sure I wouldn’t have read it.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
May 15, 2013
Eisah's tone is fairly light, with just enough humor to the banter to pull the reader along. There were only a few sentences that slowed me down-it was very beautifully edited and presented. Even though I had a few misgivings with the presentation of the characters' motivations and actions, it was definitely a fun read.
The characters' motivations for the initial plot were barely fleshed out, and did not feel fully realized. I never really understood why Leander trusted Ellora, why Ellora was helping him, or why he was seeking the flute, specifically. I was a bit apathetic to the characters, because of that, but I did enjoy the banter and writing style. I'd love to see it developed with a bit more complexity in that aspect, since all of the other facets of the story were well done.
The illustrations were whimsical touch, although I didn't get much out of most of them, as they appeared very dark on my kindle. I bet they'll be a showstopper on tablets, though, and I just heard Amazon had purchased another tech company with the goods to create color kindles. That would be awesome. The art, from what I saw, was well done, but it was so dark that it was hard to look at, and I skipped past it faster than I otherwise would have.
This is certainly at the younger side of the YA spectrum. The story is fairly straightforward, and is presented in a way that would be most engaging for younger readers. I've been told to skim (and skimmed a few chapters of) a few "mature" YA authors, like Tamora Pierce, and Neal Shusterman. I'd definitely say that the writing style and presentation is oriented for younger readers than those authors' audiences. While it does touch on some of the unpleasantness of a country recovering from an attack, there's certainly nothing that would keep a kid up at night.
The Flute Of The Wind Queen shows a lot of potential, and I hope that Eisah gets to develop the characters a little more thoroughly in later projects.
Note: I received a free copy in exchange for a non-reciprocal, honest review.
November 17, 2017
Leander is a 17 year old teenager from Nagdecht looking for some recognition and respect like his treasure hunting hero Tevias. He lives on an unknown planet, possibly Earth in the year 3397. His father has been deployed to war and he decides this is his opportunity to discover the missing flute of the Naggian Wind Queen. He believes this will bring him the same honor and respect that Tevias holds. With the surprise help from a fellow Naggian woman he realizes the flute is in Geuran, which is also enemy territory. He decides to infiltrate a Geuranian storage facility and rescue the lost treasure. In the process of this adventure he discovers information that contradicts what he has always believed and a friend that he never thought he would have.
The story reminds me of a cross between a young clumsy "Indiana Jones" on a "Goonies" type of adventure. I wish there were more details about the fantasy world and characters. You only really meet 3 characters - 4 if you count the dad who shows up occasionally in the story. I know it's hard to create a fantasy world, especially in 173 pages. As a series, I hope there are more details described about what planet Nagdecht is on and maybe more background information on Leander and the Naggian race.
I enjoyed the book as well as the hand drawn art that was included, even though the few images of Deckard didn't match my mental image of him. It's definitely a good read for the 12-15 age group.
In compliance with FTC guidelines, I received the book for free through Goodreads First Reads.
The story reminds me of a cross between a young clumsy "Indiana Jones" on a "Goonies" type of adventure. I wish there were more details about the fantasy world and characters. You only really meet 3 characters - 4 if you count the dad who shows up occasionally in the story. I know it's hard to create a fantasy world, especially in 173 pages. As a series, I hope there are more details described about what planet Nagdecht is on and maybe more background information on Leander and the Naggian race.
I enjoyed the book as well as the hand drawn art that was included, even though the few images of Deckard didn't match my mental image of him. It's definitely a good read for the 12-15 age group.
In compliance with FTC guidelines, I received the book for free through Goodreads First Reads.
July 3, 2014
This YA story throws you right into the action without wasting any time (a good technique for YA). As we experience the world through Leander’s eyes, we begin to understand the background, personalities, and politics of a place that’s obviously not Earth. The explanations are deftly inserted into the action, without seeming unnatural. I loved the illustrations and find them appropriate for the age this book will probably go over best with (although the protagonist is 17, I’d guess young teens will find the tone and simplicity of this book more to their liking than older teens).
