I normally don't read contemporary romance/mysteries, and now I remember why. I know there are a lot of Sala fans out there, but this was my first book of hers, and I stopped halfway through. It's very poorly written--I feel like someone made a software program where you enter in the plot points and major characters, and it churned out a novel. It feels that formulaic, in the switching between the POVs of the heroine, hero, and villains, and in the lack of emotional depth.
I wanted to read this book based on the description (after witnessing a mafia killing, Beth had to go to ground among her estranged family in Kentucky, including her long lost love). But I was quickly turned off with the flat portrayal of all the characters. After showing the intelligence, foresight, and courage to plan an escape from the (incompetent) witness protection program, Beth then hands herself off to her family and proceeds to sit around crying while every able-bodied man near her does all the work. I'm not asking for her to be unrealistically unaffected by what she had witnessed and experienced, but I got tired of the redundant pattern of: random guy sees Beth crying, feels suddenly protective of her and reassures her; Beth cries more intensely. Sorry, but I can't identify with a passive main character.