This was nice, but it could have been better. I read this for book club, and I found that most of us in the group felt that this novel needed something to make it better, but we couldn't put a finger on what. Things are slow to start, and the two main characters, Lily and Marvena, take a long time to come into focus. These are two strong women, but for much of the book, they don’t have much personality. They simply react to the things that happen to them, at least at first, though they improve in second half of the novel. This historical fiction book touches on a lot of social issues from that time, including anti-German violence, sexism, poverty, mining safety, unions, corrupt officials—all sorts of interesting topics. The mystery is compelling and well-plotted. Many of the characters, especially the side characters, are well fleshed-out.
I've been thinking a lot about this since I finished reading it, and I think one of the biggest problems with it is that it doesn't give enough attention to the "bad" guys. It focuses on people's relationships and friendships, sometimes with great nuance, but the people who are mean are flat and almost cartoonish in their simplicity. I'm not asking for every villain to have some sort of traumatic origin story, but I know that in real life, most people are complicated. Even bullies. That sort of oversimplifying might merely be annoying in other novels, but it's disastrous here because of the novel's political focus. This book looks at many political issues, and the biggest ones—miners' safety, fair wages, and unionization—drive the plot. How can there be tension between two opposing sides if we never hear both sides? The heroines want safety, and money for laborers, and all sorts of good things. Good for them. But I have to say, if they're opposing people who believe otherwise, would it hurt to explain their side as well? Or does the author trust her readers so little, that she's afraid we'd side with them? Does she think we'll say safety is bad? Or are there other factors at play? I'm sure these people had reasons that made sense to them, and it would have helped us to understand their side of the issue. It would have helped us understand what the heroines were up against. It's too bad the readers missed out on all that.