I was just a bit disappointed that there wasn’t more ‘to’ the flute. I guess I’d expected something more mystical or sacred, but this is a very down-to-earth (whatever earth it is) book, practical and pragmatic, and there doesn’t seem to be anything supernatural here. I guess I wanted more ‘reason’ behind the quest, and some explanation for why others didn’t seem to be interested.
Overall, I enjoyed it. It’s well-written without errors or typos or grammatical issues, which makes it easy to become immersed in the world. The sections with Deckard (nod to Bladerunner?) were my favorite; his character was well-drawn and likeable. The pacing was steady throughout. There’s certainly plenty more of this world to fill up a few more volumes. I’d expect more exploration of Leander and Ellora’s relationship next!
I was just a bit disappointed that there wasn’t more ‘to’ the flute. I guess I’d expected something more mystical or sacred, but this is a very down-to-earth (whatever earth it is) book, practical and pragmatic, and there doesn’t seem to be anything supernatural here. I guess I wanted more ‘reason’ behind the quest, and some explanation for why others didn’t seem to be interested.
Overall, I enjoyed it. It’s well-written without errors or typos or grammatical issues, which makes it easy to become immersed in the world. The sections with Deckard (nod to Bladerunner?) were my favorite; his character was well-drawn and likeable. The pacing was steady throughout. There’s certainly plenty more of this world to fill up a few more volumes. I’d expect more exploration of Leander and Ellora’s relationship next!
July 4, 2014
This book flows easily and is fun to read. I really liked the first half of the book, with the protagonist sneaking in a theater! (Art imitating art, perhaps? A form of expression -- the theater -- inside another form of art -- the book.) And the exchanges with a strong female character of around the same age were witty.
The second half of the book was okay for me. I think what lands this four stars is the first half plus the terrific illustrations. I think, though, if you're going to have illustrations, you might as well have one per chapter, otherwise what is the point? Either one at the inset at the beginning of the book, or several (perhaps one per chapter). I thought the repartees between the protagonist and another young man were fine, but not as witty as with the other young female character. The movements around the warehouse and the prison got a bit dull after a while.
I wasn't sure of the motivation to get the flute. The author does well in getting the main character fixated on it and we can share his enthusiasm, even if we're not sure another character of fiction could have that level of motivation. Introducing the personal myth of Tevias as a Indiana Jones-type character was probably a good way to introduce that motivation, although you'd think a boy aged seventeen would seek something dangerous, magical, ghostly, or warlike rather than a musical instrument.
This is a great read for young adults, but maybe more so for middle grades.
The second half of the book was okay for me. I think what lands this four stars is the first half plus the terrific illustrations. I think, though, if you're going to have illustrations, you might as well have one per chapter, otherwise what is the point? Either one at the inset at the beginning of the book, or several (perhaps one per chapter). I thought the repartees between the protagonist and another young man were fine, but not as witty as with the other young female character. The movements around the warehouse and the prison got a bit dull after a while.
I wasn't sure of the motivation to get the flute. The author does well in getting the main character fixated on it and we can share his enthusiasm, even if we're not sure another character of fiction could have that level of motivation. Introducing the personal myth of Tevias as a Indiana Jones-type character was probably a good way to introduce that motivation, although you'd think a boy aged seventeen would seek something dangerous, magical, ghostly, or warlike rather than a musical instrument.
This is a great read for young adults, but maybe more so for middle grades.
November 19, 2025
Eisah has written a great adventure with Flute of the Wind Queen. It is clean enough for the young but the story is well-thought out and interesting enough to capture adult audiences as well. There are also full color pictures scattered throughout that really added to the story.
