I don't know whether I'm keeping this one or not so hold onto your butts.
All in all? Stupid. Pointless. I believe someone used the term 'insipid'. Thank you for that nostalgic reference. It fits well with the theme.
The main character is the daughter of a family who 'won' the lotto jackpot. Except they didn't ACTUALLY win? Somehow their other daughter made a deal with the devil and he made it happen? Oh. The money's cursed. The angel Michael's involved. And there are a lot of italicized references of other characters we never meet, don't get to know, and don't have any point in the story. It makes you believe they all add up to something, but it just comes around the devil has more dealings than we thought.
Kinda like how the other part of the plot never came around. There's blood on the money? And it's cursed and it's not theirs? What the hell was that? Nothing really explained. A lot of copouts, shit that could've been caught with a few more rewrites but who has the time for that, am I right?
The romance is a flimsy thing that a wet dog caught onto and shook the fuck out of before burying it in the devil's backyard. Her sister spent her money on a tea shop that goes capoot and is set on fire at the end so the family really does lose everything.
Kind of hard to write a happy ending with a dysfunctional family who's relied on their 'spoils' for 7 years and are just supposed to go back to square one. You know what would've been a more interesting story? THAT. Have the book be about the family winning, losing the fortune, and turning into a bunch of money-grubbing losers who still have no friends and lost what little dignity they had to begin with. Have them go crazy. Foam at the mouth crazy. Do anything for a dime crazy. Money does funny things to people, and we hear stories all the tie about lottery winners and millionaire artists who regret getting caught up in that. We don't need a deal with the devil. We don't need a half assed guardian angel giving us misguided directions like we're supposed to know what to do in the first place when, FYI, the Bible is sure to make VERY CLEAR angels deliver these messages with the mystery attached.
How the fuck is she supposed to know who to spend it on? She could've been approached the homeless man, her sister, or the devil himself and wouldn't have known. Gavin has no relation to her in the first place, so why she's so insistent to help him makes no sense. He is what he is. A hacker who got caught, sent to juvie, and later on screwed. WHAT THE FUCK does that have to do with lottery winnings? He didn't kill anyone so how is it BLOOD money? Or was the family with the dying kid supposed to win it? They made a deal, too, though. For 1 million dollars on medical bills. The backstory on useless, needless characters was 10 times more interesting than the main plot which is the only reason I didn't skip the italicized portions. I know I said 300 pages is too much and we should go back down to 200 page books, but for 200 something pages this has more filler than the selection.