How The Other Half Lives - I genuinely give this part of the book a 1/5. Holy shit. I was trying to nice and look at its more redeeming qualities and I literally could not. The writing is just awful, just awful. There is no build up to the random events that take place, like what do you mean Fern randomly has a psychotic break and tries to kill herself when there was NO BUILDUP to that. Abortion -> nightmare -> suicide? Like damn we could've at least seen some of how the depression was impacting her. And the way O'Kelly randomly decided to hit Jamellah was just weird. But that I can look past. ANOTHER weird storyline related aspect was how easy it was for Fern to leave the mental hospital? Like this author did absolutely no research on how mental hospitals work, or even how the police works because what do you mean Jamellah was booked and bailed within the same what, 3 hours? Please. So rushed. I also didn't like how the black characters were using black as an insult? "You black bitch, you n*gger" like..... first of all in what world are black people using the n word with a hard R so regularly? Is this author even black? Seriously the only well written parts of this book were the smutty parts, and even those were very mid-low tier scenes. I hated it honestly if I could give it a zero I would. This author should never write again.
Love is 2 Blame - I mean I guess it was better than the last one? Well no, it WAS better than the last one, but only slightly. The characters were written better but don't get me wrong, they weren't written well lol. Malcom is dumb, Shaylissa is dumb, Zahara is dumb, everyone is dumb except MAYBE Cindy and Jamal (who are cute, despite not having many interactions on page), who may simply just be daft. The story was also poorly written, but it didn't feel as rushed as the last one did so I'll give it that. I liked that they're were chapters so the dual point of views weren't confusing (unlike the first story). I also wasn't too bothered by the way the relationships came together, like with Malcom and Zahara were coming together and everything, you could tell Malcom was still battling his feelings for Shaylissa, but was still easing into Zahara, which was nice! Shaylissa was a bitch for trying to get Malcom back after how bad she treated him and how good he treated her (especially since she only tried after finding out he was moving on, fuck her, least fav character), and I LOVED how at the end he realized that letter was just her attempting at manipulating him into ruining him again. But overallllll maybe a 2/5? 2.5/ 5 if I'm being nice.
Staring Evil in the Face - honestly, why is this short story even in the same book as the others? If this was a full length book I would read it. The characters felt REAL, like actual people who had real goals (despite some being more sad than the others). I liked how we started the story towards the end of the timeline and the filling in about past events was the main storyline. Seeing Robier slowly realize his wife has no hope yet watching him CLING to her as if she could be saved? While SIMULTANEOUSLY watching Tiphanie feel helpless as drugs take over her life? Like the way she absolutely refused to give up her body for drugs in the start, no matter what, then her doing it repeatedly as if it was nothing encapsulates how I think a drug addiction would work. AND THE FACT THAT SHE NEVER MANAGES TO SAVE HERSELF JUST ADDS TO THE COMPLEXITY OF HER CHARACTER BECAUSE THE SMALLEST PART OF HER BELIEVED THAT SHE COULD, ugh I can’t, it was genuinely written so well. No part of the story felt rushed or out of place, every character had a purpose, and the ending made sense. As my creative writing professor would say, this “worked” for me and I believe it contains both truth and beauty. I would rate it a 5/5, which (unfairly) will bring up the overall rating of this book, despite the other two stories being ASS.
Book rating: 2/5 (average was actually 1.7, guess that last story didn’t do as much as I thought it would)