It often takes me a while to get to a point in a story where I can’t put a book down, so I was surprised that Alchemy of Light & Shadow drew me in so quickly. I literally could not put it down for the first 50%.
The world is well-crafted, the characters have depth and the chapters were short enough that I never felt disappointed at a change of POV. The universe was both intricate enough and well-explained enough that it was not difficult to follow the alchemical elements and the characters’ journeys.
If some of the plot twists were expected, I was still thoroughly engaged with the political and strategical parts of the story. This, for me, was the strongest part of the book. The worlds created by the author are rich with history and it was easy to visualize the scenes, landscapes and cities. We can feel that this first book only breaches the surface and we have so much more to learn about that universe in the next book.
Another surprise as I read this book, was that I did not like the romance. Whereas it’s usually my favorite part of any book, this one did not click for me, and for several reasons. Mostly, I deeply disliked Sterling and the imbalance in Elisabeth and his relationship. I was very excited at first by this rivals-to-lovers trope, and their game made for promising developments. Once they started interacting though, it felt flat for me. I will not spoiler tag the rest of my remarks on this, but there are vague spoilers as to their relationship.
At first Elisabeth was very cocky and confident and I loved her immediately for it. I remember thinking that she was one of those female characters that people often deem “unlikable” but that I adore. Give me a loud, mouthy and arrogant FMC, and I’ll be a happy reader. However, there comes a twist that changes that, and while I would usually just think that it’s character evolution, the fact that it coincided with the start of their relationship made it hard to consider this as her personal journey.
Sterling, on the other hand, is powerful and composed, he has influence and knows his way around their world better than anyone, while she becomes unsure of herself, develops an unhealthy dose of self-loathing and admires Sterling so much that she considers him the ideal to reach for. She’s in a position where her trust and self-confidence were destroyed because she has been lied to, and he’s the one who has to teach her about herself. I absolutely hated this imbalance of power.
If she had started as this “powerless”, unsure person, it would have been fine. What I resented was the fact that she went from A to B and her personal journey is so tied up with the romance plot that the imbalance felt omnipresent. There were a number of specific things that felt wrong to me and emphasized my feelings on this, unfortunately.
The relationship also lacked the heat I was expecting because the narration does not delve enough into the sensations their feelings provoke, so it often felt like we are were being told what they felt instead of shown. Because of this, the intensity of their feelings felt sometimes overdramatic. Fortunately, Sterling’s POV help to temper with this a bit, and there were enough of incredible other characters to keep me reeled in. The secondary romances, however, I am totally invested in (the existing ones and the ones that were hinted at). I especially adored Morgan, Declan and Janvier and I can’t wait to see what will become of them.
I will say that despite the romance that didn’t work for me, it never crossed my mind to dnf this book and it left me wanting to see more of this world, more of these characters and I hope more of the group dynamic that started to emerge in this first installment, as it’s always what I prefer in books. I’m really excited to see where the author will take us in the second book.
A huge thanks to the author for sending me this ARC to review.