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Forever
When Fallon met Abner, her entire life changed forever. Two years on and they are happily married and parents to a wonderful young son they adore, life couldn't get any better... Lola and Calvin have been madly in love for two years, living together in their new house, beginning their life journey with their future ahead of them... One day this close kit group of friends loses one of their own, their lives are thrown into turmoil, hearts are broken, friendships are betrayed and life will never be the same again... How do you go on without the person you thought would be there forever?
443 pages, Kindle Edition
First published September 30, 2012
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November 18, 2013
Great potential wasted for bad writing style and formatting.
I got the novel as a free kindle ebook.
This story had great potential and I liked the premises at the root but the writing is atrocius and the formatting really bad too.
The sentences are too short and chopped it seems to read a grocery list, they are often incomprensible and then almost always I had to re-read to understand who was speaking and who is being referred to.
This didn't make me get completly into the story even if I really wanted to.
I got an headache after the first page. By the way I keep reading hoping in a formatting and writing improvement. Hopes not fulfilled.
Fallon's behavior and insecurities are not well explained but now I see there's a previous book about her and Abner so I think it's all said and clearified there, therefore if you don't read book 1 do not even try book 2 if you decide to still give them a chance.
The story is a 3/4 stars for its potential but all got wasted due to the bad writing style and formatting.
I got the novel as a free kindle ebook.
This story had great potential and I liked the premises at the root but the writing is atrocius and the formatting really bad too.
The sentences are too short and chopped it seems to read a grocery list, they are often incomprensible and then almost always I had to re-read to understand who was speaking and who is being referred to.
This didn't make me get completly into the story even if I really wanted to.
I got an headache after the first page. By the way I keep reading hoping in a formatting and writing improvement. Hopes not fulfilled.
Fallon's behavior and insecurities are not well explained but now I see there's a previous book about her and Abner so I think it's all said and clearified there, therefore if you don't read book 1 do not even try book 2 if you decide to still give them a chance.
The story is a 3/4 stars for its potential but all got wasted due to the bad writing style and formatting.
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