When her mom stumbles across her vibrator Melanie knows it's time to move out, and when her two older stepbrothers offer her a place to stay she jumps at the chance. They have always been there to protect her and to take care of her, and Melanie can think of nothing better than getting to hang out with them again. But things have changed - the looks they're giving her aren't exactly brotherly, and the thoughts she's having about her two beach-bronzed brothers are far from sisterly. She just can't make up her mind whether she prefers Jacob, the older and more passionate one, or Keith, who is younger and more sophisticated. What if she decides she wants them both?
This is a forty page MFM very Very quick read. There are grammatical errors and Keith switches to Derek. But what bothered me the most was that both men are serial daters who make no secret of their “slutty” ways and yet these men have s#x with this woman without using condoms and no one ever bothers to discuss birth control. It was ok but it loses stars for irresponsible sexual conduct.
This is a forty page MFM very Very quick read. There are grammatical errors and Keith switches to Derek. But what bothered me the most was that both men are serial daters who make no secret of their “slutty” ways and yet these men have s#x with this woman without using condoms and no one ever bothers to discuss birth control. It was ok but it loses stars for irresponsible sexual conduct.