More than a Phelan! But still a bit of a slog to get through. The Stackpole books are really long and dragged out. It fleshes out some interesting future historical events, but just seems so unexciting to read.
The Clans as depicted here are a lot different from how Robert Thurston depicts them. Thurston’s Jade Falcons seem like a truly warlike, even alien culture. It seems like a society that is fairly fleshed out and believable. But Stackpole’s Wolves on the other hand don’t seem that way to me. They seem pretty much the same as the Inner Sphere warriors, except that they have a lot of rituals, don’t use contractions, and like to attend masquerades a lot, for some reason.
In Thurston’s version of the Clans, a “freebirth” has no chance of earning a Bloodname because it is prohibited by clan law. Let alone become a Khan. In Stackpole’s version, it’s perfectly okay for a bondsman to earn a bloodname, become a Khan, and heck, maybe even lead all of the clans! Because why not? That major contradiction doesn’t make any sense to me, and has always bothered me from the first time I read this 20+ years ago.
I still don’t understand the Clans’ motivation as a whole. I mean, the Crusader’s motivations make sense, but the Wardens’ do not. Why are the Wardens even fighting? If they wanted to protect the Inner Sphere from the Crusader Clans, then why do they lead the invasion? It makes no sense.
And Phelan’s motivation is the most muddled of all. He gets captured by the enemy, eagerly joins them, and rises through their ranks. What for? I don’t get it. Doesn’t he have any morals? Any loyalty toward his family and country? He’s fighting just because he likes being a soldier, and doesn’t care who he takes orders from? Weird! And this book never pauses to consider the ramifications of that. Phelan is a traitor. He helps lead enemy forces in KILLING allies that are defending his homeland from a senseless invasion. I don’t get how that can work out to him being a hero, but somehow in this book, it is supposed to. Well, count me out. I don’t see him as a hero. He’s a defector who is guilty of treason.
And one more thing. Why on earth would the Clans EVER agree to fighting versus a 15-year truce? What would they have possibly had to gain by such an agreement? That is completely unrealistic. When have real-life wars ever had something like that spelled out? Wars don’t work that way. I mean, it might stand to reason from a board game development standpoint but not from a real life perspective.
But then again, I’m talking about stories about giant mechanical robots shooting laser beams at each other, so probably I shouldn’t take all of this so seriously :)