I learned about this book a while ago and put it on my wish list to investigate later. I was very excited about this book after I read the blurb, as I love sci-fi and was happy to see what looked to be a good YA sci-fi story. So when I got a message from AToMR Tours that they were looking for reviewers, I jumped at the chance to read and review the book for them and the author. For the most part, I think Ms. Karpinske did a really good job with this book. I felt it was credible and exciting, and it was actually evocative of ORIGIN by Jessica Khoury for me. However, there were some parts of the book that I felt dragged a bit, where I think the author could benefit from a good editor. The copy-editing, in terms of grammar, spelling, etc, was very good; I'd say there were only about 10-15 errors that I saw in the whole book, which definitely pleased me!
I must admit, I've had a difficult time writing this review. I have now started it multiple times and kept deleting what I'd written after a few paragraphs! Each time I'd try to hit on specifics to point out what I thought did and did not work, I was finding it very hard to do without giving away some key plot points and big events that happen. So I will try to write a more general review that will hopefully still be helpful.
Pros:
(1) some good characterization. I liked Samantha a lot and felt I could identify with her in some respects (though there were definitely times I thought her behavior and actions were weird or just felt "off"). She is a great student, a responsible teenager, gets along well with her parents, and has her life planned out for the next few years (at least, she thinks she does). I also liked her boyfriend, Colin, as well as Dave, James, and Eric. However, the villains here were very one-dimensional, written as stereotypical thugs or power-hungry mad scientists, etc.
(2) credible and creative plot. I thought the plot was exciting and actually pretty credible, keeping in mind this is still science *fiction*. Interestingly enough, a week or so after I finished reading this book, I heard a story on NPR about scientists who are CURRENTLY exploring and actively working on the idea of cells running programs like computers! It was very neat to hear that after reading The Samantha Project.
(3) pretty good action when it was actually happening; unfortunately, I felt there was too much downtime between the action points or big events, which I speak to more below.
(4) very good editing, as mentioned earlier.
(5) good ending, and book can be read as a stand-alone. Although this is book 1 in a series, I do think the book stands alone and could be read and enjoyed without reading further if desired. There was a lot of action and good pacing towards the end, and I definitely thought it was the strongest part of the book. Also, although it's not like everything is resolved at the end of this book, and certainly questions remain that I personally would like to see answered, there is resolution of a kind and you are not left hanging right in the middle of an action sequence.
Cons:
(1) pacing. There were parts of the book that I felt *really* dragged, where we were told/shown the same thing over and over again. It was like there would be an event that would happen and I'd be excited, but then there would be a LOT of downtime before the next thing happened. For example, the first 10% of the book dragged for me because we just are told or shown over and over (and over) how Sam is a responsible young woman and a great student, and that she has a great relationship with her parents. By the time the first big event happens, as awful as it sounds, I was like, "oh, thank goodness!" And that's definitely not what the author wants us to think, I'm sure! Similarly, after that first event, there are so many repetitive scenes dealing with the aftermath, and it feels like it takes forever to get to the next event and move the plot along. The book continues along in that vein throughout. That's where I feel a good editor could help cut some unnecessary repetition and help the author keep the story moving along at a good pace. Because it is a really good story, and I did want to see how it played out; I'm glad I didn't give up and that I read the whole thing!
(2) very heavy-handed use of foreshadowing. I think this goes along with what I just mentioned. The author is VERY heavy-handed in her use of foreshadowing, which grated on my nerves before long. Whether it's that she doesn't trust the reader to catch on if she's more subtle or she doesn't trust her own ability to be subtle and yet ensure the reader doesn't think the big events come out of left field, the over-reliance on foreshadowing was irksome. I don't think it w as necessary to use this device anywhere near as much as she did. I actually think it also contributed a great deal to the dragging of portions of the book.
Overall, I'm definitely glad I read this book, and I thank the author and AToMR Tours for the chance to do so. I hope that the pros and cons above share with you some general thoughts I had while reading the book. I think that if you like YA books where romance is not the overwhelming element, and especially if you like science-fiction books set in the real world and dealing with questions of technology and ethics, you should definitely read The Samantha Project. For me, I think it all boils down to this: a few days ago I saw an email from AToMR Tours about an upcoming blog tour for The Golden Couple, and I had a "woohoo!" moment of excitement about reading book 2 and finding out what happens next. I hope that's good news that an author wants to hear!
Note: As stated, I received a complimentary copy of this book for review purposes from AToMR Tours. This has in no way affected my review, which is an honest reflection of my thoughts about the book.