I've been reading Gardner's Perry Mason books off and on for many years. Many years ago, I was an intense fan of the series, and read them all, at least twice. Now, after a lot of water over the dam, I'm looking at them again.
Those who are used to really fine mystery writers, such as Ross Macdonald, may find the writing style here off-putting. It can be stiff and mechanical. (To be fair, that varies a lot from book to book.) Nonetheless, I still love the general setting: the characters of Perry, Della, Paul, Lt. Tragg, and Hamilton Berger. That, and the ingenious plots, are why I read Perry Mason.
On the whole, the ones written by about 1953 are the best. This one was written in 1945, during Gardner's war period when we wrote many of his best stories. It is among the best written, but is flawed in my opinion.
Briefly, the plot centers on the sale of an island owned by Jane Keller, a young widow. The island is in the Los Angeles River, and is evidently a few acres in size. Wealthy businessman Parker Benton wants to buy it for a vacation home. (I was surprised to learn that that river had islands and was an attractive spot in 1945. I'm sure it is not now!) The problem is that a shifty operator named Scott Shelby has an option to drill for oil on the island. He wants to be bought out at an exhorbitant price. Jane Keller and her relatives hire Perry Mason. Benton arranges a gathering on his yacht where the various parties will hash it all out. About ten people attend. They have to spend the night due to heavy fog. About midnight Shelby falls off the boat, a shot is fired, and he has apparently been murdered. The prime suspect is his wife Marion, whom Perry encounters on deck holding the murder weapon!
One of the things I didn't like was the way Perry almost insults his assistant, Jackson. Jackson admits, "it’s hard for me to translate life into law.” Perry says: "When Jackson married, he proposed to an attractive widow some five years his senior, but quite definitely a widow. Even in matrimonial affairs, Jackson was afraid to blaze a trail on his own initiative." Makes you wonder why Perry hires him.
"The Sleep-walkers Niece" also involves a group of people, including adversaries, spending the night at a secluded location when a murder occurs. "The Negligent Nymph" also involves people contesting the rights of someone to build on a privately owned island.
Characters:
Jane Keller, widow who owns an island.
Martha Stanhope, Jane's sister.
Marjorie Stanhope, daughter of Martha.
Lawton Keller, brother-in-law of Jane Keller, thinks he can advise Jane.
Frank Bomar, wounded veteran, fiance of Marjorie.
Jackson, assistant to Perry Mason.
Scott Shelby, smooth operator, had an option for an oil lease on the island owned by Jane Keller.
Marion Shelby, Scott's third wife. She was "half awake" when odd things happened.
Parker Benton, wealthy business man and yacht owner, wants to buy the island owned by Jane Keller.
Carlotta Benton, wife of Parker.
Ellen Cushing. She has a real estate agency and seems to be partnered with Scott Shelby.
Art Lacey, paramour of Ellen Cushing.
Sergeant Dorset, a clone of Sgt. Holcomb, who is not mentioned. Not clear why Gardner introduced this policeman instead of using Holcomb.
This is one of the two or three stories where several characters are introduced early only to be never mentioned again. OTOH, a major character is introduced late at the 53% mark. That's a no-no to me.
Good use of Dorset [as Holcomb]; mediocre use of Lt. Tragg, Paul Drake, Della Street. Good use of Hamilton Berger, though we never see him at his sputtering best.
Excellent cross-examination scenes; among the best in all the Perry Mason canon. Some readers may be turned off by all the legal points. I love it!
The plot is really very good, and, as usual, ingenious. But I have several complaints:
- There is a rather important coincidence. However, I don't think it was really needed. An issue could have been explained another way.
- The murderer left an important clue out to be discovered. That made no sense.
- My main complaint about the plot, which otherwise could have been among the five or so best, is that there is a very important technical point that no reader will guess. That violates one of my prime principles of detective stories, that an alert thinking reader has a chance to dope it out before the reveal.
Still, recommended.
P.S. This story was made into an early episode in the classic TV show with Raymond Burr and Barbara Hale. They changed the plot quite a bit, as no doubt the yacht party would have taken too long to film. The defendant is different and the murderer is different! The show was not well written and doesn't make much sense.