Even though this book has been self-published it has a professional quality. I was shocked to see how many 2 and 3 star reviews of it there are – my only conclusion is that the author sent the book to reviewers who normally do not read this kind of light-hearted adventure fiction for YA. Adults who only read adult books will probably (and not surprisingly) be interested in this book. The book is similar in nature to Artemis Fowl and great for those who enjoyed that series.
The only thing I would have liked to see was a picture for every chapter. Out of thirteen chapters, seven have a picture and these are unevenly distributed – mostly in the beginning and end chapters of the book. The pictures provide interesting details like the illustrated novels of old. I just wanted a few more of them. Still the story was solid, which is why I highly recommend it for anyone who likes clean adventures and for children ages 10+ (because of reading level, not because there is anything offensive).
I received this book free from the author for an honest review. Unlike most self-published authors whose books I review, I would happily review another one of Eisah’s.
Even though this book has been self-published it has a professional quality. I was shocked to see how many 2 and 3 star reviews of it there are – my only conclusion is that the author sent the book to reviewers who normally do not read this kind of light-hearted adventure fiction for YA. Adults who only read adult books will probably (and not surprisingly) be interested in this book. The book is similar in nature to Artemis Fowl and great for those who enjoyed that series.
The only thing I would have liked to see was a picture for every chapter. Out of thirteen chapters, seven have a picture and these are unevenly distributed – mostly in the beginning and end chapters of the book. The pictures provide interesting details like the illustrated novels of old. I just wanted a few more of them. Still the story was solid, which is why I highly recommend it for anyone who likes clean adventures and for children ages 10+ (because of reading level, not because there is anything offensive).
I received this book free from the author for an honest review. Unlike most self-published authors whose books I review, I would happily review another one of Eisah’s.
May 16, 2013
A coming-of-age adventure. Eisah weaves a fun, fast-paced story from the point of view of 17-year-old Leander. As Leander approaches adulthood he rejects the humdrum and ordinary. He craves adventure and distinction--so much so that he is willing to risk it all.
Eisah creates a new world with differing races and superior technology, which comes to life through description and fabulous illustration. He lays the foundation of cultural and political histories to create conflict, which moves the tale forward, but the tone remains light. Although appropriate for younger readers, there are enough layers to keep any reader interested. In fact, there is a little bit of everything: coming-of-age, adventure, political interest, fantasy, sci-fi, and even romance. The romance is subtle and fleeting but because of the subtlety it possesses a greater charge then if it was more explicitly conveyed.
This is the first in a series to come. I look forward to following Leander's adventures.
Eisah creates a new world with differing races and superior technology, which comes to life through description and fabulous illustration. He lays the foundation of cultural and political histories to create conflict, which moves the tale forward, but the tone remains light. Although appropriate for younger readers, there are enough layers to keep any reader interested. In fact, there is a little bit of everything: coming-of-age, adventure, political interest, fantasy, sci-fi, and even romance. The romance is subtle and fleeting but because of the subtlety it possesses a greater charge then if it was more explicitly conveyed.
This is the first in a series to come. I look forward to following Leander's adventures.
January 4, 2014
Eisah has the right idea for creating interesting characters, but the prose was lacking. It was not strong enough to draw me in and keep me there. The writing needed work, but the story itself was well thought out.
I agree with the review Kevis wrote as well, in saying the cover style could have been different to grab my attention. (However, I realize this is a very personal choice for an author)
3 stars is the best I can do for Flute of the Wind Queen
Overall, it was quick and fun to read. Would I read it again, no. But, I will look for the next book Eiash puts out.
I agree with the review Kevis wrote as well, in saying the cover style could have been different to grab my attention. (However, I realize this is a very personal choice for an author)
3 stars is the best I can do for Flute of the Wind Queen
Overall, it was quick and fun to read. Would I read it again, no. But, I will look for the next book Eiash puts out.
December 14, 2012
Looks interesting. Never read a book like this one. Change is always good.
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March 2, 2013Review to come.
June 21, 2014
coming soon.
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