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Ella Dark #16

Girl, Forlorn

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FBI Agent Ella Dark has studied serial killers from the time she could read, devastated by the murder of her own father, and has gained an encyclopedic knowledge of murderers. But a new killer strikes, warning his victims beforehand in a twisted game, and Ella finds herself in the race of her life to save the next one before it’s too late…

FBI Agent Ella Dark, 29, is given her big chance to achieve her life’s to join the Behavioral Crimes Unit. Ella’s hidden obsession of gaining an encyclopedic knowledge of serial killers has led to her being singled out for her brilliant mind, and invited to join the big leagues.But this time Ella finds herself in a cat and mouse chase with no way out, and she must wonder if she is hunting—or the one who is hunted….A page-turning and harrowing crime thriller featuring a brilliant and tortured FBI agent, the ELLA DARK series is a riveting mystery, packed with suspense, twists and turns, revelations, and driven by a breakneck pace that will keep you flipping pages late into the night.

213 pages, Kindle Edition

Published December 26, 2023

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Blake Pierce

785 books5,854 followers
Blake Pierce is author of the bestselling RILEY PAGE mystery series, which includes seven books (and counting). Blake Pierce is also the author of the MACKENZIE WHITE mystery series, comprising four books (and counting); of the AVERY BLACK mystery series, comprising four books (and counting); and of the new KERI LOCKE mystery series.

An avid reader and lifelong fan of the mystery and thriller genres, Blake loves to hear from you, so please feel free to visit www.blakepierceauthor.com to learn more and stay in touch.

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14.4k reviews543 followers
January 7, 2024
This one was just ok for me. Not sure why it wasn't up to the normal of the rest of the series. I really hate the new boss, laughed at the history that he and Mia have, she made a good choice there. Then at the end when we got to know his thoughts, I think what happened to him is going to be a good thing as long as it doesn't affect Ella or Mia.

The crime they were working on was creepy. More so when you find out why and who the bad guy was. I felt bad for him, despite his actions.

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5 reviews
January 11, 2026
If I had to compare this book to the others within the series, it was not my favorite admittedly. There was already a novel within the series regarding riddles, and this one I would consider elementary (which was sort of the point). I was sad to see one major character leave and to have a negative character come in (but there has to be conflict), but the epilogue leads to some interest in the next novel (but makes me nervous for Ripley!).
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91 reviews3 followers
January 7, 2024
-Needs major editing 🙃
-Character development is moving faster in these latter books, which I love
-Why did they not question the change with Edis?
-I liked that this one broke up some of the fighting patterns. Each book is a fantastic stand alone, but with a series this long, the formula needs some changing up!
-Cliffhanger I did not see coming!!

Profile Image for Vicki Gilbertson.
423 reviews11 followers
January 5, 2024
Where's the grammar police that proofs Blake's work? Come on page 94 ---- Do you recently purchase??
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2,725 reviews16 followers
March 4, 2024
Not my favorite of the series.
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71 reviews2 followers
April 18, 2024
Love hate relationship with the series but imma keep reading each book 😭😅😅🙃 Yup
9 reviews
May 15, 2024
Good book as expected normal twists and turns to keep the suspense
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Author 12 books15 followers
July 6, 2024
Upheaval lurks in Agent Ella Dark's life. Book 16 is full of twists and turns. I would give this 5 stars if there weren't so many typos.
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73 reviews6 followers
July 26, 2024
I do not like this new FBI director, and I’m still waiting for the other shoe to drop in regard to the Red Diamonds.
36 reviews
September 13, 2024
Forlorn

This book was amazing. Lot of action and questioning. So many options but the first all was great. Hope Mia and Ella get back on the force
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110 reviews1 follower
March 12, 2025
So, I normally enjoy audiobooks especially when I am doing chores that aren't fun. This audiobook was in a very singsong voice, and was actually irritating, which was definitely detracting.
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560 reviews
April 13, 2025
The storylines had been getting a bit predictable, But this one kept me more interested
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121 reviews
July 9, 2025
love a little payback! cause why are you being mean to ella and mia?! didn’t like you from the start.
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16 reviews
August 12, 2025
Another great read

Love this series it got me back into reading love the friendship and just the way it feels real isn't over the top seem like crimes and events that could happen
1 review
January 26, 2026
AMAZING!!!

I read this in 6 hours! I couldn’t put it down!! I can’t wait to read the rest of the series!
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83 reviews
June 2, 2025
I'm kind of confused... I don't think this series need to be this long but im going to contuine it anyways
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