I received this book as a free gift from Librarything in exchange for an honest review. I give it 2.5 stars.
As I started the book, I had high hopes. It was fast paced and started with the characters out on the sea. I was intrigued by Luisa, who I thought was going to be the main character. She ends up only being a very minor character that we only see again at the end of the book, and isn't half as interesting as I thought she would be... but I digress.
WARNING: I typically don't have spoilers but in order to explain why I had issues with this book, there will be some below.
From the first chapter, things just got complicated. While the idea for the world of Seven was inventive and had never been done before, it was rife with holes, which may have been the reason it had never been done before. The premise is that if one puts on a magic bracelet they get transported to a magical world where evil abounds at 7am for 1 hr and at 7pm for one hour. But the catch is no time passes in the real world.
Let me start off this discussion explaining that I usually can suspend disbelief because I love magical worlds and as long as inherently everything makes sense, I'll go with it. But I found myself so confused by how these "worlds" worked, it took away from the whole story.
Here I go. First of all, why would anyone want to go to a world that a bunch of evil people are running around trying to kill you, and your only companion is a dead ghost boy who was killed by those same people? Sure, you can do magic, but it seems like the majority of that magic is to kill other people, so what's the point? The main character, Andra, is so shallow that she doesn't believe the dead boy when he says things are dangerous even after he says that he's dead, and to be fair, most of the characters are liars anyway so maybe she knows something I don't, but even after she is almost killed on her first journey to Seven, she still doesn't believe it, and concentrates only on her beautiful horse Sea Star. Andra is just a very unlikeable character- shallow, selfish, thinks she is compassionate because she "wants" to save a little girl from Seven, but to me, it sounded like a flimsy excuse to return to Seven so she can play with her magic more.
Second, so a little girl, Morgan, is missing. She has lost the magical bracelet that kept her grounded in the real world. So in between 7 and 7, she and everyone else without a nice little bracelet go... where? This is unclear. Maybe they just "sleep" and only are activated for 2 hours a day? Otherwise are shooting random magic at people, killing them? Because at the next 7, everything goes into the position that they were left in at 659 in the real world. Right. confusing.
Third, apparently the little girl's mother in the real world KNOWS she's missing and is freaking out on the news looking for her. WAIT A SECOND. I thought no time passed in the Seven world when you were in it... unless you don't have a bracelet, maybe?? The whole "time" paradox makes absolutely no sense to me.
Fourth, "focussed" is spelled "focused."
I appreciate the effort to make a new world, I know how hard it is to create one, I've tried to do it myself. But I think in the end, the whole world fell apart for these reasons and more, and I was distracted from the story, which in reality, wasn't compelling enough to ignore these issues.