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Mistaken Premise: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
With everything in his favour, 'tis no wonder Fitzwilliam Darcy thinks well of himself. The head of an ancient Norman family, Mr Darcy is the generous and revered master of Pemberley, a respected MP, and a valued friend and neighbour. The powerful Earl of Matlock, his uncle, and his cousin, Viscount Milton, ally with him in Parliament, increasing not only his political influence but his eligibility amongst the most sought-after bachelors of the ton.
Joining his schoolmate at the latter's leased estate, Darcy knows there will be no one of any consideration in the world in the backwaters of Meryton, Hertfordshire.
But amongst these rustic savages, Darcy discovers a hidden a fine-eyed young lady of kindness and wit. Miss Elizabeth, the second daughter of Longbourn, is as open and amiable as she is graceful and intelligent, caring for the needs of the estate's tenants and deflecting incivility with smiles and bon mots.
Yet notwithstanding Elizabeth's many perfections, Darcy leaves her behind, for how can he damage the Darcy heritage by marrying the penniless daughter of an obscure country squire?
But Fitzwilliam Darcy shall soon learn... not everything is as he believes.
Mistaken Premise is a Lizzy coming-coming-of-age story as she grows from an idyllic childhood, through unforeseen turmoil that nearly costs her identity and her life, to ultimately finding her place in the world.
Mistaken Premise is a story of the healing power of love in the worst of circumstances.
Mistaken Premise is a 190,000 word novel using British and historical vocabulary and spelling.
TRIGGER WARNING : non-sexual physical and mental abuse is depicted in this story.
Joining his schoolmate at the latter's leased estate, Darcy knows there will be no one of any consideration in the world in the backwaters of Meryton, Hertfordshire.
But amongst these rustic savages, Darcy discovers a hidden a fine-eyed young lady of kindness and wit. Miss Elizabeth, the second daughter of Longbourn, is as open and amiable as she is graceful and intelligent, caring for the needs of the estate's tenants and deflecting incivility with smiles and bon mots.
Yet notwithstanding Elizabeth's many perfections, Darcy leaves her behind, for how can he damage the Darcy heritage by marrying the penniless daughter of an obscure country squire?
But Fitzwilliam Darcy shall soon learn... not everything is as he believes.
Mistaken Premise is a Lizzy coming-coming-of-age story as she grows from an idyllic childhood, through unforeseen turmoil that nearly costs her identity and her life, to ultimately finding her place in the world.
Mistaken Premise is a story of the healing power of love in the worst of circumstances.
Mistaken Premise is a 190,000 word novel using British and historical vocabulary and spelling.
TRIGGER WARNING : non-sexual physical and mental abuse is depicted in this story.
519 pages, Paperback
Published May 26, 2023
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Cherith Boardman
4 books22 followersCherith Boardman is the mother of the ten best children ever, and Gamma to the world's cutest grandchild. My dh of 31 years and I live with our three youngest and five cats.
I have always been an avid reader, and since childhood, I have amused myself by altering stories - books or movies - in my mind. Fan fiction is a great outlet for me.
I write JAFF stories in between playing chauffeur, helping with schoolwork, babysitting the grand, and grabbing hugs and kisses when I can.
I have always been an avid reader, and since childhood, I have amused myself by altering stories - books or movies - in my mind. Fan fiction is a great outlet for me.
I write JAFF stories in between playing chauffeur, helping with schoolwork, babysitting the grand, and grabbing hugs and kisses when I can.
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April 7, 2023
This is a book that turns P&P on its ear and has more footnotes than most NF books I read; even the scientific kind. Further it has an extensive bibliography.
It is a prose work, an epistolary work and a (excepts of gossip columns like Bridgerton no idea what that is called) work.
There is an interesting story here Lizzy is the heiress of a Duke, no shenanigans; she knows she is the Bennets who are her guardians know she is, most of Meryton know she is. But Ssssshhhhhhh it's a secret
As the author relates examples from her childhood we see her growing up at Longbourn with a good staff, fair guardians and an extensive education and travels.
Unfortunately she is a total MARY SUE!! OMG!!! She doesn't everything better, she rides, she plays the violin, she speaks 47 languages.
When Darcy slights the future Duchess of S (don't remember don't care etc) He is extra scuzzy and stupid. Eventually implying that she was born on the wrong side of the bedcovers. The only saving grace to the beginning of the book is Caroline being extra wicked and cruel
Soon Lizzy turns 18 and is whisked off to town to stay with her Uncle the current Duke and to dazzle the Ton. Darcy gets a telling off and we get to see what Lizzy wore. I am secretly concerned for this author because she put more thought into what Lizzy was wearing for 90% of the time than I do to my entire wardrobe. [Me: Top bottom shoes off we go]
And the book go along with Lizzy dazzling people and being reported about in the gossips columns and people being awful
The the book takes a detour to Angstville and torture porn With Lizzy Banished to a Tory widow to be trained in her future role. I really loathed this part of the book for many reasons and am again grateful that I live in the 21st century where only tiny viruses can keep me locked in my house for months on end and not viscous old bats.
Lizzy eventually is released when her beloved uncle breathes his last and poof she's a duchess Almost immediately more bad stuff happens and Darcy saves her. Then she returns the favor.
And despite his low birth she falls in love and they are going to marry. [RN:After being subjected to a year of torture Lizzy obviously has PTSD and shouldn't be falling in love with anyone.
Then the author gives us 3 weddings of ODC and an epilogue that goes so far into the future I was waiting for WW1 to break out.
It is a prose work, an epistolary work and a (excepts of gossip columns like Bridgerton no idea what that is called) work.
There is an interesting story here Lizzy is the heiress of a Duke, no shenanigans; she knows she is the Bennets who are her guardians know she is, most of Meryton know she is. But Ssssshhhhhhh it's a secret
As the author relates examples from her childhood we see her growing up at Longbourn with a good staff, fair guardians and an extensive education and travels.
Unfortunately she is a total MARY SUE!! OMG!!! She doesn't everything better, she rides, she plays the violin, she speaks 47 languages.
When Darcy slights the future Duchess of S (don't remember don't care etc) He is extra scuzzy and stupid. Eventually implying that she was born on the wrong side of the bedcovers. The only saving grace to the beginning of the book is Caroline being extra wicked and cruel
Soon Lizzy turns 18 and is whisked off to town to stay with her Uncle the current Duke and to dazzle the Ton. Darcy gets a telling off and we get to see what Lizzy wore. I am secretly concerned for this author because she put more thought into what Lizzy was wearing for 90% of the time than I do to my entire wardrobe. [Me: Top bottom shoes off we go]
And the book go along with Lizzy dazzling people and being reported about in the gossips columns and people being awful
The the book takes a detour to Angstville and torture porn With Lizzy Banished to a Tory widow to be trained in her future role. I really loathed this part of the book for many reasons and am again grateful that I live in the 21st century where only tiny viruses can keep me locked in my house for months on end and not viscous old bats.
Lizzy eventually is released when her beloved uncle breathes his last and poof she's a duchess Almost immediately more bad stuff happens and Darcy saves her. Then she returns the favor.
And despite his low birth she falls in love and they are going to marry. [RN:After being subjected to a year of torture Lizzy obviously has PTSD and shouldn't be falling in love with anyone.
Then the author gives us 3 weddings of ODC and an epilogue that goes so far into the future I was waiting for WW1 to break out.
April 1, 2023
There's a good Elizabeth-is-not-a-Bennet story buried in here, the author has raw writing talent, and a lot of research obviously went into the details.
However, the redundancy, over-explaining, irrelevant details, and excessive back stories make it ridiculously long and rambling (over 600 pages!!). Misplaced and/or missing commas abound, as do misplaced modifiers and vague pronoun antecedents.
A book that had the potential to be worth 5 stars had it been properly edited. Frustrating read.
However, the redundancy, over-explaining, irrelevant details, and excessive back stories make it ridiculously long and rambling (over 600 pages!!). Misplaced and/or missing commas abound, as do misplaced modifiers and vague pronoun antecedents.
A book that had the potential to be worth 5 stars had it been properly edited. Frustrating read.
April 10, 2023
Not a Bennet
4.5* rounded up - This review contains mild spoilers.
I’m beginning this review with a trigger warning, as the book includes the sometimes descriptive mental and physical abuse of our heroine, ‘Lizzy’ as she herself is preferably referred to in this book, as opposed to ‘Elizabeth’).
The book is long, and so my review will be.
In the first phase of Lizzy’s life in this ‘not-a-Bennet’ trope, she is born into a titled Scottish family and orphaned at age three when their family home away from Scotland, Netherfield, is destroyed by fire. Her guardianship is then shared by her birth father’s much older brother, Malcom Boyte, (whose titles she will inherit suo jure), and Thomas Bennet, her birth father’s best friend. She lives with her Papa and Mama Bennet and her four foster sisters at Longbourn. She loves them all as they do her. She also has the love and respect of the citizens of Meryton who also protect her. Lizzy and her foster sisters are educated and have governesses and companions. They are always accompanied by chaperones and footmen when out and about. Propriety is adhered to throughout the book. These relationships are outstanding and endearing.
Enter the Bingley party, with all the pride and prejudices one would expect from all them. They are all under the ‘mistaken premise’ that Lizzy and her family are beneath them all in consequence. Many incorrect assumptions are made. This Darcy is especially unlikeable in his pride, too often displaying a more extreme meanness of spirit that I don’t often see in variations. I found myself frustrated and infuriated by him.
