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Published January 1, 1838
When Jim Webb's grandfather dies, he leaves tasks for each of his seven grandchildren. Webb's task is to hike the Canol Trail in Noman Wells which is just miles away from the Arctic Circle. During the journey, he gets involved in a sticky situation involving a man named Brent and his girlfriend. Along the journey of the hike, Webb encounters a Grizzley Bear which puts both him and Brent in danger. Through that, he gets tied up, and thrown off a cliff ending as he shoots the Grizzley Bear. But the most surprising part is when he finds his grandfather's knife embedded in the ribs of a skeleton covered by rocks.
Throughout the book, I disliked how the author alternated the chapters going back and forth from then and now. I have read two other stand-alones in the series and the way they formatted it seemed to work better with the layout of the plot. However, considering Webb's background, I can understand how the author would have found it beneficial to give the reader more insight to the story.
In this novel, I enjoyed how the author included Webb playing his guitar on the sidewalk. It gave even more insite towards Webb's past. An example can be found on page two. "Playing a guitar in a hotel room drew loud, angry knocks on the wall from the other guests, but playing on the streets drew cash...Nothing bothered him when he had a guitar in his hands...there was no rush like it." I also enjoyed how the author wrote the scene when Webb finds the knife in the ribs of the skeleton. I felt the author really connected with the reader. While I was reading this part of the text, I imagined that Webb's reaction would resemble a child's as they opened their birthday present, not understanding what the present is; thrilled, confused and bubbling with questions.
A few improvements that could have been done were when Webb got arrested because it was a little bit confusing at one point. Webb's tour guide George knew the town well and knew Brent. Webb was simply talking to Brent's girlfriend trying to convince her that Brent doesn't deserve her which is when Brent assaulted him first. The rest was self defense upon Webb's behalf. George decided to lie, saying that Webb was the catalyst. The police officer Sylvain had simply told Webb to call George instead of a lawyer on page 49. Upon a first read-through, it's somewhat confusing. You have to double-back and re-read the text. Personally, when a book does that, I feel that it could use another edit.
The most climatic event of the story was when Brent had snuck up on Webb just as he had found his grandfather's knife, hitting him on the head with the barrel of a rifle. An excerpt would be on pages 188 and 189. "Behind Webb was the edge of the cliff over looking the river. Falling from it probably wouldn't kill him, because there was a lot of bush growing off the sides of it. But no way could Webb jump, fall through the bush, land and hop away with his ankles bound together before Brent either walked to the edge of the cliff and shot him like a fish in a barrel, or made his way leisurely down and recaptured him. Or maybe Brent wouldn't even have to finish him off. The river was swollen and raging from the recent rains. Chances were that Webb's fall would take him into the water...'...Wasn't that hard for me. I was motivated. I really wanted to kill you.'"
There were a few types of conflict in this novel. Most obviously, there is the person versus person conflict pertaining to Brent and Webb. I thought that the way the author displayed it was impressive; it was concise, understandable, and not confusing. The way he wrote it gave the reader a chance to create their own opinion using the given facts. Another type of conflict was person versus nature. When Webb falls of of the cliff, he faces challenges such as the wolf that chews on his leg, waking him up from his unconscious state. He faces more challenges then; Webb had to jump over to a gravel patch accross the shallow river. He then has to collect what scarce wood he can find to start a fire. He hikes up the path back to the edge where he then kills an oncoming Grizzly Bear. Lastly, person versus self. In his past, Webb had faced challenges with his stepfather Elliot. I know that it sound like person versus person (and it is) but it also incorperates person versus self. Webb had left home after he decided that the only way to make his mother happy was to leave because of Elliot. Elliot used to serve in the military; so he treats Webb as if he was a recruit. He makes his shave his head to a buzz cut, smash his father's guitar, and kneel on grains of rice. His mother didn't know. At the end of the book on pages 235-237, Webb makes a courageous decision. "...dishonourable dischange of Elliot McLuhan Skinner from teh Canadian Armed Forces...based on overly harsh discipline with recruits. Anger management issues with inappropriate responses to anyone who challenged his authority...Confirmed assessment as a borderline psychopath...Then he took out his phone and dialed a number that he hadn't dialed in a long, long time...'Mom,' he said. 'I want to come home.'"
The most exciting part for me was at the beginning of the novel when George didn't vouch for Webb's innocence. My initial thought was Why is he on Brent's side? He started it!. Contradictorily, the book is from Webb's point of view. But what happened next, was more surprising. The police officer later explained that Brent is not to trifle with because this wasn't exactly the first time Brent had been to the police station.
Overall, this book didn't amount to what I was expecting. The first two books that I previously read from the series were better written; however, they were by different authors. At the end of the book, it states that Webb would like to return home to live with his mother and stepfather. The author doesn't elaborate or so much as add an Epilogue; it leaves too much of a cliff hanger considering Webb's hazardous relationship with Elliot (his stepfather). I think that this book deserves three out of five stars; I would recommend this book to an average grade five or six.