I purchased this book secondhand at a used book store while on vacation. I had never heard of the author or the book before, but the cover caught my eye and the very brief back description sounded like it would be a fluffy, fun story. I like music-themed books so this seemed right up my alley!
Oh it was definitely a fluffy book. Here's the plot: A L.A. suburban housewife named Ursula Rhoades gets to fill in for her son Victor's band when the band's lead singer is in the hospital and can't make an important gig. Ursula has always been a singer, having studied voice years before in college. However, she dropped out of college to get married and have a family. Her husband is a muckity-muck entertainment lawyer while she keeps herself occupied with church activities and giving voice lessons.
Her son Victor's band happens to be playing a wedding reception for a celebrity and at that wedding reception comes in Nik Prevel, a rising pop star. Nik is really impressed with Ursula's voice and asks if she would like to sing with him on an album of standards. She reluctantly says yes. Meanwhile, Ursula is dealing with her family leaving: her children Valerie and Victor are going away soon and her husband Don is caught up in an important case involving a major celebrity. So Don is out of the picture then because the case sends him to New York City for the summer. As a newly minted empty-nester, she has the time to devote to a project like this. But she can't bear to tell her family about it, especially her husband because she doesn't want the publicity to jeopardize the possibility of his being offered a senior partnership at his law firm. How will she keep her secret, especially when the album tops the charts and she is asked to sing with Nik himself at the Grammy Awards?
Sounds like the plot for a romantic comedy.
Let's get the good stuff out of the way first. What I liked the most about this book were the descriptions of Nik and Ursula recording and putting the album together. Probably because I'm a musician too and I enjoy reading about such things. And the basic plot is simple but engaging. I read this entire book in about two days and kept going back to the book to see what was going to happen. So I did like those things.
However, there were many parts of this book that I simply found lacking. I found her constant use of similes to be very distracting because they were just not very good. "She stared at the two of them like they were maggots on a dead carcass." "The crowd had grown as thick as Tammy Faye Bakker's makeup." I got the feeling the author was trying to get across, but they sounded very awkward to me. I also didn't care for the way the author wrote the descriptions of people's clothes. I have never read a book with so much designer name dropping. Prada this, Vivienne Westwood that. I like being able to picture what's going on in the story, but I can't do that with the constant name dropping because I don't know what a pair of Miu Miu shoes or a what Roberto Cavalli dress looks like. Maybe this was the author's attempt to reach out to people who are into that sort of thing, I don't know.
I also have no problem with Christian fiction, but there were parts of this book that I felt were shoehorned into the story just to put it under the category of "Christian fiction." If you're going to put Christian elements into the story, put them in because the story is naturally going in that direction. Do we really need a random section about Ursula singing a few CCM songs for Nik and then her going on to think about all the other Christian artists she could expose him to? It added nothing else to the story. Or what about Nik clearly joking about calling on a psychic to help them choose the songs they should record for the project and Ursula ragging on him about soothsayers?
The biggest problem I had with the book was Ursula keeping her recording project a huge secret as if she were ashamed of it. If she's so close to her family like she claims so many times in the story, WHY would she keep such a huge secret? She claims that she tried to tell her husband over the phone multiple times but he would "blow her off," even going as far as to say she'll never ever tell him because she tries to tell him on a night when her husband's law team has won the case and all he wants to talk about is his victory. Well of COURSE he wants to talk about his victory! Why not listen to him for once and then tell him? Or better yet, why didn't you tell him earlier?
I could tell that this was a second book from the writing style (a LOT of telling rather than showing, which drove me nuts) and the awkward phrases (see simile examples above). For a professionally published, and no doubt professionally edited, novel, I expected a lot more. To cap it off, I am sure that the very last sentence of the book was supposed to be a joke ("With God, a loving family, and a forty-five piece orchestra, anything is possible!") but it fell completely flat.
Was this a fun read, though? Yes. Did it deliver on what it promised from the brief synopsis on the back ("An invitation to record a CD with a hunky, young pop star? It's the stuff dreams are made of… right? For Ursula Rhoades, a suburban wife and mom, one little secret is about to change her whole life")? Yes. However, I will be donating this book. Maybe someone else will get more out of this book than I did.