“Mary gasped when Mr Darcy dismissed her as “…a bluestocking, whose scars [from smallpox] destine her to spinsterhood if she marries not my aunt’s loathsome lickspittle [Collins].”—quote from book
“She drew herself to her full height, only half-a-foot less than his own. “Mr Darcy, I ought to inform you, I am not Miss Bennet. Instead, I am Miss Elizabeth B—” Mr Darcy stretched to his full height, several inches above her own. How dare she chastise me regarding proper address! “Yes, yes, Miss Elizabeth!” he snapped. “You and your mother should learn not to correct your betters!””—quote from book
Lizzy is masterful in how she handles them, however, both at Netherfield and later in London at her soon-to-happen come out.
The second phase of Lizzy’s life follows her presentation to society as a fiddle-playing heiress, and her education in preparing her to receive the titles she will inherit upon her Uncle Malcom’s death. Darcy will be humbled and mortified at the revelation of her true identity. After a return visit to Longbourn, Mr. Bennet advises he should become Lizzy’s friend, and in this manner, he will redeem himself over time.
At this point, all seems to be going well for Lizzy until another ‘mistaken premise’ on the part of her guardian uncle leads to an almost fatal result from mental and physical abuse when she is placed under the chaperonage of a termagant and abusive tyrant. Due to his pride and implacable stubbornness in not ‘hearing’ Lizzy’s desperate circumstances and removing her from them, it almost kills her. This also led me to feeling anxious, angry and frustrated. I wanted Lizzy’s allies to be more forceful! Where was Darcy? The lengths of time between their meetings seemed endless. Here, I had to suspend my belief somewhat in her friends and family not being able to rescue her, yet in hindsight, once I finished the book, it did fit due to the laws and mores of the times, even though it was difficult to accept.
Finally, the third phase of Lizzy’s life begins with the death of her Uncle Malcom, her inheritance, and a near fatal accident that almost takes Darcy’s life, but ultimately leads to their HEA. When he first tells her he loves her…. Oh my heart! I wept. I loved this time of them together as they both heal.
Paraphrasing another reviewer, this is not a “light and fluffy variation”. It’s definitely serious and sometimes dark, and while the love story takes a back seat for quite a while in my opinion, the journey to the end is worthy of taking. This book is heavy, both in the number of pages (650+ on my Kindle) and in the seriousness of some of its themes. The beginning prologue and chapter focuses much on the genealogy/descriptions of the highly numerous characters in the book, but there are important, relevant snippets and footnotes that shouldn’t be skipped. While they sometimes bog down the flow, as a reader I always take the time to appreciate the research and backgrounds provided by an author and never overlook them. I always learn something new which I like very much. The author excels in this. I even stop to listen and look up musical references as they come up. I want to hear what the characters are playing or listening to.
And speaking of characters — Lizzy’s family and true friends and allies were wonderful. I felt their fear and frustration. Their loyalty and dedication was admirable, especially her grandmother, her friend Rebecca and Morris, her uncle’s major-domo.
As is usual with the writings of Cherith Boardman, whom I consider one of my favourite authors, she provokes the reader with an abundance of varied emotions—some happy, some sad, some tear-provoking, and some full of angst. Allow me to add anger, utter frustration, and finally, ultimate joy thanks to a happy ending that seemed very long in coming.
As I found her other books to be, this one is also very well written, although I do think it could have been pared down somewhat, as I found some sections overly detailed. There are also many characters from other Austen works who were mentioned but didn’t seem all that relevant to the story and I felt could have been left out. There were some proofreading misses, but considering this is such a lengthy book, they were relatively few. It does lean heavy on the narrative side. I would have enjoyed more dialogue.
Because I always get a little anxious when reading this author, I think I may have a love/hate relationship with her books—but in a good way because her stories always stay with me and deeply move me in one fashion or another, and—this is why I read. I am always looking for the next story that will do this to me. So, well done, Ms. Boardman. You did it again and I very much look forward to your next book.
Kisses only, but I rate this as a mature read due to the mentioned physical and mental abuse.
Recommend
February 23, 2023 - Would you believe Amazon Canada would not publish my review as written here? I received a rejection email along with their review guidelines. I read and re-read, taking me a while to figure out they probably don’t like the word “hate”, even if it’s not written in such a way to disparage. Therefore, with that change, and other very minor edits, just to be sure, I resubmitted and it was accepted. I am extremely put out!
Makes me wonder if AI is the determining factor for acceptable reviews. Anyhow, my Goodreads review is my original version.
4.5* rounded up - This review contains mild spoilers.
I’m beginning this review with a trigger warning, as the book includes the sometimes descriptive mental and physical abuse of our heroine, ‘Lizzy’ as she herself is preferably referred to in this book, as opposed to ‘Elizabeth’).
The book is long, and so my review will be.
In the first phase of Lizzy’s life in this ‘not-a-Bennet’ trope, she is born into a titled Scottish family and orphaned at age three when their family home away from Scotland, Netherfield, is destroyed by fire. Her guardianship is then shared by her birth father’s much older brother, Malcom Boyte, (whose titles she will inherit suo jure), and Thomas Bennet, her birth father’s best friend. She lives with her Papa and Mama Bennet and her four foster sisters at Longbourn. She loves them all as they do her. She also has the love and respect of the citizens of Meryton who also protect her. Lizzy and her foster sisters are educated and have governesses and companions. They are always accompanied by chaperones and footmen when out and about. Propriety is adhered to throughout the book. These relationships are outstanding and endearing.
Enter the Bingley party, with all the pride and prejudices one would expect from all them. They are all under the ‘mistaken premise’ that Lizzy and her family are beneath them all in consequence. Many incorrect assumptions are made. This Darcy is especially unlikeable in his pride, too often displaying a more extreme meanness of spirit that I don’t often see in variations. I found myself frustrated and infuriated by him.
“Mary gasped when Mr Darcy dismissed her as “…a bluestocking, whose scars [from smallpox] destine her to spinsterhood if she marries not my aunt’s loathsome lickspittle [Collins].”—quote from book
“She drew herself to her full height, only half-a-foot less than his own. “Mr Darcy, I ought to inform you, I am not Miss Bennet. Instead, I am Miss Elizabeth B—” Mr Darcy stretched to his full height, several inches above her own. How dare she chastise me regarding proper address! “Yes, yes, Miss Elizabeth!” he snapped. “You and your mother should learn not to correct your betters!””—quote from book
Lizzy is masterful in how she handles them, however, both at Netherfield and later in London at her soon-to-happen come out.
The second phase of Lizzy’s life follows her presentation to society as a fiddle-playing heiress, and her education in preparing her to receive the titles she will inherit upon her Uncle Malcom’s death. Darcy will be humbled and mortified at the revelation of her true identity. After a return visit to Longbourn, Mr. Bennet advises he should become Lizzy’s friend, and in this manner, he will redeem himself over time.
At this point, all seems to be going well for Lizzy until another ‘mistaken premise’ on the part of her guardian uncle leads to an almost fatal result from mental and physical abuse when she is placed under the chaperonage of a termagant and abusive tyrant. Due to his pride and implacable stubbornness in not ‘hearing’ Lizzy’s desperate circumstances and removing her from them, it almost kills her. This also led me to feeling anxious, angry and frustrated. I wanted Lizzy’s allies to be more forceful! Where was Darcy? The lengths of time between their meetings seemed endless. Here, I had to suspend my belief somewhat in her friends and family not being able to rescue her, yet in hindsight, once I finished the book, it did fit due to the laws and mores of the times, even though it was difficult to accept.
Finally, the third phase of Lizzy’s life begins with the death of her Uncle Malcom, her inheritance, and a near fatal accident that almost takes Darcy’s life, but ultimately leads to their HEA. When he first tells her he loves her…. Oh my heart! I wept. I loved this time of them together as they both heal.
Paraphrasing another reviewer, this is not a “light and fluffy variation”. It’s definitely serious and sometimes dark, and while the love story takes a back seat for quite a while in my opinion, the journey to the end is worthy of taking. This book is heavy, both in the number of pages (650+ on my Kindle) and in the seriousness of some of its themes. The beginning prologue and chapter focuses much on the genealogy/descriptions of the highly numerous characters in the book, but there are important, relevant snippets and footnotes that shouldn’t be skipped. While they sometimes bog down the flow, as a reader I always take the time to appreciate the research and backgrounds provided by an author and never overlook them. I always learn something new which I like very much. The author excels in this. I even stop to listen and look up musical references as they come up. I want to hear what the characters are playing or listening to.
And speaking of characters — Lizzy’s family and true friends and allies were wonderful. I felt their fear and frustration. Their loyalty and dedication was admirable, especially her grandmother, her friend Rebecca and Morris, her uncle’s major-domo.
As is usual with the writings of Cherith Boardman, whom I consider one of my favourite authors, she provokes the reader with an abundance of varied emotions—some happy, some sad, some tear-provoking, and some full of angst. Allow me to add anger, utter frustration, and finally, ultimate joy thanks to a happy ending that seemed very long in coming.
As I found her other books to be, this one is also very well written, although I do think it could have been pared down somewhat, as I found some sections overly detailed. There are also many characters from other Austen works who were mentioned but didn’t seem all that relevant to the story and I felt could have been left out. There were some proofreading misses, but considering this is such a lengthy book, they were relatively few. It does lean heavy on the narrative side. I would have enjoyed more dialogue.
