At its core, I believe that TIM had some intriguing ideas. I think that had those ideas been better thought out, the story could have improved exponentially.
I, for one, absolutely loved the idea of Dr. Mallahide’s nanobots. They were marvelous, and the possibilities were infinite. Personally, I believe that Mallahide was probably right at the beginning. Though the prospect of becoming a swarm of machines or adopting a hive mentality seemed repulsive to many of the humans in the book, I would have lined up for the chance to get that. Think of it, he was offering infinite knowledge, eternal life, limitless riches and pretty much everything else the universe had to offer. I could see how the prospect of becoming machines would terrify the people, but I still think that some of the braver or more adventurous people would at least try. The way Mallahide went with trying to convince the people was obviously flawed, he should have done further testing and showed his newfound body/self to scientists first and have this new post-human lifestyle (if you can really call it life) investigated first, then, if he were to go to the public with his findings, he would have been better received. Still, his rash and foolish behavior with his discovery can be discounted as excitement or willingness to share his newfound creations with the world. The one thing that I found odd about Mallahide (and no, it was not the fact that he tried to turn all of humanity, including him self and his daughter, against their own will into machines) was how fast he went bad. I know that power corrupts, (and maybe when he gave up his human body he lost some of his, I don’t know, humanity?) but it was incredibly easy for him to give up his morals and begin to use his abilities for his own rise to power/dictatorship. Earlier, he had been all for ‘freeing humanity’ and such, but immediately after Anna refused him, he lost it. Suddenly, in his eyes, mankind did not deserve the right to make their own decisions and did not deserve to be free. This was a total reversal of what we had seen earlier form him, which struck me as a little odd. Usually, in stories, it can take much longer for power to get to ones head in the sense that it did to Mallahide. Then again, his daughter did recently abandon him (or so he believed) and that could have dealt a crippling blow to his psyche, which definitely played a role in tipping him over the edge.
When I comes to TIM vs. Mallahide, I really had an incredibly hard time believing that TIM managed to last at all against the doctor. After all, Mallahide essentially broke himself down to the atomic level. He could pretty much become gaz. Now even if TIM’s scales were strong enough to survive missiles form tanks, punches from Mallahide and what not, there is NO WAY that TIM could have beaten Mallahide. In fact, Mallahide could have easily destroyed him during their first encounter. Even if his scales were made of freaking diamonds, it would simply not matter. TIM, despite being a genetically engineered defender of the earth dinosaur thing, needs to breath. It is essential for his continued existence. So why didn’t Mallahide simply let himself be inhaled by TIM and attack him from the inside? After all, your lungs are designed to let particles into your body, and it is only logical that Mallahide would exploit this weakness to absorbed TIM.
TIM himself is something that I simply could not believe in. how on earth was he even possible? For starters, I have a very hard time trying to picture how exactly a genetically engineered dinosaur would be helpful to the British military. TIM is not exactly a weapon; he’s more like something form Jurassic Park. And whose brilliant idea was it to grow a dinosaur in the middle of London? I figured that keeping him somewhere secluded would be a no brainer, but apparently I was wrong. Then of course, is TIM’s improbable sentience. The fact is, humans are the only creatures on this earth that are truly sentient, and the next closest things are monkeys. Reptiles and dinosaurs are pretty long off. TIM also seems to have a bizarre, innate knowledge of our world and it’s functions. Logically, he would know nothing of the outside world, as he had never been there before and would have a mind akin to that of an infant. Instead, he seems to comprehend everything about our world and planet, which though that can be partially explained by the whole ‘defender of the earth’ still seems a bit off. Oh, and if he is underwater talking to the kraken (and don’t get me started on him), how on earth can he breath?
The whole ‘defender of the earth thing really annoyed me in the book. Yes, the concept at its subject is cool (albeit somewhat overplayed) TIM and the kraken were just too far fetched for me. First off, how on earth did TIM get chosen as defender of the earth? He is not at all natural; he is a genetic experiment, so how on earth did he get chosen to protect nature? And who chooses the defenders? The kraken claimed it wasn’t’ him who chose TIM, so who did? And how were the defender, Chris and Miss Plimpton even connected? Saying ‘it was magic’ or something like that seems a little too iffy, because frankly, in the past, nearly everything that was unexplained was considered ‘magic’ so I’m wondering if there ever was a real explanation, or if Enthoven just didn’t bother come up with an explanation. Same thing with the ‘life force of the planet’ or whatever Chris was supposed to channel into TIM though the bracelet, it was just too much hocus pocus for my liking. And if it somehow was magic, well, at least give ‘evidence’ or a plausible reason for way it works.
Overall, TIM could have had some potential, but it was not properly executed. Instead we ended up with what felt like a half-assed, cliched godzilla story that my little cousins would write in school, with dinosaurs and magic and no real plotline.