"The Instant Enemy" is a slim, engaging book that deserves four and maybe four and one-half stars. I read it while bouncing between Boston and Toronto during a short business trip. I had "saved it" up as a treat (while reading books on Physics, HTML, Accounting, CSS and other similarly exciting materials) and it was the perfect size to slip into my laptop bag.
As the author's (and his detective's) styles evolved, he often incorporated the same key elements: crimes that spanned two or more generations, links (usually sexual) between disparate characters, class distinctions, and an aggrieved character's quest. This book has all of those plus his tight and colorful writing. What this book has little of is the "psychological insight" that Archer displays in many of the other novels. It makes him seem more "hard-boiled" (in the sense of Philip Marlowe or "The Continental Op") than in other novels.
As always, he has the knack of understanding when a person is avoiding the truth (or some part of it) and if a character has an hidden problem that must be solved. There is just less introspection on Archer's part and more of a take-it-in-stride response to these things. (There is also less of the book devoted to his involvement (or attempts to be swayed by) one or more female characters. These differences do not make the novel better or worse than other Lew Archer novels; just a different flavor.
Personally, I enjoyed the book as much as any I have read before. It has the tight and twisty plot that is the hallmark of the author along with his punchy and (as I call it) "lush" prose style. Here's an example of it from page 127.
"I felt surprisingly good. If Mrs. Krug was alive and able to tell me where the ranch was, I could break the case before morning. I even let a part of my mind play with the question of what I might do with a hundred thousand dollars."
"Hell, I could even retire. The possibility jarred me. I had to admit to myself that I lived for nights like these, moving across the city's great broken body, making connections among its millions of cells. I had a crazy wish or fantasy that some day before I died, if I made all the right neural connections, the city would come all the way alive. Like the Bride of Frankenstein."
Wow. There is so much that I like about the author and hist detective packed into these two paragraphs. This passage has both one of the rare, but deepest, "introspective" sections of this or any other Archer story. The man is confronted by the fact that he might not have to work ($100K in 1968 went a long way when some of the best salaries were $20K/year). Instead of the more mundane thoughts of how he might live off the money, or continue to work, but hire associates and a secretary, our man exposes one of his deepest feelings.
It has always been clear that Archer enjoys the "chase". In most of the stories he goes virtually non-stop from Page 1 to the end; chasing clues, working with only a quick nap here of there for days at a time, and trying to solve the case before he has to give it to the local law enforcement ( or before they solve it themselves.) But here, he admits that he is essentially an "adrenaline junkie" but one with a unique goal. And, it's how that goal is described that is part of Ross Macdonald's magic. I'm sure that the concept of making connections among "cells" in the city isn't his alone, but to re-cast it so that the city itself might "come alive" (rather than Archer)and to link that to a cult horror movie of the 1930s is just so clever and unexpected. To cap it off, he chooses the sequel, rather than the original film to illustrate the point.
There is one other comment that I wanted to expand on. The "class distinctions" that are used in these books are often an essential element of how characters relate to each other and Archer. There is the expected class of "betters" that see ordinary people (and those in unsavory professions such as "Private Detective") as a group that should be avoided, or if necessary treated with a certain "distance". Archer encounters this type both as employers and as parts of his investigation. Whether they are from "old money" or the "nouveau riche", Archer often surprises them with his knowledge of arts, culture, or people. As expected, often the newly-better-off are more critical of and hostile to those who are beneath them economically.
But there is also a realistic, petty, "class warfare" that Macdonald wields. It may be an "ordinary" person who draws a sharp distinction from those who live from crime, or prostitution, or just on the wrong side of town. It may equally be someone from that poorer community who denigrates a former friend, neighbor, or even family member because they found some way to move up a notch or two. We believe in these attitudes and characters because there is a harsh realism to each of these feelings. We accept that these emotions can drive the plot in many ways: to seek out a past or right a wrong, to protect a loved one, to cover up a sin from days gone by.
Ross Macdonald is a master of his craft. Although he has been dead for almost thirty years, he left a wonderful legacy for all time. If you've never done so, pick up one of his books and discover the joy of reading some of the best crime fiction ever written.