Because I always get a little anxious when reading this author, I think I may have a love/hate relationship with her books—but in a good way because her stories always stay with me and deeply move me in one fashion or another, and—this is why I read. I am always looking for the next story that will do this to me. So, well done, Ms. Boardman. You did it again and I very much look forward to your next book.
Kisses only, but I rate this as a mature read due to the mentioned physical and mental abuse.
Recommend
February 23, 2023 - Would you believe Amazon Canada would not publish my review as written here? I received a rejection email along with their review guidelines. I read and re-read, taking me a while to figure out they probably don’t like the word “hate”, even if it’s not written in such a way to disparage. Therefore, with that change, and other very minor edits, just to be sure, I resubmitted and it was accepted. I am extremely put out!
Makes me wonder if AI is the determining factor for acceptable reviews. Anyhow, my Goodreads review is my original version.
February 20, 2023
People use word “torture” somewhat loosely
Another well written story by an author whose writing style never disappoints.
TRIGGER EVENTS AND DESCRIPTIONS FOLLOW
The story itself I cannot recommend if the act of true torture turns your stomach. The first use of the word “torture” Darcy uses to describe how much he loved dancing with Lizzie.
But later we are introduced with true torture. Lizzy, who is now only known as Elizabeth is given over to lady of ‘the ton’ to prepare her to be a Duchess. In truth she is her jailer and is tortured, mentally and physically, to mold her and make her controllable for the future. The descriptions of this time are as horrible as the descriptions of the Vietnam POW American prisoners. It turned my stomach.
After she is rescued, I couldn’t make any headway in the story since no one really seemed to understand fully, how could they really, what will be a part of her forever. Some characters mentioned being switch with a cane at boarding school but that was done very infrequently than what happens to Elizabeth. She is systematically starved also to try to make her “dainty”. It was 24/7 torture at times.
I could not care for anyone but her after reading about her unprotected life.
Another well written story by an author whose writing style never disappoints.
TRIGGER EVENTS AND DESCRIPTIONS FOLLOW
The story itself I cannot recommend if the act of true torture turns your stomach. The first use of the word “torture” Darcy uses to describe how much he loved dancing with Lizzie.
But later we are introduced with true torture. Lizzy, who is now only known as Elizabeth is given over to lady of ‘the ton’ to prepare her to be a Duchess. In truth she is her jailer and is tortured, mentally and physically, to mold her and make her controllable for the future. The descriptions of this time are as horrible as the descriptions of the Vietnam POW American prisoners. It turned my stomach.
After she is rescued, I couldn’t make any headway in the story since no one really seemed to understand fully, how could they really, what will be a part of her forever. Some characters mentioned being switch with a cane at boarding school but that was done very infrequently than what happens to Elizabeth. She is systematically starved also to try to make her “dainty”. It was 24/7 torture at times.
I could not care for anyone but her after reading about her unprotected life.
February 17, 2023
Gripping and emotionally engaging as always.
If you’re looking for a light and fluffy variation of Pride and Prejudice then turn around you’re in the wrong book. If you want to have your heart strings pulled by people who will embed themselves in your heart and burrow into your soul then you are where you need to be. Cherith Boardman again writes so expressively that you will laugh with, shout in anger and weep in despair alongside our heroine and her family and friends as they suffer trials and tribulations mixed with splashes of the joys that life can bring. I love how fully immersed you become in this world of theirs which could be a very brutal and unfair place sometimes. Another fabulous and thought provoking story to add to my library to savor again through the years. I’m eagerly awaiting her next story and am filled with anticipation to see what delights await from her talented pen.
If you’re looking for a light and fluffy variation of Pride and Prejudice then turn around you’re in the wrong book. If you want to have your heart strings pulled by people who will embed themselves in your heart and burrow into your soul then you are where you need to be. Cherith Boardman again writes so expressively that you will laugh with, shout in anger and weep in despair alongside our heroine and her family and friends as they suffer trials and tribulations mixed with splashes of the joys that life can bring. I love how fully immersed you become in this world of theirs which could be a very brutal and unfair place sometimes. Another fabulous and thought provoking story to add to my library to savor again through the years. I’m eagerly awaiting her next story and am filled with anticipation to see what delights await from her talented pen.
probably-never
February 25, 2023No way. Abuse of Elizabeth involved.
May 31, 2024
A seemingly class difference romance variation of Jane Austen’s Pride & Prejudice turns out to be a darker, more twisting path to love. Cherith Boardman is a new to me author and I was intrigued to pick up this book that turned Austen’s story on its ear when Elizabeth turns out to be higher up the social ladder than Fitzwilliam Darcy ever imagined, but wealth and status do not protect her from danger and sorrow.
Mistaken Premise was a door-stopper of a book and there were times I felt the pages and would get distracted by other reading prospects. One rarely sees footnoting in fiction stories and I wouldn’t have minded, but it is pretty extensive in this one. So much so that I skipped it for the sake of the flow of the story. Another interesting, and actual welcome feature were the epistolary inserts that broke up the narration flow in a good way.
The plot premise had my attention with Elizabeth turning out to be a Duke’s daughter and fostered in the home of an obscure country gentleman’s household like one of his own daughters with her ducal relation in ill-heath and ceding her physical guardianship to his co-guardian, Mr. Bennet. Her status is an open secret around Meryton since Elizabeth’s family had an estate in the neighborhood were killed in a fire there, but guests to the neighborhood like the Bingleys and Darcys who frequent London society are kept in the dark.
Elizabeth is something of a fairy princess-type with her good deeds around the Bennet estate of Longbourn and the broader Meryton neighborhood and her early accomplishments more than the average young lady had. She’s well-liked which is why Darcy’s arrogant words and Caroline’s snide disdain don’t go down well with the family and the neighbors.
After this, when Elizabeth is old enough to be finished and polished for her debut in her rightful status as duke’s daughter, that is when her guardian uncle places her in the hands of an older woman who knows English society well and things go into an emotional, dark period.
Darcy take a long time getting over his duty to family status and his own belief that he truly is better than his company there in Meryton. He missed several big clues that all was not as what it seemed regarding Elizabeth because he was too dedicated to his snobbery. I was disappointed that he had to discover Elizabeth’s true status before he changed, but he also had to go through a whole lot more to win fair maiden, too- as he was angsty in his remorse and low hopes of recovering from his earlier actions, so there is that.
I wanted to love this darker fairytalesque variation, but there was a ton of repetition fluffing out the pages. Then, some of the plot choices left me confused as to why they had to be that way. I never did get why Elizabeth’s true status had to be a big secret when half the countryside knew the truth anyway. And, later in the book, the darker aspects of the story only would make sense if it was never meant to be a temporary arrangement when Elizabeth would not gain the power and freedom to avenge herself (sorry I’m vague, but don’t wish to spoiler). There are other little nit-picky things that added up for me, too. The really long epilogue that carries their lives far into the future was actually something I enjoyed.
The writing style, the attention to historic backdrop, and the colorful and exciting plot themes with a hard fought romance were engaging. I enjoyed seeing Darcy overcome his worst traits and Elizabeth get past what happened to her along with seeing the side plots wrap up, too. And, so, I’ll pronounce this ponderous tome a like rather than a love. I’m glad I got to read it and hope the author produces more. Those who enjoy a longer, slow developing fairytale-esque historical romance rich in authentic detail are the target audience.
My full review will post at That's What I'm Talking About 5.29.24
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Mistaken Premise was a door-stopper of a book and there were times I felt the pages and would get distracted by other reading prospects. One rarely sees footnoting in fiction stories and I wouldn’t have minded, but it is pretty extensive in this one. So much so that I skipped it for the sake of the flow of the story. Another interesting, and actual welcome feature were the epistolary inserts that broke up the narration flow in a good way.
The plot premise had my attention with Elizabeth turning out to be a Duke’s daughter and fostered in the home of an obscure country gentleman’s household like one of his own daughters with her ducal relation in ill-heath and ceding her physical guardianship to his co-guardian, Mr. Bennet. Her status is an open secret around Meryton since Elizabeth’s family had an estate in the neighborhood were killed in a fire there, but guests to the neighborhood like the Bingleys and Darcys who frequent London society are kept in the dark.
Elizabeth is something of a fairy princess-type with her good deeds around the Bennet estate of Longbourn and the broader Meryton neighborhood and her early accomplishments more than the average young lady had. She’s well-liked which is why Darcy’s arrogant words and Caroline’s snide disdain don’t go down well with the family and the neighbors.
After this, when Elizabeth is old enough to be finished and polished for her debut in her rightful status as duke’s daughter, that is when her guardian uncle places her in the hands of an older woman who knows English society well and things go into an emotional, dark period.
Darcy take a long time getting over his duty to family status and his own belief that he truly is better than his company there in Meryton. He missed several big clues that all was not as what it seemed regarding Elizabeth because he was too dedicated to his snobbery. I was disappointed that he had to discover Elizabeth’s true status before he changed, but he also had to go through a whole lot more to win fair maiden, too- as he was angsty in his remorse and low hopes of recovering from his earlier actions, so there is that.
I wanted to love this darker fairytalesque variation, but there was a ton of repetition fluffing out the pages. Then, some of the plot choices left me confused as to why they had to be that way. I never did get why Elizabeth’s true status had to be a big secret when half the countryside knew the truth anyway. And, later in the book, the darker aspects of the story only would make sense if it was never meant to be a temporary arrangement when Elizabeth would not gain the power and freedom to avenge herself (sorry I’m vague, but don’t wish to spoiler). There are other little nit-picky things that added up for me, too. The really long epilogue that carries their lives far into the future was actually something I enjoyed.
