3 Stars for The Dying of the Light: Interval
I’ll begin with the positives. The book is well written, as in the sentence structure is clean and easy to read. The premise is excellent. It takes place in a post-apocalyptic world devastated by zombies, and what remains of civilization lives in bunkers or in remote parts of the world like Antarctica. The survivors stay tucked away in hopes of outliving the prion-based disease that caused the zombie “infection” and are finding out that humankind, when face with adversity, can be just as monstrous as the zombies.
The negatives are numerous and sadly it took me six months to read this book, because I kept putting it back down on my nightstand after just two or three pages. The first book of this series, The Dying of the Light: End, I did enjoy a good bit, which made second installment disappointing. The beginning of the book, where the location switches at a rapid pace and many new characters are introduced, lost me very early on. I didn’t get to know any of the characters well enough in the short time they were on screen, and the characters I did remember from the first book, namely David Blake, I didn’t get to see much of either in the first third of the book. The first few chapters either needed a lot more fleshing out or removed entirely, which would have helped the book start up better in my opinion.
I kept getting frustrated with almost every protagonist being a beautiful, bad-ass amazon-like chick or not described at all. I couldn’t tell you what David Blake looks like. Sure there are some pretty people out there, but perfect people are not relatable; frankly, they don’t exist. Not just the monsters are ugly or even just plain-looking. There is nothing wrong with being normal, flaws and all. I would have liked to see some of the protagonists a little less attractive, and I don’t just mean that in a physical sense.
The lack of detail is probably the most troubling to me, while reading this book. Rooms were described in the barest sense; offices, bunkers, rooms with chairs… and not even what color or material from which they were made. Not that I wanted to know detailed information about the bunkers’ chairs, mind, but I had no idea what these places really looked like. There was more thoughtfulness put into the novel’s guns and aircraft types, so at least some research and description was given in that regard. What really turned me off were the “intimate” scenes, which garnered the most detail. To give those scenes so much attention, and others none, came across as a little creepy (as a woman reader).
The one scene that seemed unreal was David Blake briefing his team on the helicopter at the start of a mission. I would think he’d bring his team up to speed in a briefing room before heading out on the mission. For some reason, that detail really stood out and bothered me.
I really enjoyed the McMurdo rescue and the ending of the book. Minor spoiler: Although, I did wonder why Bunker One hadn’t thought to ambush its attackers from behind before Blake’s return? Clearly, they had the resources.
Kristopher seemed to find his rhythm after a time, during the last two thirds of the book, and the story did improve. I finished the last third of the book in just a couple of weeks.
With Kristopher’s third book in the series on the horizon, I’d implore of him to spend more time on it than he did with book two. Interval could have been a four star, even five, with some additional fleshing out.