1.5 for the dumbass heroine and the bland hero and all the STUPID drama.
The prologue was pretty atrocious. I really don’t like when books start out with the characters as kids. Especially when they do stupid things as in here. Marjorie dared Cormac and his twin brother Aidan to climb the chimney and Cormac somehow—I could not understand how—got stuck and Aidan went to help him and somehow got stolen right out of the chimney. Marjorie had been hit on the head and knocked out.
Marjorie would ask about Cormac. Then in his POV we immediately learned he’d ask about her. Of course both of them would ask about the other. Marjorie was sure he blamed her for Aidan. Of course he blamed himself and his inability to save him, considered himself a fool for getting stuck. Oh the stupid similarities.
She referred to it as a foolish, girlish dare. Pretty bad when the character thinks they’re a fool and you agree. This would be a theme with her.
She went to the stable and heard Cormac talking about her to her horse. She thought of going around and listening in at the window, above a cliff. “But she was no fool. She’d be careful.” It’s already been established that she’s a fool.
She got there and of course immediately fell into danger as the rock crumbled. “She’s ever a girlish fool.” Way to make us dislike the heroine!
He said he would move along, “But I’ll take my woman with me,” after he threw the knife. I did like that.
Marjorie asked if he ever thought of Aidan. What kind of stupid question is that? She was an idiot. How could he not think of his TWIN BROTHER WHO WAS KIDNAPPED.
I was glad when they finally kissed and agreed to work together.
It was funny when he said he’d had enough of this Archie. “Knowing the bailie. As though that’s of any use.” Because Archie had said he knew the bailie.
Marjorie did not act like a virgin and that’s a big pet peeve of mine, especially in historical romance where they would have been totally and completely ignorant. She was touching his penis immediately and almost gave him oral. Wha…?
How did she know about sex?? It wasn’t explained at all. And it wasn’t even good. There was Barry any details and it was rushed and not drawn out. Of course she could barely stand foreplay, wanted to get right to it. Just like a 17th century virgin…
Marjorie said “I can’t touch you enough.” I liked that line.
I was so glad that this book hadn’t gone there, he was miraculous really and I was ready to sing praises. And then it went there. Marjorie had thought of him with other women at times and then finally came out and asked if there had been women. He said he was human. But have any found their way into his heart? No. None since her.
Having them know and love each other since childhood and then having him go on to have sex with other women was really shitty.
After, Marjorie told him she didn’t want to leave him, didn’t even want to go to sleep. He said she won’t be leaving him. He finds her when he sleeps. That was a good line.
Majorie was so stupid. She kept calling herself a fool for the way she’d get people into trouble. Like when they’re on the ship and had the boys brought above deck, she just announced that they’d take all the boys, without even talking about it or having a way to do that. Then she was sure she’d gotten Cormac killed, because he stayed behind to fight. She was so impetuous, it was so annoying. Also, skipping completely over the scene so we didn’t get even get to experience what Cormac did was such a waste.
It was more needless drama that Cormac saw Aidan on a ship, talking to the slaver in the other ship, and he decided the thing to do was not tell Marjorie, to protect Aidan. And she might not want to be with someone whose brother was a slaver. Okay.
The meeting with Aidan was horrible. I was hoping he’d make it in here—I definitely didn’t expect him to just sail up to the dock like that—because I’m definitely not planning to read any more in this series. But it was ruined. He was surly and mad at the world, wasn’t nice to Cormac and held a grudge against Ree. It made Ree even more unlikable for her childhood mistake, added to all her adult ones.
They almost had sex then, knowing she wasn’t going to marry him, believing he only asked out of duty for taking her virginity. I was so not in the mood, especially after the argument—so not the right time to have sex. But they didn’t end up, which was even crazier for the mood changes but good since they shouldn’t have been having sex to begin with.
It got even more stupid and dramatic. Marjorie decided to go handle things herself, leaving with Fiona to go check on the boy’s where Archie had taken them. She was sure Archie was to blame after seeing him take money at the bailie’s. Of course that wasn’t the case and he really was good, was only taking money for preventing pregnancy for the wife.
Of course after this, Cormac came back, realizing the right thing to do was tell Ree everything and handle it as a team. Eye roll.
By this time Ree was on board the ship alone, literally armed only with the vague notion that she would “figure it out as she went.” This was so beyond ridiculous and unrealistic, it wasn’t even funny.
I was done with her when she heard someone mention Cormac and wondered if he was in on it. Screw her actually. Slavers took his TWIN BROTHER away, and he’s fighting this with your dumb, impulsive ass, and you think he has something to do with SELLING KIDS. Go be alone, that’s what you deserve, you big screw up.
“She wasn’t such a fool to think she could drop into a meeting of smugglers and kidnappers and save the day…”
Really? Because that’s exactly what she thought.
She saw her uncle and thought he was wrapped up in it. More stupid drama. He was just an investor in the sugarcane plantations because he’s into botony. She saw Aidan with a gun to Cormac’s head and then put together that Cormac hadn’t turned on her; he’s been protecting her and loved her.
Jack and the bailie’s wife owed her uncle. Her uncle was doing this for her, trying to get money for her, but said she’s always like a fox in the henhouse, insisting on hunting for mischief. Made her look really stupid.
The bailie’s wife was cheating on her husband with Jack, the uncle was killed in the melee. The bailie came and arrested his wife. The ship started sinking because Cormac had sabotaged it. Smart considering all the captives were still imprisoned belowdecks. They spent some time talking and stuff before they got to the business of trying to save all those lives. If you thought the drama ended there, you’d be wrong.
One boy was up in the rigging and they had to get him down and throw him over. Cormac waited to save him and Aidan would follow, except he was caught in a line and couldn’t swim, about to be pulled under. Cormac undid the knot and they made it to the boat. He reminded Ree he kept his promise so she had to marry him.
The ending was so rushed. They were married at home. Aidan was present, but Ree wanted to make him give up his quest for revenge to the man who stole him. She didn’t take any accountability for her role in getting Aidan taken. She could have at least apologized. The book started out with her blaming herself; it ended with her not even thinking about it. She even noted Cormac’s guilt at one moment and NONE herself. WTF.
I simply didn’t like this plot or story. The heroine and hero are childhood sweethearts basically, like each other, and the heroine dared the hero and his brother to go up the chimney. The hero got stuck and the brother got grabbed. Cut to them as adults and she’s 23 and needs his help finding a boy in her care who was taken. He pushed her away in the beginning and I couldn’t wait for that to be over, then back and forth ensued between them until the very end. Of course the boy was still in Scotland, after that many days! And easily found.
This was all over the place. Conversations would go in very random turns and just be all over the place. I’ve never read a character like this where topic could be broached and then just bounce to something else the next second. It was jarring.
For having known each other their whole lives, they didn’t really act like it that much. They referenced it, but I expected a big conversation about their past and feelings and it Never happened. Very unnatural. This whole story is very unnatural and unrealistic.
The writing wasn’t good. It was too modern, it wasn’t pretty or funny or interesting. It was boring and dramatic AF.
The references to the devil were just way off. Other heroes have more deserved the title of devil, but not Corman. He came absolutely nowhere near to that in any way, shape, or form. Everyone thought badly of his family for some reason but there was nothing to substantiate their bad opinions. Whaaa—?
I also didn’t get the fact that Marjorie was so pushy at first about them being run out of the castle by the villagers. Why would they do that? Cormac didn’t seem to think anything of it then, but then when he talked to Aidan, he said he expected the villagers to run them out. I was lost.
She made references to electricity, a penny, puzzle piece, things that hadn’t been invented yet.
Just no. Not to everything about this.