The writing style, the attention to historic backdrop, and the colorful and exciting plot themes with a hard fought romance were engaging. I enjoyed seeing Darcy overcome his worst traits and Elizabeth get past what happened to her along with seeing the side plots wrap up, too. And, so, I’ll pronounce this ponderous tome a like rather than a love. I’m glad I got to read it and hope the author produces more. Those who enjoy a longer, slow developing fairytale-esque historical romance rich in authentic detail are the target audience.
My full review will post at That's What I'm Talking About 5.29.24
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January 9, 2024
“When you find your path, you must not be afraid. You need to have sufficient courage to make mistakes. Disappointment, defeat, and despair are the tools God uses to show us the way.” –Paulo Coelho, Frida
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: Mature: scenes that might be too much for a sensitive reader: Trigger warning due to violence and abuse [nonsexual], kidnapping attempt of a child.
>>Angst Level: ranging across the board from slight to high angst. Parts of the story was dark
>>Source: Borrowed from KU [1-7-24] and I volunteered to leave a review. [4.5 stars] A few errors pulled me from the story as I tried to figure out what was being said.
>>Trope: [1] Lizzy is not a Bennet [my favorite] [2] Dense-Prideful-Arrogant Darcy: he was so arrogant; he could hardly stand to be in the same room with himself. [3] titles and wealth were out the wazoo [4] spineless, wimp Bingley [5] AU: Alternate Universe where everything was different: different names for some of the characters, their homes, different pairings, different attitudes… etc. Change one thing and everything changes. The road was now a different route completely.
“It is easier to forgive an enemy than to forgive a friend.” –William Blake
This whole story was turned on its ear. Names were used but not in the manner Austen used them. It was hilarious to run into characters that were ‘out of pocket’ so to speak. They might be a villain or a person [NSN} who visited the parlors or gossiped in the ballrooms of society. Oh, it was so much fun running into them. I had to laugh several times when that happened. I wouldn’t dare try to do the drinking game where I’d take a drink when I encountered an Austen character from another book. I’d be smashed before I was halfway through the book.
“At an early age I learned that people make mistakes, and you have to decide if their mistakes are bigger than your love for them.” –Angie Thomas, The Hate U Give
Elizabeth’s people were Scottish. Be still my heart. My father’s people are Scottish and I got goosebumps when anything Scottish was mentioned. Oh, my goodness. I could hear the bagpipes in my head. The excerpts from the gossip pages were a hoot. I enjoyed reading them and thought they added a different touch to the story. The various letters were also revealing. Elizabeth was slowly being isolated from everyone she loved and trusted. It was heartbreaking to see her suffer. Her uncle would be the one that made the biggest mistake and she could do nothing about it as he was her guardian.
Darcy: “All men make mistakes, but a good man yields when he knows his course is wrong, and repairs the evil. The only crime is pride.” –Sophocles, Antigone
Darcy had eyes but did not see what was right in front of him. He had ears but refused to hear the truth of the mystery about Meryton and the lady that captivated him. What was it about her? Yeah, our boy was fat, dumb, and happy and missed out on a lot of things while he sojourned in Hertfordshire. I loved the people of Meryton. They were so supportive of Elizabeth. Bless them.
This was a long story and contained a lot of repetition. It could have been trimmed a bit. There were a lot of titles and surnames that changed with an elevation. I soon became lost in the mishmash of propriety, social norms, and drawing room drama. Who was friend and who was enemy? And worse yet, who would be the one to betray our dear girl next?
“For there to be betrayal, there would have to have been trust first.” –Suzanne Collins, The Hunger Games
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: Mature: scenes that might be too much for a sensitive reader: Trigger warning due to violence and abuse [nonsexual], kidnapping attempt of a child.
>>Angst Level: ranging across the board from slight to high angst. Parts of the story was dark
>>Source: Borrowed from KU [1-7-24] and I volunteered to leave a review. [4.5 stars] A few errors pulled me from the story as I tried to figure out what was being said.
>>Trope: [1] Lizzy is not a Bennet [my favorite] [2] Dense-Prideful-Arrogant Darcy: he was so arrogant; he could hardly stand to be in the same room with himself. [3] titles and wealth were out the wazoo [4] spineless, wimp Bingley [5] AU: Alternate Universe where everything was different: different names for some of the characters, their homes, different pairings, different attitudes… etc. Change one thing and everything changes. The road was now a different route completely.
“It is easier to forgive an enemy than to forgive a friend.” –William Blake
This whole story was turned on its ear. Names were used but not in the manner Austen used them. It was hilarious to run into characters that were ‘out of pocket’ so to speak. They might be a villain or a person [NSN} who visited the parlors or gossiped in the ballrooms of society. Oh, it was so much fun running into them. I had to laugh several times when that happened. I wouldn’t dare try to do the drinking game where I’d take a drink when I encountered an Austen character from another book. I’d be smashed before I was halfway through the book.
“At an early age I learned that people make mistakes, and you have to decide if their mistakes are bigger than your love for them.” –Angie Thomas, The Hate U Give
Elizabeth’s people were Scottish. Be still my heart. My father’s people are Scottish and I got goosebumps when anything Scottish was mentioned. Oh, my goodness. I could hear the bagpipes in my head. The excerpts from the gossip pages were a hoot. I enjoyed reading them and thought they added a different touch to the story. The various letters were also revealing. Elizabeth was slowly being isolated from everyone she loved and trusted. It was heartbreaking to see her suffer. Her uncle would be the one that made the biggest mistake and she could do nothing about it as he was her guardian.
Darcy: “All men make mistakes, but a good man yields when he knows his course is wrong, and repairs the evil. The only crime is pride.” –Sophocles, Antigone
Darcy had eyes but did not see what was right in front of him. He had ears but refused to hear the truth of the mystery about Meryton and the lady that captivated him. What was it about her? Yeah, our boy was fat, dumb, and happy and missed out on a lot of things while he sojourned in Hertfordshire. I loved the people of Meryton. They were so supportive of Elizabeth. Bless them.
This was a long story and contained a lot of repetition. It could have been trimmed a bit. There were a lot of titles and surnames that changed with an elevation. I soon became lost in the mishmash of propriety, social norms, and drawing room drama. Who was friend and who was enemy? And worse yet, who would be the one to betray our dear girl next?
“For there to be betrayal, there would have to have been trust first.” –Suzanne Collins, The Hunger Games
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February 20, 2023DNF at 31%
I’ve had mixed experiences with Cherith Boardman’s work before - I enjoyed Second Son but really didn’t enjoy Total Want of Propriety. Unfortunately this one really did not work for me, and I’ve given up my attempt to finish it. This work features one of the worst Darcys I’ve encountered in the world of P&P variations. The first few chapters exclusively consist of heavy-handed biographical description of the family history involved. A very dense text, with little reward. I won’t be forcing myself to read the final 500 pages after it has taken me so many hours just to get through the first 200!
I’ve had mixed experiences with Cherith Boardman’s work before - I enjoyed Second Son but really didn’t enjoy Total Want of Propriety. Unfortunately this one really did not work for me, and I’ve given up my attempt to finish it. This work features one of the worst Darcys I’ve encountered in the world of P&P variations. The first few chapters exclusively consist of heavy-handed biographical description of the family history involved. A very dense text, with little reward. I won’t be forcing myself to read the final 500 pages after it has taken me so many hours just to get through the first 200!
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August 2, 2023I sort of loved this, but I also didn't like the whole tortured to get to another aspect of her strength part of the story.
This author knows how to create a full alternate universe, in minute detail. I always appreciate that part of her storytelling and writing.
There were far too many holes in the plot in relation to: the choice of companion for, captivity of, and ignorant blindness from the uncle - Elizabeth. Maybe that was the plot line from the eyes of the author, I just saw the plot holes.
I didn't buy it, the details made me ill and I put it down so many times, it took me forever to finish and almost DNF.
This author knows how to create a full alternate universe, in minute detail. I always appreciate that part of her storytelling and writing.
There were far too many holes in the plot in relation to: the choice of companion for, captivity of, and ignorant blindness from the uncle - Elizabeth. Maybe that was the plot line from the eyes of the author, I just saw the plot holes.
I didn't buy it, the details made me ill and I put it down so many times, it took me forever to finish and almost DNF.
May 23, 2024
My Rating: 4.5*
“Why should long-established neighbours report the truth of income and dowries to those who have not yet earned their trust?” (quote from the book)
This is a richly detailed and lengthy, outside-the-box variation of a Lizzy (Elizabeth) who is not a Bennet. She is the ward of Thomas Bennet whose connexions are a well-kept secret in Meryton. So much so, that Mr. Bingley and his party who let Netherfield Park have mistaken them and all inhabitants of Meryton as being ‘backwater savages’ and insignificant. I recommend you read Marie’s (Ree) review for a more detailed and succinct rendering of this book.
“We are only too happy to teach the ways of proper society to these backwater savages!” (quote from the book)
Due to the rudeness of the inhabitants of Netherfield Park, Meryton’s populace will not reveal any secrets of the Bennets and their connexions in order to keep Elizabeth safe. This will be their downfall and a spectacular one at that!
