Thank you Thomas & Mercer and NetGalley for the opportunity to read this book before it is published.
FYI - I might get slightly ~political~ in this review. Full disclaimer: I did not read the first book in this series, but that didn't impact my understanding of the characters or plot.
THE PLOT
NYPD Hostage Negotiator Abby Mullens is back. Her mission: get her daughter Sam back from a group of unhinged conspiracy theorists who have kidnapped Sam and are holding her hostage at her school. To free her daughter, Abby must dig deep into the ring leader's background and discover what's REALLY going on. And while all this is going on, Abby is still dealing with keeping her ties to the Wilcox cult in the past, but someone doesn't want her to let go.
MY OPINNI
When I finished this book, I wanted to kiss my Kindle. Bravo Mike Omer. I'm usually not a fan of books by male authors (idk why... the writing style doesn't appeal to me), but this book was fantastic. My original rating was to give it a 4.5/5, but I couldn't decide if I wanted to round up or down, so I slept on it. And when I awoke after a crazy dream, I decided to round down.
Before I get into why I rounded down, let me focus on what the author did well—really well.
1. Storyline. I'll admit, that scene at the old cop's place had a bit discouraged when two entire pages were used to describe his dog's behaviour, but the book quickly found its pace from there. The storyline was executed beautifully; I loved the alternating POVs in ONE scene to describe how everyone felt. It was like watching a movie. This is tricky to do, but Omer somehow made it clear who's POV it was without using sub-headers. Props to him... This is proof he created specific voices/behaviours for each character that were discernible; not an easy task by any means.
2. SOCIAL COMMENTARY ON POINT. I lived in the US when Trump got elected/alt-right really started gathering momentum, so reading about the Watchers (fictional QAnon) was a treat. He nailed it. Without SAYING it, Omer artfully revealed WHY people get involved in conspiracies. For example:
"...Then he found the videos. Talking not just about FEMA but about Big Pharma and child slavery and rising unemployment, and it struck a cord with him. His mom had died from cancer. He'd lost his job because it had been outsourced to India. Things clicked together. It all made sense."
Also... without giving too much away, but one of the final scenes aptly demonstrated how suffocating it is to believe in conspiracy theories. It's an endless black hole... You suspect one thing will happen, and then when it doesn't, your reaction is to think up ANOTHER conspiracy theory to explain why your first conspiracy theory didn't materialize. Omer did a FANTASTIC job at getting in the head of conspiracy theorists and explaining their behaviour. The social commentary alone is 5 stars.
3. Writing quality was good. Well above average. He cracked some jokes, and the dialogue between characters was efficient and effective. No monologuing or using overly flowery language that no regular degular person would use. I loved how he used dialogue to show personality... NYPD cop Mitch is a great example. I could just picture Mitch without having to read 10 lines describing his appearance. Kudas, Omer.
4. The ending wasn't annoying. Most authors seem to walk toward the ending and then sprint through it, leaving much to be explored and explained. Omer wrapped it all up nicely, and then took a sharp left turn to set up a cliffhanger for the third instalment of this series. I will definitely be picking up book #3 because of the cliffhanger.
Whoaaaa Nelly, this review is turning into a book report. Anyways. Here's why I knocked this down to 4 stars:
1. Sam is 14 but had her shit way too together. She was going all Abby Mullen, and it was just too unrealistic. Also, one of the final scene was a little too Rambo for me. I hope she gets some therapy.
2. The underlying storyline with Wilcox cult seemed like an afterthought until the very end. When Abby received a concerning message from fake Isaac... maybe you want to share that with your colleagues??? No??? Ok, cool. Good choice. Also, the revelation of fake Isaac's identity felt a little anti-climatic and flat, considering.... No spoilies so you're gonna have to read for yourself.
3. Not major but the gratuitous sex scene at the end. K. Unnecessary and just felt like I was reading some teenager's wet dream fantasy. It was awkward and I skimmed through it.
WHEW. We're almost there... It's time for...
PROS AND CONS
Pros: Main storyline, characters, social commentary, ending
Cons: Sam's character being a little TOO mature for 14, underlying storyline barely touched on until the end, some male gaze-y scenes
If you've made it this far... READ THIS BOOK!!!!!