An Unholy Communion: Donna Fletcher Crow
Erie feelings, strange happenings, premonitions and unexpected occurrences mark the many events depicted within this well researched, documented and crafted novel by author Donna Fletcher Crow. Unholy Communion is the next in the Monastery Murder’s Series and marks the union between Felicity and Father Antony but not in the way you might think. As the story unfolds Felicity is watching one of her fellow ordinands singing in Ascension Morn. But, before we get to what happens let’s focus on the prologue where we learn about Non, now older as she flashes back to the birth of St. David, his importance, a holy child born to her, proud and born during a great storm. But, let’s fast forward to the present before we learn more and hear the voices singing from the top of Pusey Tower at the College of Transfiguration when something happens that will change the world for so many and lead both Felicity and Father Antony on a journey along with some young Pilgrims that will bring to light much about the history of the church, the times, the places they visit and hopefully the young pilgrims. But, when Hwyl Pendry a former student of Father Antony falls over the precipice of the Tower the sight not only causes Felicity to freeze and focus her eyes on the horrific site but seeing the body fall and noticing something in his hand would set the stage for what has yet to come. Within his fingers he holds a paper that when Felicity takes it she screams. The mere touch makes her feel as if the paper is on fire. Just why and what this means is the job of Detective Inspector Nosterfield and would later become the concern of both Father Antony and Felicity.
Hwyl Pendry has been serving as Deliverance Minister in the diocese of St. David’s. When Felicity reveals what was drawn on the paper, a strange symbol of a double-headed snake curing across a triangle, meaning suicide, but was it? As the story continues Father Antony suggested that Felicity accompany him and a group of young people on a youth pilgrimage through rural Wales. But, what starts out as a youth trip leads to more unusual occurrences, the symbol of the snakes seem to follow them along the way and a strange happening with one of the nuns reminds Felicity of the paper held by the Hwyl. As the group assembles we meet Colin who seems to know a lot more than most adults about the history of the places they are visiting, the landscape and the architecture allowing readers to learn about time period, the past and the history through the eyes and mind of a teen. Added in one of the young people is found face down in a well and some figures seem to be following them on their path. Visiting many different monasteries you being to wonder what is really happening behind some of the closed doors and why these strange things seem to be reoccurring.
During an evening when things appeared quiet yet so dark, Felicity wakes with a start thinking she hears Antony calling her but in reality he is sleeping. Haunted by the snakes, worried that death or a bad omen is following her other things happen along the way including one of the pilgrims falling off some steep stones, needing medical attention and one young man named Jared, who most think is delinquent seems to save the day. Worshipping, praying saying the different Stations before each venture calms Felicity but only to a point as the words within the prayers and her instincts kick in as two young girls join the group and what they experience is short of a vampire movie filled with paranormal, unusual actions as one girl named Kaylyn and another named Evie try to enlighten Felicity about their religious education and their understanding of Zombies, the supernatural and when you read and visualize what happens next on pages 127-131 you being to wonder what who is controlling the events and why these two young girls became trancelike and enveloped in death and darkness.
Let’s recap the events so that we are clear as Felicity reminds the reader of the screams that awakened her, Sister Elspeth plunging over a cliff, the ghostly hand at the start of the book that grabbed her but was her murdered classmate, snakes, Nancy plunging down the coal tip and what happened to Sister Florence. But, will prayers help and just what will the end result be that remains to be seen as hear references to witchcraft and spells.
Things calm down and then one young man gets sick from something he ate and it just might be that someone does not want this pilgrimage to continue or to be a success. Why? As the young people enlighten Felicity into the world of Gothic and the reader hears more prayers, learns more about Adam and what happened to cause him to get sick and they continue on. At each impasse or turn the author offers a prayer, a reading or historical event to calm the pilgrims and enlighten the reader. But, Felicity’s dreams are so vivid, so real what could be causing the dark figures to whisper to her within her consciousness and what is the dark veil or shadow that is following them? Antony’s disappearance, his search for Michael adds to the danger and the suspense. But, more history comes next as what it was like 900 years ago, an obscure legend, Ffodor ap Barris, a statue he states of Our Lady in a Tree, songs, prayers and leading to Our Lady of Penrhys leading the group to the Uniting Church in the present as dark clouds would come upon them but Antony continued with his story. But, when things change and get dangerous it seems the weather reacts not only to the story and the times but seems to foretell what might happen next. The history of this church just might bring to light more about the dangers they are encountering, the struggles of their past and then the symbol resurfaces as a blazing flame once again in the form of a card that someone drops. The pieces start to fall together as she gets reminded about a lecture the Orbis Astri are sponsoring and their goals quite different from most. But, things heat up even more as information comes to light, Kaylyn reacted to an exhibit quite differently than everyone else and the discussion moves to Deliverance ministers and negativity and remember that this society stands for Masters of Existence and that everyone has within them all the “good of the universe,” and that they feel you can “become the master of your life.” Just how this fits in will be revealed as one of the young people has a life threatening incident, all the events come into play for Antony and the fact that no one things Hwyl committed suicide still plays on their minds including the fact that Michael, their driver disappears at times but why? Antony was in way above his head, he had no answers just questions.
When all of the clues, the pieces and the final reveal come together you will not believe who is behind everything. One young man kidnapped, some drugged, the reason more than just evil and the end result murder but how many, whose and why you will have to read for yourself. One young girl creates the images, another member of the pilgrimage disappears and Antony will not dismiss his fear. What feast was coming up, what did their rituals have to do with the pilgrimage, where does fire fit in? Just who was behind everything and why you I promised Father Antony and St. David I would never tell.
Author Donna Fletcher Crow adds history, prayers, events in a fast paced mystery that reminds everyone the importance of believing, watching out for others and the true meaning of An Unholy Communion. A Holy Communion is something Christians do to remember what Jesus did for them, this is what his friends did the night before he was killed and it is known at the Last Supper. At Holy Communion there is breaking, sharing of bread which is a reminder of Jesus’ body being broken on the cross and do not forget the sharing of the wine which is a remind of his blood. Once again this author takes us deep within the walls of monasteries, churches, The Bishop Palace, across Wales and England to find the answer to what really happened at the Ascension. What did David find and what why did he want to keep it safe? Read the novel to find out and who knows what is in store for next for Father Antony and Felicity.
Fran Lewis: reviewer