“On the one hand, the former Miss Elizabeth was indeed a Lady – with greater wealth and better connexions than his own; on the other, what does an MP say to a future duchess whom he had so misjudged?” (quote from the book)
With his insults overheard and revelations made known, how can Mr. Darcy redeem himself and win the love of Elizabeth? Let’s just say it is a long and painful journey for both.
There was much that I loved about this book:
1) I love a good long saga!
2) All my emotions were engaged.
3) The strong Scottish element conveyed within the story and at the beginning of each chapter.
4) The description of the dresses worn by Elizabeth…I would have loved seeing a rendering of them.
5) The premise of this story.
6) The excerpts from the gossip columns.
7) The original characters created.
8) The footnotes and links for the reader to learn more
There were some elements that frustrated me:
1) The decision of her uncle the Marquess to put Elizabeth under the chaperonage of Lady Tyranholt – I had to suspend belief here – but this is the author’s story.
2) I felt there should have been some mention/reconciliation between Elizabeth and Jane near the end regarding their relationship.
3) The threads of certain characters that we never learn more about…I realize that they no longer bear any relevance, but I like knowing what becomes of them.
4) The use of the excerpts from the gossip columns in the Epilogue…it works, but again it’s just me wanting more.
I do highly recommend this variation, especially if you enjoy a good long saga with angst and with the trope ‘Elizabeth is not a Bennet.’
April 6, 2023
Elizabeth is not a Bennet but rather the ward of Thomas Bennet and heiress of duchy that can be held by females. Her status is not unknown but is held secret by Meryton, allowing her to mature surrounded by love and family. Throw in a cannon Darcy and her come out to the ton and you have a very drawn out overly detailed story,
February 27, 2023
SPOILERS
I think the greatest mistake the author made in this book was ramping up Mr D's arrogance and selfishness at the beginning of the story. When he left for London after the ball, I told my husband that I didn't see how he was going to be redeemed after everything he had done. I would argue that apologizing and then walking around like a sad sack determined to be E's friend until he decides again without consulting anyone that he would do better to go away wasn't enough to make amends.
It seems that because Mr D saves her and due to her torture, kidnapping attempts, and her betrayals by family and friends Mr D's crimes in contrast seem slight. I would argue that they are not. In P & P, we feel Mr D is properly humbled and eager to make amends. It was a joy to see Mr D's thorough understanding of what he had done wrong and his response. This book held no real redemption or joy.
I think the greatest mistake the author made in this book was ramping up Mr D's arrogance and selfishness at the beginning of the story. When he left for London after the ball, I told my husband that I didn't see how he was going to be redeemed after everything he had done. I would argue that apologizing and then walking around like a sad sack determined to be E's friend until he decides again without consulting anyone that he would do better to go away wasn't enough to make amends.
It seems that because Mr D saves her and due to her torture, kidnapping attempts, and her betrayals by family and friends Mr D's crimes in contrast seem slight. I would argue that they are not. In P & P, we feel Mr D is properly humbled and eager to make amends. It was a joy to see Mr D's thorough understanding of what he had done wrong and his response. This book held no real redemption or joy.
April 10, 2023
I was, at first, put off from reading this by the length of the book. At nearly 700 pages, I wasn't sure I wanted to commit to a marathon. However, after reading several very intriguing reviews, I bit the bullet and gave it a go. I'm glad I did.
Born the only child to the second son of a Scottish laird with an English title, Elizabeth Boyte is the heir to her childless uncle's dukedom. Unfortunately, he parents are killed in a fire when she is very young. she is left to the guardianship of her father's brother, the duke, and best friend, Mr Bennet. to prevent her growing up with an overly-inflated opinion of herself, being targeted by those who would use her to their own advantage, and to protect her, she is raised by the Bennets.
This was a very unique and interesting read. I absolutely loved the strong Scottish influence. There were several lovely OC's but not so many as to make it confusing as to who everyone was. Darcy was absolutely swoon-worthy. And, good lord, the image of Darcy in a kilt! Someone get me a cold drink! Yes, I am well aware he is fictional, but you oughta see the picture in my head!! Yum!
Elizabeth was wonderfully depicted. Though she is much more highly educated than in canon and occupies and much more advantageous role in society, she was not depicted as obnoxiously perfect as can happen often in JAFF. She was charmingly flawed.
This book is, as previously stated, long. As in lo-ong. And I felt that was unnecessary. Did we really need to read about EVERY former friend who turned out to be less than worthy? Did we have to read, again and again, of E's violin performances? Did we have to go to so many balls? Did we need to read every letter sent when the addressee didn't even receive it? The "gossip column" inserts were cute but got old after a while.
And after all this unnecessary repetition, we never get to see E's uncle realize his mistake. That was, to me, almost book-ruining. E never truly receives closure for the injustices she suffered. After such a drastic alteration in her uncle's behavior, we are never privy as to why. That was difficult for me to swallow. I was also very disappointed in Jane's selfishness.
Born the only child to the second son of a Scottish laird with an English title, Elizabeth Boyte is the heir to her childless uncle's dukedom. Unfortunately, he parents are killed in a fire when she is very young. she is left to the guardianship of her father's brother, the duke, and best friend, Mr Bennet. to prevent her growing up with an overly-inflated opinion of herself, being targeted by those who would use her to their own advantage, and to protect her, she is raised by the Bennets.
This was a very unique and interesting read. I absolutely loved the strong Scottish influence. There were several lovely OC's but not so many as to make it confusing as to who everyone was. Darcy was absolutely swoon-worthy. And, good lord, the image of Darcy in a kilt! Someone get me a cold drink! Yes, I am well aware he is fictional, but you oughta see the picture in my head!! Yum!
Elizabeth was wonderfully depicted. Though she is much more highly educated than in canon and occupies and much more advantageous role in society, she was not depicted as obnoxiously perfect as can happen often in JAFF. She was charmingly flawed.
This book is, as previously stated, long. As in lo-ong. And I felt that was unnecessary. Did we really need to read about EVERY former friend who turned out to be less than worthy? Did we have to read, again and again, of E's violin performances? Did we have to go to so many balls? Did we need to read every letter sent when the addressee didn't even receive it? The "gossip column" inserts were cute but got old after a while.
And after all this unnecessary repetition, we never get to see E's uncle realize his mistake. That was, to me, almost book-ruining. E never truly receives closure for the injustices she suffered. After such a drastic alteration in her uncle's behavior, we are never privy as to why. That was difficult for me to swallow. I was also very disappointed in Jane's selfishness.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
March 24, 2024
In this Pride and Prejudice variation, at Netherfield, Darcy at his worst, though Bingley is not his usuall amiable self. As they face the local 'savages' unknown that a future Duchess, Elizabeth (a Mary Sue character), resides at Longbourn. How will they all react in the future.
(Skipped most of Lizzy time in Devonshire learning whatever it was to learn. Felt that a lot of Elizabeth's background and upbringing among the caring Bennets could have summed up in a couple of paragraphs. Too much of the balls in London, just overly long.)
(4 stars because I liked Mary's pairing though would have liked more about that.)
Overall an enjoyable story.
(Skipped most of Lizzy time in Devonshire learning whatever it was to learn. Felt that a lot of Elizabeth's background and upbringing among the caring Bennets could have summed up in a couple of paragraphs. Too much of the balls in London, just overly long.)
(4 stars because I liked Mary's pairing though would have liked more about that.)
Overall an enjoyable story.
February 21, 2023
Much longer than necessary
While the actual story was good, I found myself skimming through pages and pages of extraneous information. Lizzy was too perfect, villains were too nasty, plotting and scheming were continuous. I did enjoy the gossip columnists.
While the actual story was good, I found myself skimming through pages and pages of extraneous information. Lizzy was too perfect, villains were too nasty, plotting and scheming were continuous. I did enjoy the gossip columnists.
March 12, 2023
it’s soooooo long
I really do appreciate all background research the author makes available. But this book either needed a really good edit or needed to be split into 2 totally different stories, and I don’t mean a two-parter.
There was so much repetition of things that had happened earlier that I started skipping through almost whole chapters. The same for all the Broadsheet excerpts and letters that were never received or delivered. Probably only needed to have about 1/2 of all those. Again, I just started skipping through all of that until I got to the last 1/5 of the book.
I really do appreciate all background research the author makes available. But this book either needed a really good edit or needed to be split into 2 totally different stories, and I don’t mean a two-parter.
There was so much repetition of things that had happened earlier that I started skipping through almost whole chapters. The same for all the Broadsheet excerpts and letters that were never received or delivered. Probably only needed to have about 1/2 of all those. Again, I just started skipping through all of that until I got to the last 1/5 of the book.
May 31, 2023
Wonderful
A P&P re-imagining in which Elizabeth is not a Bennett. Mr Bennett is a close friend to Elizabeth's parents, who live at Netherfield, and who happen to be the extended family of a Scottish duke. Elizabeth's parents die in a fire, and Mr Bennett accepts co-guardianship of Elizabeth along with her bachelor Scottish uncle. She's raised as another daughter in a loving Bennett family, who all know that she will someday be a Scottish duchess. Her important family roots are concealed by everyone in Meryton, who all love the vivacious and friendly future duchess, so as to protect her from kidnappers and fortune hunters. The Bingleys and Darcy come to Netherfield Park (which belongs to Elizabeth) and the usual scenario ensues: Bingley is infatuated by Jane's beauty; his sisters despise the Bennetts, not knowing they're fairly wealthy, and that Elizabeth is a future duchess; Darcy delivers his infamous insult at the Meryton assembly; Jane is ill at Netherfield, and Elizabeth comes to nurse her, thus solidifying her dislike of Darcy and the Bingley sisters. However, in this version, Elizabeth perceives Mr Bingley's lack of a backbone, and his lack of conviction when it comes to his feelings for Jane, so Elizabeth is no champion of Mr Bingley's attentions. Darcy starts to admire Elizabeth, but struggles against it, as he assumes she's not his social equal.
