Honey Mead Murder is the first book in the ‘Honey Bear Cosy Mysteries’ series. It stars Murphy Baird, a brewer, and George Sheth, a bee keeper. This is told in third person from Murphy and George’s pov.
The blurb is sort of accurate regarding the basic plot, except for Murphy and George falling deeper in love. There’s not much romance in this, the two men only get up to kissing.
I like the cover design, it fits the mystery which is set in Scotland, instead of having two men on the cover.
I don’t know what I was expecting with this book, but it wasn’t what I read. Even though this is third person, it has a distant narrator quality to it, and sometimes it felt passive so that my mind wandered. I noticed there was more dialogue than descriptions or actions. The actions were common actions, like dialing the phone, going out to eat, making coffee, driving places. Actions that felt like filler because there wasn’t much of a mystery investigation to hold the story together.
The author did have inclusive characters, unfortunately the book read as if the author was trying to make it as obvious as possible. At the beginning of the book, the author introduces a character as ‘they/them’ that Murphy is talking to. There isn’t much description of this person, so for the first chapter I had difficulty figuring out if Murphy was speaking of one person or multiple people. Not until later was the name ‘Teagan’ mentioned. In real life, I don’t have trouble with saying ‘they’ or ‘them,’ unfortunately in a book without a character’s name right off the bat, it made the introduction confusing, and that almost by itself, made me rethink reading the book.
Then there was George who was autistic. The author didn’t have George show people he was autistic, George told readers he was, and then the author had George use the term ‘neurodivergent’ when talking about himself and calling Murphy ‘neurotypical people like you.’ The author was heavy handed in portraying different characters by telling instead of showing their behavior. There was only a basic background of the characters with little depth. The relationship between Murphy and George was already a fact when the story started as the two men danced around each other for years without asking the other out. By the end of the story, they’d reached the point of holding hands and kissing. Both men were over thirty. I wish Murphy and George had more depth because the way they were written didn’t draw me in. Finally, there were also too many secondary characters introduced to keep track of, which lead to confusion.
Honey Mead Murder was an okay read. I finished it, but I won’t continue with the series unless the books are free. The writing style read as telling instead of showing, with more dialogue than action, and it made the story and characters feel distant so I didn’t feel pulled in. The author also over emphasized character differences instead of having those differences just be a natural fact of the person. I give this book, 3 Stars because I finished it.