Technically, it's 2.5 stars. Since each book has gotten marginally better, this one got better by .5 stars. Which is a leap from the first of his books I read. Now, I am not one to mince words. I am not a fan of Scott Nicholson's. I have read three of his books so far, and it's a safe bet that more will find their way on my kindle. Not a fan, but he does have a really bad habit of creating some interesting ideas that grab my attention. That would be a good thing, if he followed through. It took me three books to figure out what I don't like about him. It's not his writing. I think he's a good writer who has great ideas. It's the execution.
All of the books I've read suffer from two diseases that can inflict even the best of stories: underdeveloped characters and jumping plot. This one didn't suffer too much from jumping plot since it only focused on two characters. The bigger the cast, the more he jumps. So, as long as he focuses on two or three main characters, it can be a good book.
I didn't feel like this was a first book. I felt like I was dropped in the middle of a book. The blurb I read did mention that Gordon tells Katy and Jett about the ghosts and the walking scarecrow and the horseback preacher, but we don't see it. Instead, by the time we join the story, they have been told this and it's knowledge to them, but not to us. In fact, we are told a lot of things I felt would be best if we saw it first. We are told that Katy never cooked before, but never really shown. We are told that she thought Gordon was a good man, but never shown this side of him. We are told that Jett doesn't always feel comfortable in her Goth persona, but never shown anything. I would have loved to see Katy before she became a Stepford wife, Gordon before he started acting like a cold-hearted bastard, or Jett hesitate before putting on her make-up.
And that is one of the reasons why I keep swearing off Scott's books. The characters need a lot of work. We either have underdeveloped characters (as I found in "Creative Spirits"), horrific stereotypes ("Drummer Boy"), or characters we are told about but never shown their development to give their decisions the impact he's going for. Half the stuff at school could have been chucked out in favor of a few scenes in the beginning of Katy's old life. The scenery was pretty always just the house or the barn, so really, all the school scenes could be cut. They offered nothing. Did we really have to see Jett in school to understand her character better? Well, since she didn't develop in the story, no.
I would have loved to have seen why Katy married Gordon. Seriously, he was like the worst choice for a husband, and I had no clue why she married him. We never saw any warmth from him. In fact, he reminded me of an old skit from this really old show "Mama's House" or something like that, that I caught on reruns as a kid. In the scene, this man is dating the grown up daughter of the title character, and he's always mentioning his dead wife (ironically also called Rebecca, but his was a throwback to the old Hitchcock film "Rebecca"). In many ways, I saw Gordon doing that, but not as funny. I never did figure out why Katy started to act and resemble Rebecca, especially since it was a Road to Nowhere. There was no payoff for it. It didn't tie in to the ending. It kinda dropped.
The scares weren't there because of the character jumping. We'd have a cliffhanger, but by the time we got back to the scene, I was no longer scared. Not that I was scared to begin with, but having to read a chapter between the action with a different character really pulled me out of what could have been a good scene. And it's really sad, because I have tried to like Scott's work, but I keep coming up against the same problems with each book. A great idea ruined by jumping from one POV to another per chapter, pulling me from any action or suspense in favor of getting someone else's POV shoehorned in. If he stuck to one POV for two chapters or so, especially during a scene he wants to put a scare in to, it would work out so much better.