Because Elizabeth is a future duchess, she's intensively educated from a young age, and the Bennett sisters are included in her education. The Bennett family members, as foster family to Elizabeth, are embraced as honorary family by Elizabeth's aristocratic relatives. When Elizabeth turns eighteen, her status is revealed at a ball in London, where the Bingleys get their comeuppance, and where Elizabeth delivers a set down for the ages to Darcy for his "mistaken premise" regarding her worth in society. Darcy is humiliated, but begins a campaign to be a good friend to the future duchess, who faces more that her share of lecherous and mercenary men at every ball and outing that she must now attend. Then a crisis occurs, when Elizabeth's bachelor uncle sends her to be further educated with an abusive woman who is high in society, but who secretly hates all things Scottish. Elizabeth is basically imprisoned and isolated from her family and friends, while her uncle is in declining health, and doesn't know that Elizabeth is being abused.
This is a lo-o-ong book, quite the epic tale, and very well done. It's a book about Elizabeth, rather than about ODC, but her eventual romance with Darcy is, of course, important and is lovely. I deducted a star for a couple of reasons. One is the very length of the book. I felt it could have been shortened considerably with some judicious editing of tedious details, and less enumerating of aristocrats and their cumbersome titles. The other reason was the apparent intention of the author to use as many obscure and lengthy words as she could in her text. I was very thankful for my Kindle's dictionary feature, but I doubt everyone had that luxury. However, the book is well written and well edited. I recommend it highly, if you don't mind settling in for a nice long read.
A P&P re-imagining in which Elizabeth is not a Bennett. Mr Bennett is a close friend to Elizabeth's parents, who live at Netherfield, and who happen to be the extended family of a Scottish duke. Elizabeth's parents die in a fire, and Mr Bennett accepts co-guardianship of Elizabeth along with her bachelor Scottish uncle. She's raised as another daughter in a loving Bennett family, who all know that she will someday be a Scottish duchess. Her important family roots are concealed by everyone in Meryton, who all love the vivacious and friendly future duchess, so as to protect her from kidnappers and fortune hunters. The Bingleys and Darcy come to Netherfield Park (which belongs to Elizabeth) and the usual scenario ensues: Bingley is infatuated by Jane's beauty; his sisters despise the Bennetts, not knowing they're fairly wealthy, and that Elizabeth is a future duchess; Darcy delivers his infamous insult at the Meryton assembly; Jane is ill at Netherfield, and Elizabeth comes to nurse her, thus solidifying her dislike of Darcy and the Bingley sisters. However, in this version, Elizabeth perceives Mr Bingley's lack of a backbone, and his lack of conviction when it comes to his feelings for Jane, so Elizabeth is no champion of Mr Bingley's attentions. Darcy starts to admire Elizabeth, but struggles against it, as he assumes she's not his social equal.
Because Elizabeth is a future duchess, she's intensively educated from a young age, and the Bennett sisters are included in her education. The Bennett family members, as foster family to Elizabeth, are embraced as honorary family by Elizabeth's aristocratic relatives. When Elizabeth turns eighteen, her status is revealed at a ball in London, where the Bingleys get their comeuppance, and where Elizabeth delivers a set down for the ages to Darcy for his "mistaken premise" regarding her worth in society. Darcy is humiliated, but begins a campaign to be a good friend to the future duchess, who faces more that her share of lecherous and mercenary men at every ball and outing that she must now attend. Then a crisis occurs, when Elizabeth's bachelor uncle sends her to be further educated with an abusive woman who is high in society, but who secretly hates all things Scottish. Elizabeth is basically imprisoned and isolated from her family and friends, while her uncle is in declining health, and doesn't know that Elizabeth is being abused.
This is a lo-o-ong book, quite the epic tale, and very well done. It's a book about Elizabeth, rather than about ODC, but her eventual romance with Darcy is, of course, important and is lovely. I deducted a star for a couple of reasons. One is the very length of the book. I felt it could have been shortened considerably with some judicious editing of tedious details, and less enumerating of aristocrats and their cumbersome titles. The other reason was the apparent intention of the author to use as many obscure and lengthy words as she could in her text. I was very thankful for my Kindle's dictionary feature, but I doubt everyone had that luxury. However, the book is well written and well edited. I recommend it highly, if you don't mind settling in for a nice long read.
March 8, 2023
This certainly gives you bang for your buck. I looked at the percentage where I thought it finished and we weren’t even half way.
Anyway for me this had two issues. Too many variations from the original, and I didn’t really buy the Lizzy and Darcy personalities. Nevertheless it was a fun read and if it had been just a straightforward regency romance I’d rate it slightly higher.
I did love all the research that the author had undertaken and learned a few things.
Anyway for me this had two issues. Too many variations from the original, and I didn’t really buy the Lizzy and Darcy personalities. Nevertheless it was a fun read and if it had been just a straightforward regency romance I’d rate it slightly higher.
I did love all the research that the author had undertaken and learned a few things.
November 19, 2023
A rather long story. Well researched and full of detail.
February 21, 2023
A rare " perfect " story!
I absolutely love everything about this story along with the plot and characters. The writer takes us on a historical tale of Scotland and the individuals who move between England and Scotland in the Regency-Georgian world. Many of the characters are nobility and a few are even royalty and the writer gives us a rich background for each. The primary family is related to Uncle Malcolm who is the Duke of Soloway along with several other Scottish titles and is Elizabeth's paternal uncle. Her parents died saving her in a fire at Netherfield when she was a toddler and she was raised by her father's best friend Mr Bennet as her grandfather and uncle wanted her raised away from the Ton and those who would manipulate her. The Bennet family is altered from the classic by the influence of the Duke and a large group of servants and tutors, governesses, maids, guards. Even Mrs Bennet improves with these influences and Mr Bennet isn't the indolent hermit but works hard to improve his family's conditions.
The writer is skillful in adapting language from the classic intro the story without it simply being a regurgitated tale. Different situations with different characters say the words and its familiar but your mind has to search for where you heard it before. Almost a deja vue situation...
Darcy is more prideful and actually clueless because he doesn't put the clues together that would tell him who Elizabeth is and what her connections actually are. His attraction to her is fortunate because he's able to save her several times because he follows her.
Elizabeth is highly educated, extremely nice to everyone and loved by everyone until her coming out when women like Caroline Bingley are jealous and attack her for her Scottish roots along with the usual verbal attacks.
Jane is more accomplished and is able to see that there are evil people out there along with her eyes being opened to Charles and his inability to stand up to his sister along with his immaturity.
The evil character seems to be an alternative to Lady Catherine - obnoxious, overbearing, dictatorial and a sadist. Lady Tyranholt is the worst of the worst and is detrimental to Elizabeth's physical and mental health. She's that character that everyone hates!
I can't recommend this enough! It is richly detailed and full of subplots and interesting characters. As with the writers other 3 novels I can see myself reading this over and over again throughout the years, and possibly finding things missed in my previous readings.
Ms Boardman has delivered!
I absolutely love everything about this story along with the plot and characters. The writer takes us on a historical tale of Scotland and the individuals who move between England and Scotland in the Regency-Georgian world. Many of the characters are nobility and a few are even royalty and the writer gives us a rich background for each. The primary family is related to Uncle Malcolm who is the Duke of Soloway along with several other Scottish titles and is Elizabeth's paternal uncle. Her parents died saving her in a fire at Netherfield when she was a toddler and she was raised by her father's best friend Mr Bennet as her grandfather and uncle wanted her raised away from the Ton and those who would manipulate her. The Bennet family is altered from the classic by the influence of the Duke and a large group of servants and tutors, governesses, maids, guards. Even Mrs Bennet improves with these influences and Mr Bennet isn't the indolent hermit but works hard to improve his family's conditions.
The writer is skillful in adapting language from the classic intro the story without it simply being a regurgitated tale. Different situations with different characters say the words and its familiar but your mind has to search for where you heard it before. Almost a deja vue situation...
Darcy is more prideful and actually clueless because he doesn't put the clues together that would tell him who Elizabeth is and what her connections actually are. His attraction to her is fortunate because he's able to save her several times because he follows her.
Elizabeth is highly educated, extremely nice to everyone and loved by everyone until her coming out when women like Caroline Bingley are jealous and attack her for her Scottish roots along with the usual verbal attacks.
Jane is more accomplished and is able to see that there are evil people out there along with her eyes being opened to Charles and his inability to stand up to his sister along with his immaturity.
The evil character seems to be an alternative to Lady Catherine - obnoxious, overbearing, dictatorial and a sadist. Lady Tyranholt is the worst of the worst and is detrimental to Elizabeth's physical and mental health. She's that character that everyone hates!
I can't recommend this enough! It is richly detailed and full of subplots and interesting characters. As with the writers other 3 novels I can see myself reading this over and over again throughout the years, and possibly finding things missed in my previous readings.
Ms Boardman has delivered!
March 27, 2023
At 661 pages this story ends but then we again have lists of family trees and all the characters in the story. This after the author also shared much about the characters and their connections at the beginning. There are then numerous pages of footnotes, which, frankly I started to ignore while reading. It just all got in the way of having a smoothly flowing story.
The one premise which stands out is that Darcy is as in canon, looking down on the people of Meryton , who have taken Elizabeth (a Boyte in this story) under their wings after her parents and one grandmother die in a fire which destroyed their home, Netherfield. Yes, their home.
An Uncle Malcom and Mr. Bennet are Elizabeth's co-guardians. As Uncle Malcom is 53 years older than Elizabeth and is crippled he cedes the rearing of Elizabeth to Mr. Bennet who has four daughters of his own. The dower house at Longbourn is used to house various Masters, tutors, etc. who help to teach Elizabeth, her foster sisters and some others.
Darcy and Bingley are not aware of Elizabeth's place in the family, that she is not a biological daughter, and so, as in canon, Bingley (who is leasing a rebuilt Netherfield) returns to London with his family and Darcy, after the townsfolk, basically give that party the cut.
The main premise here is based on Elizabeth's true parentage and her title, properties, etc. which is not revealed until she comes of age. She makes sure Darcy is front row when she debuts. She becomes the darling of society. At this point Darcy, already admitting to himself that he has fallen in love, castigates himself for ignoring all the signs which would have revealed some of this to him.
Oddly (and the story doesn't really give us a good reason for this) Uncle Malcom decides E. must be trained for her position in society by a woman who is called and is in fact a "Tyrant", a gaoler to E. and this is where we read of abuse, both mental and physical.
Of course as the story progresses, Darcy realizes his mistakes and makes amends but fears that the woman he has come to love with never look his way.
There is a kidnapping attempt and a major accident with a runaway horse. I won't share any more as that would be to spoil it. Much of this story got lost for me as I could not keep straight all the characters. Yes, there is a happy ending.
Know that much of the story is related in posts from gossip columns and in letters.
The one premise which stands out is that Darcy is as in canon, looking down on the people of Meryton , who have taken Elizabeth (a Boyte in this story) under their wings after her parents and one grandmother die in a fire which destroyed their home, Netherfield. Yes, their home.
An Uncle Malcom and Mr. Bennet are Elizabeth's co-guardians. As Uncle Malcom is 53 years older than Elizabeth and is crippled he cedes the rearing of Elizabeth to Mr. Bennet who has four daughters of his own. The dower house at Longbourn is used to house various Masters, tutors, etc. who help to teach Elizabeth, her foster sisters and some others.
Darcy and Bingley are not aware of Elizabeth's place in the family, that she is not a biological daughter, and so, as in canon, Bingley (who is leasing a rebuilt Netherfield) returns to London with his family and Darcy, after the townsfolk, basically give that party the cut.
The main premise here is based on Elizabeth's true parentage and her title, properties, etc. which is not revealed until she comes of age. She makes sure Darcy is front row when she debuts. She becomes the darling of society. At this point Darcy, already admitting to himself that he has fallen in love, castigates himself for ignoring all the signs which would have revealed some of this to him.
Oddly (and the story doesn't really give us a good reason for this) Uncle Malcom decides E. must be trained for her position in society by a woman who is called and is in fact a "Tyrant", a gaoler to E. and this is where we read of abuse, both mental and physical.
Of course as the story progresses, Darcy realizes his mistakes and makes amends but fears that the woman he has come to love with never look his way.
There is a kidnapping attempt and a major accident with a runaway horse. I won't share any more as that would be to spoil it. Much of this story got lost for me as I could not keep straight all the characters. Yes, there is a happy ending.
Know that much of the story is related in posts from gossip columns and in letters.
March 17, 2023
Trigger Warning Needed for Extreme Violence
For well over half the book, the plot romps along on mistaken identity and difficulties of the ton. And then the book turns to extreme violence towards Lizzy. The violence is sustained well over a year and there is no redemption offered to Uncle Malcolm before his death. As her Gaurdian, He is the one to determine who has custody and control of Lizzy and he chooses Very Badly Indeed.
After this violence has ended, the Darcy and Lizzy courting is nice, but had better be savored as the conclusion of the book felt extremely rushed. The Author relies on purported Newspaper reports for the conclusion. Some narrative for the conclusion is needed.
The Author does particularly well on dress and jewelry descriptions.
Additionally Jane's character plot is disappointing. I would have appreciated her apology to Lizzy and realization of her actions.
This however is a trifle compared to the extreme violence Lizzy is subjected to.
I Strongly Urge the Author to re-write to both lessen the extent and length of the violence, as well as allowing Uncle Malcolm to redeem himself while he lives. There are many scenarios that could work for that outcome.
I enjoyed the Author's choice of archaic spelling for certain words. There was also the very occasional mistake in the form of a missing letter or a word or the wrong word used. These few errors can be easily read through.
This could have been a five star review but because of the lack of a trigger warning, the extreme and unbeliever violence and the botched conclusion, I am giving it 3 stars. I sincerely hope the Author will pull this version and take the time for a re-write.
For well over half the book, the plot romps along on mistaken identity and difficulties of the ton. And then the book turns to extreme violence towards Lizzy. The violence is sustained well over a year and there is no redemption offered to Uncle Malcolm before his death. As her Gaurdian, He is the one to determine who has custody and control of Lizzy and he chooses Very Badly Indeed.
After this violence has ended, the Darcy and Lizzy courting is nice, but had better be savored as the conclusion of the book felt extremely rushed. The Author relies on purported Newspaper reports for the conclusion. Some narrative for the conclusion is needed.
The Author does particularly well on dress and jewelry descriptions.
Additionally Jane's character plot is disappointing. I would have appreciated her apology to Lizzy and realization of her actions.
This however is a trifle compared to the extreme violence Lizzy is subjected to.
I Strongly Urge the Author to re-write to both lessen the extent and length of the violence, as well as allowing Uncle Malcolm to redeem himself while he lives. There are many scenarios that could work for that outcome.
I enjoyed the Author's choice of archaic spelling for certain words. There was also the very occasional mistake in the form of a missing letter or a word or the wrong word used. These few errors can be easily read through.
This could have been a five star review but because of the lack of a trigger warning, the extreme and unbeliever violence and the botched conclusion, I am giving it 3 stars. I sincerely hope the Author will pull this version and take the time for a re-write.
May 1, 2023
worth a read despite the 3 star review
I am genuinely sorry that I must give this such a low rating. The story has a really well thought out “Lizzy is secretly titled” plot. The writer’s attention to detail is impressive. This is demonstrated by the high degree of historical accuracy. The character’s language, dress and etiquette are on point ( with a couple of minor exceptions).
Unfortunately, that thoroughness has also had a negative impact. The story drags. There is an endless parade of named characters who have no purpose to the plot beyond background colour. It’s like an endless name drop and it completely drowns many of the more significant characters. Additionally, the author constantly reiterates previously established details as if the reader has forgot what they read in earlier chapters. This pedantry is really frustrating as it interrupts the flow of the story. I found myself skimming through large swaths of text, especially the endless letters during that painful time in Lizzy’s life. I understand the horrific juxtaposition of those unread missives, but a smaller number would have served that point adequately.
Overall though, this book is worth saving. I recommend finding a good editor or beta reader to help ruthlessly strip the story of all things extraneous. Failing that, the author needs to learn how to edit themselves. There a plenty of online resources out there.
PS if the author ever takes my advice, I hope she will also change the Tyrant’s fate. It needs to be a lot more painful and drawn out.
I am genuinely sorry that I must give this such a low rating. The story has a really well thought out “Lizzy is secretly titled” plot. The writer’s attention to detail is impressive. This is demonstrated by the high degree of historical accuracy. The character’s language, dress and etiquette are on point ( with a couple of minor exceptions).
Unfortunately, that thoroughness has also had a negative impact. The story drags. There is an endless parade of named characters who have no purpose to the plot beyond background colour. It’s like an endless name drop and it completely drowns many of the more significant characters. Additionally, the author constantly reiterates previously established details as if the reader has forgot what they read in earlier chapters. This pedantry is really frustrating as it interrupts the flow of the story. I found myself skimming through large swaths of text, especially the endless letters during that painful time in Lizzy’s life. I understand the horrific juxtaposition of those unread missives, but a smaller number would have served that point adequately.
Overall though, this book is worth saving. I recommend finding a good editor or beta reader to help ruthlessly strip the story of all things extraneous. Failing that, the author needs to learn how to edit themselves. There a plenty of online resources out there.
PS if the author ever takes my advice, I hope she will also change the Tyrant’s fate. It needs to be a lot more painful and drawn out.
May 14, 2023
This was a very imaginative and well researched P&P variation. I disagree with reviewers who said that Lizzy wasn’t recognizable.
Some things I liked: This version was well researched with lots of historical tidbits sprinkled throughout. I enjoyed Elizabeth’s relationship with her foster family, although I think the author did Jane dirty. She barely has five lines of dialogue in the entire novel and she’s portrayed as pretty selfish and hysterical. Lizzy is much closer to Mary in this variation.
Things I didn’t like: I always hate it when characters from other Jane Austen novels make their way into a variation. There are also references to Sense & Sensibility by A Lady in this book, which I also am not a fan of. Reference Jane Austen’s works or reference characters from her other books, but don’t do both. There was little development of the romance between Darcy and Lizzy. They barely speak after her come out ball, but somehow they fall in love. Darcy never actively pursued her. This book focuses much more on Lizzy’s role as a peer versus the romance between them. One last gripe- the author includes quotes from Scottish authors and poets at the beginning of each chapter. That’s fine, but she chose to feature JK Rowling as one of them. That is a choice in 2023. Either the author is transphobic, or transphobia doesn’t bother her. I mention this so others can avoid if they wish.
It was an enjoyable read, but there were too many things that annoyed me for me to rate it 5 stars.
Some things I liked: This version was well researched with lots of historical tidbits sprinkled throughout. I enjoyed Elizabeth’s relationship with her foster family, although I think the author did Jane dirty. She barely has five lines of dialogue in the entire novel and she’s portrayed as pretty selfish and hysterical. Lizzy is much closer to Mary in this variation.
Things I didn’t like: I always hate it when characters from other Jane Austen novels make their way into a variation. There are also references to Sense & Sensibility by A Lady in this book, which I also am not a fan of. Reference Jane Austen’s works or reference characters from her other books, but don’t do both. There was little development of the romance between Darcy and Lizzy. They barely speak after her come out ball, but somehow they fall in love. Darcy never actively pursued her. This book focuses much more on Lizzy’s role as a peer versus the romance between them. One last gripe- the author includes quotes from Scottish authors and poets at the beginning of each chapter. That’s fine, but she chose to feature JK Rowling as one of them. That is a choice in 2023. Either the author is transphobic, or transphobia doesn’t bother her. I mention this so others can avoid if they wish.
It was an enjoyable read, but there were too many things that annoyed me for me to rate it 5 stars.
March 24, 2023
Really well written book
First of all I loved the premise of the story. I loved that Lizzy was in a home that loved and cherished her. Even though she was not a Bennett, she was treated with so much respect and that just made my heart happy because often a lot of these variations that doesn’t happen. The writing was excellent. Very well executed and interesting. I loved the way the story blended and came together.
The abuse sections were really hard to read. I think maybe because it felt very realistic and this idea of Lizzy being crushed emotionally was devastating. So I had to skim those pieces because of my perspective but not because they weren’t well written. They were maybe too well written. :)
I did not like this variation of Jane which I think was perfect actually. James sometimes gets the almost to angelic/perfect role. I felt she was kind of selfish/immature and it worked with the story. I loved loved loved Mary and her storyline ! She had backbone and real love and compassion for Lizzy and I really enjoyed that.
What happens to the Bingleys was fantastic and I really was OK that Wickham wasn’t in the story.
Overall I would highly recommend this book! Can’t wait to read more from this author it was really well done
First of all I loved the premise of the story. I loved that Lizzy was in a home that loved and cherished her. Even though she was not a Bennett, she was treated with so much respect and that just made my heart happy because often a lot of these variations that doesn’t happen. The writing was excellent. Very well executed and interesting. I loved the way the story blended and came together.
The abuse sections were really hard to read. I think maybe because it felt very realistic and this idea of Lizzy being crushed emotionally was devastating. So I had to skim those pieces because of my perspective but not because they weren’t well written. They were maybe too well written. :)
I did not like this variation of Jane which I think was perfect actually. James sometimes gets the almost to angelic/perfect role. I felt she was kind of selfish/immature and it worked with the story. I loved loved loved Mary and her storyline ! She had backbone and real love and compassion for Lizzy and I really enjoyed that.
What happens to the Bingleys was fantastic and I really was OK that Wickham wasn’t in the story.
Overall I would highly recommend this book! Can’t wait to read more from this author it was really well done
March 30, 2023
Great depth, highly developed story
The story follows Elizabeth Boyte, heiress to an ancient Scottish clan and highly respected English Dukedom after the death of her parents at age 2. She is raised away from society in Meryton but is given all the education expected of a future duchess along with her foster sisters, the Bennetts. Before she is revealed to Society, the Netherfield party comes to Meryton and we all know how that goes. Even when the clues are staring Darcy in the face, he cannot get past his pride to see who Lizzy really is. Fast forward to her debut and entrance into Society and how her life changes.
The book brings to life the harsh criticism, caprice, and verbal power prevalent in the Haute Ton and the titled circles. Betrayals, abuse, underhanded tactics, slander, and jockeying for positions are all found throughout the very thorough novel.
The personalities and characters have great depth. A good portion of the story is told through articles from the gossip columns of various mediation which was both interesting and annoying. There were parts I didn't like but were believable and required fir the story, so well done with that. Overall a very intriguing read.
The story follows Elizabeth Boyte, heiress to an ancient Scottish clan and highly respected English Dukedom after the death of her parents at age 2. She is raised away from society in Meryton but is given all the education expected of a future duchess along with her foster sisters, the Bennetts. Before she is revealed to Society, the Netherfield party comes to Meryton and we all know how that goes. Even when the clues are staring Darcy in the face, he cannot get past his pride to see who Lizzy really is. Fast forward to her debut and entrance into Society and how her life changes.
The book brings to life the harsh criticism, caprice, and verbal power prevalent in the Haute Ton and the titled circles. Betrayals, abuse, underhanded tactics, slander, and jockeying for positions are all found throughout the very thorough novel.
The personalities and characters have great depth. A good portion of the story is told through articles from the gossip columns of various mediation which was both interesting and annoying. There were parts I didn't like but were believable and required fir the story, so well done with that. Overall a very intriguing read.
March 4, 2024
This book reads like a thesis paper
The author initially gives the reader a detailed history of English and Scottish history and gentry/nobility even though it didn't add to the story. She used almost every Austen character name from every Austen work possible but unnecessarily changed every detail of those characters that it didn't work. There were over a hundred footnotes. She made our main characters Scottish and made Lizzy weak through torture. She also made Lizzy superhuman in accomplishments and what's with the violin? It was about 300 pages too long. While there was resolution for the Bingleys, there was no comeuppance for Mr. Collins. No Wickham, Georgiana was only 4 years Darcy's junior and married to Mr. Elliot and his parents only died in a carriage accident together. It veered so far from Austen canon with the reader constantly being confused by the bombardment of name dropping that you could skip pages at a time and not miss anything of importance.
The author initially gives the reader a detailed history of English and Scottish history and gentry/nobility even though it didn't add to the story. She used almost every Austen character name from every Austen work possible but unnecessarily changed every detail of those characters that it didn't work. There were over a hundred footnotes. She made our main characters Scottish and made Lizzy weak through torture. She also made Lizzy superhuman in accomplishments and what's with the violin? It was about 300 pages too long. While there was resolution for the Bingleys, there was no comeuppance for Mr. Collins. No Wickham, Georgiana was only 4 years Darcy's junior and married to Mr. Elliot and his parents only died in a carriage accident together. It veered so far from Austen canon with the reader constantly being confused by the bombardment of name dropping that you could skip pages at a time and not miss anything of importance.
March 19, 2023
Too many characters!
I loved P&P because it was a simple romantic comedy of the regency era. This reimagination started strongly with Darcy and Bingleys mistaking Elizabeth’s identity as a foundling but she is in fact a future duchess. I enjoyed up to first 200 pages (this is a very long story) but then it started boring me with so many characters introduced it started getting hard to follow who is who. There are a lot of newspaper writings to show the new happenings as the story progresses and political issues of that time are discussed a lot. To some this could be interesting but it was exhausting to me as the story was turning something else than a P&P variation I craved for. Moreover, I see many reviews mentioning abuse in the story and at this point I have no interest to read to that part and be saddened.
If you are someone who enjoys a complicated P&P story then this is for you!
I loved P&P because it was a simple romantic comedy of the regency era. This reimagination started strongly with Darcy and Bingleys mistaking Elizabeth’s identity as a foundling but she is in fact a future duchess. I enjoyed up to first 200 pages (this is a very long story) but then it started boring me with so many characters introduced it started getting hard to follow who is who. There are a lot of newspaper writings to show the new happenings as the story progresses and political issues of that time are discussed a lot. To some this could be interesting but it was exhausting to me as the story was turning something else than a P&P variation I craved for. Moreover, I see many reviews mentioning abuse in the story and at this point I have no interest to read to that part and be saddened.
If you are someone who enjoys a complicated P&P story then this is for you!
January 24, 2024
Hours I can't get back
Do you HATE Darcy? Do you LOATHE Elizabeth? Do you wish the most harm Physically And Mentally to both? Then this is the book for you. Both Darcy and Elizabeth were written so differently personality wise and even in physical appearance in Elizabeth's case that they Not the characters you love. Half this book just went on and on about something And nothing at the same time. I heard "blah blah blah " at once every chapter. Then there were so many characters and titles and situations to follow that I barely knew what was happening. My biggest upset for this book is that it was ALL a Downer. NOTHING nice/good/happy really happened. It was all horrible situations, traumatic events, and even physical torture. It took me 2 tries to finish this book. I'm not glad I tried and finished the second time. This book was recommended many times. I should have ignored them.
Do you HATE Darcy? Do you LOATHE Elizabeth? Do you wish the most harm Physically And Mentally to both? Then this is the book for you. Both Darcy and Elizabeth were written so differently personality wise and even in physical appearance in Elizabeth's case that they Not the characters you love. Half this book just went on and on about something And nothing at the same time. I heard "blah blah blah " at once every chapter. Then there were so many characters and titles and situations to follow that I barely knew what was happening. My biggest upset for this book is that it was ALL a Downer. NOTHING nice/good/happy really happened. It was all horrible situations, traumatic events, and even physical torture. It took me 2 tries to finish this book. I'm not glad I tried and finished the second time. This book was recommended many times. I should have ignored them.
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